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Posted: 10 years ago
part 49
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
Aanie is making Geet ready to udao Maan's hosh...
haye their talks are so nice and lovely...
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part 50
awesome dear...
excellent...
haye Maan is in front of Geet but she has no idea about it...
and Maan has heard her feelings...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 51

Dadi had sent food for Geet...

One of the girls had come to feed Geet...

Maan gets the thali from her and sends her back...

Geet comes running...: hare, rukhooo

Maan: Geet, sambalke, teri mehendhi karab ho jaayegi

Geet: haan, issiliye ussko rokho, mein kaise kaungi?

Geet looks worried...

Maan: ye kaise sawaal hai Geet? tum bhi sab ke tarah haath se hi kha sakthi

Geet shows her mehendhi to him...

Maan looks at his name on her palms...

Maan: toh yahi tummari pareshaani hai?

Geet blushes...

Maan: aaj tum mere haath se khana khaogi, teek hai

Geet hesitates...

Geet: nahi, mein spoon se khaloongi

Maan: muh kholo

Maan is ready with the food...

Geet is very happy that Maan takes care of every small need of hers...

She feels blessed to have Maan in her life...he has taken charge of her life all of a sudden and Geet feels as if all her worries have gone with Maan's entry and she is free from any pressure...

Geet opens her mouth and starts eating...

She keeps staring Maan as he keeps feeding the food...

Maan : Geet, pani piyoge?

Maan gives her water...

Geet keeps looking at him without responding...she is so happy...

Maan: Geeet?

Geet: aap bahut achche ho, I love you Maan

Maan: I love you Geet

Maan kisses her forehead...

Maan looks into her eyes...tears of happiness roll down her cheeks...

Maan wipes off her tears...

Maan: nahi Geet, ab tummare aakhon se ek boondh asoo bhi nahi gir sakthi, chahe woh kushi ke asoo bhi ho, samjhi tum

Geet ka face pack bhi saath mein nikhal jaatha

Geet is upset that she won't look good now...

Geet: babaji, ab kaise achchi dikh sakthi?

Geet rushes to the mirror to look at her face...

Maan follows her and he looks at her in the mirror and keeps admiring her...

He gets closer and whispers in her ears...

Maan: meri Mishti toh waise hi bahut sundar hai

Geet: aap joot bolthe ho

Maan: nahi Geet, tumme koi bhi sajawat ki zaroorat nahi hai, tum jasie bhi ho waise hi achchi ho, aur mujhe apni Mishti aaise hi pasand hai

Maan hugs her from behind and Geet gets lost in that hug...

Maan too loses his senses and is lost in her beauty...

Geet: Maan, chod dhijiye, koi aajayega

Maan: aane do

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: mujhe pura haq hai Geet

Geet: mujhe tayaar hona hai

Maan: teek hai, tayaar ho jao

Geet: aap pehle jao toh sahi

Maan: nahi, aaj mein apni Mishti ko tayaar karoonga

Geet: Maan, woh log kabhi bhi aa sakthe

Maan: nahi aayenge

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, neinne unko wapas bhejdhiya hai, jab MSK tummare seva karne ke liye tayaar hai toh unki kya zaroorat hai Geet?

Geet: aap kya jaanthe? Ye ladhkiyon ka kaam hai

Maan: tum MSK ko nahi jaanthi, iss duniya mein aaisa koi bhi kaam nahi hai jo MSK nahi kar saktha seva ek ki

Geet: woh kya hai?

Maan: woh toh sirf meri Mishti kar sakthi

Geet: mein toh hamesha aapke sahare mein jeethi hoon, aapke madat ke bhina mein koi bhi kaam nahi kar pathi, haina?

Maan: woh toh tumne sahi kaha Geet, madat toh mein zaroor karoonga, par kaam toh sirf tum karogi

Geet: aaisa bhi kya kaam hai?

Maan: mujhe papa toh sirf tum hi bana sakthi ho Geet, haina?

Maan looks at Geet ...

Geet blushes...

Maan: kyun Geet? meinne sahi kaha haina?

Geet: batein karna toh koi aapse seekhe, Maan shayad aap bhool gaye ho ki pehle Muh Dikhayi aur badh mein hi godh barayi

Maan: tum fikar mat karo Geet, mein jaldh hi tummari godh barayi ka bhi interzaam kar doonga

Geet: Maan, dher ho rahi hai

Maan: hone do Geet

Geet: sare mehmaan aathe hi honge

Maan: aane do

Geet: sab mera intrezaar karthe honge

Maan: karne do sabko intrezaar, aakhir Rajkumari ka darshan utna aasani se nahi miltha sabo, intrezaar karna padtha, haina?

Geet: Maan, aap samajthe kyun nahi? Annie ko bhulaona

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Some one knocks...

Geet shouts: come in

She is happy that some one came to her rescue at last...

Maan knows that he will not be permitted to stay with Geet...

He hides behind the curtains...

The girls come...

Girl: m'am, it's time for your bath

Geet keeps staring the curtains...

Girl: m'am, aap change karke aao

Geet gets it and rushes to change...

She nows Maan is standing right behind her...

Geet whispers so that only Maan could hear her...

Geet: aap ne aankhen band kiya haina?

Maan: tum chaho toh band nahi kartha, mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Geet gets angry and shouts...: Maaan

Girl: kya hua m'am?

Geet: kuch nahi hua

Girl: kya?

All the girls run away...

Now Maan is free to drool his Mishti...

Maan comes out of his hiding...

Maan: tum toh bahut samajdar ho Geet

Maan winks...

Geet: Maaan? Mujhe bahut sharam aathi hai

Maan: chalo mein aankhen band kartha hoon

Geet quicly changes her dress...

She enters the bath tub and Maan keeps admiring her all the way...

Geet: ab toh jao

Maan: Geet, tum yahan akhele kaise rahogi?

Geet: mein reh sakthi hoon, mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Maan: Geet cockroach

Geet jumps off the tub and falls ...

Maan catches her...

Geet: kahan hai?

Maan: Geet, meinne sirf yahi kehna chaha ki tum cockroach se bhi darthi ho

Geet: Maan? Aap bhi na

Maan: tum fikar mat karo, mein yahi hoon, tummare paas

Geet: nahi

Annie just comes to help Geet...

She is shocked to see Maan there...

Annie: bhai, aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: mein apni biwi ko company de raha hoon, sare ladhkiyan bhaag gaye haina?

Annie: aap ne hi bhagaya hoga

Maan: nahi nahi, Geet ne hi sab ko bahar bheja

Geet: Annie, ye joot bolthe hai

Maan: kya?

Annie: bhai, ab mein aagayi hoon, aap jaa sakthe, darwaza udar hai

Annie shows the door to Maan...

Maan had to leave...

Geet gets ready and wants Maan to see her first...

She asks Annie to call Maan...

Annie: hmmm chalo, bhai ko bhulathe hai, woh bhi tumse milne ke liye taras rahe hai

Maan comes and Annie leaves Maneet alone...

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. so maan apni misty ki ghodbharayi bhi jaldi karne ki planning mein hai😆😆. geet kitna emotional hogayi hai maan ki pyaar dekhkar
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Part - 52

Geet blushes as Maan enters in style...

The MSK style...looking at his Mishti and relishing the moment he has got to drool over her beauty...

Geet becomes nervous by the piercimg looks of MSK...

She quickly gazes at herself and adjusts her dress...

Maan comes closer and holds her by her shoulders...

Geet freezes and she looks at MSK in the mirror...

Maan is also looking at Geet and their eyes meet...
Maneet eyelock...mahiii...
Geet is eagerly awaiting his comments...
She is worried whether Maan would love her looks...

Maan : aaj toh meri Mishti kuch zyada hi sundar lag rahi hai

Geet is happy that after all th hard work(beautifying) she had succeeded in impressing MSK...

But MSK has fallen head over heels for Geet long before...

Maan became her secret admirer and all his attempts to stop himself from loving her failed...

While her beautiful looks captivated him her innocence and lovable nature made her irressitable...

Maan is a fan of her child like pure heart , free from any kind of adulterations like jealousy, hatred or greed...

Her eyes reflect her innocence and Maan is addicted to her whole hearted laughters...

And she doesn't know to fake anything, she is like an open book...she wears her heart on her face...there is no secrets whatsoever...

Maan knew her feelings for him right from the beginning though Geet was skeptical about her own feelings for him then, she was unable to differentiate between her love and the hatred for the same person , MSK, and she didn't realize that her love is real while her hatred is the weapon she used to hide her love...

But now she realizes that she is in love with this MSK and her love for him is growing bigger and bigger day by day as she keeps discovering more and more of him...

Geet shows her palms to Maan to show how much she loves him...

Her hands proclaim her love showing his name is deep red...

Maan: ye kya hai Geet?

Geet: aap ko dikhayi nahi dethi?

Geet is worried that Maan's name isn't visible...

She looks into her palms and is satisfied with her mehendhi color...

Geet: Maan, dekha mere haath ke rang?

Maan: mujhe aaise koi bhi saboot ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet, mein toh pehle hi jaantha hoon ki mer Mishti apne Maan se kitna pyaar karthi hai

Geet: achcha?

Maan: tumme patha ho ya na ho, mein toh samaj gaya teri mann ki baat

Geet: mere mann ki baat? Jo mujhe hi samajne ke liye itne din ho gaye the, aap ko kasie patha chala?

Maan: kyunke tum Geet ho aur mein MSK hoon

Geet: toh phir aapko Sam ke barein mein bhi patha hoga?

Maan: haan, mein sab jaantha hoon

Geet is surprised...

Maan: Sam ne mere over protective attitude ko galat samaj liya haina?

Geet wonders how he knows everything...

Maan: aur jab mujhe patha chala ki mere wajhe se Sam ko galatfami ho gayi toh mein ne socha ussi waqt uss galat fami ko dhoor kardoon, issilye uss din Sam ke b'day party mein meinne tumme apna partner chuna, takki sab ko patha chale ki MSK ke mann mein koi bhi nahi hai, san ek jaise hi hai, par jab meinne tumme dekha aur tummare saath nachne ke badh mujhe samaj mein aagaya ki mere mann mein bhi koi hai, aur mere lakhon koshishon ke bawajood mein har gaya hoon, Geet se

Geet knew that Maan has always loved her and her only...thru out all the bitter exeriences one thing has always been with her and that is Maan's love and concern for her...

Geet is overwheimed with joy...

Maan looks at her and smiles...: ye MSK bahut pehle hi apni Mishti ka ho gaya hai Geet

Geet smiles...

Maan: tum muskurathe hue bahut hi achchi lagthi ho Geet, hamesha aaisa hi muskurathe rehna Geet, mein tummein aaise hi kush dekhna chahatha hoon

Geet: haan, aap saath ho toh meri kushiyon ki koi kami nahi ho sakthi, aap zindagi bar aaisa hi mere saath donge na?

Maan: tumme kya lagtha hai Geet? Maan kabhi bhi apni Mishti ke saath chod saktha hai kya? Kabhi nahi...

Geet: mein jaanthi hoon Maan, aap ne shuru se hi mera saath diya hai, mein hi pagal thi jo mujhe aapko samaj ne mein itni dher lag gayi

Maan: abhi bhi tumne MSK ko teek se samjha nahi Geet

Geet: aaise kyun kehthe ho?

Maan: mein kab se tera intrezaar kar raha hoon

Geet: kiss ka intrezaar?

Maan: haan haan kiss ka intrezaar

Geet: aap kya keh rahe ho?

Maan: woh toh tum kabhi nahi samjogi

Maan looks yearningly at Geet...

Geet realizes what's that Maan wants from her...

Maan : abhi tumme jaana haina? Neeche sab intrezaar karthe hai

Geet: par aapka intrezaar katam nahi hua na?

Maan: toh?

Geet: ab aapko aur intrezaar nahi karna hoga, mein tayaar hoon

Geet feels shy and closes her eyes...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet's lips tremble gently in anticipation...

Maan bends down to savour them...

Geet too joins in the kiss...

After a sensuous kiss Maan lets her breath...

Geet gasps and bites her lips to taste the lingering flavours of MSK's kiss...

Maan looks at her and questions her with his eyes if that wasn't enough and she needs more?

Geet blushes and shakes her head...

Maan: Geet, abhi tum bach gayi ho, lekhin ye baat yahi katam nahi hui, hum issko badh mein continue karenge

Geet: Maan, aap bahut bhure ho, dekha, aapne kya kiya?

Geet shows fake anger...

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: aap ne mere sare lipstick ko khaliya hai, ab mere hoton ka rang hi uthar gayi na?

Maan: nakhli rang toh uthar gayi, par ab tummare hoton toh lal lal gulab ki tarah ho gaye hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: ye bhi MSK ka kamaal hi hai

Geet: aa ha ha...kya kamaal kardhi aap ne? chado, mujhe ab jaana hai, warna aap toh mere sare make up karab kar denge

Maan: toh tumme toh apni make up ki fikar hai, MSK ki fikar nahi?

Maan locks her in his arms and keeps staring her beautiful eyes...

Geet: Maan, chodo na

Maan: nahi chod saktha

Geet: Maan meinne theen theen gante lagaya hai tayaar hono ke liye, aur aap badhe aaram se kehthe ho ki mujhe apni make up ki padhi hai, ab mujhse nahi hoga

Maan: meinne kaha na Geet, tumme koi panawat ni zaroorat nahi, tum toh natural beauty ho

Maan bows down to reach her lips again...

Geet turns him down...

Geet: ab maska marne se koi faida nahi hai, aap jo chahathe ho woh nahi ho saktha, samjhe aap?

Maan: toh phir tum bhi yahan se nahi jaa sakthi, samjhi tum?

Maan pretends to get angry...

Geet pleads...: Maaan

Maan's phone rings...

It's Annie...

Annie: bhai. Aapka romance katam ho gayi toh Geet ko jaldhi lekhe aao, aap toh apni biwi ko hamesha dekh dekh ke deewane ho gaye ho, zara hum bhi dekhe ki aaisa kya baat hai apni Geet mein jo aap aaise fida ho gaye ho

Maan: nahi, Geet neeche nahi aayegi

Annie: bhai, ye aap kya kehthe ho?

Maan: Geet Maan ki hai, Maan ki Geet, koi public property nahi jo tum log ussko exihibit banake rakh sakthe, samjhi tum?

Annie: bhai, ye toh Geet ki muh dikhayi hai

Maan: mein kuch nahi jaantha, meri biwi ko nazar lag jayegi

Annie: pehle nazar toh aapki lagaegi, kaise ussko surthe rehthe ho

Geet: Maan, mujhe jaana hai, ye aap kya keh rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, tum kuch nahi jaanthi, tum chup raho

Geet: mein sab jaanthi hoon, dadi mujhse naraaz ho jayenge

Maan: Dadi ko mein sambaloonga, tum fikar kyun karthi ho?tum sirf meri fikar karo Geet

Geet: aap na, kabhi kabhi bachon ki tarah zidd karthe ho, aap nahi jaanthe ki ye ek riwaaz hai hummare?

Maan: Geet, tum meri biwi ho aur mujhe apni biwi bahut pasand hai, issiliye toh meinne shadhi kiya haina? Ab dusron ki kya parwa?

Geet: kya? Maan, jaane do mujhe

Maan: ab tum itni zidd kyun karthi ho?

Geet: Maan, ye mere liye bahut badi moka hai ki iss duniya ko dikhana ke kiye ki mein MSK ki biwi hoon, aur mein ab akhele nahi hoon, mera bhi apna parivaar hai, Khurana parivaar, dadi hai, Annie hai, aur mere saath mere Maan hai

Geet gets emotional and her eyes are filled with tears...

Maan couldn't see her like that...he immediately pulls her into his embrace...

Geet hugs him tight and rests on his broad chest...

Maan: ye duniya jaane ya na jaane, ab tum hi meri zindagi ho Geet, samjhi tum?

Geet nods her head...

Maan: meinne pehle hi kaha na Geet, tum rothe hue achche nahi lagthi, chalo ab toh muskurao

Geet gets angry...

Geet: mein achche nahi lagthi?

Maan: meinne aaise kab kaha?

Geet: abhi abhi aap ne kaha na?

Maan: woh. Meinne tummara rona band karne ke liye kaha tha

Geet: nahi, aap joot bolthe ho

Maan: mein joot boltha hoon? Tum hi dekho

Maan turns her towards the mirror...

Geet's kajal karab ho gayi...:

Geet: ab mein kya karoon? Sab aapke wajhe se hi hua hai, ab sab mujhe aaise dekhke kya sochenge?

Maan: kuch bhi soche, mujhe koi farak nahi padega

Geet: sab ko lagega ki MSK apme biwi se pyaar nahi kartha, usse hamesha rulathe rehtha, haina babaji?

Maan: Geeet, mein tumme rulatha hoon?

Geet: aur nahi toh kya? meinne kaha na, mujhe jaana hai, aap ne kyun rokha?

Maan: meinne kahan rokha? tum hi rukh gayi

Geet: toh teek hai, hat jao, mein jaathi hoon'

Geet tries to leave...

Maan holds her back...

Maan: ek minute Geet

Geet turns and looks at him...

Maan takes a tissue and adjusts her kajal...

Geet is happy...

He puts a kala tikha behing her ears...

Maan: ab chalo

Maan takes her down..

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Lovely update!!!👏👏Loved Maaneet lovely moments😳
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part 51
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
Maan didnt want to leave Geet but Annie came...
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part 52
awesome dear...
excellent...
so cute...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
in the begining of the story thte suspence factor clouded our maaneet's lovey dovey moments. now the sun shines bright in their life.
we can see their love in full blossom.
lovely ud.
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for update dear, where are u?

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