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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Awesome update 👏

Prem-Maria-Pari scene was beautiful
Kalpi in trouble 😲 but I'm sure there's more to it... Kalpi will find a way out or it's all a part of the plan... I'll prefer the former... Kalpi also has to make a mistake somewhere, coz nobody is perfect... It'll be unrealistic if everything is according to her plan...
Update soon... I'm really impatient for this one 😳


Thank u Ushoshi... M glad u liked it.

Yep.. there is surely more to it. i am happy to see ur trust on Kalpi and her smartness. That's exactly what I am saying to everyone... Kalpi has to make a mistake.

I will try to update soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Vish..first of all sorry for late comment. I have become late-lateef! 😆Secondly, I loved it to the core...😃🤗 So, Kalpi having idea of Pakhi behind all this, while Sammy is about to give evidence of Kalpi's involvement in all this to Raghav! 😲 So scared for next update, LOL. Hope Sammy will ultimately help Kalpi in uncovering the whole truth. 😃

Loved Prem-Maria reunion and their sweet daughter. 😃 In shirt it was perfect as usual. n I am in love with your writing, as you are a master of twists and suspenses, something which I am unable to keep in my own. 😃 Thanks once again for this lovely update sweetheart. 😃 🤗 ❤️ 👏


Charu 🤗 No need to say sorry for late comments else I will have to say sorry for late reply.😆

Happy u liked it. Apart from Kalpi, Sammy is my fav character so dnt worry, i won't ruin him. Right now he is angry on Kalpi but that's coz he feels Kalpi is angry on Rags coz of his reltn with Pakhi and that's y she broke their fshp.

Master of twists n suspense... Ohh m so happy to hear it but u brings nice twists too, I am still waiting to know twist in RaKhi marriage in ur FF.. Neways u r queen of romance.. No one can write it better than u.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thanks Kiara 🤗 From 5 years she is hating Raghav and thinking that he is the culprit so she can't accept his innocence overnight hence she is thinking that Pakhi is involved in Rags crime. Soon she will come to know about Rags innocence. U know theme of the story so can't tell u why Rags said that to Kamla or Kamla lied or what. neetu is a mental patient so they will take time to figure out.. Prem and Kalpi will solve this together.
M happy u liked the family reunion scene.. Prem is really a changed person coz of Maria's love n now he is cherishing all relations.

Sammy is smarty pants.. wait for the next part to know whether Kalpi was really trapped or not.

u need no add that always.. U can just gimme a hug n I will understand that u r saying that i am a good writer. Yep, I think all writers like hearing it but i am the most greedy so i love hearing it.😉

🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Kalpi started doubting pakhi...hope soon she finds out real culprit
Finally prem n maria cleared der mu n will marry soon...happy for him...Prem n pari scene was cute
Sammy got solid proof jus curious to knw kalpi knows abt recording n playing around or is she really trapped...nwys ur smart n viscious kalpi find out a way 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls pls pls update na vish n also waiting for the update on the other ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u dear..

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update

Kalpi started doubting pakhi...hope soon she finds out real culprit
Finally prem n maria cleared der mu n will marry soon...happy for him...Prem n pari scene was cute
Sammy got solid proof jus curious to knw kalpi knows abt recording n playing around or is she really trapped...nwys ur smart n viscious kalpi find out a way 😉

Thank u Rani.. U will know about Kalpi in the next update.. Sorry can't tell u right now.😊


Originally posted by: priya_remix

Pls pls pls update na vish n also waiting for the update on the other ff.


Sorry Priya for taking so much time but u know naa i am busy in studies.. but i promise to update one of the FF today,😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys.. i am back with a new update.. as i am taking too much time to update so I thought to compensate it with a longer update.. So this super long update specially for u guys. Sorry for all the mistakes but by now all of u r aware of my laziness and know that i do not proof read the update. So sorry for all the mistakes.. Plz point it out if there is some major mistake.. n yaa, Sorry once again for my his n her goof ups but sometimes while writing i forget it. 😆

Hope u will like the update. Enjoy.

Sammy holds the door knob to open it when he hears Kalpi saying, "Don't u want to know why I am doing all this or r u satisfied by getting a evidence against me." He is shocked to hear it and faces her.. She reads his expressions and understands that he is confused to hear the evidence thing.

"Why r u so shocked?? Do u think I am so dumb that I won't realize that u have come here with a motto of exposing me.. I am pretty sure that u have recorded my confession.. whatever u have... video or voice recording.. do u think it is sufficient to prove me guilty?? Do u think Rags will doubt me on seeing it and I won' be able to give explanation to him.. if so than I must say u don't know ur frn well." She said.

"If u knew that I am here for evidence than why u confessed it?? What is ur motto?" Sammy asked in angry tone.

"I confessed it because i still believe that were not the part of Raghav's plan which he made to destroy me. I want u to know why I am doing this.. I want u to know the truth of ur friend for whom u r making so much efforts.." Kalpi replied in emotional but firm tone, she continued, "U were the one who reprimanded Raghav for ditching me... u were always there to support me when I was searching jobs and supported me in every decision of mine before I left the city so I still believe that u can't be a part of heinous crime that Raghav committed."

"What crime?? What all r u taking?? Look Kalpi... I know Rags made a mistake by marrying Pakhi.. but he always loved u... N if u r taking about Khushi.. than it's just a mistake and not a crime."

"No.. I am not talking about khushi.. n do not call her a mistake.. she is an innocent child. I am talking about the crime which ur frn committed to throw me out of his life.. which spoiled my whole life.. I lost my family, my friends, my dignity and my sweetness.. it's he who made me vicious." She said in an angry tone. She tells him everything from the start.. how her father disowned her coz he believed that Kalpi has become a gold digger.. how her mother refused to believe her coz Rags has accepted his crime on the call, how she went to meet him and saw. How she met with an accident and Prem helped her and her recent findings about Neetu and her condition coz of Pakhi. She tells him how she found the doctor and got that footage.. Sheetal and Maria. Sammy is shocked at this revelation.. he can't believe Kalpi went through.. Tears have formed in his eyes while the rage can be clearly seen in Kalpi's eyes. He keeps his palm on her shoulder.. Her eyes has depicted the truth of the story hence he doesn't want any evidence to believe her.

"Now still if u want u can give the evidence to Raghav.. I am not scared of him." She said.

"Do u really think, it's Raghav who did all this??" Instead of replying, he asked her.

"i do not have any reason to believe that he is not involved in it and Sammy... I don't want any sympathy.. I just told all this to u to show u the real face of ur frn." She replied rudely.

Sammy nods his head and turns to leave but he stops once again and calls her out.. She looks at him.. While seeing in her eyes he says, "I won't say a word in Rag's defense bcoz u know him better than me.. Ask urself, can Raghav do this?? Can't u see love in his eyes?? Ask urself, does he really need to do all this to throw u from his life?? N don't worry, I wont give this evidence to Raghav as now I want him to know what all happened with u." He leaves after saying this.. Kalpi stands there, his questions still wandering in her head and she is trying to fight with them...

"Can Raghav really do this to me??" She asked to herself and her heart screams.. "No, he can't, he loves u." Her mind abuzz with Sammy's questions and her confusion... She keeps her hands on her hears to stop the sound coming and breaks down in tears.. Just than her cell rings. She calms herself and looks at the caller id. A smile appears on her face seeing Prem's number. She receives the call and he informs her that they are reaching in an hour.. She tells him to come to farm house directly, they hang the call. She picks her car keys and rushes to guest house to do the arrangements.

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Prem and Maria reaches Farm house. He rings the door bell and gets surprise on not hearing the reply.. With his key he opens the door and sees welcome written on the floor with flowers, he smiles and looks at Maria to notice her pleasant smile. "Welcome Maria and Pari.." Kalpi comes screaming with a plate in her hand.. She does their Arti and feeds sweets to them n chocolate to Pari and let them enter.

"Maria... she is ur surprise.. My best friend Kalpi.. I mean Kalpana Jhadhav. Remember her??" He said.

"OMG... u mean sulky Kalpi." Maria replies in shock.

Prem laughs loudly on this while Kalpi looks at them surprisingly. Prem understands her confusion and shows her face to Maria... Maria realizes her mistake and hugs her..

"i am sorry I just said that.. Prem used to call u by this name 5 years ago. I can't believe he is introducing u as his best friend coz I only know u as his biggest enemy.. Out of 8 of the 10 meetings.. he used to fume on u n talk about u only... making plans to hurt u n i was confuse that whether his hate for u is more than his love for me" She said while holding her ears.

"No issues... I too used to call him Kadwa Karela that time." She replied laughingly.

Now, it's Prem's turn to get shock but he keeps mum after hearing laughter around him after a long time. Kalpi meets Pari and introduces herself as "Kalpi bua." She meets Maria's mother as well and takes her to the room to rest after the journey. Prem takes Maria to meet Neetu. Maria was initially angry on her but on seeing her condition she feels pity and forgives her. She touches her feet, n to everyone's surprise Neetu blesses her by keeping her hand on Maria's head. Kalpi and Prem feels the improvement in Neetu's condition and feels happy. After some chit chat Maria asks about the marriage.

"Maria.. we have to do the secret wedding right now..." Prem said in a low tone.

"Why" Maria asks.

Prem doesn't reply.. he doesn't want to reveal Kalpi's secret to anyone, Kalpi understands his dilemma and tells everything to Maria. Maria feels guilty on realizing that her abortion report was used to defame Kalpi. Kalpi makes her feel better. Maria tells her about Pakhi who forced her for this abortion and Neetu was not available there. She once again says sorry as she was not aware of her name being used on the report.. Kalpi tells her to stop thinking about it and start preparing for marriage.. though it will be a private affair but she want to enjoy to the fullest.

"No Kalpi.. I am not going to marry Prem now." Maria said in a firm tone. Prem and Kalpi are too shocked to react. "Prem, I love u. N from past 5 years I was living without u. So let's stay unmarried for few more days. We will marry only after punishing Kalpi's culprit." She said. Prem nods in agreement.. On hearing culprit word, Kalpi remembers her talk with Sammy and wonders about Raghav once again. Prem notices her and asks the reason.. She brushes it off and tries to convince them for marrying asap but they are firm on their decision n Kalpi respects that. She finally tells Prem everything that happened with Sammy.. He gets angry on her for keeping her mission in danger.

"i din't had any option Prem.. Our investigation was not going anywhere.. we are still not aware of Sheetal's location and this confusing behavior of Raghav was annoying me. So I had to do this. Now, I too feel Rags is innocent and this all is someone else's plan. But I need to make sure about it and for that I am going to confront Rags indirectly." She said.

Prem nods but is not happy with this recent development as he still believes that Rags has murdered Saahil. Kalpi notices his disapproving expressions but decides to give benefit of doubt to Raghav. She excuses herself and leaves the place. On the way she calls Amar and instructs him something.

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Singhania Mansion

Rags is annoyed coz of Amar's behavior in the office. Khushi comes to him and tries to talk to him. Rags controls his anger on seeing Khushi and soon forgets everything and starts playing with her. Pakhi comes to them to give milk to Khushi. Khushi looks at her mom and requests her to sit.. Pakhi agrees. Khushi asks her dad, "why u don't u live with us in the same?? My all friend share their room with their parents." Rags gets startled on hearing it while Pakhi smirks and gets happy on seeing that he once again succeeded in manipulating Khushi.

"Beta... Papa works till late night so he doesn't want to disturb u and in morning u wake up early to go to school which disturbs papa so papa stays in a different room. U know papa get ill on not getting proper sleep. Do u want papa to fall ill??" Rags tried to convince Khushi. Khushi nods in no and replies, "no papa, u sleep in ur room only.. Now only u have started playing with me.. I do not want u to fall ill."

Pakhi gets furious on hearing it, "This little girl is of no use.. it was so easy for Raghav to convince her." She thought.

Raghav tells Khushi to play with dadi for sometime and Khushi goes to gauri's room. Pakhi to tries to leave but Rags stops her and says, "Pakhi.. today Khushi asked a thing which is not possible for me.. Keep that in ur mind and m sure u will be able to explain Khushi the same." Pakhi nods in yes and leaves. His cell rings.. He looks at the caller id and gets furious on reading Amar. He remembers the happening of the day n the way Amar insulted him again and again. But than he remembers the reason for joining KS and finally picks the call.

"Hello Raghav.. why u left early today.. man this is ur first day n u r not sincere. I was not expecting this from a big business man like u. U know we had an important meeting." Amar said in harsh tone without giving Rags time to say hello after picking the call.

Rags gets furious on hearing his tone.. "u know.. with whom u r talking... I am Raghav Singhania.. Lower ur voice"

"Mr. Raghav Singhania... I remember who u r but I guess u forgot it.. I hope u will remember it before coming office tomorrow."

Amar hangs the call. Rag throws the mobile on the floor in anger, "I will once again prove my worth to the world.. I need to start my business with a new name and for that I have to apply to the bank. I have already settled past loans so I don't think there will be any issue in getting new loan." Rags said loudly and takes out his cell to call someone.

"Hello... this is Raghav Singhania here. I want a loan from ur bank so can u send the agent to my house with all the details plz." Rags said.

"Sure sir". The man replied and hangs the call.

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An hour later,Kalpi reaches home with a smile.. She looks around for Khushi as she has brought chocolate and soft toy for her. Pakhi sees this and gives her a sarcastic smile saying, "No need of all this Kalpi... Khushi is my child. I have given birth to her and she will always be mine. I have already brought so many teddies for her that she doesn't want anymore and chocolates.. I already have it for her."

"Why r u so insecure Pakhi.. M not here to snatch anything from u. N y r u reminding me that Khushi is ur child...do u have any doubt regarding her ??" Kalpi replied with the hatredness in her eyes. Pakhi gets shocked on hearing it. She dint expect Kalpi to be so blunt.. Kalpi is not serious about the words she said. She just wants to hurt the lady standing in front of her who has hurted her own mother and brother. Khushi who was playing with Gauri looks at Kalpi and the toy she has in her hand. She come running to her.. "Kalpi maussi... Simba.. for me?? Where u get it?? u know I have so many toys but I always wanted Simba.. He is so brave like me. Hai naa??" Khushi said while picking Simba in her arms and giving a quick peck on Kalpi's cheek.. Kalpi shows her the chocolates and she grabs it.

"i saw u watching Simba movie yesterday and u were saying to ur Granny that u want this toy so I brought it for my little princess." Kalpi said while caressing her cheeks.

"Thank u massi.. Let me show it to Dad."

"No Khushi.. he is an imp meeting.. don't distrub him now." Pakhi said while giving an angry glare to Kalpi. Kalpi smiles sarcastically while pointing at Khushi who has dropped her doll and started playing with Simba.

She leaves the place and thinks about the meeting rags is having... "If I know u than u r trying to get some money for ur new business after Amar's phone call. I have to hear what talks are going on." With this thought she stands outside the room to hear the talks.

"Sorry Mr. Singhania but we can't give u the loan.. No bank will give u the loan as u do not have anything as guarantee... u have already sold ur home and all ur shares. Apart from that u r not working anywhere so it will be hard for u to get the loan from the bank." The man was explaining to Rags.

Kalpi enters the room in full attitude, "Thank u Mr.. whosoever u r.. We don't want ur loan. U can leave." She said while showing the door to the man. Man leaves the place without uttering a single word.

"Rags.. why u need loan?? U felt offended today?? I heard whatever happened in the office and I am extremely sorry for this. I know u r not the kind of the person who can work under someone else so this is the money u need for ur business." She said while placing the cheque of 1 crore in his hand. He gets shocked on reading the amount.

"1 crore.. this is a big amount Kalpi and I can't take this much loan from u."

"Loan?? R u kidding me.. this is ur money only, which u transferred to my account 5 years ago.. I hope u remember that."

"What.. I transferred?? What r u saying.. Why will I.. I mean this is such a big amount.. Stop joking and take this cheque back."

"Common Raghav.. we can't change our past so let's accept it. I have already forgotten everything and don't want to talk about it again." saying so she leaves the place.


P.S. : Plz hit like and comment as it is the only way to tell me that u r liking the story and i should keep writing more.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too good ya vish superb update 👏👏. Sammy knowing d whole story n sulky kalpi n kadwa karela...too good ya. N Maria n prem postpone their marriage..hmmm good frns. N raghav gettin to know abt the 1crore rs soon... Update soon dear...
I am first to comment yess...
Edited by Rubz1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice enjoying every update.
Please try to update soon next part eagarly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific update. Loved Sammy-Kalpi convo and that Sammy understood Kalpi's pain. I am sure he shall be a great help to her and Raghav in future.
It was so sweet of Prem & Maria to wait for marriage until Kalpi's culprit is punished. n understood Prem's uneasiness also. Khushi-Kalpi scenes are always lovable and cute. Kalpi confronted Raghav indirectly today, without him even knowing about it, poor guy had to suffer so much humiliation for it. 😊 the story is getting interesting day by day and I am loving it. 😃👏

n Vish dear thanks a lot for calling me 'Queen of romance'. how sweet of you really. 😊🤗 ❤️

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