Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#431

so when is the next update??

Read the next two path!!

Cant wait to see my road side romeo soon!!

Will there be a update tonight too?

Quote

Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#432

It's gonna take Arnav a long time to woo Khushi!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

I AM LOVING THIS KHUSHI LOVED HOW SHE KEEPS SHOWING HIM HIS WORD AND HOW IS AFFECTED HER LOVED IT.

Edited by dumas - 10 years ago

Quote

Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

oh lovely

iam sorry for being late

iam in india for 3 days - that's tooo short a stay - hence no time - but couldn't stop myself from checking for updates

thank u smita - I truly loved it

rashmi, 🤗

Quote

shoobie

@shoobie

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Loved the update. can't wait to read how Arnav woo her back.

Quote

S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Interesting update <3
Loved it

Quote

segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Smitaji

where do i begin? I love the detailing. The slight gap between saale sahab, the look around at the furniture, arnav blushing and so on. wonderfully detailed. Arnav seems to have a very open relationship with his jija then why didn't he talk to him directly about anjali's suspicions? hmmm

The part i loved most was your selection of pictures. Spot on. Particularly the one with Khushi's expression.