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Tumhe Khone Se Darta Hun - Second Half

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While running towards Armaan to call him back to life to make sure he survive for her for her survival his living is needed... he is the person for whom knowingly or unknowingly Riddhima was living even with all the loneliness in her life. and when she got some ray of hope some ray for better survival she can't let god tke that way... god can't take her Armaan away from her...

running running and running Riddhima was not at all aware that her dhupatta was being taken away with strong winds... neither she was aware of the blood that was snoozing out of her foot as she was running bare footed on the concrete road... she was just running for her life...


reaching Sanjeevni Riddhima run towards reception and bang on the reception desk gaining the attention of the nurse there... and with heavy breathing voice asked for Armaan's room ...

she was told that Armaan was admitted in ICU and without listening to them further Riddhima run to the direction where the nurse have pointed to ICU...


Riddhima banged into the ICU and without care of the attending nurse present there Riddhima run and cling to Armaan and shake him so he can wake up and see her...
Riddhima was shaking Armaan to break his sleep...

when nurse try to hold her she struggle from her to free herself to be with Armaan and near him ...
when nurse was not able to hold Riddhima she called the attending doctor ...

Doctor came there running and seeing Riddhima he move towards her... Riddhima again struggle to free herself but when she saw that its doctor this Time... she grab doctor's hand and then eagerly asked doc...

Riddhima - doctor... Doctor Armaan ko kya hua hain vo uth kyun nahi raha...
doctor - dekhiya... vo ye...
Riddhima - boliya na doctor kya hua hain Armaan ko
doctor - vo actually ye coma mein slip kar chuke hain ...
Riddhima - nahi ye nahi ho sakta
*leaving doctors hand and moving back and banged with the Wall...*

Riddhima *speaking to herself more then to anyone else* - nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.. Armaan nahi ... vo theek hai... bus soya hain uthega... hain soya hain ...

then moving towards Armaan calming herself Riddhima sitt near him and then took his hand in her hand and then spoke...


Riddhima - Armaan tum jaldi uth jao dekho na... ye doctors kya bol rahe hain ... tum aapne pyaar ka izhaar nahi karoge Armaan... tumne likha tha na ki jab mein bhi tumhare liya kuch mehsus karungi toh tum puri duniya mein ailaan karoge... utho na Armaan ... mein bhi tumse pyaar karti hun... utho aur puri duniya ko batao ki aab ye Riddhima sirf aapne Armaan ki hain ... Armaan utho na... please Armaan utho na... aapne pyaar ke liya utho Armaan ...


and here Armaan moved his fingure a little and Riddhima missed it... but doctors to didn't saw this as they have been go to treat other patients...

Riddhima while babbling her love to Armaan while trying to wake Armaan up fell asleep on the stool itself... resting her head on Armaan's bed holding his hand and putting her head on their joined hand...

when Riddhima was deep in sleep Armaan again tried to moved with all his power but all he could manage was a little grip on her hand that she was holding in her grip ... but as Riddhima was deep in sleep after breaking all mentally emotionally and physically... She didn't felt anything... But armaan tried once again hoping ridhima will get up and notice his effort to move but Armaan once again felt disappointed and all the strength was finished... His body still not supporting much to his mind...



next day

Riddhima got up from her sleep and looking around she first was left confused where she was then slowly all the last night event come in her mind and she looked at her hand that was having armaan's hand...

she gently kissed Armaan's hand raising it gently up to her lips and very carefully kept Armaan's hand back on the bed and then standing up and caring Armaan's face and hairs she picked her mobile up and called Nikki ...



Tring tring...

Nikki - hello...
Riddhima - hello Nikki ... Nikki mujhe ek kam tha kya tu kar sakti hain ...
Nikki - Riddhima vo aabhi mujhe Armaan ke pass jana hain uski medicine ka Time ho raha hain ...
Riddhima - Nikki vo mein de dungi mein Armaan ke pass hi hun..

Nikki - what ... Riddhima its 5 am ...
Riddhima check the Time and saw that its indeed is 5am ,... Riddhima - Nikki vo mein 3 baje hi aa gai thi yahan ... vo mujhe bus tera se kaam tha...

Nikki - hain bol Riddhima ...
Riddhima - Nikki kya tu jab hospital aaogi toh kya mera kuch cloths drop kar sakti ho ghar se pick kar ke.. plz Nikki...

Nikki - sure Riddhima why not... but tumhare kapde kyun... vo toh tum ghar par bhi change kar sakti ho...
Riddhima - hain vo ... plz Nikki drop them...

Nikki - okay i will bring them with me in sometime...
Riddhima - thanks Nikki
Nikki - its okay Riddhima... Aur college ridhima,...
Ridhima - vo mein college nahi jaungi nikki... kisi ko armaan ke sath rahna padega.. toh i will stay...
nikki - ridhima next month exams hain...
ridhima - janti hun nikki.. mein baad mein sab class ka work cover kar lungi.. tu chinta mat kar... bus kuch kapde le aaiyo mera...
nikki - okay

Call ended...



Riddhima move back to Armaan and again cared his face gently with all the love and care...
as the person in coma can hear , eye and understand thing but can't react so it is with Armaan ... he can see feel and hear all that Riddhima said...

Armaan can feel all the love that Riddhima is showering on him all the care she is taking for him... all the happiness he have for hearing out her heart out ... confessing her love... but Armaan was happy yet sad... he was happy to acknowledge that his love too love him back but sad that he never have planned that he could be hearing his most awaited words to be heard from his love while lying on this dam bed...


Armaan wanted to get up instantly last night and grab her pull her in his arms and shower all the love upon her.. but alas he have to wait patiently to do so... first he have to recover .. His dam body refused him to work upon his will and resting on its own accord.. but Armaan resolute that this won't happen ... he won't let this happen ... he will bring all the strength within him on use and will so defeat his body over his will... so his body have to respond on his will not to rest...


Now it was ridhima all the time staying by armaan's side every time.. and goes home only when nikki use to blackmail her on staying by armaan's side.. and then ridhima goes to home to rest and freshen up... but that to didn't made ridhima rest properly... She came back as soon as she finish her own work... that mostly take 2 hrs.. and ridhima came back to hospital...

and coming back she do all the things for armaan...
one day when Nurse was giving sponge to armaan... it was Paining armaan's injuries.. but as armaan's is not able to express anything from words but tears escape from his eyes being in pain... and ridhima noticed it.. as she came in to say something...

and ridhima blast on nurse...
Ridhima - ye aap kya kar rahi hain
nurse - vo sponge de rahi thi...
ridhima - vo mujhe bhi dikh raha hain... par ye kaise de rahi hain
nurse - matlab...
ridhima - dekh nahi rahi kitna dard ho raha hain unhe... jaiye mein kar lungi...
nurse goes away...
ridhima move towards armaan but then first hesitate but then started her work.. and give a sponge to armaan...
and then wiped armaan's small tear at corner of eyes...
ridhima - bus armaan ho gaya... aur nahi dukhega...
and more tear flowed from his eyes..
ridhima - shhh... bus rona nahi plz armaan...
and she hugged armaan and armaan's face rested against her chest and ridhima while hugging cares his hair and kissed his forehead...

After 2 Weeks...

When ridhima was going home... armaan felt losing something very precious to him .. his life... and then wanting to stop ridhima then and there only armaan tried the hardest from all the time to get to life to get back to motion...
armaan tried and tried... and As we say "jisse tum sheedat se paane ki koshish karte ho vo jarur milta hain ... muri kayanat mag jati hain tumhe vo dene mein " par... kya ye time par milta hain ki nahi ye kabhi koi nahi batata...
But armaan tried so much that he finally came to life and fall from the bed in attempt to get in motion and the When doctors came to know this they gave Armaan a very volt Shock and that bring proper motion to his body...
and armaan was now having proper life in his body... He was moving He was happy... His love Made him Move ...made him want to came Back to life... a life for her... a life to make their own life full of happiness all around...
Then seeing armaan recovering in short time From Coma... Doctors. needed to check and make them sure of his proper recovery...
S they asked few Questions and run few Tests on him...
and all the Answers and Tests Gave positive result only...
And He went away getting Dressed after freshening up in his room...


After 4 hrs Of being away

When ridhima came back from home after getting refreshed...
She moved to armaan's room... and was shocked to see armaan was not on bed...
and panicked to see him missing... and then she run towards the reception to know where armaan is...

and reaching there she got no proper response... and she blast there... And then she search in hospital when she didn't found armaan any where when she received the call from nikki and nikki asked her to come to terrace and being confused and broken she went to terrace...
and reaching there she saw whole terrace decorated and a big board was there With a Cute Message Written over it...


"
My heart is the secret place,
where all my secrets are locked away.
The most beautiful of them all
Is That U are MY WORLD since long and for forever
"


Armaan came near board walking on his legs and then with board smile and looking handsome as always Opened His armaan looking ridhima standing standing at the door looking on the board...


and seeing armaan moving and welcoming her with open arms ridhima run towards armaan and stopped just a step back and looked at armaan from top to bottom and then crazily roamed her hand on his body checking him if he is fit and fine...

ridhima with tears - tum... tum theek.. theek ho armaan ...
armaan - hain ridhima mein bilkul theek hun...
ridhima hugged armaan... and armaan to hugged her and ridhima tighten her grip on him...

and then after 5 min of hugging... armaan departed ridhima from himself and sit on his knees... and hold ridhima's hand in his...


Armaan - Ridhima mein nahi jaanta ki mera kal kya tha kaisa tha... bus itna jaanta hun ki mein aapka aane wala kal Tumhare saath behad khubsurat banana chahata hun... mein ne itna strongly kabhi kisi ke liya feel nahi kiya... Mein tumse beinteehan mohobaat karta hun ridhima... aur tum pehle ladki ho meri life mein jisse mein ne pyaar kiya hai... par mein nahi chahat tum aakhri bhi ho... With Pause making ridhima afraid...

armaan know what ridhima felt with his last line and seeing lost and hurt face he said. with smile..

armaan - hain ridhima mein nahi chahata tum aakhri ladki bhi ho... kyun ki mein hamari beti ko aur bhi jayada pyaar karna chahata hun...
mein ye nahi kahunga ridhima ki mein tumhare bina nahi ji paunga... kyun ki mein jii hi raha hun tumhare liye... mein aapne pyaar ko kabhi vocal nahi kiya... kabhi himaat nahi hui... nahi chahata tha ki agar tum mera liya kuch na feel karti ho toh mujhe tumse dur jaana padhe... par aab mujhe dar nahi hain mein jaanta hun jitna mein tumse pyaar karta hun usse khain jayada tum mujhse karti ho... Ridhima kya mujhse Shaadi karogi...


ridhima was all the while standing and leaking her tears of happiness... and then listen armaan to propose her for marriage
ridhima set on her knees and hugged armaan and with tears nodded her head...

ridhima - hain armaan... hain...


and they kept hugging and then lived forever happily...
2 Soul those who use to be alone all the time even if they had someone too but even then they never found any love any warmth of any relation... those two souls found there solace in each other...
to never let each other be a lonely soul ever again...
Love have the power to Bring all the Lights and colour to anyone's life making their life full of rides and happiness
Okay So here goes the 2nd part of this Most Awaiting OS...I m sry to Bunny and to all the others too to make u all keep waiting for this...and sry to bunny as this is not the thing which u asked me for... i m not able to write the OS upto what u asked me for.. but i will try again but this tym not taking a year long.. promise...

Do hit like and leave comments People...
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww di i luvd it
amazing os
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb os di..!!
was waiting so eagerly for this 2nd part ..!!
it was one of the best os i have read...!!!
i am so overwhelmed w..!!
loved it...!! 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
thanx for pm
do pm me for other work
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice os...
love the intensity of AR's love...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice os dear.
thnx fr d pm.
do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
done reading all ur os
they were amazing
all of them do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome awesome awesome awesome
itne din baad update kiya but totally worth the wait
loved it to core
everything was just perfect
bachari ridz without any slippers gayi hospital
i loved it how armaan surprised her by walking on his own towards her
in short ek dum mast dhamake daar TS tha😆
i hope future mien wise hi os ya TS mile ;p

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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved both my teen love and the second part of Tumhe khone Se darta hoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiyyaaa Aaayooo :D
here I come hehehehe
I know I know maine tohda late kardi :P lekin zyada toh nehi na...
Woh kiya haina tumne itni din baad TS ki update di ya, main tohda bhul gayi ti hahahaha :P

Now about the part...
Maine tumhari TS ke pehle part main Blog main comment kiya hai...
Lekin is baar yaha comment kar rahi hoon hehehe...

Accha accha ab part ke baare main right...
It was superrr cute...
I really love the way Armaan try to fight back and Riddhima pouring her heart to him...
then taking care of Armaan, being with him whole day and night...
How Armaan fight and come back to life...
How Armaan make all the arrangement and give surprise to him...
Wohooo...

Super se uparrr wala comment...
love it... Actually love se bhi zyada hahaha :P
Ab mere koh words nehi mil rahi toh itne main kaam chala lungi :P


Dekhooo :P hogayi na long comment hehehe...
Ab toh guccha nehi ho meri pyari Aayo darling...
muwaahhh
Love uuu
take care :D
stay happy and bless :D

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