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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Nice update Akku! Uff kitna confusion hai! who fired this bullet now? wating for the next update!

hheheh me suspense queen heee haa
thanxx pratha
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Mera number one doubt aaj clear hogaya...when ever i used to remember the prologue of the story i used to wonder ki tum yeh story mein kaise e scene ko bhitayogi...now its clear...kya dramebaaz scene tha yaar..fullto masala plot hain..to tell you frankly few stories loose the grip in between the updates but yeh tumhara story me mujeh till date ek bhi aisa update tha nahi ki main bore feel karoon...
its entertainment...entertainment...entertainment..
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heheheh thanxx di for this..
and mai kisi ko kahin b baitha deti hu heee haaa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zehra_01

AMAZING , AMAZING & AMAZING!!! 👏👏👏

thanxx zehra
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! dhamakedar update ...loved it a lot...👏

thanxx sangita
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shriyakadge

Haww ! Not fair ! Cliffhanger pe chod diya ? 😡

ab mere neeche girne se pehle update do 😆

this is what my style na shriyu hahah
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

update kar de plsss akku update na

intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki
do din pehle hi diya tha update mere yaar par dil bhara nahi


u see i have gobe mad so kindly update now

hehe aaj karugi yaar mai sunday ko hee update karti hu else time nai milta
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 30

BULLET FIRES...

The force inside me pushed me behind..i touched my tummy..cant feel anything ..can realize anything...

NOTHING there in my tummy..no pain...voice of someones fall came from front.."R.Kayyy"...

I ran.."R.K.aaayyy...r.k. ...r.k..." omg omg blood..blood."r.k. wake up..get listen to me..dont close your eyes..R.K...look at me R.K."

His blood was falling endlessly with those falling my nerves..he wast in councious..he was just shuting and opening his eyes

"HELPPP...SOMEONE HERE HELP PLEASE...".

"M..adhu" his shivering voice called my name... my face which was turning round and round for seeking help from somewhere turned to him..his wasn't able to say a word but he was saying something slowly..which grows little louder that I heard "run" he said

"run" he said again

no I wont I wont ever run never!!! "R.K. just listen okay just listen...keep your eyes open..i wont let anything happen to you okay just listen to me"

"run...madhu run.." he was repeating again n again with little councious and fainting

I can stay like this here seeing him sleeping forever and shouting for help I have to do something I cant loose here yaa I cant loose here...there must be something to help something must be here

"R.K. don't close eyes I will be back in min" I said the to him and started searching for something there it is like finding pin in mist of pile but I have to I cant loose him I have to ..madhu you have to...nothing here nor there only mountains and garbage...yaar what to do...my eyes were finding a help from mist of non living wate of humans...nothing there I looked around and got something..its trolly like made of wood I can put him on this and can leave from here may be get help after this...

I worked on my plan I reached back to him who was still saying run madhu run..i somehow manage him to settle on that trolley type thing and run.. from there..shouting help help..with each and every second my heart beat was racing and my eyes were looking for help somewhere in this far far alone sky...

Finally I seen a group of wemens paasing nearby I ran to them

"help me pls...someone attacked us pls help me..pls save his life " I was pleading to them by joining both hand...

They were looking at each other...seems as they are not getting my language or what I have to try once more "there" I pointed them to that side "injured...help"

A girl from behind came there "madhu didi " she said

I seen her somewhere but cant remember

"remember..you saved me from goons one in rewa...a person with mask..remeber..me pooja"

Yaa yaa that girl she will help me for sure she will

"pooja.." I almost cried..."save us the man who save dtoy there is the one who is injured now..pls help us pls pooja" I pleaded

She turned back to those ladies and talks to them in different language...

They shopwed me direction where to go..me with pooja and other ran toward that we reache a village after just few mins...

One of women ran somewhere other sowed me a house nearby..villegers cam and a person may be doctor came who make all other to go outside...and asked me to come inside...

He was doing something..while I was standing left to R.K. he was trying to remove bullet perhaps I wasn't getting there tone and language...but I cant see this..the warm that iron ron and was doing something fromt hat to r.k. he hold my hand...unconciusly..his grip was tight and was getting more tightened..he was in pain and I can see this I closed my eyes...after few min the main person there tapped my and said something which wasn't get by me...

He came outside and said to pooja and she told me that he will be all right..the kind of relax I got I cant tell it seems this night wont end ever..it seems I lives years in this single night only...

I was sitiing next to r.k. in that room..well I have to thank my fate that pooja was there else I wont get help..i was touching r.k...his hairs his hand...

"run madhu" he was blaberring in sleep also

I tuched his head and came near to him "I wont run ever...I wont leave you ever..i love you" I said

Knock on door happen..pooja came with few person "tis is cloth di change it ..and don't worry he will get conscious till morning..and pls feel cnfortable if need anything tell me " she said

I nooded as they left from there..i m confortable in any place as long as he is with me..just want him to wake up..say a work...flashback of every thing was coming..he was falling but wait!! Who shooted him...who.. SHIVI??? May be...

BULLET FIRES...and I woke up...sun was giving little drops of shine in this room I seen r.k. who was holding my hand and sleeping...I kissed his forhead...pooja came there..

"didi...take bath and lets go to temple mom said you should go to pray for him" she said by looking toward r.k.

I nooded and did as directed by pooja...she gave me a saari yesterday I wore the same..and left unconscious r.k. in room..

This village is beautifull ..a woman came there ans said something to me...I cant get it hence looked toward pooja she said "she is my mom and thanking you for saving me that day"

I smiled and assured her..well we left to temple..god pls save him...pls..

A group of woman also came there and said something ...this was really not less than Chinese language for me I looked toward my translator who said "aunty saying for hubbys long life woman shuld wore sindoor in head"

Hubyy????...before I could explain anything those woman putted sindoor on my head smilingly and started praying..i touched my forhead..if this is my fate???

A boy shouting something came to us..he was excited...and was looking with that excitement to me which wasn't get by me..astonished me looked toward pooja...she was excited to.."unko hosh aa gaya didi"

What...I was beyond the happiness ran towars that room and reached to him...he was surrounded by doctor and villagers..who gave way to me to enter...that main person said something to me and all started leaving...all gone except pooja and her mom...pooja mom said something to R.K. and r.k. looked toward me for explaination and I looked toward pooja..

"she is thanking you both for saving me ..and saying your married life will reamin as this forever" pooja explained

And they left

"married life??" he questioned

"there misunderstanding"

"ohh...which is this place and how we came here...and..." he paused perhaps remembering his don wala attitude "how you could be safe you ought to die " yay my guess was right

"someone shooted you...and you know in whole period you were saying run madhu run..why you wanted to kill me na"

It seems he is gaining conscious like ..something "madhu...run..go away from here this is not safe place." He said

"I wont run ever r.k...I wont run ever I wont leave you ever"

"don't be mad..i m terrorist..being with me means to be with death"

"accepted..i will die with you"

"don't be fool..everything open to you now...leave" he shouted

"you need rest...take rest and my decision is final"

"madhu..."

"R.K. why don't you accept haan..what problem you have now I know everything now..or some mystery is still left to open..r.k. pls.."

"madhu whatever mom said to you is true but this is also a truth that you cant ever be safe with me...hence its needed that you go"

"I listen from aunty..but I want to listen from you R.K. plss say once that you love me R.K. pls.."

"MADHU..I..."

"Madhu did...someone came to meet you" shouted pooja and breaking r.k. voice..

Who would be there those goons again...

"don't go..i will check" said r.k.

"look at you you cant even move ..let me go..nothing ill happen don't you worry"

"how can you say so yaar..."

"r.k. trust me..and stay here"

"no you wont go" he hold my hand

"okay no one will go let them come inside...we will face them together...

The scene that came next wasn't terroryfying..it was sunny.."SUNNY" I shouted and hugged him tightly...

...😊...

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and emotional update aku dear👏⭐️ thanks for pm 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
res/ unres
yo i m 2nd ! *dancing*
awesome update ...so my rk is hurt !! 😭
did sunny shot him by n e chance ? i feel so ...
n e ways update sooon
Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago

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