FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 76

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi, sweetie..I juz finished reading the whole updates..its really awesome..I read for 3 days..I became ur fan aft reading this..hats off fr ur creativity..I think if they r hvg idea to start Office part 2, they shud follow this story line..
I'm mentioning this from bottom of my hear..
Its really fantabulous..
Love u very much..🤗👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweety any prob again it's ok take ur own time we will wait for u to return.
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Posted: 11 years ago
please update when you have a chance waiting to read your story for ages
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devilz94

please update when you have a chance waiting to read your story for ages


editing paaa...

will update today evening...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sulaayini

Hi, sweetie..I juz finished reading the whole updates..its really awesome..I read for 3 days..I became ur fan aft reading this..hats off fr ur creativity..I think if they r hvg idea to start Office part 2, they shud follow this story line..

I'm mentioning this from bottom of my hear..
Its really fantabulous..
Love u very much..🤗👏


thank you ... sulaayini...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety16


editing paaa...

will update today evening...


waiting......
Edited by neelimarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 81

Raji's parents, grandparents keep waving until the car diminishes from their sight. All of them come inside the house and silence prevails...

Raji's periappa brokes the silence...

R-periappa: dei... idhu sariyaa varumaa?

R-appa: edhu annen?

R-periappa: thavam kidandhu petha .. otha pullai... vera jaadhila katti kudukkuradhu.. avanga pazhakka vazhakkam eppadiyo? namma ponnai avanga ponnu maathiri parthuppaangalaa?

R-amma: maappillai romba thangamaana paiyyan maamaa...

R-periappa: oru rendu naal pazhakkathula eppadi maa theriyum?

R-appa: adhu vandhu unga kitta oru vishayam sollanum..

R-periappa: enna?

Raji's appa tells his brother about Kaushik's incident whatever his friend Muthulingam told him.

Raji's periappa gets furious and ...

R-periappa: idhu ellaam eppo nadandhadhu?

R-appa: rendu vaaram munnaadi thaan enakku theriyum...

R-periamma: en thambi idha enga kitta sollalai?

R-appa: neengalum kashta pada venaame nnu thaan anni... Unga kitta sollaama maraikkanum ngradhukkaaga illa...

R-periappa: idhe maathiri kadaisi varaikkum Raji ya parthuppaanaa?

R-appa: uyiraa parthuppen nu sathiyam panni kuduthirukkaan annen...

R-periappa: aanaa ... avanga appa amma eppadiyo?

R-periamma: konjam porumaiyaa irunga... maappillai avar veetla pesittu sollattum... avangalai ner la paarthaa therinjida poguthu...

R-periappa: adhuvum sari dhaan...

Everyone disburses...

IN THE CAR:

Karthik: dei.. Vishnu... amma vukku call pannudaa...

Vishnu: sari machaan...

Raji: ippo edhukku Karthik unga amma vukku call panre? avanga kitta solradhukku munnaadiye enga veetla pesi aachu nnu sonnaa ... kova pada maattaangalaa?

Karthik smiles and keeps driving.

Vishnu: Raji... avan phone panna sonnadhu enga ammaavukku...

Raji: oh...

Vishnu calls his mother and puts the call on the speaker...

V-amma: hello..

Karthik: maa... eppadi irukkeenga?

V-amma: nallaa irukken Karthi... neenga innum kilambalaiyaa?

Karthik: Kilambittom maa... On the way...

V-amma: Thiruvizhaa ellaam eppadi irundhadhu?

Karthik: Super aah irundhadhu maa... unga kitta oru vishayam

sollanum...

V-amma: sollu paa...

Karthik: Raji veetla ... naanga love panra vishayam sollittom...

V-amma: very good... enna sonnaanga?

Karthik: mmm... adhu vandhu...

V-amma: dei... suspense vaikiradhaa nenappaa?... othukittaanga thaane?

Karthik: eppadi maa?

V-amma: un kural laye theriyudhe...

Karthik: enna?

V-amma: alavu kadandha sandhosham...

Karthik: Chance ey illa maa... ungalai beat pannave mudiyaadhu...

V-amma: Romba santhosham Karthi... nee eppo amma appa kitta solla pore?

Karthik: next weekend Bangalore polaam nu irukken...

V-amma: sari paa... chennai ku vandhidu ... pesikkalaam...

Karthik: Ok maa... bye...

V-amma: bye Karthi...

Vishnu cuts the call...

Lakshmi: nee pesalayaa Vishnu?

Vishnu: amma kittayaa?

Lakshmi: mmm...

Vishnu: veettukku poyittu pesikalaam...

Vishnu plays songs on his i phone and everyone quietly rejoices as Karthik drives on...

Ashvin along with Susan and his parents reaches Melmaruvathur around 7 PM. He goes straight to Raja's garage. Raja gives the car keys to Susan and says its ready. Susan pays him but he refuses to take the money. Ashvin thanks him and he obliges with a smile.

Susan thanks Ashvin and his parents, gets into her car and drives away. Ashvin and his parents get into his car as he drives back home.

Around 8 PM KVRL reach Thiruchy. Raji and Lakshmi are fast asleep in the back seat.

Vishnu: machaan ... ingeye saaptidalam daa... appuram vazhiyila engeyum niruthaama maathi maathi drive pannittu Chennai poga correct aah irukkum

Karthik: sari daa...

Vishnu: ivangalai ezhuppidalaamaa?

Karthik: mmm...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Raji...

Both of them wake up.

Lakshmi: ennaachu Vishnu?

Vishnu: Trichy vandhaachu... dinner saaptu polaamaa?

Raji: Thiruchy yaa? Lakshmi... amma Bangalore la irundhu vandhuttaangalaa nnu kelu...

Lakshmi: mmm...

Lakshmi calls her mother.

Lakshmi: hello... maa... enga irukkeenga? oh appadiyaa? sari ok... naan 10 mins kazhichu call panren ...

Raji: ennaachu Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: amma just ippo dhaan vandhirukkaanga... romba tired aah irukku... fresh aayittu varen nu sonnaanga...

Vishnu: Super...

Lakshmi: enna Super?

Vishnu: Lakshmi Tiruchy la enga biriyaani super aah irukkum nu sollu.. parcel vaangittu neraa poyi athai kku surprise tharalaam...

Lakshmi: ippo vaa?

Karthik: aamaa Lakshmi... Raji veedu parthaachu... unga veedu parkanum illa?

Lakshmi (smiles): Ok...

Karthik drives to a Restaurant following Lakshmi's instructions.

They pack dinner for all and reach Lakshmi's house in 20 minutes.

It's a small individual house in a serene area. All of them get out of the car without making noise.

Lakshmi calls her mother and she answers...

Lakshmi: hello... maa ... enna panreenga?

L-amma: ippo dhaan kulichittu vandhen... sollu daa...

Lakshmi: saapteengalaa?

L-amma: innum illa daa... bayangaramaa pasikkudhu...

Lakshmi: Biriyaani saappidareengalaa?

L-amma: enakku porumai illai... noodles senju saaptukkaren...

Lakshmi: onnum venaa... door bell adichaa... kadhavu thoranga...

biriyaani at your doorsteps...

L-amma: ey... nee chennai la ukkaandhikittu Trichy la biryaani doordelivery solriyaa?

Lakshmi rings the bell.

L-amma: Lakshmi... nijamaave order pannirukkiyaa?

Lakshmi: maa kadhavu thoranga...

L-amma: OK...

Lakshmi's mother opens the door and is surprised to see Lakshmi in front of her. She screams with joy and hugs Lakshmi. Lakshmi asks her friends to come in. Lakshmi's mother is happy to see all of them.

KVRL freshen up and have dinner with Lakshmi's mom happily chit chatting. Lakshmi tells her about their kovilpatti trip and Lakshmi's mom feels happy for Karthik and Raji and congratulates them.

Finishing dinner, as Lakshmi's mom requests, they decide to stay back and start to Chennai early morning. Lakshmi's mom has gala time spending with her daughter and her friends. She shows Lakshmi's childhood photos of school and college to them. All of them play cards for some time. Around 11 PM, Lakshmi's mother goes to sleep as she is very tired having no rest for the past 3 days.

Raji gets a call from her appa and she goes aside to talk. Lakshmi makes tea and gives to Karthik and Vishnu.

Lakshmi: Raji enga?

Karthik: Phone pesa ponava innum varalai Lakshmi...

Vishnu: machaan... Unakkaaga terrace la wait panraanga nnu ninaikkiren...

Karthik: dei... adangu daa...

Lakshmi: Karthik... Intha tea Raji kku kuduthidu ... Please...

Karthik: neenga rendu perum thaniyaa pesanum naa ... Neenga terrace ku poyittu Raji ya keezha anuppunga... Edhoo enga mela karisanam kaattra maathiri onnum scene poda venaa...

Vishnu: adappaavi... Therinjiduchaa?

Karthik: dei... Idhu kooda theriyaadha alavukku naan muttaal illai...

Lakshmi: aamaa... paambin kaal paambu ariyum...

Karthik: ayyooo... Lakshmi... antha tea ah kudunga... Naan escape... Unga thollai thaanga mudiyalai...

Karthik takes two tea mugs and goes upstairs.

Lakshmi comes and sits beside Vishnu on the couch who is looking at her photos.

Vishnu: Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: sollu ... Vishnu...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Nee thappaa eduthukka koodaadhu...

Lakshmi: maatten... sollu ... Vishnu...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Unga appa oda oru photo kooda illaiyaa?

Lakshmi: illa Vishnu... appa oda things ellaam avar irukkum bodhu irundha veetlaye vittuttu vandhuttom... Amma oda certificates, ennoda birth certificate mattum eduthukittu pottittu irundha dress oda kilambi vandhittom... Modhalla rent ku thaan veedu eduthu irundhom... Apppuram amma housing loan la intha veedu vaanginaanga...

Vishnu: sorry ... Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: hey... edhukku sorry? Kekka unakku ellaa urimaiyum irukku...

Vishnu: enna solre Lakshmi... Nijamaavaa?

Lakshmi: aamaa ... Vishnu... nee kekkalai nnaa naane solli iruppen...

Vishnu: I Love You Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: I Love You too... Vishnu...

She moves closer and places her head on his shoulder. He kisses gently on her forehead.

IN THE TERRACE:

Raji is looking at the stars leaning to the ladder that lead to water tank. Karthik comes and gives her tea.

Raji: Thank you...

Karthik: ukkaaralaam vaa...

Raji: venaa Karthik...

Karthik: yen? Ennaachu?

Raji: idhu namma veedu illa...

Karthik: keezha Vishnu, Lakshmi rendu perum thaniyaa irukkanumaam... enna thorathivittaanga...

Raji(smiles): ada paavigalaa...

Karthik sits on the floor and Raji comes and sits beside him. Both sip the tea quietly. Karthik notices something is bothering Raji. He places the cup aside takes her hand into his and ...

Karthik: enna yosikkira Raji?

Raji: onnum illa...

Karthik: poi... En kitta solla enna thayakkam unakku? Edhuvaa irundhaalum paravaa illa... Sollu...

Raji: enga veetla ivvalavu easiyaa othukku vaanga nnu ethir paarkalai Karthik... Bayangara prachanai aagum nu nenachen...

Karthik: naanum thaan... Aanaa ennai paartha udane unga appa kazhuthai pidichi veliya thallaama amaidhiyaa iruukave ... konjam nambikkai vandhuchi...

Raji: aanaa enakku nambikkai irundhuchi... appa othukkuvaaru nnu... Appadiye nadandhiduchi... Adhaan ippo innum bayamaa irukku...

KArthik: enna bayam?

Raji: unga veetla othukkanume nnu dhaan...

Karthik: ellaam othukkukkuvaanga... Unakkenna sandhegam?

Raji: unga amma vukku ennai pidikkalai Karthik...

Karthik: appadi ellaam onnum illai...

Raji: appadi thaan... enakku theriyum...

Karthik: unnai kalyaanam pannikka poradhu naan... avanga illai...

Raji: avanga sammadham venum illaiyaa?

Karthik: aamaa... avangalum othukittaa dhaan Kalyaanam...

Raji: adhaan ennoda bayame...

Karthik: bayappadaadhe Raji... appa vukku unnai rumba pidichirukku... appa OK sollittaa ... Amma maruppu solla maattaanga... appa va vachu amma vai easy yaa convince pannidalaam...

Raji: paarkalaam...

Karthik turns towards Raji and places his palm on her cheek, looks into her eyes and questions...

Karthik: en mela unakku nambikkai irukkaa? Illaiyaa?

Raji: niraiya irukku...

Karthik: appuram enna? Ellaam naan parthukkaren... Nee free yaa iru...

Raji: mmm...

Karthik holds her face in his palms comes closer and kisses on her forehead. Tears roll down from her eyes. He wipes them with his fingers and she smiles.

Karthik: en Raji ivvalavu bayappadare? Namma Kalyaanam kandippaa nadakkum...

Raji: oruvelai nadakkalai nnaa... Ennai vittu poyidamaattiye?

Karthik: Raji...

Raji: En kanngalai thazhuviya kanavu

unnai en uyir endru kaatiyadhu

ennai neeyaaga maatriyadhu

naan... unnil irukka virumbugiren...

unakkulleye irukka ninaikkiren...

un nizhalaaga maara aasaippadugiren...

unnai uyiraaga nesikkiren...

un anbai mattum ethirparkiren...

Karthik hugs her closely and says " I LOVE YOU"...

Raji also hugs him back saying "I LOVE YOU ... TOO..."

Chapter 82... coming soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the delay friends...
i hope the wait was worth it...

will try to update regularly from now onwards...

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Posted: 11 years ago
It's just awesome sweety...👏
very very nice...
plz update regularly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! Thanks for the update. Hope karthis mum agrees to their marriage... nice to see lakshmis mum and thei bonding. vishnu and lakshmi as usual super!
Eagerly waiting for your next update😊

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