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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

VM - Khushi's narration of the story of the birth of Lord Krishna

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vj5TGtdNEZg[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This poem was entered in the concluded Wings of Ink Poetry Contest and has won the Reader's choice Runner-up award. Thank you judges and thank you everyone who has voted for my poem. 😃

Reader's choice Runner Up - Entry 2

Theme: Love And Hate

Title: I hate you

In a world full of dishonesty and deceit
With animosity and abhorrence all over replete
You entered my life proving otherwise
I hate you for removing my veil of despise

My tears had dried, my heart had hardened
No news affected me, joyful or saddened
You melted my heart and released the fears
I hate you for giving me many happy tears

It seemed innocence was an age old thing
Everybody's actions calculated and conspiring
Your innocent eyes brought back my smile
I hate you for making me feel alive

You taught me to love and see the good side
You brought out the human in me that was trapped inside
Confess my love, shouts my inner voice
I hate you for leaving me with no other choice

Judges Marks

Total 75 marks (25 per judge)

Judge A Judge B Judge C Total Votes

16 17.5 16 49.5 12

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

This poem was entered in the concluded Wings of Ink Poetry Contest and has won the Judges' choice winner award and Readers' Runners up award. Thank you judges and thank you everyone who has voted for my poem. 😃

Judges' choice winner - Entry 14

Reader's choice Runner Up - Entry 14

Theme: Shades Of Life

Title: Life

Is the glass half full or is it half empty?
From person to person, the answer will vary
Just so is life and your life's story
Either it's very sad or full of glory

Moments are those that glorify your life
Happy or sad or the ones filled with strife
Never does one stay for more than a given time
It's a cycle that repeats all your life time.

Feel blessed for the good and prepare for the bad
Accept the challenges without feeling sad
Another path will open, if one is closed
Challenges should never be left unprobed

Shades of life are such, they will always change
Sometimes long, sometimes short, will be the range
Those who accept with a smile, will take the crown
One can never attain their goals with a frown

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Judges Marks

Total 75 marks (25 per judge)

Judge A Judge B Judge C Total Votes

17 20 25 62 18

Edited by DurgaS - 10 years ago

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

This poem was entered in the concluded Wings of Ink Poetry Contest. Thank you judges and thank you everyone who has voted for my poem. 😃

Entry 20

Theme: A little moment captured in time

Title: Badal (Clouds)

Yun chalte chalte jab nazar upar uthi
Ek alag hi duniya mujhko dikhi
Vipreet aur vibhinn, swachch aur nirmal
Neela ambar tha ya nadi ka sheetal jal

Chote bade badal yahan wahan failey huye
Neele farsh par jaise rui ke gole rengte huye
Niraakaar, nirbadh, shwet aur shuddh
Drushya aisa ke kho jaaye sudh budh

Aise mein kshitij par dekha kala dhuan
Achanak vaastavikta ka abhaas hua
Wah re insaan, tu kitna ooncha utha
Dharti to maili ho chuki, ab aasmaan bhi kala hua

Translation:

While walking when I looked up
I saw a different world
Contrast and varied, clean and pure
It's the blue sky or the river's cool water

Small and big clouds spread here and there
As if cotton balls are rolling on the blue floor
Shapeless, loose, white and clean
A scene that would make you lose your presence of mind

Then I saw a black smoke at the horizon
Suddenly realized the reality
Wow O human, how high you've risen
The Earth is already dirty, the sky too is now black
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Judges Marks

Total 75 marks (25 per judge)

Judge A Judge B Judge C Total Votes

19 17 25 61 18

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

My participation entries in the * I-F Idol Season 3: The Next Singing Sensation! *

Link to song in Round one: https://kiwi6.com/file/15l4ur9wih

Link to song in Round two:https://kiwi6.com/file/qqb15judeo

Link to Results thread: * I-F Idol Season 3: The Next Singing Sensation Results! *

ENTRY #15 - DurgaS

ROUND 1

Judge 1

good voice quality, maybe a song with lesser high notes would have been better. Good effort, good voice, but due to unsuitable song selection, song went off note in a lot of places

Judge 2

Nice voice. There was some strain in your voice while you were trying to reach the high notes. Good selection to showcase. Good effort overall.

Judge 3

Nice voice and good singing I like how you tried the variations but please work on the range for such songs. Also work on the transitions and rhythm while singing .

Judge 4

Good attempt! I think some notes were off, but overall it was a nice rendition.

Judge 5

Nice performance! Went off key in a few places, and the tempo didn't seem to be maintained consistently throughout the song.