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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix


True we have always seen revenge marriages turn into love stories but DJ's creatives are always different naaa they must have thought that we will bring something new and did the opposite!!

Pyaar karne waaley se revenge!! And make hero a dumb fool who becomes suddenly crippled and helpless!


do not remind me about Rags... cvs have turned a superhero into Majboor mango man. 😡 Raghav Singhania has so much potential when he entered.. Boosted Kalpi's moral by taunting her and all of sudden he became a weak man for his mother. CRAP!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saanjh26

Great update. waiting for next part


Thank u.. Sorry for delaying.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


do not remind me about Rags... cvs have turned a superhero into Majboor mango man. 😡 Raghav Singhania has so much potential when he entered.. Boosted Kalpi's moral by taunting her and all of sudden he became a weak man for his mother. CRAP!!!


Yeah.. I agree with u..👍🏼
Majboor mango man..🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello..

Extremely sorry for the delay.. But i know u guys can understand my situation.. I promise u that I will reschedule my routine tomorrow so that i can take out time for the updates. Plz bear this time with me.

The part was written in hurry and with lots of background sound so expect lots and lots of error. No proof reading so sorry for typos and other mistakes... The writers of the forum can understand the reasons of grammatical and spelling mistakes while writing so I am expecting them and u all to forgive me. Enjoy the update.

Rammy are waiting for Mr. Mehta's employee Deepak to come... Amar who has heard their entire conversation is trying to call Kalpi but she is not responding. Finally Deepak arrives. Sammy introduces him to Rags. Deepak extends his hand to Rags but pulls it back on seeing his fierce eyes. "I am not interested in knowing u... Can u just tell me whatever u know about Kalpi... I mean Kalpana Jadhav." He said while trying to control his anger. Deepak stays mum on seeing the rage in Rag's eyes. Sammy assures him that he doesn't need to worry about anything and just tell Rags about Kalpi giving money to Mr. Mehta...

Deepak nods in affirmative and says, "Yesterday Kalpana madam and Mehta sir were having some discussion when I went to Mr. Mehta's cabin to take some sign. I saw Kalpana Madam giving a cheque to Mr. Mehta. I initially thought that it's related to business but later Mr. Mehta gave it to me to drop it to his personal account."

Incredulous Rags shrugged his shoulder and turns around to hide the tear in his eyes..

"See Raghav, I told u that Kalpi is planning something against us.. She bribed Mr. Mehta for this project... I am telling u Rags Kalpi is here coz of some hidden agenda.." Sammy said impatiently.


Deepak(astonishingly) : "What are u saying sir... Kalpana mam bribed Mr. Mehta... But why will she bribe Mr. Mehta for snatching the project when she herself gave the best presentation... Kalpi mam gave money to Mr. Mehta to purchase Singhania Mansion... she wanted to help him Mr. Singhania discreetly. What planning are u talking about.."


Raghav who was silent till now gives a proud smile to Sammy as if mocking him for mistrusting Kalpi and proving his love.. Sammy who can decipher his friends expressions denies to believe and warns Deepak to not lie... But Rags intervene and tells Deepak to leave the place...


Rags(trying to control his anger) : "See Sammy... enough of this now.. Let's go back.. We have lots of things to do.."


Sammy : "No Rags.. I am still confident that Kalpi is behind all the miseries happening to u.. N I have one more proof".


Rags : "Look Sammy... U know I can't control my anger any more.. So please stop these non sense.. I don't want any proof against Kalpi... I trust her and will always trust her."


Sammy : "That means u don't trust our friendship.. u trust ur love which was 5 years away from u but not ur friend who is supporting u from last 20 years.. Superb Rags!! "


Rags(angrily) : "Okay.. show me the proof... If it will prove a slight involvement of Kalpi than I will punish her for this and will remove all her memories from my life but if u fails to prove her involvement than I will break our friendship.. And mind it.. It's not me who is saying this but it's u who want me to prove my friendship. Now let's go."


Sammy(confidently) : "Ok Rags.. As u wish. Come with me."


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Kalpi comes out of Singhania mansion after spending quality time with Khushi.. Her parents were distraction for her but Khushi's innocence took away all the discomfort she was feeling in their presence.. She takes out her mobile and checks 15 miss calls of Amar... She dials his number but the mobile slipped out of her hand and falls on the ground.. While picking it up she notices a photo on the ground.. It looks familiar... She picks it up to have a closer look and realizes that it's her photo of school days.. She wonders what it is doing here and remembers how she saw it once in Vitthal's wallet.

Flashback


Kalpi is getting ready for the college and asks some money from her father as she has to purchase a book.. Her father tells her to take it out from his wallet... She opens the wallet and sees two photos kept in it... One is her childhood pic while other is a family photo..


Kalpi : "Baba.. when u have family photo with u than why u kept my photo as well.."


Vitthal : "Coz I love my princess the most.."


Kalpi : "Than why this childhood photo.. I mean u can keep recent pic as well..."


Vitthal : "Do u remember when this pic was clicked??"


Kalpi : "No.."


Vitthal : "This was ur 1st day of school... For the first time u wore ur uniform. Unlike other students u were happy to go to school.. I wanted to take ur snap but I dint had camera with me so I took u to the nearest studio and there this pic was clicked... This pic is close to my hear... whenever I see it I feel as if my little Kalpi is still with me.. holding my hand and I am talking her to the school.. When u were in hostel I used to talk to this photo for hours.. So this photo holds a special place in my heart.. It assures me that my Kalpi is with me.."


While saying so tears form in his eyes... Kalpi looks at him and hugs him tightly saying, "Ur Kalpi is always with u.. I love u baba...". Vitthal too hugs her back saying, "I love u too my princess..". He first plants a kiss on Kalpi's forehead and than her photo and keeps it back in his wallet saying, "This is special."


Flashback ends.


Kalpi wonders what this pic is doing here as his father have burned all her belonging to that pyre.. She notices Vitthal coming out.. She drops the pic back on the ground and hides behind a car.. She sees her father searching something on the ground. She hopes that he searching that pic only. Finally Vitthal finds the pic lying on the ground and pick it.. She wipes the dust from it and place it near his heart.. And looks upward to thank the god..


Vitthal : Thank u Bappa... I was scared of losing it but u helped me.. I don't know how I would have lived without my Kalpi.. My princess...


Kalpi is overwhelmed to see her father still keeping that photo with him and still caring about it.. She moves a bit to go to her father and tell him that ur Kalpi is not in this photo but in front of u.. just hug her.. But she stops herself so that she can hear his father's feelings for her.


Vitthal : u know Bappa... This is the last memory of my late child.. My Kalpi who died 5 years ago.. She was my pride.. my life but The girl whom I met today is not my daughter but a sinister.. She broke my trust.. I wish I never have to see her face again..


The reality shakes Kalpi's heart.. She realizes what blunder she was about to commit..


Kalpi(in her mind) : "U still don't trust me... In 5 years u were never bothered about my existence.. For a second I thought ur love for me is above everything but u proved me wrong again.. Ur so called respect in society is much more imp to u.. Thank u Mr. Vitthal Jadhav for reminding me that I can never be a part of ur life..".


She wipes her tears and leaves from there. Vitthal gives a feeble smile on this.


Vitthal(punishment) : "Thank God I have seen her in the car mirror else she would have known that how much I miss her.. I can't tell her that there was not even a single second when I dint miss her.. From past 5 years I was trying my best to search her without telling anyone.. I was just praying for her safety, The day when I saw her in the city was the day when I sighed relief.. I was happy that she is safe and alive. I wanted to hug her but I can't forgive her for what she did. I want her to become a better person and if I will forgive her today than she might commit more mistakes in future. This is not my anger but my punishment to her but more than her, it's a punishment to me that I failed.. my upbringing failed. I tried to remove all her memories from my house but that day in anger also I dint got courage to burn this photo of her.. It still says that my Kalpi is with me."


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NOTE : Tell me what punishment u want for the culprit as I am planning to reveal the culprit soon.. Also do u want me to punish Neetu more as she is already in asylum.. If u want so than plz tell me what punishment u want for Neetu as well. Though Neetu can be the real culprit but right now m talking about her involvement in abortion case.

P.S. : If u like the update than please comment as it will motivate me.. Plz be frank while giving feedbacks as I truly want to know the points where I can improve.


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Vish
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting update!! Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyllooo dear..
an update after soo many.. I wanna ask u abt d updates bt again I thought u would be busy so dint disturb.. n thnx fr updating fr even being busy thnx dear..
and d update as usual its gng intrestnggg day by day.. aab tho kalpi bachgayi.. bt plz dnt create any misundrstng btw rammy.. nw raghav has nlyyy Sammy to support him in vryy way so dnt plz..
and abt d punishmnt.. I won't get any gud idea abt dat.. I'm sure u ll get a good n proper idea fr dat..

Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please spare Rammy ...😭they are really awesome.. Hope so Raghav won't break his friendship when gets to know the truth...
Loved the way Vithal still cares about Kalpi...
If the culprit is female then slap from Kalpi and our slap-specialist Kamla..I'm saying this coz i think its puky..

If the culprit is male then obviously punches from Raghav..

Itna pain diya RagNa ko toh the culprit too deserves some physical pain... Plus that person should lose the most precious thing in their life..(Again in reference to puky.. For her it'll be khushi's love and respect)..

Abhi ke liye itne kaafi hai..
Bahut lamba comment hogaya😆
And about neetu its upto you.. And plz reveal the culprit soon..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Vish 👏
Hmm... kalpi got saved today... wonder what proof will Sammy try to bring...
The Vitthal-Kalpi scene was beautiful...
Loved the update 😊 update soon...
Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
whoever is culprit... only kalpi has right to punish him ...& everyone rags, kamla vitthal.also shud get punished not exactly punished but sum lession ...
nice update,...know u r busy...but .pls update soon...

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