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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Fantabulous

I read the whole FF in one go and it was amazing
Lobed it to core
Awesome concept
The flashbacks are too cute and would like to see more flashbacks in upcoming updates
Feel bad for Geet
Pleas continue soon
Thanks :)


thanks dear

updating in this week
ofcourse i add more flashback scenes
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 9

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Geet beta tu ab tak soyi nhi

Geet : massi wo neend nhi aa rhi thi

Isliye socha kyun na chand ko dekh li

Kitni shalinta hai isme

Massi come near to her & caressed on her hair...

Massi : geet beta

Itni der tk jagna tumahri health ke liye thik nhi hai

Aur doctor ne tumhe itni der khade rhehne ke liye mna kiya hai na

Firse back mein pain ho jaayenga

Chlo rest kro

Geet : massi aap tension na lo

Mein bilkul thik hu

**********

Maan think so much at last night... Why geet come here? Why she hid the identity?

She is geetanjali khurana not geet handa... only name is similar... and most important I think geet not wear western dresses... I never see any image of her in western dresses ... so wear like this type, it's impossible task for her & she live in hoshiyarpur, here this type clothes not allowed too...& geetanjali behavior is also different from geet... Maan you are right... why you thinking so much about her... she is only your past ...never became present or future too... concentrate on your work...

************

You past, present, future only me Mr. Maan Singh khurana ... your wife geet...

************

One week passed ... But maan always try to avoid her, but how it's possible, she is his secretary after all...

Maan : miss khurana

Sari arrangement ho jaani chaiye

Hume kal hi nikalna honga

Geet (think) : thanks dad

Aapne mera kaam kr diya

Maan : Miss khurana

You listening me.

Geet : yes sir

Saari arrangement ho jaayengi

Maan : dhyan rahe

Ye meeting bhut important hai

So no mistake

.

Why u standing here...go & do your work...

Geet : sir

Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai

Maan : hmm

He is looks in files...

Geet : sir aap mujhe Miss khurana kyun bulate hai

He stops the work ...

Geet : sir aapne jwab nhi diya

Maan : isme kya problem hai

Geet : sir ye thoda old - old sound nhi hota

Maan : bilkul nhi

Geet : sir par mujhe lagta hai

Please call me geet

Sb mujhe geet hi bulate hai

Maan : koi jaroori hai

Jo sb bulaye

Whi mein bulayu

Geet : oh ye baat hai

Aap mujhe special feel krwana chahte hai

Par sir mujhe odd feel hota hai

Special feel krwana hai

Toh Geetanjali bulayo na

Maan : keep quite

Don't cross your limit

Am your boss not your friend...

Geet : sir maine kb kaha

You are my friend

But please call me geet or geetanjali

Maan : tum apne boss ko order de rhi ho

Geet : sir mein request kr rhi hu

Please

Maan : hmm

Now leave

Jo kaam diya hai wo karo

Geet : yes sir

************

Maan aap chahe ya na chahe

Aapko apni zindagi mein geet naam ko shamil krna hi honga

.

Mein aapko mna ke hi rahungi iske liye

************

Flashback In

Full day passed out, but maan not talk with geet & geet too... At night she was standing alone on terrace in darkness...

Babaji ...kissi mein itna attitude kaise ho sakta hai

Maafi maang li

Par nhi

Mr. Maan singh khurana toh gussa hi hai

Unhe kya lagta hai

Bs whi busy ho sakte hai

Hum nhi

Ek toh hume phle bataya nhi

Wo daadi ke sath aa rhe hai

Hume bataya hota

Toh hum khi nhi jaate na

Par karte toh apne mann ki hai

.

Aur mein ek din ke liye bahar kya gyi

Wo us chudail Sheila ke sath gum rhe hai

.

Apna intzaar dekhta hai

Par mera nhi

.

One drop of tear falls down from her eye...

Itne saalo mein ek baar bhi moodkr nhi dekha

.

.

Shi kaha tumne

Maine kbhi mood kr nhi dekha

Aur ye bhi shi kaha

Mujhe sirf apne kiya huya intzaar dekhta hai

She not turns back & she recognizes his voice...

Geet : aap yaha kya kr rhe hai

Maan : joh tum kr rhi ho

.

Taro se baat

Geet : hmm

Maan : chup kyun ho gyi

Aur karo na baat

He stands behind her...

Geet : meri baat ho gyi hai

Mein chalti hu

Before she turn & he hugged her from back...

Geet : leave me

Maan : nhi

Geet : chodo mujhe

Apni us chipkali se jaake chipko

Geet : aapko lagta hai

Am feeling jealous

So yes

She removed his hand & goes to stand near edge or boundary & seeing down... he comes near & stands beside her...

Maan : geet mein tumhe hurt nhi krna chahta tha

Par mein bs yaha sirf tumahre liye aaya tha

Aur tum sbke sath hoti hai

Siway mere

Tum ydi mujhe waqt nhi dongi

Fir mere yaha hone na hone ka kya fayda

Geet : aapko kya lagta hai

Mein ye sb jaan buzkar kr rhi hu

.

Mein aapke sath nhi rhehna chahti

.

In palo ka itne saal intzaar kiya hai maine Maan

Maan : geet jo bit gya

Ab usse bhul jaayo

Kal bhaiya bhabhi aa jaayenge

Fir parso se saari rashme shuru ho jaani hai

Usse phle mein tumhare sath waqt bitana chahta hu

I hope tum free ho

Geet : hmm

.

Ab mein chalti hu

Good night

He held her wrist...

Precap : is dard-e- dil ki shifarish

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Posted: 10 years ago
Kitni ajeeb baat hai na
Maan kitni baar Geet se mils but he did not see her face
Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Kitni ajeeb baat hai na

Maan kitni baar Geet se mils but he did not see her face
Nice update


😉

ha di
ajeeb toh hai

par mein yhi chahti thi
wo face na dekhe

mask ya plastic wala idea - for this big nooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor maan fighting against mind n heart
is she geet or not
thinking diff between hp geet n his sec geet
geet too behind him req him to call as geet or geetanjali..
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part...maan pareshan hai ki yeh wahi geet hai ya koi aur...yeh kismat ka khel hi hai jo maan geet se itne bar milla lakin uska cehra nahi dekha...par kaya maan uski awaz bhi nahi pehchanta???
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21


😉

ha di
ajeeb toh hai

par mein yhi chahti thi
wo face na dekhe

mask ya plastic wala idea - for this big nooo


Aur brchara maan
Wo yahin socho raha hi ye wahi Geet hai ya koi aur

Maan Ne galati kiya to ab Geet ko bhi chhup kar hi raha hoga
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
maan think geet as his past
but she is everwhere in his life

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part...maan confused btw geetanjali and geet handa

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