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Posted: 11 years ago
priya n mahi meeting is superb n emotional
priya felt some kind of attachment toward mahi
mahi upset after priya left
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Priya & maahi met :)
maahi saying to maan that she saw mumma bt he is not understanding ..
Hmm so priya & maan will meet in the party ..waiting for it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update priya is geet mahi said mama maan throw icecream mahi upset maan don't no what happen
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

lovely update! Priya in India! Is this Geet? Maan takes Mahi shopping! Mahi meets Priya! she buys her ice cream! Maan throws it in the bin! Mahi says mumma bought it! Mahi crying! Maan upset! Priya calls her dad! update soon! Well written


thanks dear

u see priya face soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SAI92

Priya and maahi Meeting superb.waiting for next update


thanks dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

maan , mahi n priya in same mall
mahi n priya come face to face
priya feels attached with mahi



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

lovely update and the meeting of Priya (aka Geet 😃) and Maahi...the way Maahi touched her face, she is referring Priya as her mother, but neither Priya nor Maan could understand it...

Maan's protective reaction bhi sahi hain...
lekin Priya ka dress bhi tabhi spoil hona tha..but enjoyed this hit & miss And next part mein to they are going to meet anyway 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

nice part

maahi saw her mom & was quite shock but happy too


thanks dear

yaa😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 6

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Maan tried so much to know why maahi so upset... but first time,

he not getting what maahi wants to say.

Maan (think) : geet tum yaha hoti

Toh mujhse better smjh paati

Maahi ko kya takleef hai

Both reached home...

**************

Maahi runs to daadi & snuggled close to her...

Daadi : Maan kya huya Maahi ko

Maan : pata nhi daadi

Maahi : mumma

Daadi : maahi hume bataiye kya huya humari princess ko

Maahi : pa...pa ba...d

Maan : maahi sorry hai papa

Aap ice-cream ki baat pe gussa ho

Papa aapko aur ice-cream laa denge

Ase kissi se kuch nhi lete

Maahi : mumma

.

Dev : bhai

Aap chl rhe hai na party mein

Aur ye maahi ko kya huya

Maan : nhi dev

Tum aur meera jaayo

Mein maahi ke pass rahunga

Maan : maahi Papa ke pass aayo

Maahi go more close to daadi...

Daadi : maan aap party mein jaaiye

Maan : daadi mein maahi ko asi halaat mein nhi chod sakta

Daadi : maan hum hai uske sath

Aap jaaiye

He half heartily nodded.

************

Aur kitna waqt lagenga

Driver : madam mujhe pata nhi lag raha hai

Priya (think) : ek baar Armaan ne mujhe sikhaya tha

Let's try priya

Priya : tum hato mein dekhti hu

She checks some wires, & after few minutes try car started... she

is so happy... finally she do it... but bad luck, her car again stop

after 1 km...

Both tried, but get zero...

.

One car passing & stop come near to her... she turned instantly...

He : what happen

Driver : sir humari car kharab ho gyi

Kya aap madam ko aage tak drop kar donge

He : hmm

Driver tells about the address, he said ok ...

Driver : madam aap sahib ke sath chli jaayo

Priya : tum car thik karwayo

Driver : madam yah dur tak koi mechanic nhi milenga

Aur na hi koi taxi

Aur jyada der yaha rukna bhi thik nhi honga

Priya : hmm

Driver : madam wo aapke

Priya : jaldi bolo

Driver : wo aapke chehre pe kuch laga hai

Priya sees in mirror & realize it's a Greece... She rubbed her

cheek for removing, but it's happen opposite, Greece smudged

more on her face... at last she covered her face with dupatta like

gunghat...

He felt little odd, but not say anything... she sit in his car... in mid , she see towards him, he is really looking so handsome , he feel

her gaze , he turn to see her, but not able to see his face due to

veil...

He feel , he knows her , her fragrance reminding him his geet...

he feel sensation in heart ... but how he clear his doubt... he knows his geet died, but her presence increasing his heartbeat...

Both reached to destination ... she left instantly.

***********

Why am feeling I know him... Why I feel so attract towards him ...

Priya tujhe ye bechani kyun ho rhi hai

She placed her hand on her heart...

Aur ye dil itni tej kyun dadak raha hai

.

Her phone buzzed...

Dad mein puch gyi hu

Bs 5 minute mein aayi

She washes her face & left ...

***********

After some time he forget about this incident, and busy in chatting

with dev... after few minutes he again same restlessness & see

all around, his gaze stop on someone, her face covered with mask.. This is mask party... he doesn't know why his heart wants to see her...

Dev : bhai kya huya

Maan : dev mein abhi aaya

*************

Dr. Sushant Singhania :- priya chalo mein tumhe apne

friend se milvata hu

Priya : ji dad

Sushant : congratulation Mr. & Mrs. Gupta

Aapko pachsavi salgirah ki hardik subkamnaye

Mr. gupta : thanks yaar

Apni beti se nhi mil vaayenga

Sushnat : priya hum dono college friend hai

Priya : namestey Uncle

Mr. gupta : namestey bte

Tum hume apne chehra nhi dikayongi

Priya removed the mask...from far Maan following her... &

shocked to see her...

Only one name comes on his lips "Geet"

precap :-

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago

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