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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser - oh...what happened to geet...have that two bros kidnapped geet..
hope geet would be fine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_art

on clicking it says page not found.i didnt read ist sequel.

Intezar



Intezaar Rehta Har Shaam Tera

Yaadain Katati Hain Le-Le Kar Naam Tera

Muddat Se Baithe Hain Yeh Aas Paale

Ki Aaj Aayega Koi Paigaam Tere (...from Google)



This story is abt Geet's
intezaar for the love of her life' to get the love which she wants' but the
question does maan have this love to give it to her or will Geet just have
nothing but her intezaar through out her life...



Hi guys this is the unlucky girl season 2'. I'll not be
updating it daily, but will do so on alternative days' this is for all the
people who liked the season 1'and who had encouraged me to do this one too'.
Love you guys and for all those people whose feelings I have hurt with the
previous part, sorry and hope this story will act as a medicine to it' love you
guys too for being so frank abt your feelings'.


For the new reader who are curious of the older season
and want to read it'. click in here to check out the season 1 condition applied is I want you to comment on it'.. and for
pm, ask so in your comments and I'll buddy you'.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

teaser - oh...what happened to geet...have that two bros kidnapped geet..

hope geet would be fine

Thank u for all the lovely comments
Ok now the next part is the last one and I have fin the typing will defo update tomo mrng.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Note:

i'm know i'm late but was horribly busy. i'm a big free this month so will be giving frq updates. so pls read and comment soon so that i can update. this story is almost done. next one will be one night's tale which i'll start from monday hopefully.

now the update.

Warning: bad words used... pls excuse.

Last Part:

Samira was ecstatic. She couldn't believe that her dream was coming true. Not only will she be his wife, her child will get a very powerful and rich father. She smiled and faked a blush as she walked side by side to Maan.

As they reached down stairs Samira's eyes fell on the 4 people who were standing there. She was curious to know what these police men wanted at this time. She saw a lady police walk towards her with hand cuffs.

Maan what the hell is going on here? Sam asked as fear slowly made its way into her system. Damn she had cut the call also. As soon as Rohan had known that Maan had made Geet sign the divorce papers he had cut the call. Now she couldn't contact him.

Sam this is the new place you are going to spend some of your time in. Maan smirked at her.

Wh..wha..t.. stammered Sam. She looked at them with fear.

Just then another man entered the room

Arjun. Maan smiled at him. Thank you for all the help he said hugging his dear friend.

Chall yaar... any way where is bhabhi ji..?? Arjun asked.

Kal milvayenge. Today is bro's wedding night. Teased Dev and they all started laughing.

No no... stop it... Samira started crying as the lady constable pulled her, disturbing the others.

Maan do something... Dev is lying... She cried.

Lying? What did you think Samira that I'll not know what is going on? He spate, disgusted at her.

The minute your mother faxed me the pictures of Dev and Geet I was suspicious. But when she sent me the pregnancy reports I was sure that all this was a plot. How cheap of you and to think I was smitten by you. Maan said with a furious face.

Did you think I'll get divorced from Geet? If you did so you are simply stupid. Maan and Geet will always remain together. Out bond was fated and I by no means will break it whatever be the reason. He yelled at her.

Take her away Arjun. I don't wanna see her at all. He said nodding his head towards his friend.

Dev stood there enjoying the show. He couldn't be more thankful for what happened here today. If only Geet bhabhi was here he thought. That is when it struck him

Bhai where is bhabhi? He asked.

Oh.. I asked Ramu kaka to take her back home. We have our wedding night today. Smirked Maan as he turned to glare at Samira who was whining.

You too can go and get in with Meera, Dev. Maan said with a teasing glint in his eyes. Now you are a free man. He said and then he turned and smirked at Samira.

This was all a game to get rid of you. As soon as I knew that Meera was pregnant with Dev's child, I had asked my lawyer and he had advised me that you would get an upper hand if he planned to divorce you. I dint want a Kurrana born without his father so I needed to get you sign the divorce papers willingly. And you being the selfish w***e fell for it... Maan smirked seeing the furious look on her face.

You cannot do this. You divorced her. No you cannot have her. You are mine. Everything of yours is mine she yelled trying to come closer to him.

Nothing is your Samira. You are a poisonous snake and you deserve to be kept in a cage. You have destroyed so many lives cos of your selfish needs. Dev yelled.

What did you think Samira that I'll trust you over my brother and wife? What did you take me for a stupid man? No. I knew all this was a plot. I just had to play my part to get your signatures. The papers Geet signed was not the real ones at all. The ones you signed was the real one. I'm going to make you pay Samira. You will soon beg for your death but I'll not grant you that one. I'm gonna make you pay for messing with my innocent wife. How dare you. He growled as he remembered the reports he had got from Arjun regarding everything.

You worthless f**king w***e you thought you could get people to touch my Geet. I'm gonna destroy you and those brothers too. Maan said taking a menacing step towards Sam. He thought of killing this woman with his own hands.

Maan calm down. Arjun said. Remember she is pregnant. Moreover she is not worth it. Calm down and go to Bhabhi. He said with a smile.

Yes Bhai I'll also come. Arjun you too come no. Invited Dev

Maan made sure Samira was inside the police car before getting into his. On the way Maan narrated the whole thing to Dev. He told him how he had gotten suspicious and called Arjun for help. After finding out what has happened to Geet he had taken this decision

How can you not inform me Dev? Maan asked getting upset.

She is my wife and I need to know if something is up with her.

Bhai I was planning to tell you everything after you came home. But when you said you were planning to marry her I just thought all was well. Sorry Bhai. Dev said remorsefully.

Ok chall.. alls well that ends well man. Arjun said smacking Dev on his back. Just then Maan applied the brakes.

What the hell Arjun swore... they got down from the car.

Maan ran towards another car that he had seen near the tree. He opened the door to see Ramu kaka unconscious in the driver's seat. Geet.. He whispered as he frantically looked everywhere.

Dev and Arjun also came there and were shocked to see this. Arjun made calls to get his people working on this case while Dev tried to handle Maan.

An ambulance came and took Ramu Kaka. Maan was not in a position to do anything. Worry and fear ate into him. His wife... his Geet something has happened to her.

Rawte we have their location a man came forward and informed Arjun. Maan snapped his head towards them.

Ok challo. Saying they entered the car

I'm also coming Maan said.

No Mr. Kurrana we are.. but he was stopped by Arjun.

Let him come Rathore. Arjun said as they got into the car.

Dev you go home and take care of Dadi and Meera. I'll inform you after we get Geet. Maan said as he got into the car.

I just hope we are in time. It had been an hour. Murmured Rathore.

How do you know?

The bonnet is warm. Not cold or hot. He replied in a matter of fact tone.

You know the old warehouse? They are there only. Sid told Arjun after tracing Rohan's phone.

The cars stopped near an old warehouse. The men took their positions and Maan was to stay with Arjun.

Lets go... was said and all the men entered the place.

...

One hour before

Geet felt hollow. She felt lifeless as she sat in the car. Why was she so unlucky? she wondered. She had a family but never got their love. Be it her own darji or her husband. Why was her Babaji so cruel to her? Before she could think more, the car was stopped with a jerk. Her side of the door was opened and she was pulled harshly.

Maan a cry came out of her mouth on seeing the man before her. He was the same guy who had tried to violate her.

Chall Roshan we need to get out of here. I have taken care of the driver said another man but Geet was too scared to look at him.

Chodo... She cried as she tried to kick and push. The man carried her off into another car and they sped off to some unknown place

On the way the man pushed a foul smelling cloth into her mouth and tied her hands. The car stopped and Geet was pulled into a worn out warehouse.

She was pushed forward and Geet spun around and fell, tripping on the numerous liquor bottles down there.

She is a beauty isn't she?? The b*****d who had manhandled her spoke.

Yes bro... beauty. The other man said as he licked his lips...

Lets get f**king brother... he smirked evilly.. I cannot wait.. I have waited for a whole week... moaned Roshan as he started buttoning down his shirt.

Geet looked wide eyed at the man. She couldn't believe she was back again with this monster. What had she done to deserve this? she wondered. She tried wriggling and moving back..

Get rid of the cloth and rope Rohan. I want to hear her cry.. such a melodic voice she has... he laughed at the fear that he could see in her eyes.

Rohan pulled the cloth out of her mouth and opened hands.. as soon as he did that Geet shot up and tried to run off only to be pulled back by Rohan

Oh.. baby you are mine.. Roshan sang as he came forward as Geet wriggled to get away from Rohan

His hungry eyes moved over her body taking in every curve making Geet shiver in disgust.

Chodo please.. she cried... I don't want this.. she begged them.

But I want this.. I want you beautiful Roshan said as he placed his hand on her shoulder and ripped off her saree pallu. Geet cried.

No one is gonna come for you kitten.. he purred into her ears.. its only gonna be you and us two brothers... Rohan's hand moved towards her exposed stomach as he held her from behind.

Roshan held her hand as he looked at her...taking this opportunity Geet bit down on his hand making him cry out in pain. he slapped her and she fell on the ground.

B***h he yelled as he nursed his hand.

I'm gonna take you raw. B***h.. he glared as he removed his pants.. Geet tried to move behind. Her hands fell on the glass bottles. She took it and broke it..

Don't come any further. I'll.. I'll kill you.. she cried... she dint know if she could do it.. But if she had to she'll do anything.

Really.. You kitten will kill us... Rohan laughed...

No you won't... now throw that thing out and meow for us kitten Roshan laughed at her and he removed his pants fully...

Geet looked at these men she knew she couldn't do anything. But then she can.. yes.. she will she thought. There was no need for her to live any more. She had no one,. No place to go.. so why not. She turned the sharp part towards her and stabbed it into her stomach and cried out...

Both the men stopped. What the hell man.. Rohan cursed out...

You know kitten.. Roshan said it takes 20 minutes to die like this. and we both would be done by that time... he smirked looking at her...

Come on bro we both need to get working.. he said as he moved towards her..

Geet was horrified by this. She pulled out the broken bottle and stabbed herself another time just then they all heard Roshan's phone ring.

After cutting the call he told his brother, we need to move. Samira has been arrested. Maan knows everything. He'll be coming here very soon. Let's get out he said as he put on his pant and clothes.

I want her.. Rohan stressed.

Bro there will be more like her. For now we need to get out. Roshan said as they dressed quickly. He pulled his brother and they ran towards another exit leaving a very bloody Geet on the floor.

...

Next will be the epilogue.

Hope you liked this.

Will update on Saturday. Almost done with it.

Check out my other Maaneet stories. I'll be starting One night's tale soon. Others will be on hold temporary.

One night's tale

My life's mistakes

O Sanam bekhabar

And then he came...

Forgive mistakes

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Edited by ar_art - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply fabulous
loved it
that was a heartbreakingly painful update😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good n sad update.

Maan ne toh Sam ki band baza di.
Sam toh puri shocked by turn of events. Maan unrevealed all his plans n facts.

OMG Geet is kidnapped n is about to get raped.
She is going to kill herself. Kyu aisa kar rahi hai. Now wen everything is going to be perfect, her patience broke down.

Pls usse bacha Lena. I want to see Geet happy n contend.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved it
that was a heartbreakingly painful update😭

thank you yaar😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

Good n sad update.

Maan ne toh Sam ki band baza di.
Sam toh puri shocked by turn of events. Maan unrevealed all his plans n facts.

OMG Geet is kidnapped n is about to get raped.
She is going to kill herself. Kyu aisa kar rahi hai. Now wen everything is going to be perfect, her patience broke down.

Pls usse bacha Lena. I want to see Geet happy n contend.

the next one is the epilogue yaar...
hope you like what i have done with it...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!! that was really painful...So I think geet will die & maan will be left alone...that's the end...😭

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