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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishiba

if u r on twitter or Facebook just send ur story to creatives so that they should know what is called creativity

ur an awesome writer and have a very creative mind 👏


yep.. i am on twitter but i do not want them to give any ideas else they will use it on new actors.😡

I am glad u r liking it.. Thanks for the encouragement. Ur comment meant a lot. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Finally I'm commenting!

Luvd the chapters... suspense, suspense everywhere... slowly unraveling the story...
Plz updt soon

PS - I'll be commenting very few tyms... facing some probs wid my mobile 😒


Thank u dear.. u r the queen of mysteries.. I love ur Ffs... So ur compliment really made me happy.😊
Will try to update soon.

No issues about comment... U r reading it and that's enough for me. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u dear.. u r the queen of mysteries.. I love ur Ffs... So ur compliment really made me happy.😊
Will try to update soon.

No issues about comment... U r reading it and that's enough for me. 😊

queen of mysteries! m flattered 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys... Finally I am updating the next part... Sorry for this delay but many of u know that my arm was hurting hence I was not able to update than Rakhi and other things kept me preoccupied but I will try to update next part soon.. Hope u guys will like it. Sorry for all the mistakes

Those who wonders what is secret room than let me remind u that it's Raghav's special room where he pasted Kalpi's pic. I have explained it somewhere in previous parts.

Pakhi is wearing a red saree with golden blouse and matching bangles... giving her a look of a typical indian wife who worships her god.. Kamla is helping her in the arrangements of Puja.. Pakhi has convinced her to come for her sake... Despite hating Rags she agreed for her daughter. Though Pakhi is following Panditji's instructions but her eyes are fixed on the closed door of secret room.. Kamla notices the stress on Pakhi's face and follows her gaze to the room... She asks Pakhi about the reason for her worry.. Pakhi tries to avoid her but Kamla forces her to tell as a mother has every right to know about her daughter.. Pakhi tells her how Rags has devoted that room to Kalpi and their love and what all she saw that day.. "I am just married by name but Rags still belongs to Kalpi... I am scared for Khushi's future.. What is Raghav leaves us and marries Kalpi, They are still in touch and working together. " She said while hugging Kamla. Tears are flowing from her eyes... Kamla wipes her tears and assures her that this won't happen.. She won't let Kalpi come close to Rags. Pakhi feels relieved on hearing this from Kamla.. She smiles and tells, "I know u always say that we should think positive and I will stay positive.. No other girl can break my home." Kamla nods with a smile but her mind is disgusted on realizing that Kalpi is still in contact with Rags.

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Rags is lying on the bed in his secret room holding Kalpi's pic near to his heart.. remembering all the moments he spent with Kalpi... He sees Kalpi coming close to her and takes the pic from his hand.. She keeps it on the table and sits beside him keeping her head on his heart... Rags can't believe his eyes.. He traces his hands on her cheeks.. Kalpi looks up into his eyes and brings her face closer to him.. "U r still as beautiful as 5 years ago.. Same eyes, same lips but where is that innocent smile which changed the arrogant person like me.. U r so near to me than why do I feel that u r away from me...I need u Kalpi.. I do not know how I am going to face all the troubles.. u will always stay with me na??".He says while cupping her face.. Kalpi holds his hand n keeps on his chest to make him feel his heartbeat.. "I am as close to u as this heartbeats are... Just close ur eyes and hear it... u will feel me around u... ". Raghav nods in yes and stretches his arm to hug her but she disappears.. He closes his eyes and feels his heartbeat.. He feels as if each heart beat is giving him strength to fight against all odds...

Just than his cellphone rings.. Sammy apologizes for not coming to the puja as he has to go somewhere urgently.. Raghav tells him that it's fine as this Puja won't gonna change their fate.. Sammy informs him that they have got a buyer for the Singhania mansion and now they don't need to auction it as he is ready to give the money required to repay the loan. Raghav thanks him but Sammy tells him not to do formality.. They hang the call.. Rags wonders how can someone give such a big amount but than thinks to accept the offer as he needs money right now.. he once again looks at the wall and apologizes to Kalpi saying he has to empty this room as well but his heart will always belong to her.

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Kamla and Pakhi are waiting for Rags to come for the puja.. Khushi is playing around them wearing a baby pink suit and looking pretty in the traditional dress.. She has fought with her mom for this dress as her mom wanted her to wear a classy frock but she wants to wear a suit. She sees Rags coming and stops dancing and runs towards her mother.. In fear she bumps into curtain and was about to fall but Raghav holds her in time and asks her whether she is fine.. khushi is out of words.. Her father has never talked to her properly.. She stutters, "I am fine dad". Rags hugs her astonishing Pakhi. She gets up from her place but Kamla holds her hand and tells her to give Rags some time with Khushi.

Rags : I am sorry Beta.. I am really sorry.. will u forgive ur father??

Khushi(confused and scared) : But why??

Rags : No need to get afraid.. I am ur father.. I won't scold u..

Khushi(gathers some courage) : Promise?

Rags : Promise. Now tell me will u forgive ur dad if u have to leave this house and live as poor.. U may not get costly toys to play and not even car to travel.. The house can be smaller..

While saying so a tear rolled down on his face.. khushi wipes it gently with her soft hands.. Rags feels her soft touch and looks at her face.. This is first time he is looking at her daughter.. her innocent eyes, beautiful smile and shining skin makes her look like an angel.. He is lost in his daughter's innocent..

Khushi : I will forgive u dad.. But on one condition..

Rags : What?

Khushi : Will u play with me? And come to my school for parents day.. u know my friend Anaya... She always teases me that my dad doesn't come in any function.. She tells us the stories of their family trips and makes my fun that I don't go anywhere with my family n my dad doesn't love me.. Will u come with me to show her that u love me...

Rags hugs her tightly and feels guilty on avoiding his daughter like this..

Rags(in his mind) : How selfish I was.. My little daughter was craving for her dad's love and I dnt bother to talk to her.. Whatever happened is not her mistake than why I punished her.. Today also I came to her just coz of my helplessness.. It wasn't my care for her that I asked forgiveness from her for leaving this house but it was my guilt that I failed in fulfilling my responsibility.. I was scared for her future but Khushi doesn't care about her future.. She just wants her dad in present.. N now I promise I will give her all the love that she deserved.. I won't let my hate for Pakhi come between our relation..

Pakhi who was overwhelmed on seeing all this runs towards them and hugs the duo.. It's like a family hug.. Rags tries to remove her hand from his shoulder but than see Khushi who is enjoying it and thinks to let it go.. They were about to get up when Khushi notices Kalpi on the door.. She screams "Kalpi massi.." and runs towards her leaving her parents there.. Kalpi was livid on seeing the trio hug.. She has not listen the entire conversation but seen only the moment where Pakhi came and hugged them. She controls her anger on seeing Khushi coming towards her and greets her happily..

Kamla who was witnessing all this looks at Kalpi who is wearing a yellow saree and diamond earrings with diamond danklet in her hand.. She runs towards the door saying, "Why u came so late..". Kalpi feels happy on seeing that her mother was waiting for her.. Unknowingly a smile appears on her face and takes a step towards Kamla but Kamla passes her and goes to Vitthal who was standing just behind Kalpi.. Kalpi feels hurt on seeing this..

Kalpi(in her mind) : What Kalpi.. what were u expecting.. U wanted to hug ur ayi.. The ayi who never cared about u.. What u thought that she will be waiting for u after mistrusting u.. Kalpi open ur eyes.. N remember ur motto.. Do not fall weak.

Kalpi controls her emotion and greets Pakhi.. Pakhi tells her that Kamla maa convinced Vitthal uncle to come to her place else he was not ready to come here. Kalpi gives a plastic smile and takes her place...

Pandit starts puja and tells Ra..Khi to sit in it.. They star doing puja.. Pakhi tells Khushi to join them but she denies and sits in Kalpi's lap.. She tells Kalpi to close her eyes... Kalpi complies.. She takes K's hand in her hand and ties a band around it.. kalpi opens her eyes and gets surprised on seeing friendship band on her wrist.. She thanks Khushi by kissing her on cheek.. Khushi too reverts by kissing her both cheeks.. Kalpi smiles genuinely oblivious to the fact that two pair of eyes are staring them all the time... The first pair is of her ex-love who can't take off his eyes from the love of his life and the other pair is of the father who has declared that her daughter is dead but can't stop his heart from having a look at his daughter and her well being.

Kalpi's cell beeps.. She checks the msg of Prem..

"The account number u gave me was of some shikha singh.. Going to find out it's bank details so won't be able to come in puja. Stay alert."

Kalpi sighs on reading his msg and hopes to find something important about her. She replies back "Ok take care.."

Just than Rags mobile beeps...Kalpi looks at him and they share an eyelock. Rags looking at Kalpi lovingly while Kalpi wonders whose message it will be. Kamla notices them and misunderstands that they are talking with each other through messages.. She give an angry glare to Kalpi and unlike her expectation Kalpi too stares at her with same anger in her eyes...

Rags reads Sammy's msg.. "Meet me in an hour, it's urgent.". She has text him address as well.

Rags tells pandit to finish the puja soon as he has to go somewhere.. Kalpi wonders where and she gives an excuse to come out.. She calls Amar and tells him to come at Sighania mansion and follow Rags.. He is going out in a while. Amar complies.

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After puja, Rags excuses himself and leaves the home in his car to meet Sammy.. Amar follows him. He reaches at a park where Sammy is waiting for him.. He asks Sammy what's so urgent.. Sammy tells him that Kalpi was aware of ur dream project and she bribed Mehta to not give u land for society.. Rags refuses to believe him but Sammy tells him that Mehta's employee told him this. Rags wants to meet that employee.. Sammy calls him and tells him to come at park, he agrees but demands more money... Sammy tells him that he will give him double but just come here.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeyyy yippeee I'm frsttt... hehhhehuaaa...😆🥳
aftr sooo many gotta read ur update.😉. bt I can undrstnd ur situation I hope u r well nw😊.. n thnx fr updating even in dat situatn...
update was intrestng n beautifull dear n nw raghav ll be getting know abt kalpi.. bt wen r u gonna reveal ur mysteries.. im waitng eagerlyyy fr dat..
Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update... Khushi is super adorable...
Omg hopefully he doesn't get to know about kalpi's plans...😲
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u jiya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u dear.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yaar..im sure kalpi was hurt whne she saw the so called family hug...yukkk
poor my angel..

vish dear...i dun comment much...but i luv it...keep pm me ok...thk u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
vishu 🤗 i hope ur arm is ok nw dear?
Awsm update. Lv to see father daughter duo. Finaly rags realise his mistake abt his weired behaviour wid khushi, widout her mistake.
I felt sad when kamla igore her dat too realising her cndition aftr watching rakhi hug.
Lv khushi kalpi bonding.
Nw shikha agrawal! Again mystery. 😲
finaly sammy found abt kalpi's deed.
Hate kamla 😡
lvly update dear.

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