AsYa (KaBhi) FF: Nikkah - Ek Vaada, Ch-4 Updated (16/11).. - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

372

Views

46.3k

Users

64

Likes

739

Frequent Posters

Ish_Speaks thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: asyaloveu

Great plot... tanveer?????? 🤢 I hate her so much. ... hmmm asya married. ... excited for their nok jhoks... thanks for p.m. ...waiting for next update. ...



Thank u so much ..

Glad u liked it ...

Will Try to Update soon ..

I too hate her a lot ..

Everything will be fine .

Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
Ish_Speaks thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#62


Thank u ! 😳
Ish_Speaks thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Hello Everyone : )

This is my First try on Asya ..

Posting the 1st Chapter in 2 parts..So, The 1st part of Chapter 1 is here ..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

" Asad How can you do this to me ?? " asked Tanveer shocked to accept the reality .

" Try to understand Tanu , mera paas koi aur option nahi tha "..he tried to pacify his Girl Friend ..

" Nahi asad tum aisa nahi kar sakthe ho" she shouted ..

" Tanu ! Ab jo hua hai use koi badal nahi sakthe we have to deal with it " He said dejected .

" Deal with it ?? Asad tum kya kehne chahthe ho ? Are u saying that you are going to move on in your life with this girl ? Tum mujhe chod doge ? Muhe dokha doge ? Don't u love me ?Answer me Asad ! mein tumse kuch puch rahi hoon ! "she shouted , cried ..

" Aisa nahi hai Tanu , mein tumse hi p pyaar karta hun par ab mera Nikaah ho chuka hai ,.. Ab mein ". He stammered ..

" Ab tum kya asad ? Kya ? ' She asked again ..

" Tanu samajhne ki koshish karo ab mein ek Married man hun.. Ab mein kuch bhi nahi kar saktha hun ..Its all over .. Tumhari aur mera Pyaar sab kuch sab kuch has ended ... Ab hum kuch nahi kar sakthe.." He shouted back ..Not being able to control is Anger..

" We can change it asad .. Sab kuch pehle jaise hojayegi agar tum iss Ladki ko iss ghar se aur tumhare Life se nikhaloge toh .." She said pointing towards another person who was silently crying and was watching all this ..


" Isse ghar se nikhalo abhi ki abhi " .. She said taking the girl by the hand and jerks her around.. " Jao yahan se "..she shouted..

" Vo kahi nahi jaa sakthi hai Tanu.vo issi ghar mein rahegi ," Asad said stopping her from throwing the girl out of the house ...

" Asad?? Kyun nahi jaa sakthi hai yeh ? Bolo Asad kyun nahi jaa sakthi ?? "she questioned ..

" Tumhe kon chahiye Asad mein ya tumhari newly wedded wife , Abhi batao ! "she shouted ..

" Kya naam hai tumhari ? Haan Zoya Farooqui ! Zoya Farooqui ho na tum ?? " she asked .." Kya jadu chadaya tumne Meri Asad par ?? Kya kiya tumne ? Jawab do mujhe .." ..

" Bas ! " .He shouted .

" Vo kahi nahi jaaegi ! Vo yahi rahegi ! " He said ..

" Ek Minute " .. said the silent victim of this Drama ..

_______________________________________________

Ends here ..
I know everyone hates Tanveer.,I do too..Just bear for hew more updates.

Say me your Opinion :) Criticism Welcomed 😊..Do Hit Like and Comment 😳..

I know its a very Shorter one !😆 Scroll Down for Continuation ..
Edited by Aishwa09 - 10 years ago
Ish_Speaks thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Sorry thoda bahut hi Late kardiya !

So, part-2 of chapter -1 .here it goes ...

~~~~~~~~

" Meri vajah se aap dono ko Ladne ki jarrorat nahi hai " Mein bahut jaldi hi yahan se chali jaungi , Bas kuch din ke liye mein iss ghar mein rahungi " she stated making those two peoples to stare at her ..

" Mein bas yahan " .. she continued to be stopped by Tanveer..

" Tumhe yeh drama karni ki koi zarorat nahi hai" - she said with venomous eyes ..

" Ek toh tumne pehle hi Asad ko mujhse cheen liya ab aur kya karne ki irrada hai tumhe ?" - she asked faking tears ..

" Nahi aap meri baath ko samajne ki koshish kijiye mein" ..she tried to Explain ..

" Bas ! Aap ko kuch bolne ki zarorat nahi hai ! Ms.Farooqui .." he said her to be quiet ..

" Nahi., Mr.Khan mein .. "she tried once again ..

" Mein aap ko iss ghar se jane ke liye mana kar rahi hun iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki mein aap ko pasand karti hun Did u got it ?" Asad shouted at her for talking ..

He was already Pissed of with this marriage and his girl friend's shout was raising his head ache ..

" Asad ! Tum isse Divorce karo "she said all of no where ..shocking one and making another one to think ..

" Nahi ! Aap aise nahi kar sakthe "..Zoya said worried ...

" Kyun nahi ? Asad ! Tum mujhse pyaar karte ho na ? Agar tum isse Divorce kar doge . Toh problem solve ..We can get married . " Tanveer said Happily ..

Asad gave a thought to it and looked at Zoya who was now trembling like a leaf fearing about the Consequences ,..

" Tanu mein" ..he stammered

" Mujhe Haan ke alawa kuch nahi sunn na " ..she said folding her arms before ..

" Mein sochunga is ke baare mein" ..he stated ..But the Billi was in no mood to listen

" Asad ! Iss mein sochne ke liye bhi kya hai ? Just say Yes Asad ! " she cried ..

" Vo..mein kal bataunga " he said and moved to his room ..

Tanveer huffed in annoyance and moved to Zoya , who was dazed by the Happenings ..

" Hello ! Kahan koi hui ho ?? Dusri plan bana rahi ho ? Asad ko phasane ?" she asked smirking evilly..

"Chahe tum jitne bhi koshish karo Asad sirf aur sirf mera hai ..Samjhi ?" she asked..

And Zoya just stared at her !


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~''

Night ..

Zoya was still shocked and confused to do anything ! She was just sitting on the floor trying to think of some way ...

When his Door clicked open and he came out drink water ..


He looked at her sitting there crying and payed no heed .. He just went from there ..His life has turned upside down .. Just because of Her ..And he hated her for this ..


Later after some time he went out to check whether she was there still .And he saw her there sitting in the same place with Dried tears ..

" Ms.Farooqui " he called out to her ..

But she didn't listen it ..

He moved near to her and called her again .. But got no response ..

" Ms.Zoya Farooqui " he called out a bit louder ..

and she turned to see him standing behind her ... She just looked on .

" Aap , vo Guest room udhar hai .. aap vahan hi rahenge aaj se ". He said unable to talk to her ..

She nodded ..

" Aap Jayiye" he said and started moving to his room ..


" Mr.Khan" ..She called ..

" Jee ? " He asked uncertainly ...

" Vo aap pls Ab Divorce ke baare mein mat sochiye. Mein aap se yeh nahi keh rahi hun ki aap ko yeh nikaah ko nibhana padega .Mein sirf itna keh raha ki , yeh sab kuch dino ke liye hi hai .. Pls Mr.Khan . Bas kuch hi Din .Phir mein aapke ghar se aur Life se chali jaungi .."

" Pls Mr.Khan "She requested to him crying ..

He was confused ..What did she had to do with this Marriage ? that too for few days ..

He looked into her eyes something pricked him .. He just looked away ..Simply nodded and went ..

Zoya ,moved to the Guest room and kept her Bag aside and slumped down on the bed Crying ..

Later , she opened her bag and took a photo frame ..and hugged it close to her self and cried and started talking to the photo..

" Ammi, aap ne meri halat dekha ! Ammi ab mein kya karron ? Agar Mr.Khan ne mujhe Divorce kardiya toh ? " she asked uncertainly and cried .

" Nahi vo aise nahi kar sakthe mein aise hone nahi dungi ! " she decided and wiped her tears and tried to sleep ..

Sleep was far away for these two ..Until their soul meets ...Both where thinking about the change of Events in their Life ..

~~~~~~~~~~~~

Precap -

Where is the cook ? He asked irritated ..


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So, What will be Asad's Decision now ? Stay Tuned to know ..

Do Hit Like and Comment 😳..

Criticism welcomed 😛...


Edited by Aishwa09 - 10 years ago
KabhiInMyHeart thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Buddy Note -

Buddies in this Account will only receive Pm's ..


So, If you need Pm -


Thank u ..


Edited by KabhiInMyHeart - 11 years ago
pwenCezz_symrun thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Rice Mice!!😆
Unrice!
Very interesting kick start it is SOTY! I just loved reading it!!
it's completely different from what i have read till now!!
So Asad is in love with that Billi!! shocking!!😆 Billi itni khuskismat kaise hogayi?
But he is married with Zoya!! what could be the reason behind this?🤔
nd how the hell can that billi be so rude with Zoe? Such a disgusting woman she is!!😵
nd even Asad is not by Zoe's side!!! hope that everything will get fine between them!!
I am already anxious to read all the parts now!!
Exetremely brilliant chapter it is!!👏👏 it's penned very well!! your way of writting is also very impressive yaar!!👍🏼
do update quick as i can't wait to read further more!!


Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 10 years ago
nilusoni thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#67
very interesting and amazing start
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
-ABI- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#68
unress

first thank-u for accepting request&for PM

Well nice begining&intresting plot
Hopeing for a Amazing journey with this SS.

TRY TO UPDATE SOON
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago
--Sana-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Bloody tanveer why she shout like mad idiot
I love asad answer for tanveer question I m married now I cant leave her loved it
Update part b very soon waiting
keyahira thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#70
OMG GURRRLLL
I LOVED.IT
YAAAS
CONTINUE SOON
FOR KABHI YAAR

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".