KR SS: Boomerang updated Part6 on pg30(12/04)

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

ausome update...

Kriyas craziness...OMG...

Auditorium scene was ausome..

Kriya wistled...OMG...literary wistling...in frount of the entire auditorium...

Kriyas craziness is increasing day by day...wow...

Rey attitude was cool...

ausome loved it...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...

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chitrazzz

@chitrazzz

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Hey nice update

It was awesome

Other side of kriya was suuupppeeerrr

Love the update

Plz update soon

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

amazing chapter

loved it

thanks for the pm

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

IMPORTANT NOTE:
Hello people. Here is the 2nd Part. This ss contains so much of past incidents or flashbacks so here on wards All ITALIC FONT PART WILL BE FLASHBACKS. I will not write "flashback" everytime.

Recap:
6 months have passed since kriya joined college today. Her mom visited her today. But what's the matter, that kriya is sitting late night in basketball court's bench and drenching in heavy rain ? As if she is a statue. All the girls from hostel, are looking at her feeling bad seeing her in that condition. Neha and vish tried to drag her inside the hostel but she requested something so they went back silently feeling bad for their friend. Even boys from boys hostel can see someone sitting in rain in the bb court. They have guessed it as well because it was kriya's usual time to dance alone or play bb in the ground. But they couldn't understand why she is getting drenched in rain. All boys and girls observed her for long minutes then went inside to their rooms as they know she won't listen to anyone now.

Part 2:

Rey entered his friends room where his gang swayam Vicky Bharat were chatting.

Rey : in cold tone "I can't believe she is taking all her craziness to this extent. Huh (looking at his friends who by now understood about whom rey is talking) tomorrow if something happens to her, the whole college will blame me. I mean ME (pointing at himself). How will I explain that I am not at all the reason for her condition? Poora ka poora college muje blame karega dude(looking at his friends who were taking all rey's words casually because they by now knew what rey wants. After all they are rey's closest friends. Rey can fool the whole college but not them and Sharon, rey's childhood friend) what? Aap log kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hai?"

Vicky : chill rey. Yeh tho uska roj ka drama hai. Why are you taking it so seriously?

Swayam : and tuje kabse log kya sochenge isse farak padne laga? Just ignore like how you been doing since all these months

Finally rey's friends got the chance to have some fun with rey's hidden emotions for kriya. They were waiting for this chance for so long.

Rey : what? Roj ka drama? Vicky how insensitive you are. I mean I can handle her craziness like these days but today she is drenching in rain. I mean it's raining heavily dude. Definitely bimaar padegi wo kal. Wo bhi bahot buri tarah se. (Walking in room here and there furiously) I mean. Aaj tho uss ne.. crossed all her limits yar. Kya jaroorat hai usse ye sab karne ki? And swayam, I don't care about what people will think. okay? But insaaniyat naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai na yaar(sits beside swayam trying to convince swayam) usse kuch hua tho?

Swayam : so you are worried about kriya?( all had a teasing smile on their faces. It was fun for them to see rey's this side for kriya openly for the first time)

Rey defending himself, gets up and says "no way dude. She is nobody to me. Okay? (It sounded more like he was warning himself than telling to swayam) it's just that, whatever she does people will think I am the reason behind it. That's why I am concerned that's it."

Bharat : abhe chodna. Kya khalI pheeli tension le raha hai. Tune todi na usse bola hai ki jaake bait barish mein. Kal agar usse kuch hua tho ye uske pagalpan kI nateeja hoga. Chill maar..

Rey : yeah right (sadly) but ye bhi tho soch Bharat whatever she does is, for me. Always. I can't take it if someone will get hurt in anyway because of me. It will make me feel guilty.

Swayam : so ...what are you planning to do now? You know.. to stop her whatever drama she is doing right now.

Rey deeply thinking mutters " no. It can't be drama today, as much as I know kriya. (All 3 of his friends look at each other grinning. Rey was saying all those things to himself.) Kuch tho gadbad hai. I need to find out"

Turning to his friends (as soon as rey turns, they make a serious face hiding their smile) " I dont have any option guys"

Vicky jumps off from the bed "what do you mean?"

"I will go and talk to her. Otherwise pata nahi kab tak wo aise hi barish mein baiti rahegi"

Swayam : don't you think you don't owe her anything? I mean it's none of your business. Wo khud jaakar baiti hai barish mein.

Rey : huh come on swayam. At least you, out of all, don't say like that. We all know her by now. She is crazy but not insensitive or mad. There is something behind all this scene is creating right now. I have to stop her. It's a high time.

Vicky : if that is the case. I mean if there is some other reason which made her so upset, then why do you want to interfere in that? It's her problem, her life. Let it be rey. Tuje jaane ki koi jaroorat nahi. (In mind " kriya ki universe ji maaf karna.")

Rey : but people don't understand this guys. They will think because of her craziness towards me made her upset and she fell sick.

Swayam : agree but. Rey.. huh. Chod.( he left the argument in between so that rey can go as it was still raining outside) tu jaa.
Rey : haan? (He suddenly becomes nervous because till today rey has not spoken to kriya single time.)

Swayam : chal ja na. What are you waiting for?

Rey : huh..haan. yah (giving a nervous smile to them rey runs out taking an umbrella)

Bharat : ye natak kar raha hai hammare samne yah phir usse khud ehsas nahi ab tak wo kya feel karta hai kriya ke liye?(looking at running rey)

Vicky : he is not pretending I think.

Swayam : hmm he himself is unaware of his feelings for kriya.

Vicky : poor kriya. Jaroor rey will scold her now. His all concerns for her, I don't think he will openly show it to her.

Swayam : idiot hai wo. He will definitely advice her something stupid and scold her.

Bharat : chalo live scene dekhte hai. Ab tak tho poora college corridor mein kada hua hoga ye historical scene dekhne ke liye.

Vicky : "Jab ReyKriya met" (jab we met) wah kya title hai.(and laughs)

Done.
Guys it's just a filler for next update. Next update will be the lengthy one I promise.

Edited by smileysmi - 11 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

smita diii 🤗...
how are u...missed ur updates a lot...hope u r enjoying u r stay with ur family...
update was short bt its okay...
y is she sitting there drenching in rain??
rey...giving so much importance to himself...m sure she is nt sitting coz of him...she is nt that desperate...no..???
loved boys talks...
finally...rey do feels for her...
chalo ye start to hua...
loved it totally...update soon

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

it better be.
jk
it was such a teasing update.
loved the story.
can't wait for the next update.
update soon

Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

this update was awsmm

loved ittt

hayee awww rey kria ke liye concern haiii

i love theie convo i mean boys kiii

ab rey kria ke pass jaaying baat karne

hope rey usse nhn daate

update next parttt

and di plss do update ur other wrks tooo

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@ramaira_arsha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Thank u shooo much for pm i luved this concept it is really amazing awweee i luved apni angel ki cute si craziness but ya now everything will change waiting for the update
Update soon nd do pme plzzz 😊

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Awww this was so Beautifulll update 😳 😳 Beautifully writen Kria barish me bheeg rahi thi or rey andar jal raha tha hehehehe Awesome All boys r started teasing him haha great loved do continue soon :)) thanx for the pm