MG FF - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#2 added - Page 43

Awesome update
Geet now can talk
She's confused seein her children :|
Maan recalling past
But what geet did?
He's saying she did sin!!!

Both Abhi and Mehar are deprived from parents love and care.

lovely update geet meeting her kids y maan is upset hope now all goes well

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Nice update
So maans back
N geet fainted
Wondering what happened in past
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

Teaser

When was the last time the reed this particular ff a big Question Mark come in front of me...

awesome parts dear
i read all parts at a time.
mehar n abhi cute kids ..
waiting for update

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

When was the last time the reed this particular ff a big Question Mark come in front of me...

PART 9

Maan lay on bed & lost on his birthday day five years back...

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He remembered geet call, she nervous, tensed & excited too while talking with him...

Maan : kya baat hai shona

Geet : maan mujhe aapko kuch batana hai

Actually kuch nhi

Bhut kuch

Maan : bolo

Mein sun raha hu

Geet : ase nhi

Maan : fir kaise

Geet : maan mein aapka ghar pe intzaar kr rhi hu

Please aap jaldi aana

Maan : shone

Bs ek meeting hai

Uske baad sidha tumahre pass

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet tum thik ho na

Geet : hmm

Maan : asa kya batana hai tumhe

Jo itni tensed ho

Geet : maan mujhse koi galati ho jaaye

Toh aap maaf kar donge na

Maan : wo toh galati pe depend krta hai

Geet : maan bola na HA

Maan : ha shone

Mein tumse kaha jyada din naraaz rh sakta hu

fir tum manati bhi toh kitni achi stlye mein ho

geet : maan

She blushed...

Maan : shone bye

Client aa gye hai

Geet : bye

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Maan : galati nhi thi woh geet

Gunah tha

Galati toh anjaane mein hoti hai

Par tumne jaan buzkar sb kuch kiya

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Uske liye mein aaj tak ?????

He stopped in mid... he really not forgives her to till date...

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Gussa tha mein

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Khi na khi aaj bhi hu geet tumse

He don't want think more on this...its only give pain... He closed both eyes and tries to sleep...

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And another side, both children slept peacefully in mother embrace... But sleep so far from geet eyes too...

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Zindagi kitni aage bd gyi

Aur mein har ehsaas se mahroom rhi

She sees towards both children ...

Meri galatiyo ki saza inhe milli hai

Maa ke hote huye

Ye dono bina maa ke rhe hai

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Aur maan kaha hai

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She tries to remember ...

Mr. Maan itne saalo ke baad wapas apne desh aake aapko kaisa lag raha hai

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Maan yaha nhi the

She closed both eyes & tears fall down from her eyes...

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Maan ko toh pata hi nhi

Mehar aur abhi ke baare mein

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Sb kuch khatam kr diya maine apne hi junoon mein

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Unhe na hi mein rok paayi

Aur na hi apne pregnant hone ki news de paayi

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Geet : maan please mujhe maaf kr dijiye

Galati ho gyi mujhse

Maan : ye galati nhi hai geet

He held her by shoulders & said "gunaah kiya hai tumne"

Tumhe ek baar bhi nhi laga

Tum galat kr rhi ho

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Tumhari wajh se meri puri family pe kya bitti hai

Ye tum kbhi nhi smjh sakti

Unhe meri wajh se sharminda hona pada

Jbki meri toh koi galati thi hi nhi

Wo sb plan toh tumne kiya tha

He pushes her...

Geet : maan mein aapse bhut pyaar krti hu

Bs issi wajh se ye sb kr baithi

Please try to understand

Maan : geet abhi bhi mein hi smjhu

Geet : maan

Meri taraf dikhiye

She held her hand, but he take back...

Maan : geet leave me alone

Geet : maan

Mujhse yu mooh mt modiye

Mein aapke bina nhi rh sakti

Maan : ab adaat daal lo geet

Ydi tumne sirf mujhe dard puchaya hota

Toh mein sayad maaf bhi kr deta

Par tumne toh

Meri puri family ko dard diya hai

Sirf apni khushi ke liye

Geet : maan

Mein sbse maafi maang lungi

Jo sja dongo mujhe manjoor hai

Maan : meri nazro se durr ho jaayo geet

Usse phle mein kuch kr du

Geet : maan mujhe khud se durr mt kriye

I love you

I love you a lot

Nhi dekh paa rhi thi

Aapko kissi aur ke sath

Bs ussi sb ye kar diya

Bs apne pyaar ke liye

Humare pyaar ke liye

Maan : pyaar

Ye pyaar nhi so sakta geet

Kyun ki pyaar kbhi itna niche nhi gir sakta

Geet : maan

Phle nhi smjhti thi mein ye sb

Par aapke pyaar ne geet ko badal diya

Dekho na maan

Tbhi toh maine aapko ye sch batane ka faisla liya

Maan aapne kaha tha na us din

Ydi koi apni galati kabool krle

Toh aap usse ek mauka jaroor dete hai

Toh mujhe bhi bs ek mauka de dijiye

Maan : geet leave my house nowww

Geet : maan aap mujhe ase jaane ke liye nhi kh sakte

Mein khi nhi jaayungi

Maan : thik hai

Mein hi chla jaata hu

She tries to stop him, but he left her alone...

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Geet tum kbhi apni galati smjh hi nhi paayi

Smjhti toh mere sath hoti

Yu mujhe akela nhi chodti

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Nhi smjhi thi maan

Laga tha

Aap maaf krdo

Jaise har galati maaf kr dete the

Isse bhi kr donge

Par ye nhi dekh paayi us waqt

Aapko kitna dard puchaya maine

Meri wajh se sbki aankhen jhukhi thi

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Next day, khurana family reaches Delhi...

Maan : aap sb rest kr lijiye

Evening ki flight hai

Tb tak mein office jaa raha hu

Supriya : maan tumhe bhi rest ki jaroorat hai

Maan : maa mein thik hu

Daadi : supriya isse jaane de

Ye kaha humari suntan hai

Maan : daadi maine kb aap sbki nhi suni

Daadi : jo mein kahungi wo karenga

Maan : daadi hum is baare mein baad mein baat krte hai

Abhi ek meeting hai

Mein chalta hu

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Annie : daadi aapka plan kya hai

Daadi : thoda wait kro

Evening mein jb advocate aayenge

Tb khud hi dekh lena

Annie : daadi itna suspense kyun create kr rhe ho

Batao na

Daadi : abhi bta diya

Toh tum sbke dialogue mein originality nhi dikhengi

So wait

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Mehar : abhi hume koi gift toh lena chaiye na mom ke liye

Abhi : hmm

Par kya le

Mehar : kuch soch tu

Abhi : kyun

Tu nhi soch sakti

Malik : yaha kya ho raha hai

Mehar : naanu isse dikhiye na

Kal mother day hai

Aur abki baar mom humare sath hai

Toh maine isse kaha

Tu kuch soch

Abhi : tu nhi soch sakti

Malik : shant

Mein tumahri help kar deta hu

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Smjh gye

Abhi : wow

Naanu you are best

Mom ko acha lagenga na ye sb

Malik : ha

Unhe jaroor pasand aayenga

Mehar : toh chalo humare sath

Hume market jaana hai na

Malik : mein abhi geet ko hospital leke jaa raha hu

Hum evening mein chalte hai

Mehar : naanu abhi

Daaimaa : sahib aap geet ko le jaaiye

Mein chali jaati hu bacho ke sath

Malik : ye thik rahenga

Precap : mehar , abhi meeting with maan

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