A One Man Army ||~Season 2~|| - Page 46

Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Thanks dear for ur scrap😊Finished reading all the chapters in one go😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Its brilliant and the way u r weaving the story it's keeping me hooked😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Ella is really adorable and one strong girl👏Hope she finds her brother Evan soon.. Love their bonding..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Ryan is such a bad guy😆but is always there to protect her😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">The fight sequence was awesome😃Good Ryan thrashed that evil Kyle..</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">The first page has links to 4 chapters only.. It was after checking all the pages I found I missed two chapters😆</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Do update soon😳😳</font>

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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Superb update
Poor Ella was only trying to help Stephanie when she got me so much trouble because of that horny dog
That jerk manhandling Ella was awful and his disgusting words to her creep me out...
I like that Ryan or I should say rocky showed up at the right time before that idiot get his way with Ella
Rocky kicking that bas***d a** was fanstatic. I love every minute of it ;)
Aww Ella is hurt by rocky cold behavior. The split second of emotion that he show to Ella was amazing until he goes right back to his harsh self
Fabulous update, I love the way u write :)

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Finally I read!🥳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Wohooo what an update👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">This is the most gripping update I have ever read!!!⭐️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Action packed... I love actions...and I personally feel its difficult to pen down actions! Kudos to you for doing this! Your actions are almost like a visual treat!!! Great!!!😎</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now coming to the update!!! Woosh! Loved it!!!!! ❤️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I am so much intrigued by Steph! I don't know, i feel there is more to her than shown! Lets see how things gonna unfold!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">El! the supa awesome lady! ❤️ With each passing update loving her more n more!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">How courageous she is! Even before Ryan came to picture, the way she fought with Kyle! Amazing! She knows how dangerous the guy is, yet she mustered courage and fought the maximum she could to free from his dirty grips!👍🏼By the end I will end up giving her award for bravery!!!👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">You have portrayed Kyle perfectly like how a bad dirty goon is !!! Disgusting and scary!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now coming to our hero!! Ryan!!! This time Rocky!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Good heaven! I love Rocky! You have written perfectly the goonish side!!⭐️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">The fight was!!! i was full on enjoying each time that disgusting Kyle got punched! I literally wished to see Kyle's face! But I imagined it pretty well!😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">The action sequence was classy!!!😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now post punching Kyle! The encounter of Rocky and El! 😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">before that I wanna mention something, I loved the deadly calmness in Rocky as he first approached Kyle!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now El-Rocky meeting!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I loved how Rocky said 'am not knight in shining armour'</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I can imagine how pissed off he might be then! Esp seeing El's condition!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">El is like someone who never obeys to his commands and ends up bringing trouble everywhere she goes giving more trouble to Rocky by making her come out of the trouble! Uffo Rocky must be exhausted !! His anger is so so justified !!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Well El too is right in her place, so literally can't blame her !! She seems like a magnet which attracts trouble! Lady!!! 😆But I love this!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now I loved the scene in house!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">the way steph masseaged his head!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">The convo between Steph n El about Ryan!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">the way he questions them!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">All were like cherry on top of cake! So much worth enjoying!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And the final part!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">No matter what happens Rocky will never leave El!!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">loveeed ittt!!! ❤️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">PS: I forgot to mention! I liked the way EL was thinking about the Kiss in the beginning!😳</font>

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

res/unres

Finally😛

Dedication😲

Haila😆

Waise I am in love with Rocky

What aura what moves...too good👏

Finally the encounter came for which I was waiting😛

Kyle ko toh upar hi pahucha diya😆

Well that he had to..KITTY pe jo nazar thi uski😉

He was standing for so long still didn't come forward to help😲

Hindi movies ki tarah heroine ki awaaz kar wait ho raha tha..I see😆

Poor girl help kar rahi thi still phas gayi

Ohhh...Steph is that..shit I forgot his name

That Ryan kar friend who was killed

Uski girlfriend😲

But I like it he is himself around her it seems😳

"He hates me" Ella whispered weakly. "Awww not at all he is just being a jerk which is his spatiality" Stephanie said making both of them laugh.

This part🤣

I completely agree with Steph😆

So Ella's night in shinning armour will help her his own way..so sweet😳

I doubt if she will obey his orders😛

'Rules nibhane mein voh maza kaha jo rule todne mein'😆

Waiting for Ella to disobey his order and Ryan..nah Rocky to punish😉

Update soon😃

Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

Yes dedication woman :P
Phew i m glad u liked goonish side of ryan
I was like nahi pasand aya toh mei ... U r intelligent enough :P
He wanted to give dhassu entry na right when girls call the boy out ;)
Lol yeh i like jerk part too 😆
Hehhehehehhe she definitely will break the rule :P
Thanks a lot :*

wow nice update👏