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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singhania

Oh Dear, cant help it, tears in my eyes😭. The last part, the separation between Raghav & Kalpana💔, I was always 100% RagNa, its difficult to accept but u give it so much sense that it becomes easier to see Roy as the one made for Kalpi❤️. Yes its gud to c that although they are not together as lovers they will remain gud friends in life and can count on each other👍🏼. That's the feeling & the spirit😉. Now I wait for the next part when RoKa get together❤️. Plz update soon. Thanks.👏


Thank u dear.. I am sorry I made u sad by departing RagNa but sometimes destiny plays their part and we have to accept it.. RagNa were childhood friends so they can't forget each other but they are surely not made for each other... Both of them have seen pain in their life and now they need someone who can soothe their pain.😊

Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumm

Wow...m literally crying ...dear great job really...awesome...n hope u write more soon...


Thank u dear.. I will try to write more.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Woww.. fantastic update..

All d words u used to express their emotions was beautiful..
Well done dear..


Thank u 😊 I am glad u liked it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa

vish as usual dear brilliant
and felt ver bad for ragav
but am happy for roka :)))
and sry i did nt commented for previous updates
and read d updates awsum just awsum
vish can u do sumthng plz can u edit ur title and add(rachu) in brackets plz
sry if i troubled


Thank u dear..

N no issues.. no need to say sorry.. I m happy that u r at least reading the updates..

Okk.. I will add Rachana's name in the title but dear it's on Kalpi.. n for me only Rachana is Kalpi and my Kalpi is going to die in that accident.😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u dear..

N no issues.. no need to say sorry.. I m happy that u r at least reading the updates..

Okk.. I will add Rachana's name in the title but dear it's on Kalpi.. n for me only Rachana is Kalpi and my Kalpi is going to die in that accident.😭


thank u darlng and dear soon our angel vl bang wid big project hope
😭miss our angel
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa


thank u darlng and dear soon our angel vl bang wid big project hope
😭miss our angel


Ya Mani.. she will be back with a bang but I want her to return to EMA. She deserves to be a part of it.. EMA is a crap n I would be happy if she had left it but they way she was sacked is not okay for me n that's why I want her to come back to the show.. I wish EMA shuts down soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.. Raghav's pov brought tears... hopefully he moves on.. please bring someone for him too...
Sorry for late comment was bit busy..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Awesome update.. Raghav's pov brought tears... hopefully he moves on.. please bring someone for him too...

Sorry for late comment was bit busy..


Thank u n it's k.. no need to say sorry!!

Yep I have someone special for Raghav.. will introduce her after RoKa reunion.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rrinka

awesome update. loved it.



Thank u dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys.. M back to trouble u.. Well again my neighbor kids distracted me while writing but still I managed to complete it.. So here is 37th update of the story.. Hope u will like it and Sorry for all the mistakes. But that kids are to be blamed.
okkie.. it can be bit lengthy coz of Payal part but I felt RoKa happiness will be incomplete without Payal so added her here as well.. Hope u won't mind that.

Kalpi is sitting in the flight looking at Roy's and her photographs of Panchgani.. Signal for switching off mobile is still going on but today she doesn't want to follow any rule.. She puts the mobile on flight mode and keeps looking at the pics.. She laughs sarcastically..

Kalpi(in her mind) : How unlucky I am.. I always had to struggle to get my love... First I had to fight with Pakhi to get my ayi's love but ultimately lost the battle than Raghav came into my life to show me I am not as unlucky as I am but I lost him too and now roy.. He came in my life to brighten it.. Everything was going so smooth but my past came in front of me and I lost him too but this time I won't give up.. This time I won't let destiny play it's part.. I will write my destiny on my own.. My story will end with Roy.

Raghav who has reached home by now looks at the ring Kalpi gave him.. He takes out all the snaps he has of Kalpi and starts pasting it in one scrapbook..

Raghav(in his mind) : I am making a book of our memories.. U will always remain in my heart as my sweet memory.. I will always cherish it and will start living my life for others..I do not think I will be able to give this ring to anyone as no one can take ur place in my life. I will smile and that smile will be just for u.. From now onwards my life will be only for u..

Roy has returned Delhi but he dint have the strength to go home in this condition.. he goes to the cafe and looks around.. he sees Kalpi cooking for him in the kitchen and smiles.. He rushes to her and hugs her but she disappears.. Tears rolling down his face.. He feels someone wiping his tears.. He looks up and sees Kalpi.. She takes his hand in her and make him sit on the chair.. She feeds him with her hands.. He again smiles but Kalpi disappears again..

Roy(in his mind) : I know I have taken a right decision.. u love Raghav and I am no one to snatch ur happiness from u but I am not able to take u out of my mind.. Wherever I go I see u.. I am trying to run away the feelings I have for u but u come in front of me.. I do not know how I am going to live without u.. Today I am feeling as if I lost myself.. U were a part of me and m feeling incomplete without u.. I know everything.. I know u won't come back.. but my heart is not ready to believe it.. It says u will open that door slowly and enter the room.. Ur presence will brighten this room and u will come close to me.. and take my name and will hug me saying "I love u". But I know that won't happen and somehow I will convince my heart...

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Whole day Roy sat in the cafe.. his workers come to open the cafe but he tells them not to as he wants to stay alone.. all gets worried but leaves from there.. one of the employee calls Payal to tell about Roy's situation.. Payal was with her boyfriend.. They rush there.. They look at Roy sitting alone in the dark... She switches on the light.. Roy wipes his tears and tries to behave normal but Payal hugs him tightly.. roy looks at akash and asks "Boyfriend??" Payal replies in affirmative.. He takes Akash to the side when Payal tries to hear their convo but Roy strictly tells her not to interfere.. She agrees to see Roy smiling at least a bit coz of them. She take out her cell and gives them privacy

Roy : akash.. Do u love Payal??

Akash : Yes... More than my life..

Roy : Thank propose her right now..

Akash : Now.. but what if she denies..

Roy : What if she accepts.. Propose her before it's too late.. She may understand ur silence but sometimes it's important to share ur feelings. Do not wait for the right time as it may never come. I don't want her to lose her love like me..

Akash hugs him and Roy wipes tear which was about to fall from his eyes.. Akash leaves the place saying he will be back in a minute. Roy again appears with fake smile in front of Payal..

Payal : Done with ur stupid talks..Mr. Roy.. M still ur best friend.. N I can see ur plastic smile and precious tears so no need to fake it. Man.. what happened there?? Tell me and where is Kalpi.. Till now I dint ask u as I expected her to be in office but just now I talked with Roshni aunty and she is not aware of ur return.. where is she..

Roy : Mumbai.. By now she must have sort out all her issues with Raghav. They will be preparing for SaKhi marriage and may be their also..

His throat chocked while saying so.. Payal offers him water and gets frustrated.. She doesn't know how to tell Roy that Kalpi loves him and not Raghav.. She has seen love in Kalpi's eyes and it's a big misunderstanding.. She takes out her cell to call Kalpi but it comes switch off when Akash enters with a cake in his hands and few chocolates..

Akash : Everyone proposes the girl with a red rose but my Payal is not like others.. She is special and this special cake to tell you that I love u.. As much as u love chocolate cakes.. I promise I will never come in between u and ur chocolates.. I will be a good boyfriend my love will increase with each passing days.. Will u be my life partner??

Payal gets overwhelmed on seeing this.. He has touched her heart but than she sees tears in Roy's eyes and screams at Akash..

Payal : Is this the time for all this?? how could u think about it? Can't u see Roy's condition..

Akash : yes I can.. n he is only one who made me realize how important love is..

Roy : Payal.. chill.. I told him to express his feelings as I do not want u to lose ur love like me.. I know u love him.. I too can read ur eyes and right now ur eyes are telling me that u want to hug Akash and tell him that how much u love him..

While saying so he pushes Payal towards Akash.. They hug and Payal apologizes but Akash keeps his finger on her lips and replies, "I know how important Roy and Kalpi are for u.. Don't worry I will never come in between u guys but do u have a small space for me." Payal nods in yes and they cut the cake.. She wants to feed 1st piece to Akash but he tells her to feed it to Roy but Roy denies saying "Some moments are special for couples and u need not share it with friends. "Payal agrees with Roy and Payal n Akash feed each other and says I love u. Payal tells Roy to come out with them but Roy denies and insists them to go..Payal refuses saying she won't leave him in this condition but he forces her for the sake of their friendship.. Akash too convinces her and tells her to give some time to Roy. Payal agrees and leaves with heavy heart

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Roy switches off the light and sits in a corner while talking with Kalpi's pic..

Roy : This is indeed a lucky day.. U got ur love and Payal too got hers.. Payal is lucky to have Akash in her life.. His proposal was heart felt.. U know when I was in college a girl proposed me with rose.. I laughed on her and broke her heart but now I know that I was wrong in hurting her..

While Roy was talking the main door opens.. He looks up to see who it is and feels Kalpi around.. She switches on the light and the darkness of the room disappears.. She approaches him when Roy gets up.. Kalpi reaches him but he closes his eyes and tells her to go away as he knows that she is not here but it's only his imagination.. He opens his eyes again but Kalpi doesn't disappear this time she comes closer..

Roy : What are u doing here.. why u came back.. where is Raghav.. Everything fine naa.. why r u not replying..

Kalpi : To finish what I left in mid..

After saying this she keeps her lips on his lips.. He closes his eyes.. She too closes her eyes and soon they start kissing each other.. He keeps his hands around her.. Kalpi stops kissing and hugs him tightly.. She whispers, "This is the place where I belong, I love u Roy.. I am sorry I took too much time to realize it but I love u a lot.. Will u accept me with my past".

Roy : Are u really here?? M I not imagining u?? Please pinch me..

Kalpi pinches him very hard on his hands.. He shouts in pain.. Kalpi laughs and blows his hand sweetly.. He looks at her lovingly.. He sits down on the floor.. and pulls Kalpi down.. She falls on his lap and sits there comfortably..

Kalpi : This is just a trailer.. dare u leave me alone like today.. I will kill u and I mean it... N one more thing.. We will have only one dog not two and don't u dare to love it more than me.. Else I will throw it out of the house with u..

Roy : So u heard that.. Naughty girl

Kalpi : Yes I did.. but promise me that u won't ever leave me..

Roy : I promise u.. I promise I will never leave u alone.. I will love u more than any one in my life.. I will be a good hubby and will help u in all ur chores.. Will drop u to the office and will come back to pick u up.. If ever u come late than I will wait for u like a good hubby and won't scold u.. u can use me as ur coolie while shopping and will compliment u even at ur bad hairs day.. I promise to love u for all ur life.. Even at the age of 60.. M sure u will look as pretty as u r and my love for u will be same.. Not only a good hubby but I will be a good father of our kids.. When he will wake up in night I will put him back to sleep but won't disturb my beautiful wifey..

Kalpi(with tears in her eyes n naughty smile) : I just proposed u.. N u are planning about baby.. What if I ditch u..

Roy : no u won't and that's my blind trust.. I know I failed to read love in this pretty eyes but I can read this smile on ur face.. I never told u but u look very pretty whil smiling.. U know u smile from eye to eye and that's what make u the most beautiful girl in this world..

Kalpi : I know Roy I am not the most beautiful girl but when u look at me I feel I am the prettiest girl on this earth.. When u touch me I feel I am the most luckiest girl.. N when u take my name.. I feel I am really someone's imagination.. ur Kalpana.. I love everything about myself just coz u r mine.. I love u Roy.. I love the fact that I love u..

Roy : I love u too kalpi and u r not the luckiest girl but I am the luckiest boy to have u in my life.. I still can't believe that my love is in my arms..

He kisses on her forehead.. She responds back with a kiss on his cheek when they hear someone coughing.. They look up to see who it is when Payal enters with a smile..


Payal : Surprise Surprise.. I saw kalpi coming inside and hence came back!!

Kalpi smiles on seeing Payal when Akash enters from behind..

Payal : Kalpi.. I know that sit is comfortable but now u have that for all ur life.. Now get up from his lap and give me a hug.. I have an awesome news for u..

Kalpi feels embarrassed on realizing that she is still sitting on his lap and blushes a bit.. She gets up and hugs Payal.. Payal holds her chin and teases her..

Payal : Ohh.. ohh.. Look this red cheeks.. Haaye what a blush.. She sings "Pyar hua ikrar hua.."

Roy : Stop teasing her!!

Payal : Ya yaa.. now we can't tease his girlfriend.. so possessive haa..

Roy(puts his arm around Kalpi) : Ohh.. girlfriend.. Sounds good naa.. But what will we call Akash who recently proposed Payal.. Boy friend or would be hubby??

Kalpi(excitedly): Really?? Sorry Akash.. but no one introduced us.. This jhalli Payal is busy in teasing us... I am Kalpi.. Payal and Roys' best friend..

Payal : ohh madam.. my best friend and Roy's girlfriend..

Kalpi : No he is my best friend as well..

Roy : See Payal.. I got promotion and I have two degrees now but u still have one..

Akash : Excuse me guys.. She is also a girlfriend now..My girlfriend. BTW hello Kalpi.. So now when we have two couples here than let's go and party..

All three of them shouts together in yes and they hug.. Akash feels left out when Roy pulls him in the hug and tells.. Now we all are friends..

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P.S. Hit like and comment.. sorry for all mistakes as am expecting lots of them.
Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago

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