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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

fabulous update...
I'll be visiting the forum for ffs.. please write the new ff..
Raghav's gonna help kalpi to get Roy 😃
loving it.. continue soon
btw my twitter ID is ArpitaKokitkar


Thank u Sweetheart..

I will start new FF after completing it.. Will complete this FF in 2-3 parts.😊

Will follow u on twitter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Yess.. I'm staying..
If evryyone leaves the forum.. then even I'll leave..
Bt no worries nw fr me.. I'm following u on twitter..😉


Don't worry.. few of us are still here.. We will still rock the forum for our Rachana.. 😊

Will follow u 2 so that v can be in touch always.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Loved it fairy lover and I will definitely read ur next ff. 😃 I don't have twitter I would definitely follow if I did. Continue ff soon


Thank u dear.. updating now. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okk a cup of coffee n few old songs made my mood and I completed next part.. Well wrote it while listening "Mere mehboob kayamt hogi.." So got bit emotional but not sure whether I was able to write the emotional update or not.. So u r on ur own.. Tell me if u like it as I am very poor in writing romantic/emotional parts.. Newas enjoy part 36!! Sorry for mistakes

Kalpi is roaming on road searching for taxi.. When a car stops in front of her.. With shocked expression she looks at Raghav who opens door.. Kalpi gives him a confused look..

Raghav : Come inside.. u won't get a taxi from here.. Trust me.. I will drop u at the airport..

Kalpi looks into his eyes.. She can see honesty in his eyes.. their paths have departed but they can still read each other's mind.. She sits in the car without any argument.. Raghav drives the car.. He remembers their Alibagh trip when Kalpi wanted to turn on the music.. He notices the tears forming in Kalpi's eyes and switches on music.. Kalpi remembers RoKa trip to Panchgani.. she remembers Roy playing the music and tear escapes her face.. Raghav keeps his palm below her face and holds the tear.. He wipes her tears and extends his hand to assure her but hesitates.. He than looks at her face and sees small Kalpi talking with him.. He unknowingly keeps his hand on her shoulder.. She looks at him and he assures her that everything will be fine..

Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

They reach airport.. Kalpi gets out of the car and runs towards the airport.. She doesn't turn back to thank Raghav..Raghav looks at her going.. his heart ached in pain.. tears start flowing uncontrollably.. He takes out her photograph and smiles at it.. He remembers their moment.. The dances they shared.. His accidental confession and all the precious moments of their life.. their engagement.. He sees Kalpi waving bye to him with a smile.. He wipes his tears and bids her bye.. a small smile appears on his face but than Kalpi disappears.. His smile too disappears on realizing that it was his imagination...


Tuu her ghari her waqat meray sath raha hai...
Haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai...

Kalpi lifelessly returns to the car.. Raghav deciphers her expressions and understands that they are late.. He takes out the water kept in the backseat and offers it to Kalpi.. She refuses but he insists her to have it.. She drinks some water when Raghav leaves the car hurriedly and runs towards the airport.. Kalpi fails to understand anything but what she sees is Raghav running here and there and asking something at the counters... Slowly he disappears in the crowd..


Jo bhi gham hain yeh teray unhain tu mera pata day...
Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

Kalpi takes out her mobile and looks at the last selfie she took with Roy while eating kulfi.. She looks at his smile and smiles a bit but than she notices tears in his eyes and traces her fingers on it..

Kalpi (to herself): U wanted to hide this tears from me that's why u dint let me have a look at this picture but how bad friend I am.. I dint understood ur pain.. I failed to understand ur silence.. Ur gestures were loud enough to scream that u r hurt but I was so happy on realizing my love that...

Her tears can't let her complete... She cries bitterly..Raghav who has returned by now offers his hanky to wipe tears and gestures her to smile..She surprisingly looks at him when he shows her the ticket for next flight.. She smiles a bit on this..


Jaiz nahi lagta mujhay gham say tera rishta...
Sun meri guzarish isay chehray say hata day...
Sun meri guzarish isay chehray say hata day
Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...
Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...


All this while they have not spoken a single word but their silence was loud enough to explain their actions.. He takes kalpi to the cafeteria and brings coffee for her.. The awkward silence filled the air around them.. Kalpi tries to talk and says "Thank u" When they hear the announcement for kalpi's flight.. She bids him bye with her hands and leaves.. Raghav calls her..."Kalpi". She turns back and asks "What".. When Raghav gestures her to smile a bit and Kalpi genuinely gives him a smiles.. he takes out his mobile and takes her snap.. and turns to go back.. Kalpi calls, "Raghav". He turns back and moves towards her with a hope in his eyes.. Kalpi takes out her handbag and tears a part of it.. A ring falls on the ground and reaches the place where Raghav was standing.. he picks it up and remembers the moment when he placed it on Kalpi's finger..

Kalpi : Yes.. it's our engagement ring.. I dint had guts to throw it so I stitched it inside my bag but I think it's time to return it.. I want u to give it to the person whom u love most in the world.. today u may think I am the one whom u love the most but someday someone will come to make ur life beautiful.. Give it to her as my wishes. N Raghav one more thing.. Trust is the most imp aspect of any relation.. Never break it.. U know the worst moment of anyone's life..It's when u start wondering whether u should trust someone or not..n I have heard that "When u start wondering whether u can trust someone or not, that's when u already know u can't."So plz never let anyone wonder on this thing.. It's just what I want from u..

Raghav nods in yes and thanks her for making him realize his mistakes.. Kalpi comes forward and hugs him saying "I can never forget the person who was always my mentor..". Raghav kisses her on forehead and tells her to take care and if she ever needs anyone than he is always there. They bids adieu.. Kalpi leaves the airport with a hope to start a new life with Roy while Raghav looks at her life going but smiles..

Raghav : "I promise Kalpi that u won't ever see that arrogant Raghav again.. when u will return Mumbai with ur hubby... u will find a lovely friend living his life for others.. a happy man. U want to see me happy and I promise I will always stay happy.. I am not losing my life today but I am learning to live now. Thank u for coming in my life.. u are my angel.. First u came to my life to teach me love, to smile but I ruined everything.. Today u again came to my life to teach me the way of living... n now I won't ruin anything.. I love u my angel and will always love u."

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Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsw part just love it. N u gv me full ragna epi as well big big hug to u 🤗
love dis raghav n he truely proved his love towards kalpi is true n by helping her he almost clear all mess up he create. N yes he is changing himself for kalpi n cz of kalpi.
Love kalpi rember roka trip n rags rember ragna trip, shows der sweet memory.
Love kalpi she done it. Finaly muv on in her lyf n lv as well. N she isnt mving alone evn she is made her past also to mv on.
When u start wonder
whether u can trust someone or not,
that's when u already know u can't."
lv dis lines.
Lv it vishu 😳
n yeah i get emotional on dat car journey, n wen kalpi cm bck crying n last wen rags lost hs lv.
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update. I can't wait for when she meets Roy. Rags surprised me and made me feel sad for him. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will surely read ur ff
Edited by rkonly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautiful updates👏👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
THat was beautiful ... simply beautiful !! Loved Kalpi's last words to Raghav ,,,, they were beautifull0y written & created a perfect impact. Thanks a lot for this update 😃😃

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