MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 37

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LOVELY UPDATE
MAAN FIXED BOTH ANNIE AND ADI'S ENGAGEMENT ON THE SAME DAY
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im so sad cant post photes..😭 😭 😭
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL FOR WAITING FOR ME..THANKU FOR ALL UR WISHES FOR MY EXAMS..
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IM SAD I CANT POST PHOTES..MUMMY..😭 😭 😭..ITS GOING END ONLY 4 PARTS..BUT I CANT POST PICS..
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)





H2 - 53





Maan wants everything best for his princess. he arranged almost everything in km,watever,it was they dress or parlour and mehendi..Geet and dadi was teasing Anni like hell..

Geet: dadi i know bhai love Anni so much but after seeing her mehendi so dark im thinking he wont leave her for a sec too


Dadi: really

Geet: then wat dadi bhai have agreed to stay in his sasural for her live ..hmm wow Anni u made my bhai no:1 romeo

Anni : pls Geet stop it yar..

Geet : but one thing i came to know after tis

Anni :wat Geet

Geet: that u know to blush..hearing my bhai name u r turning red yeana dadi

Dadi smirk: hmm Geet

Anni: dadi u too

Dadi: why,im not tat old..


Geet whistle and hug dadi

Anni pouted : Pls Geet stop it yar

Geet: why should i stop..wen u teased me on my day, i was silent naa..now chup chap bear my teasings..i have two rights,u r my nanad cum bhabhi..


Anni pouted : bhai see Geet naa

Maan who was sitting next them watching Geet and Dadi ki teasing..he want to stop but he know if he opens his mouth his sherni wont leave him..so he just sat silent..but wen his princess called him help how can he stop..he was abt to open his mouth but at once zipped seeing Geet ki glaring gaze..And showed his baby face..

Anni: bhai wat is tis te whole world scared to see u but scared of Geet..very bad bhai..u attitude everything only for others not in home.

Maan: its not like Geet,

Geet fold her hand to her chest : yes Maan

Maan gulp his saliva: nothing

Geet: tat is better

Anni : i hate u all

Geet : why not u hate others now all ur love only for my bhai naa

Anni : Geet

Geet suddenly felt dizzly and sat on te couch,Maan,dadi,Anni got worry..

Maan hold her : wat happen

Geet: its nothing just im tired

Dadi brought water for her: its ok Geet u are so excited tat is why..if u take rest u will feel better

Before Geet say anything,Maan scoop her to carry her to their room..Geet try to stop him eyeing Dadi and Anni who was giggling,but he care damn..making her blush

Anni whistle: Geet no one can stand in front of ur love enjoy

Geet pouted: so taking revenge for teasing Anni naa

Maan just carried her: no im carrying my angels


Geet: u naa u u dust dhanav

Maan: wat ever but urs

Geet smiles and hugged him..Maan placed her on te bed

Maan took a long breath: Geet u r correct i should have not carried u

Geet got confused: why Maan wat happen

Maan : u u, he went back ward

Geet staring at him: me wat

Maan smirk: realy Geet u put on weight so much tat i cant carry u ..before Geet pounce he rush to washroom shutting te door..


Geet realize wat said and open her mouth to ground..but before she react he went to washroom.

Geet was shouting from outside: Maan better u cum out or i will show ur nanimaa

Maan sitting on te counter and tapping te counter: whom ever u show but i wont cum out

Geet: i will see till how long u will stay in washroom

Maan: till i feel

Geet: dd

Maan: thanku


Geet: stupid

Maan : thanku

Geet: idiot

Maan: thanku

Geet: u u

Maan : ahan me me

Geet : go to hell

Geet went and lied on te bed..Maan stayed for some time..wen he didt hear any sound,he slowly open te door and peeped to see wat Geet is doing..he sighned seeing her sleeping..he changed to his night dress and sat beside her..Maan watched her sleeping form

Maan: while sleeping how calm she looks,but once she wokes te real devil making great msk to shiver in front of her

Geet open her eyes: so i look like a devil ahan


Maan closed his eyes and bites his tongue(st):Geet ki babaji save me.

Geet: first im fat and now devil..why not u will say..coz of u only i became tis and ur saying im devil..im looking like devil for u

Maan nodded yes and then no

Geet: oh yes..then go & romance with ur chudalis in ur office who roam in half naked

Maan know it is going beyond,he dont want to sleep out :Geet i was just teasing u

Geet: but i dont like ur teasing,she pushed him on te bed and hover on him,samji app pointing her finger to him

Maan look at her and her finger : hmm

Geet: dust dhanav and was abt to get up but Maan pulled her and capture her petals for souring kiss which was teasing him with her non stop bak bak..

Geet: leave me u dd


Maan capture her mouth not letting her to speak and soon Geet too started to kiss him..Both started to drown in they kiss..Maan hands started do wonders in her body..both soon get out of they barriers and drown in they passion..he left her after some time..Geet was blushing

They were lying on te bed, covering they bare bodies with te duvet..Geet was lying on Maan..Geet was showing her palms to Maan,..Maan was searching his name but he don't need to search as she have wrote his full name in her both palms..Maan kissed her palms and kissed her lips..


Geet : Maan im hungry

Maan : wait I will order our dinner

Nakul kept they dinner and left..Maan started to fed her.. Geet fed him and with her same hand took te food

Maan was confused : wat happen Geet


Geet : Maan I read tat eating husband ki jutha , ur gene will go to baby directly, tats why

Maan : oh, but I have a solution

Geet : wat Maan, chewing her food

Maan too some morsels in his mouth and smack his mouth on her , pushing te food from his mouth to her and kissing her..

Geet : Maan

Maan smirk wiping his lips :u only said u wat my gene to go to baby, so tis way ,baby will get my gene directly

Geet smack on his chest and hugged him..

Engagement Day

KM was decorated showing his class..Te while media was standing in front of km capturing,Msk's sister engagement.. India's most big shot all are present.. Father too with all te kids came to wish his daughter..


Geet was bringing Anni and Pinky down..Maan was staring at Anni ..he still remember, wen he hold her wen she born,she was very tiny..he last saw her as 6 months baby and then he missed her..he miss her everything ,her first walk,her first word..he got her as 19 years girl..now she was happy..for her smile he can do anything..he was admiring his princess with tears in his eyes..Dadi saw Maan who was lost in his princess,she know wat he is thinking..she touched his shoulder..he at once hugged her as he was so happy..Dadi pat his back,kissing his hair


Dadi whispered: Anni is cuming..Maan broke te hug wiping his tears before any one sees

Anni took blessing from dadi and dadi hugs her..she then took blessing from Maan..Maan was shocked and hugged her..he kissed on her forehead.Pinky too got blessing from dadi and Maan..Anni took blessing from Father and hugged him..he blessed her


It was time for ring ceremony..Adi wants to his baby sister engagement so Anni and Rk exchanged te ring first..they stood in te stage..Geet brought te rungs..they exchanged..Geet was so happy for Anni,as she lived her so much. she te one who gave her a family...wen she came to orphan,Anni came and talk with her and took her to her small family and now she got her happiness..Anni saw Geet and hugs her..both crying hugging each other,and obviously missing Guru..Rk hold Anni and Maan Geet


Rk: oh god tis girls wen ever they want they open they tap

Anni smack on his elbow,Rk : ouch..Geet giggled..Now its Adi and Pinky us time..Adi was drooling Pinky..Pinky pounce on his stomach to bring him out from his dream..

Adi : ouch rubbing his stomach

Anni: bhai get use to it..

Geet gave te ring ,they both exchanged..all went well

It was time for dance..Kids too started to enjoy as Maan arranged everything for them..Rk was dancing with Anni & Adi with pinky..Maan saw Geet who look tired and sat on te near by chair..Maan just carried her to take her to their..as all are busy in te party

Geet: Maan i want to enjoy with her,pouting her lips

Maan: not now u r looking so tired so first take some rest

Geet: Maan

Maan: if u r not listening then i will wind up te party

Geet : no no Anni is so happy let her enjoy..dd

Maan smiles: take ur medicine and sleep..in stern tone

Geet twisted her lips,took her medicine..Maan helped her to change ..she lied down.Maan covered her with duvet

Maan kissed her forehead: promise u can enjoy in her wedding,i wont stop u..

Geet smiles: its ok Maan, im so happy tat my Anni got her love..

Maan lied beside her

Geet: Maan u go i will sleep


Maan: no i will stay with u..waise wat i will do there without my angels kissing her tummy..Geet hugged him and kissed his heart..

Months were going..Geet was throwing so much tantrums..due to her moodswings..Maan was pampering her to te core..he fulfill all her wish before she voice it..Anni and Dadi too looking after her well..Maan was busy in his business and Anni's engagement,but he never back from his pampering..which made his Geet to became so much adamant

she know she is making his life hell,but she was craving to be with him..her pregnancy making her to yearn for him..she need him for each and everything..some times she will go to extreme,but Maan know how to shut her in his style..Maan have arranged everything in kitchen as Geet ki moodswings and her taste differ every night..

it was one night..Maan was sleeping ,but Geet was twisting in restless..she was not getting sleep..she woke up and sat on te bed..She look at Maan who was sleeping peacefully..: here im not getting sleep but he is sleeping peacefully,how can i let him


Geet smirk ,she slowly hover on her with touching him..she admire his face: dd


she caress his hair and started to roll it with her fingers..then she touch his eyes which was big..she slide her finger to his nose and got naughty plan..she took her hair and caress it near his face..Maan who was in deep sleep thought some thing and snap it..Geet open her mouth and she started to nuzzle inside his nose..

Maan got sneezing: ouch ouch

Geet turned her face pretending like nothing happen..Maan look at her

Maan: Geet u didt sleep


Geet: as if u care,here im struggling to sleep but u r sleeping

Maan: Geet then he realize she woke him..keeping his hands on his hip..so u wake me up

Geet look at him: yes and turned her face

Maan signed and thought abt her cravings..he hold her shoulder and turned her,to face him

Maan : Geet did u want anything

Geet pouted and node her head for yes

Maan: wat u want,ok u r hungry i will prepare something,he stood to go..but Geet hold his wrist stopping him.

Maan raised his eyebrows: wat u want

Geet pulled him and point her finger towards him,biting her lips

Maan got confused: wat

Geet: i want u

Maan: Geet

Geet: ahan i want u,nowadays u r not spending time with me,with baby face


Maan raised his eyebrows like really

Geet : i know u r taking care of me..but always do tis do tat..sleep,eat..but other than tis i want u..im craving for u..for ur touch..i want to be with u in arms always..nowadays im craving for u..wen u left to office naa,i felt lonely..dadi is there but we need u..and i know u controlling urself..but i cant control anymore..i want u..u think me so despate or anything..u will tease me ,but i dont care..i want u..tears welled up in her eyes

Maan who was staring at complaining lips ,placed his finger on her lips: chup bikul chup,..Maan was enjoying her cute complains but seeing her getting emotions due to her pregnancy,..he cant see her...Geet look at him

Maan: how much u talk,touching her tummy,dont make my baby too like u non stop bak bak..

Geet bite his finger

Maan : ouch Geet,snapping his finger

Geet: u r laughing at my plight naa,go dont talk to me..i hate u..she lied down on her side showing her back to him

Maan(st): damn with her moodswings

Maan hugged her from back,spooning her,..kissing her cheeks: but i love

Geet: no u dont love me

Maan: Geet u doubt me

Geet: first u wont leave me for sec too..but after i got pregnant u are not cuming close to me..if some times u cum ur controlling..i know u dont love me


Maan smiles..Geet saw his smile and started cry

Geet: i know u dont love she try push him..

Maan pressed himself more on her back : Geet dont u feel my arousal for u..pressing his m***** on her indicating wat he meant..Geet blushed and gasp seeing his hard m***** poking her back

Geet turned her face to look at him: then why not loving me

Maan: wat i will do..if i start i will forget everything and became wild..later u became tired..

Geet: im not tired

Maan: later u should not complain i went beyond

Geet pouted her lips: no

Maan pecked her lips: do u really want tis

Geet glared at him: i know mr.khurana u r not interest in me,before she complains her words was struck by Maan's mouth..he capture her complaining lips ,which was teasing for long, into his mouth













PRECAP : PASSIONATE NIGHT

NEXT PART: 54, PG - 77


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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ONE MORE PART ON TE WAY
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I am the second reader
nice update and waiting for next part...
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welcome back maanlini😆
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anis marriage
maan making everything special
geet n dadi teasing anie
maan is so emotional seeing anie
they miss guru..
maan doesnt care of others when it comes to geet or his baby
he carries her
n i love the way he teased her
n their nok jokes are awesome
both pairs got engaged
geet n her moodswings
poor maan
already controlling his needs for geet n babies safety
but geet is crying to be with him
n their romance is in air..
nice part

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Originally posted by: Desigirls12





IM SAD I CANT POST PHOTES..MUMMY..😭 😭 😭..ITS GOING END ONLY 4 PARTS..BUT I CANT POST PICS..

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