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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: book.worm

so finally the past is revealed...

and such a sad thing that RK still doesn't regret his mistakes and enjoys torturing Madhu for slapping him.. GOD! i hope Madhu makes him suffer equally.

Hmmm regarding the song...

What is the situation like? And is it between RK and Madhu?

If it is like a lovey dovey moment then Bahon Ke Darmiya.. though i doubt it
Else... Main Pareshaan or Madhu cudd have Dil Mera Churaya Kyun

or if it is like aggressive kind of a song then Sholon Se wud be wicked and kinda suit for their situation too as RK is in a way still kinda behind her


thanks for the suggestions and your comment really means a lot to me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice story... continue n pm me...


thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 9

"Where are you sultan me and Ananya are waiting for you" trishna asked angrily

"Here I am" trishna turn and saw sultan looking at her.

"Daddy" ananya whooped and ran towards him. "I missed you a lot daddy"

"Daddy missed you too princess" said sultan kissing annaya on her cheeks

"What take you so long to come" asked trishna giving him you-better -have-an-explanation look.

"Sorry dear, I just got stuck in the traffic, come lets go" said sultan without looking at trishna.

At night

"what happened sultan, from the morning I am feeling that you are hiding something from me, I have come after a long time and you even didn't talk to me properly, tell me is there any problem?" asked trishna worriedly

"I want o tell you something, I know after this you might hate me but please just listen to me patiently "said sultan pleadingly and he told trishna everything from the bet to Rk past. For some time there was no sound and then there was sound of slaps one after another.

"How can you be so cheap, you are married man and you have a three yrs old daughter and after this you bet on some girl? I can never imagine in my dreams that you can fall so low. Just to prove your charm you can play with somebody feelings. You did not think about your daughter for once. How can you forget that you also have a daughter? What if somebody also does this to your daughter, play with her feelings just for a stupid bet. Tell me. Answer me dammit." Said trishna fumingly

"I know Trishna what I did as wrong and whatever punishment you will give I will accept it "said sultan with tears.

"I will never forgive you for this. You were right that after listening this I might hate you. Yes Mr. Sultan Kundra I HATE YOU, but more than you I hate myself for loving you." saying this she left the room leaving behind a crying sultan

Next day in the morning everyone was on the breakfast table except trishna

"Sultan where is trishna" asked Mohan

Sultan doesn't know how to answer his father because when trishna left the room last night she did not return.

"Daddyji I am here, actually last night Ananya want to sleep with me so I slept in her room" said trishna

"ok, come have breakfast"

"I will eat later. Right now I am not feeling hungry, sultan I want to talk to you" said trishna looking into his eyes but without any feelings.

Sultan left with trishna. Everyone present on the table feet that something unusual between them but decide not to ask as it's a matter between husband and wife.

"I know trishna you cannot forgive me but..."

"I have not come here for hearing your explanations. I just want to told you that now onwards I don't want to be your wife, but my daughter needs his father that is why I have decided that now there is no relation between you and me. For me you are just my daughter's father. So now you are free and you can do whatever you want. You can impress any girl and can prove your charm. Now there is nothing left between you and me" said trishna

"Trishna please just give me one chance to explain"

"There is nothing to explain because there is no explanation for what you did" saying this she left

After sometime Rk came in sultan room and asked him "what happened bro, is everything ok between you and bhabhi?"

"Everything is alright rishu. Right now I want to be alone so please go"

"Hmm you must be thinking that now bhabhi has come so how will you win the bet" asked rishu

Listening about the bet sultan angrily said "I asked you to leave me alone, so get out of my room right now"

"Bro I was just asking..."

"Just leave" sultan shouted. Rk who has never see his brother losing his temper got worried but he decided to leave the room.

"Because of this one mistake I have ruin my life. I have lost the most beautiful relation of my life. But you rishu you are doing the same mistake again. Right now you do not understand that what are you doing is not right. But I will make you understand this."

Next day at Karan and Ria sangeet ceremony, Rk reaches in red shirt and black jeans. He was looking like a Greek god. He reaches on the stage where ria and Karan were sitting.

"Congrats Karan" said rk and hugged him. "Congrats ria" and shake hands with her.

"Thank god you came, now we can show these girls that we are better than them in dancing." said karan giving a challenging look to Ria

"That we will see who is better, see who is here to beat you" said ria pointing towards the entrance

Both rk and karan looks towards the entrance and there they saw madhu in a red saree. She ha s left her hair open She was looking like a heavenly beauty even with a minimal makeup. Rk was mesmerized too see her.

She came on the stage and wished the couple. Rk eyes were continuously following madhu movements. Not even for a second he has move his eyes but then he hear karan clearing his throat and looking at him with a smile. Then he came back to his senses. But he felt that madhu has completely ignored his presence which hurts his male ego. Feeling rk gaze on her, madhu look at his eyes. They both share an intense eye lock. And then they hear karan brother announcing something.

"As all you know that this is a sangeet ceremony of my bhaiya and bhabhi. But it's not like other sangeet ceremony, where there will be competition between girls and boys; in fact I have an idea. In this bowl I have kept chits with girls name and in the other one I have kept chit with boy's name. I will one chit from girls bowl and one chit from boys bowl and they will have to dance. So what say, shall I start."

Everyone shouted in excitement. Soon the chits were picked and all got there partners. Madhu and rk have to dance together.Rk extended his towards her with a smirk. But madhu nodded her head in no and was about left but rk hold her hand and music play

Kurbaan hua teri dushmani mein yun kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun
Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

Rk move close r to madhu and kept her hand on her waist and pull her towards himself. Madhu back touched rk chest. They both felt a sensation ran through their body. He holds her hand. Madhu try to left but he again holds her. And pull her and madhu landed on his chest with her face facing him. He holds madhu hand and kept the other one on her waist. And they both started moving on the music. Then he lift madhu.

Rubaru tu magar Tanah hai ye jahan hoo vo
Chal uthe meri khufar se
Saanson ka ye sama hoo vo
Kya hua pal mein jaane kho gaya kyun
Tu mila aur judai maa hua yun
Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

They both had an eye lock and move slowly on the music without breaking the eye lock they were so close that they can feel each other breathe.rk twirl madhu and then hold her and move her from here and there. They both hold each other and do salsa steps. He lift madhu in his arms an starts taking round.

Marne ka sabab maangta raha dar badar
Mitt ne ko to dil pal mein raazi hua
Poori hui har aarzoo har dastan meri
Ye tum shuru hue jahan main khatam hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

He puts madhu down and then again did salsa steps. They both did not break eye lock even for a second. Then the music stops and there was a sound of clapping. This bring madhu back to reality and she felt rk hand on her waist she immediately remove his hand which made rk realize how close they are and he moves a little away from her. Everyone come there and praised them. Some of them even say that they are made-for-each-other type couple. Soon madhu left the dance floor. After some time, his heart felt that he should find madhu. He felt that something bad is going to happen. He searched for her in the hall but when he didn't find her there he left the party and went outside to find her.

Edited by bald - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb n waiting for next n pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
i think rk will unite sultan n trishna
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
why cant sultan tell trishna about rk n madhu
n ask for her help
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update, guess time for rk to realise all his mistakes. Poor tishna, feeling sad for sultan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy with trishna's decision.
I don't want madhu to fall for RK again.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
bt feeling bad for sullu...i thought trish wl help him,,,bt yeh to locha hogaya...
nw waiting for next part...plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomeee ... loved trish slapping sultan,,,.. and how can i forget... thanks for giving rishbala dance..

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