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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Amazngg n Superbbb dear..


Thank u buddy!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

Awesome, looking forward to next part,


Thanx Anji.. will try to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geitahchamate

Wow Vish... that was an amazing update... totally loved the ferocious beast in Kalpi... she is in perfect control unlike the show...😆😆😆

Update soon


Thank u dear... 😊

Will try to update soon.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow nice update..

loved this kalpi..
continue soon..


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Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Beautiful update👍🏼


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Originally posted by: rani214

Amazing update

Love dis kalpi
Continue soon


Thanks Rani.. Will try to update soon.😊
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Hello guys.. I know m taking too much time to upload the parts but m really sorry.. M busy now a days with my company. I am writing all this parts very quickly so hoping that m not compromising with it's quality. Well I am here with part 7. Hope u will like it as well. All types of feedback are welcome. I don't mind u guys criticizing it as it will improve me only. So feel free to give honest comments.

Kalpi stops her car at Singhania chawl.. She steps down and moves towards the door.. She sees little Kalpi standing at her house's door with doll in her hand.. Her father comes from behind and pats her and forces her to eat.. She sees Pakya making faces to father-daughter duo.. She gets nostalgic and reaches in the mid of ther area where tulsi plant is kept.. She lits the diya and turns around. She sees herself begging in front of her father to believe that this abortion and property papers and bank statements are fake.. she hears her mother telling her not to call her ayi anymore.. She looks around to see her mother when she sees a pyre burning and her father putting garland around her photo.. Her eyes get filled with rage...She takes out her black shades and wears them to hide her eyes. A little girl holds her hand.. She gives her a smile and kneels down to ask her name.. The little girl smiles back and open her mouth to say something when a lady screams, "Rani.. come inside... No need to talk to her." Kalpi looks in the direction of the voice and recognizes the lady as her neighbor. The lady comes and gives a weired look to Kalpi and drags her daughter inside.. Kalpi realizes that this chawl has yet not forgotten her.

Vitthal who has came out of the house looks at her.. His princess is looking beautiful but older.. He looks at her car...a tear rolls down from his eyes but he wipes it forcefully thinking Kalpi has bought this car by deceiving us and yells at chawl people... "how can they let strangers enter our chawl.. It can be dangerous for us." Kalpi who was listening to this smirks...

Kalpi : Who is stranger here.. I am Kalpana Jadhav.. U forgot me ba..

She stops herself from calling him baba. She has learned to hate him but her heart always yearned for his love but his mistrust on her has made her heart stone. She doesn't feel anything but just wants to take revenge on Raghav and wants to prove her innocence to her parents. She has decided to leave the city after fulfilling her aim as she doesn't want to forgive her parents who disowned her when she needed them most.. She removes her shades and continues..

"Tell me.. who is stranger over here.. "

Vitthal : U, we do not know any Kalapna.. U do not have any relationship with us.. My daughter Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav died few years back and I am doing her shraadh from last 4 years.. So who u r..

Kalpana : Don't worry, I am not Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav.. I am just Kalpana Jadhav. Though I wanted to remove Jadhav as well but I hate to leave anything incomplete.. N do not worry, I am not here to make any relationship with u chawl people.. I am here to complete what I left in the mid.

Vitthal doesn't know how to respond.. The Kalpi who he is talking to is not his daughter bt a ruthless girl. He tells her to leave as they doesn't want any dirt to spoil their chawl.. Manda who was enjoying their spat decides to take the charge..

Manda : Kalpi.. Go away from here. U have ashamed urself and our chawl.. We do not want our daughters to learn anything from u... Just go away.. Can't u see how much u hurt ur parents.. Why u came back.. Stop giving them more pain.

Kalpi : First of all I am not Kalpi but Kalpana madam. Next time remember this while talking to me. N Ur chawl.. Which chawl r u talking about.. This is my chawl.. Uffo... U guys have really weak memory.. Hope u remember what happened 5 years back..

Kalpi takes few steps towards her father and handover him the blooded property paper.. Vitthal reads it and realizes that this are the same papers which Raghav gave to Kalpi for aborting the child. He drops the paper on floor and tells Manda that this chawl belongs to Kalpi..

Manda : So what Kalpana madam.. Raghav singhania is building a new society for us.. Few months more and than u can keep this chawl with urself..

Kalpi who was listening to this laughs loudly on Manda..

Kalpi : U fool.. Do u really feel that a rich guy like Raghav Singhania would bother about u people.. The guy who ditched me on altar will fulfill his promise to u guys.. Let me tell u.. Raghav is not building any society on that land but a mall. And he has signed a contract with me. So come out of ur dreams..

Kamla who was listening to this from far remembers Pakhi calling her for bhumi pujan telling her that Raghav is preparing this society for chawl people. Kamla feels sad on thinking that Raghav is again cheating on Pakhi. Pakhi is thinking that Raghav is working with Kalpi for our dreams but in reality he is lying to Pakhi. She thinks Pakhi will be shattered to know Raghav's truth.

Kalpi sees the shocked faces of chawl people and feels content.. Her purpose of visiting chawl is being fulfilled. She has proved Raghav as betrayer and she knows that chawl people won't buy his explanations now. She turns around to go but stays back and says..

Kalpi : "Neways I have not come here to argue with u guys.. I just wanted a maid for my home.. So if any of u like to work at my place than come and meet me. This is my card.."

Kalpi throws the card in the air while looking at Vitthal. All this while she was staring at him to see that whether he is hurt or not.. She looks at tears in Vitthal's eyes and hesitates for a second... Her eys has filled with water and she again wears her shades to hide her tears from her father.. She smiles evilly at his father while her heart and eye crying. She turns around quickly and reaches to her car.. She looks at her mother staring at her at the door and hurriedly sits inside the car. She wipes her tears and scold herself for getting weak on seeing her parents.. she takes her nail filer again and starts digging her wound and keeps reminding herself that she is orphan and she has came here to avenge everyone for their deeds.

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Raghav is waiting in Kalpi's office.. Amar tells him to sit at a place but he keeps moving to and fro in the room.. Chief architect's words echoing in his mind that the design is for a mall and not any society.. he asked Amar about the same but Amar told it that it was all Kalpana's decision and to meet her to clarify things. Raghav is getting impatient with the time.. He feels like God is trying to snatch all his happiness from him.. Kalpi enters the room.. amar has already informed her about Raghav's presence. Raghav glances at ecstatic Kalpi greeting him happily. He fumes and shouts at her saying what is this.. Kalpi gives a confused look when Raghav tells her that they have planned to build a society on Mehta's land but her architect told him that he is being ordered to make a blueprint for mall.. Kalpi again gives a confused look saying it was always a mall and she never agreed on making any society there. She shows him the contract paper telling him that he signed it. Raghav remembers signing paper without reading it as he was in hurry to stop Kalpi from leaving the country. He tries once again saying that Mehta was always interested in society and they too gave presentation for it.. Kalpi denies completely saying their presentation was not about any society.. He tells him to remember whether he saw that presentation.. Raghav remembers the way Mr. Mehta told them that he wants to see presentation separately and no one was allowed to see other's presentation. He feels dejected and requests Kalpi to make society at that land as it's his dream. Kalpi refuses politely as it's against business ethics and she doesn't want to disappoint Mehta.. She apologizes to him and tells him to arrange some other land and she will join hands with him in that project as well.. Raghav agrees reluctantly when Kalpi tells him about the land she has heard about. She tell him that auction will held place in two days and she thinks that will be the nice place to build society. Though it's bit far from city but they can try to provide all amenities there only. Raghav agrees and tells her that he will tell Sammy to do the research when she tells him not to bother as she will tell Amar to do the needful. Raghav agrees and leaves the place with a hopeful smile.

Kalpi smirks and remembers the day of presentation

Flashback

Kalpi calls Mr. Mehta and tells him that she wants to build a mall on that land and it will be a joint mall of KJ industries and Mehta enterprises. Mr. Mehta argues saying that he wants to build a middle class society there as it will bring fame for them but Kalpi manipulates him saying we will give employment to poor people in our malls and it will give fame as well as money to us. She assures him that they will earn a huge profit from that land. She request Mr. Mehta to not disclose it to anyone till they get the land as she doesn't want anyone to create issues for them. Mr. Mehta agrees and tells her that he will not let any company see their presentation. She hangs the call.

Flashback ends


Kalpi says loudly, "Raghav Singhania.. I won't let u fulfill ur dream.. U and that chawl people has to bear the consequences.. see u in the auction now."

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P.S. : Plz hit like and comment. Sorry for all mistakes. It's again unedited and u may find lots of typos.

Regards
Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Superbbb one dear.. kalpi's acting smart n cunning.. I'm lykng dis side of hers.. and raghav he deserves all the pain he has given to kalpi before..
Good going..😉
Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Continue to write more, soon.

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