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Posted: 11 years ago
Actually I am not well and I am reading almost every story in this forum to keep myself busy. Ur story is one of the best which I read. The way u potrayed the characters..brilliant. I could almost feel every emotion that the characters wdnt through. Starting from Raman's guilt to his jealousy to nervousness to realozation to desperacy to wickedness and naughtiness.. Hatss off yaar. Armaan is my favourite TV character u brought him back.. Love u for that. :-P The way Adi was evaluating Raman.. too good. Like I said before Like father like son. Romance Ravan kumar style was much needed. I love his style.
In short I loved ur story. Thank u for giving us such an amazing story. Loved ur writing. Keep writing and continue soon. :-) <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

You might find some parts mature

Note: I have done justice to the wait! I hope you like it! Please do comment/like. Thank you so much all of you. 😊

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Raman's Realisation OS/SS
Part 17

Let the game begin!

Raman and Ishita had the most peaceful sleep that night. They were complete.

Raman who felt that he had lost everything 5 years back just realised that he never found anything to lose. He never had marital peace and selfless loving partner. But now he had both.

Ishita who had thought that she loved her childhood friend, Subbu realised the true love she found with Raman. She a lady, who thought she can never be a mother, was now a mother of two unconditionally loving kids. She was a woman now, a complete woman.

Both had learned to fight the demons of past, with together, with their family.

The sun rays flickered through the open door of the balcony. Ishita stirred and Raman further nuzzled his nose in Ishita's crook of neck.

They both lay there entangled, Ishita was wearing Raman's blue Shirt and Raman was in his pant-cum-pj.

Raman held his possession securely in his arms as Ishita with her hold on Raman's hand ensured that she is his possession, always.

Ishita finally woke up rubbing her eyes. She noticed one of the most enchanting sights. This was for the first time that she saw her husband sleep like a kid, with no worries, no fear, no stress lines on his face. She moved back a little to see his face properly. She couldn't resist touching his glowing face. She trailed her fingers from his forehead to the chin. She again followed the suit this time moving away the hair that fell on his forehead obstructing her sight. She leaned forward to give a peck on his forehead. She let her lips linger there a bit longer then required. Then she moved towards his cheek. Unaware of the fact that the devil was up, from the very beginning when his wife started trailing her fingers on his face.

Sensing the fact when she was close he moved his face a little to capture her lips in turn.

"Raman!" Ishita gasped at the unexpected turn of events.
Raman kissed his wife to his delight before he broke to breathe, "So my wife was checking out her irresistible husband? Was she?"
Ishita looked at him wide eyed, "No! I was just about to wake you up wishing good morning!" she fumbled by the end a little.

"Oh! If that is the case my Jhansi ki Rani toh phir good morning waise nahi aise kehte hai!" Raman told her and came on top of her to kiss her again. Then whispered, "Good morning! I hope meri har morning aise ho! Wo apne aap good hojayegi!"

Ishita smiled at her naughty husband. She had already seen a completely different side of his at night and this were just the glimpses of it. She blushed.

"Ab itna blush kyu kar rahi ho? Kal toh poori Jhasi ki Rani mode mein thi!" He paused. "Tum aise blush karti hui achi lagti ho lakin while action aur bhi zayad beautiful lagti ho?"

"Is it, Mr. Raman Bhalla?" Ishita asked with a naughty glint. Raman was happy to see that in her eyes. Jhansi ki Rani iss back! I love her! Agagr aise chalta raha toh na mein bed se uthunga na isse uthne doonga!

"Of course!" Raman wanted to completewith a one liner. But, obviously karne thodi mila hoga!

Ishita turned, now she was on top of Raman and kissed her husband, "So now my husband, Thanks for making my day!"

Raman couldn't believe this lady in front of him. She was such a minx, she was speaking when he was still grasping for air. Though, it wasn't that ki I don't like it! I love it.

"Waise tum meri shirt mein saree se zayada achi lag rahi ho! Gar pata hota toh faltu itni expensive Saree he nahi khareedta! Jo pata bhi nahi ki kaha hai!" he acted as if looking around.

Ishita blushed crimson red remembering the wild rendezvous last night.

"Mujhe toh samajh he nahi aata tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Ek second pehle meri izzat lootne wali thi aura b achanak ek dum shy typed ho gayi?" Raman loved teasing his lady love. He indeed loved these small surprises from Ishita.

"Raman chalo late ho raha hai! Breakfast banana bhi toh hai!" Ishita looked into her phone for the time and almost jumped up. "Aree Raman 10 o' clock hogaya mein ghar phone bhi nahi kiya aaj toh baccho ka school tha! Kya soch..."

Raman tried to stop Ishita, "Ishita Relax! Listen to me!"

She cut him in between, "Kya sunnu? Ye sab apki wajah se hua hai!" Ishita pushed Raman and got off the bed and would have continued with her rambling if Raman had not jumped off the bed to pull Ishita to him. Just as she was steady Raman pecked her lips, "Maine kal ghar phone kar diya tha! Maa ne sab dekh liya hoga! Aur ghar pe sab adults hai pata hai unhe ki ek pati-patni raat bhar ghar se bahar kya kar rahe honge!" Ishita's face was a perfect O'.

"Raman! Aap kitne zayada besharum hote jaa rahe hai! Kitna embarrassment hoga! Adi aur Ruhi bhi hai! Wo kya sochenge?"

Raman smiled, "Ruhi toh abhi bachi hai kush hogi ki uski Ishima aur Papa saath hai!"

Ishita glared at him, "Adi wo toh baccha nahi hai na?"

"Wo kuch nahi sochege bus mujhe 10 on 10 dedega!" Raman smiled happily.🤣

"Kya 10 on 10, Raman?"
"Romantic honbe mein!" Ishita almost lost her balance hearing him, thanks to Raman's grip on her waist.

"Apka kuch nahi ho sakta!" Ishita turned her face sideways.

"Ishu! You know na kal raat meine.." Ishita was horrified she didn't let I'm complete and hugged him. Raman laughed at his innocent wife.

Poor soul, Raman Bhalla ka Ravan Naughty Bhalla style dekhna pad raha hai! Raman thought and hugged her tighter.

They stood there for a while, "Ishu? Late ho raha tha naa?"

Ishita pulled back but still in his arms, "Haan! Mein nashta bana deti hu aap fresh ho jao!"

"Ishita, lets save time! Chalo saath mein naha lete hai phir saath mein breakfast bhi bana lenge!" Raman said teasingly. Raman would have laughed aloud if he didn't have to remain all that serious, for the teasing bit.

"Dono mein apki help nahi chahiye mein kar lungi!" Ishita hit him. "Ab leave me!"

"Waise sachi batao na! Chalo nahne mein toh samajh aata hai! Par nashte mein kya problem hai?" Raman asked in a serious tone.

"Problem? Kal ka dough making yaad hai?" Ishita looked angry.

"Maine toh kuch nahi kiya tha! Bus tumhari help kar raha tha! Tumhe concentrate karna chahiye tha!" Raman liked the way where conversation headed. It has a confession at the end. Wohooo! He punched up in the air, mentally.

"Help? Aise kon help karta hai? Agar aap mere itne pass rahoge toh mein kaise concentrate karungi?" Biting her lips she looked up in his eyes. Mu! Ishita, look where you landed yourself, now! Smart, Raman! But don't you worry I'll get back to you! Reading her thoughts Raman answered, "Sure my darling! I'll wait for you. As of now, it's 1-0!" Raman moved his hand from her waist to cup her face.Ishita pulled up her hands from his chiselled chest to lock behind his neck, "Thik hai Mr. Bhalla! First win doesn't decide the end winner!" Raman and Ishita both smiled.
"I'll get fresh first!"
"Sure! Tab tak mein Mihir se office ki update le leta hu!" Ishita nodded and went to the bathroom.

Mrs. Bhalla, you are playing against Raman Bhalla. You are not as smart as I'm my love, Iss batroom mein tumhe sirf towel milega, kapde nahi! Wo toh mein he dunga na? Raman smiled evilly.😈

Precap: So the score levels? Or Raman wins the second round too and may be loses the third!😉

Read to find out! Next updates strictly on Demand! Jitne zayada comments utni jaldi update!😈

Hahaha! kidding, As of now I'll try to update by night! After the telecast of the serial...😆

Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wt to say yaar...

Ur rkb dialogues rocked...

Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
N thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I posted my comment last night but it never got posted as I don't see it here :(
Sorry for the delay and thanks soo much for the 5 pms
When I first saw the title of the story in a hurry I read it as " ishita and raman realisation " and I did not open the story because I thought its gonna be same old misunderstanding and how its cleared
Then u sent me the PM and I was touched because as a writer when u send a personal PM its means a lot and I opened the story
And I loved it sooo much
This story was unique and amazing
I loved romi mihir and armaan in this story
Jealous raman was the highlight and I love the dialogues as they r bang on and another fact I love about this story is u update really fast so readers don't loose interest
I loved this part with raman and his super amazing dialogues
Ishita was no less and they suited their onscreen characters totally

The precap sounds very interesting and please update very soon
Once again I would say " VERY NICE story"
Keep up the good work :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Posting thanks for all the comments separately now!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raavan kumar tho romantic shameless kumar nikala..Mazza aagaya
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Awesome ... Lovely update...


Thanks😊 glad u liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

First of all thanks for all the updates.It was so long n I like it when its long though I can understand the effort U have to put.All updates were really nice.Horror movie really?only raman can take his lady love to watch this but bande ne dimag sahi jagah lagai.Usko kauna sa movie dekhna tha,aur jo chaiye tha wo to mil hi gaya.haina?His blushing Aawww!secondly,romi's dailogue when he said how he had rejected their plans was sweet too.Ishita suggesting to walk was too adorable n finally farmhouse scene kise pasand nahi aya hoga.so,overall it was good.


Thank you so much for reading so patiently and then even commenting on each part u liked!! thank you so very much! Thanks!

hahaha
exactly ramna ko movie thodi Ishi chaheye thi!

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