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Posted: 11 years ago

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dikh raha hai...kya kar diya...aadhi thread kha gaye tum log!!!

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dikh raha hai...kya kar diya...aadhi thread kha gaye tum log!!!

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HERE'S THE NEXT PART WITHOUT MUCH DELAY...OKAY FINE DELAYED SOMEWHAT!!

OH GOD!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I HAVE WRITTEN THAT...WELL YOU'LL GET TO KNOW WHEN YOU READ THE FIRST PART...AND IF YOU DON'T LIKE THIS ONE...PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!

ENOUGH OF THE BLABBERING...HERE COMES THE SURPRISE+TWIST!!!

AND THERE'S A CONVERSATION BETWEEN ASAD AND ZOYA'S HEARTS...THEY ARE DEPICTED AS AH AND ZH RESPECTIVELY...DON'T GET CONFUSED...

AND PLEASE SWITCH ON THE VOLUME OF YOUR DEVICE...😳

PART 14: THE TRAP...

BANNER CREDIT- Immortallove😊

SIX MONTHS LATER:

"Anjum!! Anjum...baby stop!!!" a woman was shouting and searching the backyard for this naughty girl in question. She had just started walking and thus each day she created havoc for her parents as well as others in the house.

"Anjum!! Where are you baby??" woman cooed, not paying heed that the girl has quietly sneaked back into the house, laughing to herself on fooling the elder lady.

Suddenly, she felt a pair of arms grabbing her from behind and nuzzling into her neck. She gasped in shock but then immediately recognized the culprit as her husband.

"Azaad!! What the hell are you doing?? You scared me to death!! She shrieked.

"What?? I am just romancing my lovely wife..." Azaad said kissing her earlobe while she turned around and smacked his arm.

"We are in the backyard if you have noticed... and anyone can see us!!"

"I am loving my wife...let the world go to hell!!" Azaad grabbed Humi's arms and put it around his neck...taking her for a passionate, soul-searing kiss. Humi gave in easily. What they didn't notice was a pair of eyes which were curiously gazing at them.

They broke apart after a few seconds and Humi hugged him tight...blushing as the after-effect of their kiss...the smile...never leaving her face. She and Azaad got married recently, just four months back, after Anjum's birth (Najma and Imraan's daughter). Her monthly visits to Zoya in the rehab, made her familiar with Azaad and swiftly, without even acknowledging they fell in love. Zoya noticed these two stealing glances, once when they were discussing about Asad and without any delay went to talk to Haseena about them...to which she obviously consented to in a blink of her eyes.

Asad walked dazed towards his house. Yes! Zoya had convinced Azaad to let Asad move into with her into the staff quarter for his better improvement. She had to be trusted upon and so Azaad gave in...and he himself lived just behind Zoya's quarter...available in any case of trouble.

Asad remembered what the doctor and evil Humi were doing just now and his mind contemplated how happy Humi was when Azaad had kissed him. He had become very close to Zoya in these two years...Two years have passed since they got married. Surely, they weren't the normal couple like people dream to be while marrying...but they were something beyond. Their relation was not just love and lust...it was something very pure...like an two innocent souls bound together. Zoya had recognized her feelings a long time back but Asad, at that time was not in the state to pay heed to all these things. So, forgetting her own desires, Zoya started caring for him and putting her efforts towards making him alright...making him a man who can love her back with as much fervor as she does!!

Asad, on the other hand, looked as Zoya as his angel. He wanted her to be with him forever...her smiles made him happy and her tears pierced his heart. His heart wanted to embrace her and hold her like that...but his mind was clouded by the thoughts of his loved ones being snatched away from him. His past was holding him back but what he was?? A man...troubled and sorrowful...but a man afterall!! Seeing the compassionate love sparkling between a couple had sent him into a frenzy.

He wondered whether Zoya will be happy if he did like that!!?? He halted...!! There was something that he felt deep inside...a feeling unknown to him...but very pure and exhilarating!! His heartbeats raced when he imagined Zoya hiding herself in his chest after...uhh...that!!

He walked in and found Zoya busy in wrapping something inside a colorful wrapper. Curious again (sigh!) he walked to her and was going to tap on her shoulder when something clicked in his mind.

Zoya was happily humming to herself while wrapping the gift for Asad. She had got all their happy moments put into an album and was planning to give him this for their second wedding anniversary. Somewhere inside, she wished that today should be the day when Asad should speak up to her...say her name in his husky voice...while boring deep inside her eyes. She was extremely happy that Asad had improved a lot in this one and half years but the only thing which was troublesome was that he didn't speak...neither to Zoya nor to anyone else. Azaad had always told Zoya that he had to battle his past...re-visit his memories...but for that, he had to speak up...release his troubled, repressed memories. Zoya looked up, asking Allah to bestow happiness on Asad.

She was about to move ahead when she felt something arresting her, grabbing her waist. She was about to scream when the musky scent engulfed her senses. "Asad!!??" she thought to herself.

As if this was not enough, Asad decided to play havoc with Zoya's senses today. She felt his shaky breath hitting her neck and slowly his lips lingered over there. Zoya shut her eyes, feeling as if she was going to collapse anytime soon. Asad trailed feathery kisses from her neck to her ears. Zoya drowned endlessly into her passion...for Asad!! She turned around and wound her arms around his neck. Asad grinned from ear to ear... "Zoya knows what to do!!??" he excitedly thought, remembering the events that took place between Azaad and Humeira few minutes back.

Zoya opened her eyes and looked at Asad. She was blown away by the ample of passion that she saw in his eyes. He was as much affected by this proximity as she was. But what propelled him to do so!!?? She was shivering at the thought of what was to come next...when she saw Asad looking down, blushing just like her. Zoya followed his gaze and the colour on her cheeks intensified when she noticed what had held his gaze.

Asad was moving forwards, noticing the emotions playing on Zoya's face. His face was just an inch away when he halted...his eyes traced the beauty of his wife...in an ardent manner for the first time. His insides melted on seeing her innocence combined with her physical beauty. He wanted to talk but his heart stopped him...he just kept looking at the girl in his arms, which he had never noticed closely before. He was blown away by the intensity of his own feelings...the sensations that he felt were alien to him but he liked them. He again looked at Zoya...her closed eyes and her flittering lips served as an invitation for him and without giving a second thought, he placed his warm pair of lips on hers. He felt like he was exploding somewhere south when he felt her for the first time. He sighed and closed his eyes...letting the feeling consume him.

Zoya let her fingers move recklessly into his hairs. He was kissing her!? Her!?? And Kissing!!?? When did this happen...she never experienced such tension between them. He was moving softly over her lips and she had no choice but to go on with him...not that she wished for something else. She was asking God for letting him speak and here he was expressing his desires in the most primitive way...her eyes showered tears of happiness. The best anniversary gift she could have asked for!! She pulled him closer and kissed her with whatever she had within her.

Asad and Zoya parted after exhausting themselves in the kiss...their first kiss...symbol of their feelings and the love that they had in them for each other...

They joined their foreheads together and Asad noticed the tiny tear-drops glistening on Zoya's face. He wiped her tears and as if recognizing her unsaid happiness on sealing their love with this kiss, he hugged her tightly. Zoya hugged him back and pushed herself more into him while blushing off as a new bride.

Their hearts, lying in close proximity to each other, started a conversation of their own...

{ZH: Asad...}

[AH: Hmmm...]

{ZH: I love you...}

[AH: Love? ]

{ZH: The feeling that binds us together...}

[AH: You confuse me Zoya!!]

{ZH: I want to be with you forever...}

[AH: Love means living together...forever??]

{ZH: Yes! And much more...}

[AH: Like feeling the urge to make you happy and seeing you smile always...]

{ZH: Hmm...}

[AH: And feeling elated to hold you like this...]

{ZH: *fluttering*}

[AH: Then I love you too!!]

{ZH: Why did you take this much time?}

[AH: Because I was downed in the sorrows of my own...you came and stirred something in me. When you left, I died again...but now...I am complete...beating for you...with you...again!!]

Asad and Zoya's hearts kept beating in sync...murmuring to each other while their owners though unaware of this conversation, felt so much at ease. They just tightened their hold on each other and reveled in the closeness that they shared for the first time.

Dilshad became teary eyed when she noticed them hugging from outside. She was just coming to call them for a little family get-together that they had surprisingly planned for Asya at Humeira's house with Najma-Imraan and Haseena. She sent a quick prayer to Allah to keep her children safe and sound.

She was feeling a bit guilty for hiding such a big decision that she had taken for Asad.

FEW DAYS BACK:

SANTA CRUZ POLICE STATION, MUMBAI

A lawyer was sitting and waiting for his clients to come out. He was here for their bail.

He turned around on hearing foot-steps and saw that the man and woman both were staring at him in confusion. He smiled and let them complete the other formalities. Once outside, he was about to sit in his car and go away when his so-called clients stopped him.

"Who are you? Who sent you for us?" the man asked.

"Sorry! I can't reveal the name...maybe your well-wisher!! I will take your leave now. GOOD LUCK MR. AND MRS. KHAN!!"

Seeing him off, Rashid and Shireen sighed in relief and once again their evil smirks were back. Their crimes had not been proved till now and hence they were sure that police can't arrest them again anytime soon.

"Rashid! It's the time you send your son to his mother...poor boy!! He misses his Ammi so much!!"

Rashid laughed hard on his wife's fake concern for Asad. "Sure dear! Let us talk to our people...they would have tracked him till now."

They hailed a cab and zoomed off to the Khan Villa to set their plan in action.

SAME DAY, EVENING:

Rashid and Shireen easily got to know that Asad and Zoya were in Shimla. Where?? Not a big deal to find out!! So they decided to move towards the city and once there, they'll again use their network to search them amongst the crowd. Influential people!! What a waste of their power in doing something that is truly disgusting.

With a motive of killing Asad in mind, the murderers set off towards their target...just one thing in their heads!! Revenge and finishing the game that Zoya started...

SHIMLA:

Unaware of the happenings in Mumbai, Asad and Zoya were busy in their eyelocks...celebrating their second wedding anniversary with great enthusiasm. Zoya's smile reached her eyes today and everyone noticed that. She was revolving around Asad but whenever he looked it her direction, she blushed and lowered her gaze. Humi was finding this exchange amusing... How her brave Zoya had became so coy. Asad, on the other hand, had eyes for his wife only today. He was admiring each and every of her move, any emotion flickering on her face didn't escape his eyes. He silently thanked his doctor in his heart, as he was the one, after seeing whom with his wife, he made Zoya so happy.

Suddenly Humeira announced that it was the time for dinner. Everyone sat down when Zoya reached the dining table with Asad. Humi came from behind and pointed at the couch where she'd arranged for their dinner...face to face with each other.

She grabbed Zoya's hand and led Asya towards the couch.

"Come On Zoya! Feed him from your hands...at least for today!!!"

Zoya nodded in a no while others cheered for them. After much pestering from Humi's side, she gave in and put a morsel in Asad's mouth which he gladly accepted.

"Jeeju's turn now!!" Humi clapped.

"Humi! No...he won't like all this...you just let it be." Zoya chided her in a friendly manner but Asad was like having plans to surprise her all day. He brought forwards his hand and with his free hand held her chin in place. She opened her mouth as if dazed. He fed her lovingly while all of them clapped and smiled at this so- much- in- love couple. They further sat there, feeding each other with their hands on Humi's insistence. Azaad clicked pics while Humeira was trying to pacify a squealing Anjum...who was very excited to meet his Asad Maamu after so long.

Asad got up in between and lifted her up in his arms...quietly he walked back to his seat and sat with her on his lap, while Zoya looked at the duo in awe.

After finishing dinner, the family members sat and talked for a while, catching up for the lost time. Asad sat patiently for a while but then began getting distressed. Zoya noticed that and suddenly realized that it is way past his sleeping time. She got up when Dilshad stopped and told her that she will drop Asad and tuck him in. Zoya easily let her do so.

It took Dilshad merely few minutes to make Asad comfortable in his room. Wishing him goodnight, she walked towards the front door and called someone...

"Hmmm...okay. Ten minutes!! Fine..."

She waited for few minutes and then saw a car coming towards the house. She again called someone, "Mission has started...inform others!!" Then she came out closing the doors, asking God to forgive her for this.

"Look!! Who's here!!?? Dilshad!! Surprised to see us?? Well, no more hide and seek...we are here to claim what is ours..." Rashid and Shireen were now standing face to face with Dilshad and smirking at seeing her pathetic condition.

"Allah keeps eyes over his children...I know he won't let you harm my Asad." She bravely retorted while Rashid's eyes blazed with fury.

"God!! Allah!! HaHahaaa...Where was your god when I killed Zainub?? Where was he?? Are you sure he's coming to save you're a-s-a-d...appointment taken?? He is not coming...Not coming!! Understand?? I will finish this game forever...I am going to kill Asad...and no one...NO ONE can stop me this time...not you...not your Allah!!!" Rashid was speaking in a menacing tone, his face looking like some primitive devil.

Shireen finally pushed dilshad away and walked past her into the house. Dilshad kept lying down and messaged someone. Her head had been bruised due to hitting the floor but she didn't care. Her eyes turned misty thinking of what was about to come.

Asad was lying peacefully thinking about his romantic encounter with Zoya. It was as if his eyes were trained to see only that image when he saw his Zoya in a new light for the first time. He grinned and finally closed his eyes to let himself be taken into the lap of enchanting dreams...where he and Zoya will be together...no one to part them...just him and Zoya!!

He heard a loud banging of the door and sat on his bed, startled by the voice. Zoya never does that. His forehead got wet by sweat-beads and he panicked. On his full-alert mode, he tried getting up but due to his anxiousness, stumbled a few steps. His lips quivered to call out for Zoya but any voice didn't come out of his voice-box when he saw his fears...his past...once again in front of his eyes.

He tried shouting for help but like his lips were sealed. He whipped his head here and there...going backwards to grab whatever he can...but they didn't stop...those killers...he saw his Ammi being stabbed and her blood curdling scream resonated in his ears. He had no control over the tears that flew down from his eyes. He grabbed a plastic box kept at the side table and threw at them, wishing that it was his nightmare and they would vanish...but no, they were here this time, for him...he tried throwing whatever he could grab at them but Rashid came forward and snatched whatever he was holding.

"Tch Tch Tch...didn't your Khala and Zoya taught you how to behave?? Turned a bad...bad boy...right Asad??"

Shireen too spoke up, "What should we do now Rashid?? Punish him??"

Rashid rolled his eyes while chiding her, "Punish!!?? No...he is my son...he deserves special treatment...let's take him to his Ammi!! Kyun Asad??" he asked mockingly.

Asad looked for Zoya...somewhere deep inside, he knew that his angel will come for him. But then he heard his Ammi's name and his fear exaggerated manifolds. He nodded his head in a no vigorously. But they were not the persons to give in...they grabbed Asad and Rashid tied his handkerchief on Asad's mouth to subdue his voice and together he and shireen started dragging him outside.

"Fast Shireen! That Dilshad must have gone to inform others..."

They pushed Asad into the car and drove off. Dilshad came out of her hiding and looked at the rear of the moving vehicle...and she broke down, "Forgive me Allah...forgive me!!! Just let him be safe!!" Then, without wasting a second, she ran towards Humeira's house to inform others of Asad being kidnapped.

Zoya was laughing on some silly joke that Humi cracked when she heard Dilshad's panicked voice. All of them got up and rushed towards her. Seeing her frantic condition, Zoya skipped a heartbeat... "ASAD!!" the name escaped from her mouth.

Dilshad guiltily looked at Zoya when the dam of Zoya's patience broke, "Kahan hain Asad?? Khala, kya hua? Aap iss tarah?? Where is Asad...my Asad..." she got up and started moving towards the door.

"They took him away..."Dilshad spoke.

"Took him away?? Who?? Where?" Zoya asked annoyingly, she glared at a numb Dilshad as she was taking a long time to speak up. Hearing no reply from her side, she again ran towards the door...when she heard those names which made her stop dead in her tracks...

"Rashid...Shi-ireen..." Dilshad announced finally. Others gasped while for Zoya her world collapsed. What had been such a beautiful day for her so far, she never imagined it to end like this...

She slumped down on the cold floor...her hand holding her wildly beating heart...while her eyes watered endlessly.

"Zoya, nothing will happen...Don't worry...Imraan Bhai is here...he'll find out where they are!!" Humi shook her by her shoulders to bring her in her senses.

Zoya wiped her tears and her eyes blazed with fury...she got up and promised to herself loudly...

"Asad...I am coming...I won't let any evil cast eyes upon you. Watch out this time, Rashid and Shireen!! I will take revenge of Ammi's death and my Asad's condition!!"

SO??? HOW WAS IT?? DID YOU ALL LIKE THE SURPRISE MORE OR THE TWIST??

TELL ME HOW IT WAS? WAITING FOR YOUR REVIEWS...

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NEXT PART: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110154799

Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago
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It was an AMAZING Update...



I loved the TWIST...😛

ASYA Romance was ...







I loved the heart to heart conversation of ASYA....

Really CUTE....



I felt bad for ASAD when Rashid took him away But is happy that we can see a Lioness roar...

CHOTTU MY RABBIT...


Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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I am the first to res...😉 ...I love u my Rabbit...🤗
Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update dear 👏 👏
Beautifully written 8
So humi married. .
My asad is so cute
He wants to make zoya happy 😳 😳
Aww..asad hugged her from back and kissed her neck 😳
Omg they kissed 😳 god it was unexpected 😲
How zoya must be feeling
Loved their heart to heart convo..so beautiful. .
Those chepos are back 😡 😡
Why dilshad is doing this 😭 she surely has a reason 😭
I want to kill those bas***d 😡
My poor asya how much they gonna suffer now 😭
Plzz dont let anything happened to asad..
Update soon .
This is for giving us an fantastic update srash..
Loved it 🤗❤️
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Mindblowing update⭐️
Loved it...
Superb!!
Suprise nd twist borh were awsum...
Woww...humi got married...
Unexpected kiss...never thought abt dis...😳
But it was fabulous...
Beautifully written...👏
Loved evry line of the update
Wonderful anniversary...superb gift given by asad..😳
So dilshad is the one who got bailed for rashid nd shireen...she told them abt asad...
But her intentions were good...
Hope asad is safe thr till zoya reches thr...
⭐️Superb update!!
Cant wait for next part...
Continue soon
Edited by fifi1297 - 11 years ago
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unres...
it was too good JD...
wt u really call a surprise n a twist...
humi ki shaadi krdi...
na card mila na daawat... iska badla to mai lungi...
bt thn bcz of her n azaads hanky panky hame AsYa first kiss mili... ummm... so badla cancel...
wonderful anniversary for AsYa...
coming to dilshad... she is the one who got shireen n rashid bailed out... gave them asads whereabouts... n let them take asad away... BUT ALL DONE WITH GOOD INTENTION TOWARDS ASAD ...
she wants to allay asads fears n for that she found no better way than this...
i hope her act doesnt backfire n asad is safe til zoya reaches him...
p.s... usually in every fiction asad saves zoya yaha for a change ulta hai...
waiting for more...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago

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