FF ~*~ Hum Saath-Saath Hain ~~ THE END (Pg 150)

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Such a beautiful update...well narrated...👏

Super plan by Jaya and was well executed...👍🏼

btw..jaya karthik ah konjam over ah thaan kalaaichute irukaa...😒

K mom too smart... KJ & co oda thiruttu thanatha smell pannitanga...😉😆

enjoyed reading a wonderful reunion..:)

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: shiningstar77
jaya appa appa karthicka tease pannadhu sema 😆

Originally posted by: muthucheenu
One thing is rather sounding funny, that is, Jaya not trusting Karthik with these responsibilities :-( Why do you do this to our hero?

Originally posted by: sathya87
btw..jaya karthik ah konjam over ah thaan kalaaichute irukaa...😒

from your comments... I cud see you ppl are feeling for Karthik being kalaaichified...

so.. enna pannalaam... ?? okay... coming chapters la deal pannalaam... Jaya ku punishment / penalty kuduthidalaam... 😃

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Lily Padawattar

@plily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Super update Ramya sis. Jaya , Karthik & Simi plan to bring Jo & Vetri together worked out beautifully . But Karthik portion is very small pa. Simi is very good in handling the situation like Jaya. What next Ramya sis . It is Prem & Preethi , Simi & Hari , Krish & Angel or new track. Whatever track your update is always super. Thanks for pm sis (I'm late this time). Sorry pa.

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

from your comments... I cud see you ppl are feeling for Karthik being kalaaichified...

so.. enna pannalaam... ?? okay... coming chapters la deal pannalaam... Jaya ku punishment / penalty kuduthidalaam... 😃

tit for tat 😉😆

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Part 39:

Next Day : Sunday

Whole family goes to the temple as their prayers for Jothika's life has been heard and to thank the God.

Vetri and Jothika stands next to each other and pray..

Aachi : thambi.. enga Jo ku kungumam vachividunga...

K Dad : ennappaa thayangura..

K Mom : chummaa vachi viduppaa...

Vetri : sari maa...

K Mom : small correction... sari athai nu sollanum...

Vetri does what the elders say and Jo blushes as others were teasing her...

Aachi : apparam thambi... unga appaa ammaa kitta naanga pesanumaa... ?

Vetri face changes on hearing that.. even Karthik and his parents also become sad...

K Mom : adhellaam prachanai illa... avanga kitta sonnaa podhum...

As the day ends, everyone leaves to their own place...

Monday @ Office :

Simi notices Hari standing in the veranda..

Simi : enna Hari.. ? thanimaiyile inimai ?

Hari : adhellaam onnum illa...

Simi : apparam vera enna.. ?

Hari : just chummaa dhaan... then.. rendu naal romba busy pola.. ?

Simi : aamaa... eppadi kandupidicha.. ?

Hari : madam mobile pakkame varala pola..?

Simi : OMG... naan adha marandhe poiyitten... actual la bangalore la poi.. orey oru dhadava dhaan velila eduthen... ippakooda paaru... eduthuttu varala... shhh..

Hari : appadi enna avlo busy ?

Simi : solren solren... sari... nee call pannirundhiyaa ?

Hari : hmmm... mobile la missed calls ah check pannu...

Simi : enna vishayam... ?

Hari : adhu vandhu...

Simi : come on... sollu...

Hari : I... missed you...

Simi : just 2 days dhaane... ?

But before he could answer, her teammate who passed by informs her that TL was looking for her. Simi excuses herself to meet the Lead..

Hari is upset that he couldn't convey his feelings...

Friday :

All 3 Simi, Hari and Krish are on leave as its the first day of their Art & Photography exhition.

They were busy with final arangements and as the chief guests arrive on time, it is opened for public viewing...

Vish : enna idhu... koottam kammiyaa irukku... ?

Laksh : dei... ippodhaane start aayirukku... ellaam varuvaanga... and moreover weekends konjam adhigamaa irukkum... so tomorrow and day after tomorrow nalla response irukkum...

Vish : ok ok...

Laksh : konja neram un thiruvaaya moodittu iru...

Vish : enna nee... ? Karthik solra dialogue ah nee solra...

By that time Hari comes there...

Hari : Dad... two-wheeler onnu venum...

Vish : indha neram enga pogappora..?

Hari : Manager call pannirundhaaru... yedho important ah pesanumaam..

Vish : inga needhaan showman... visitors might ask for the photographers...

Hari : just 1 hour dhaan...I'll be back soon... moreover lunch time dhaane...

Vish : sari ok... un bike veetla irukku la... wait... Karthik oda bike key vaangi tharren...

Hari enters office and informs the security and waits in the reception area as he did not bring the ID card... Manager messages him that he is out for lunch with Unit head which he could not avoid and he is on the way back... and he needs to wait for somemore time...

He notices someone talking with security and confirms it to be his classmate 'Navin'. He comes and sits in the chair which was facing the other side where Hari was seated.. He did not notice him...

Hari : (thinks) ivan edhukku inga vandhirukkaan...

While he was thinking, he sees Rahul at a distance talking on phone coming towards him... Rahul also didn't notice Hari and he welcomes his friend with smile... He cuts the phone angrily and turns towrads his friend..

Navin : yennadaa... ivlo kaduppaa irukka... ? phone la yaaru ?

Rahul : vera yaaru... ? Leena dhaan...

Navin : naandhaan appove sonnen la... ava romba danger nu...

Rahul : ava eppadi venaa irukkattum... ennamo ava solradha mattum naan ketkkanumaam... naana oru vishayam pannirukken... adha sonnaa... yen pannen nu question panraa da...

Navin : dei... nee yendaa ippadi maari pona.. ?

Rahul : unakku theriyaadhaa ?

Navin : sari... ippa edhukku enna immediate ah vara sonna.. ?

Rahul : adha pathi dhaandaa pesanum... actually la thaana oru opportunity vandhadhu... adha use panni... oru plan execute pannen...

He openly talks in the reception area itself as none of the concerned person are in office that day.. but he doesn't knew that Hari was sitting just behind them...

Navin : enna KD thanam daa panna.. ?

Rahul : KD thanam dhaan... kelu... enna pannen nu...

andha Leena Krish oda breakup aanadhukku reason Simi dhaane... but avangalukkula just friendship dhaan...

Navin : adhaan theriyume daa...

Rahul : aanaa innoruthan... avana maadhiriye... I mean twin brother Hari.. avanum inga dhaan work panraan...

Navin : oh..

Rahul : avanukku Simi mela oru idhu... I mean love...

adha nerla sollaama... Sir card la propose panna.. kavidhai ezhudhi... book la vachirukkaan...

en nalla neram... andha book enkitta kedachadhu...

actual ah... he passed on the book to my team mate only.. avalukku call vandhichu nu... enna Simi table la vaikka sonnaa...

Simi meeting la irundhaa... I noticed that card and read it... paravaala... payyan nallaadhaan ezhudhirundhaan...

appo... suddenly I got an idea...

andha card la ... keezha avan sign pannirundha idatha... cut pannitten... koodave... oru slip la note ezhuthi vachitten...

Navin : ennadaa ezhudhina ?

Rahul : ennoda peru pottadhaala... eppadiyum reject pannuvaa nu... pidikkalanaalum... badhil kavidhai ezhudhi tharra sonnen... adhaivaayadhu nyaabagamaa vachikkuven...

avalum... adhe card la... reply pannirundhaa...

so... again same book la vachi Hari kitta deliver panniyaachu..

idhula irundhe purinjirukkume... enna nadandhirukkum nu...

apparam andha Hari yoda moonja paakanum... bulb ananju pochu...

Navin : dei... avanga dhaan orey veetla irukkaangale... eppadi pesikka maattaanga nu nenaikkura..?

Rahul : appadi straight ah pesuravanaa irundhaa... nerla ye propose panniruppaane... ivan pesuvaan nu thonala... engirundhaalum vaazhga nu pazhaya paattu paadittu iruppaan...

Navin : so... idha romba perumai yaa .. Leena kitta solluruppa...

Rahul : aamaandaa... Madam dhaan gang leader maadhiri yum... naanga ellaam sondhamaa yedhuvum seiyya koodaadhu maadhiryum... over ah pesuraa...

Navin : (thinks)

Rahul : ennadaa...unna paarthaa... ippa naan sonnadha... ava kitta sollalaamaa nu yosikkira maadhiri theriyudhu...

Navin : thonudhu dhaan... but enna seiyya... ? nee en friend ah poyittaye... adhanaala vaaya moodittu irukken...

Rahul : thanks da machaan...

Navin : idha solladhaan avasaramaa kooppittiyaa... ? phone la ye sollirukka laam la...

Rahul : dei... idha celebrate panna... unakku treat tharra poren... we are going out for lunch... vaa polaam...

He pulls him outside...

Hari : (mind voice) idhaan matter ah.. ? paravaalla... innaikku office ku vandhadhu nalladhaa pochu...

By that time, his manager enters the office and takes him inside.

--- to be continued...

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Dear Ramy, Great, I love the way you move the story forward quite slowly, narrating appropriate emotions from the character's perspective and the opponent's perspective. This makes it very easy for us to get into and travel with the story. The way you clarify open questions from the past, very interesting! Really looking forward. 👏

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Priya

@JPriyaK

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Another Crystal Clear update from you... Excellent Ramy...

With this I guess that Hari will further propose to Simi directly😳

and soon we can expect the patch of Hari - Simi ❤️

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Devi

@Devino

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Neat update ramya...👏

Appo Hari proposal koodiya viraivil yedhir paarkalama???? 😳

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Super ma... Now Hari knows the complete truth... Was there anything planned for to trouble simi?

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Lily Padawattar

@plily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Yeah my favorite pair Simi - Hari story. Very sweet update Ramya sis. Now the doubts is cleared so Hari can propose directly to Simi . Please update soon sis. Waiting

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