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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

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oops panchu.. dont tell it to anyone then😲😉..😆

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: riti4u
oops panchu.. dont tell it to anyone then😲😉..😆

How will I hide the shame Sasu maa..this is too much 😡 u wanna be Panchaali's sautan!!!don't u dare to..I tell u 😡

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: riti4u

Aww.. you really made me feel special...first you take rest ..take some medicine to feel better

Then your sasuma n ur sauten ji shud learn something from you, they dont read my OSs... You are my sweetheart🤗..will write soon promise...😃

I can't take rest due to huge ofc work.

.well my stomach is aching for ur update 😆

actually my hand is paining due to constant writing...I too am in a same job as Sayanee 😃

by the way Sautan ji's PC at home kaharap and she is a workaholic so doesn't come here..she did not even read my OS..

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Raghuji

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Riti dear,
Nice one, please keep going 😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Raghuji
Riti dear,
Nice one, please keep going 😊

Thanks dear.. will sure do😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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watinggg...😛

update sooon plzzz

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: panchaali
watinggg...😛
update sooon plzzz

😳will update soon as i promised .. just not feeling like working today... so probably doing now...😳😆

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: riti4u

😛😳will update soon as i promised .. just not feeling like working today... so probably doing now...😳😆

yeeyyy do it soon Sasu Maa 😃 and please do reveal more of your convo with your son...😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 3- As I was so engrossed in those moments... I didnt realise that it was already dark...Light coming out of him was making our surroundings more bright.. Suddenly he stopped..those moments of magic were over for me...I came out of the spell and realised that there was so much inside him.. Again he was in deep thinking..totally away from world where I was in... To just break this awkward silence surrounding us... I spoke again... "So you really are Karna.. I mean how you came here..Does anyone here notices you ..Do you have others from that yug along you... Where do you all live... I mean how do you survive this yug.. " I was firing questions one after another to him... It brought a smile on his face...and he looked at me... "I am always here... I was always here... and I will be too... Many people pass by each day.. Some do stop for while...Some just go without even looking here.. and those who stop..Just are not able to see me.. "

"Then how can I see you..." I was shocked to learn that... I mean okay I did wish at times that I wanted to meet him..but not in this scary way...I mean Does God really have to listen to your words when you dont mean it literally... I was shaking with fear..Was he just my illusion.. or a ghost ..from centuries ago..

"You can see me as you turned back.. You wished it right..." He looked at me with a smile back at those lips...

"I dont know whats happening.. but I have so much to ask you...thats why I turned back... in a hope.."

"Ask me anything Riti.." He replied in his soft whispering voice..

"You know my name... "I was shocked to learn that..and most probably to hear my name.. from his mouth.. He said my name...( Ohkay Riti back to the scene)

"Yes I do.." His smile had turned mischievious..giving me a doubt that probably this was all set up to fool me... but then there was something in his eyes..speaking to me.. as if wanting to tell me all those hidden secrets in his hearts which noone could ever understand...

"Why are you so sad...I mean it hurts me to see you like this... Is there anything I can do for you.. I hate to see people around me like this... Come on tell me.. Whatever you want...I really dont know if this is my nightmare or my most cherished dream..All I know is that may be this chance I will never get again...So please say it all... " As usual I say most of things in hurry without letting other a chance to say... Probably this was going to be long one.. and surprisingly with him being on my side...all my fears of being in totally strange place alone had gone away...

Will be continuing Shortly...😳😉

( sorry for short update - you know these managers make your work life hell, will surely update and finish this )

Edited by riti4u - 11 years ago

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panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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ooops so Arya did scare you Sasu maa😆

again a wonderful update👍🏼

loved every dialogues of Karna

all were so unique

specially this one

"I am always here... I was always here... and I will be too... Many people pass by each day.. Some do stop for while...Some just go without even looking here.. and those who stop..Just are not able to see me.. "

and this dialogue toh dream come true😊

"You can see me as you turned back.. You wished it right..." He looked at me with a smile back at those lips...

come on I too wish to see him, why don't he appears before me!!!😭

I know how the managers are, anyway update soon, watinggg 😃

Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago