A One Man Army ||~Season 2~|| - Page 41

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

I swear I didn't find Taani in it :/

I will love that side😉

Oh come on...ten why would that meeting feel awkward🤢

Y laughing o.O

He is definitely a badass😆

Comedy is my forte😲

I have no clue about it...though my sense of humor is good..which is sort of genetic😉

You're welcome🤗

Now UPDATE😛

They mystry of taani is yet to be solved 😆
U will know later y it was awkward
N laughing cause i didnt think him as bada** but u always come up wd such names ;)
Yup it is some updates of CC were hilarious
Patience woman patience *yawn*

Originally posted by: deboleena.manna

Awesome..👏.loved the update..thanks for updating..it just great...but you used Taani twice in Ella's place..😆..I guess ur Taani fan from D3..😉

well love it how the story progress..and Ryan already started to feel for Ella...and I know where it's going...☺️...and now the Villain is here..Kyle..so he will bring them close..😉...and for the kiss scene..loved it how you describe the whole scene umm KISS in details...wow..☺️😳...and for the precap..well all the heroines r same..they will do what the hero asked them not to do..😆..go out alone...fall in danger..Villain will kidnapped her and then try to do something and just then our Hero will appear..and save the girl...like a BOSS..😎...

well I hope I didn't spoil anything..🤣

Thanks a lot
Really twice 😲 sowwwy about that 😳
Actually i write on taani and rey n swaron too so thats y such blunders happen sometimes
Yeah he started feeling something
N lol definitely heroines does what they r asked not to do
Lets see how much ur guess is right 😉

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Stop yawning and update😡

😳

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am back with a comment for Chapter 2😆</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I know I am quite late, sorry for that😳</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ryan's POV was interesting👏</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">After reading the action sequence, I want to give you a name. And that is "Action Queen" because you are too good in writing such stuff👏</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Felt bad for Spike😔</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"I want another set." I love this guy because of his attitude❤️😳</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She ran away thinking he didn't notice her😆😆</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ella's POV was good as well as sad😔</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"I can't die not just yet. I have to find Ev and until then no dying for sure." Her strength deserves a standing ovation for sure👏👏</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She was robbed by the goons🤢</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Poor girl</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She slept in the corner of the street😭</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I felt like crying after reading this part😭</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This is not acceptable at all</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Small tears roll down my eyes remembering the moments when Ev would treat me like princess and forcefully feed me when I would be late for my classes and would want to skip breakfast. Today I realized the importance of breakfast and having a big brother who would always be there to protect you. Sometimes his over protectiveness would irritate me but right now I would give anything to be treated like that by Ev." This is the best paragraph of this update👏I was on theverge of crying😭And this paragraph clearly shows that we always realize thevalueof our loved ones when they are not with us😒😔</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And then the Unknown POV😕</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I can only say, confusion, confusion and confusion😕</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Over all, Fabulous update👏</font>

Lol finally 😆
Its ok dear
Aww thanks for the name <3
Lol yeah another set 😉
Yup poor her 1st running from ryan n then robbed
Aww dont start crying YET if u know what i mean 😛
Yup true u understand ones worth when they r gone
Lol yeah thats the plan confusion n only confusion 😆
Thanks a lot :*

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Aww Ryan is so rude to poor Ella lol
I like when he call her kitty, it sound good ;)
Ella feeling defeated on not finding Evan was sad
I like how Ryan assured her he will always help her to find Evan
Ella and Ryan at the bakery shop was nice
Poor Ella she is so hungry lol
Hmm... That jerk eyeing Ella was creepy
OMG! Ryan kissing Ella was awesome
Superb update, love it

Lol i m glad u liked his nickname for ella ;)
Yup finally they teamed up
I m glad u liked the bakery scene n their kiss
Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Hemangi5

Excellent writing, gripping story, thrilling suspense.😊 Intelligent blending of romance, a but natural scenario as opposites attract moreso when the guy is supporting her in her endeavour.. You are a good novelist. Looking forward for next update. Seems you are a voracious reader and an avid writer😊

Wow thanks for the praise ❤️
It means a lot 😃

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Wohoo! Gosh I was glued to screen all throughout!⭐️What an update!👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Before I comment lemme do some dancing... dance out of immense joy!😃</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Now coming to the update!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Classy!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Do you know how badly am falling for Ryan?☺️☺️☺️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Today's update he is the Hero! He stole the show! </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">His way of feeding her..gosh.. can anything be more sweet?😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">As I was reading even I craved for pastry! (off topic) choco fudge my fav one!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">No matter how much bad boy he is, in the end he is a sweetheart!😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I just love him! ❤️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And now, why he don't want her to find Ev!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Ev and Ryan has got something to do!😕</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Has something happened to Ev and does he knows that?😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Lots of questions popping up in mind! His confusion..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">He wants to help her yet he don't want to let her know about Ev!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Story needs to unfold!!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And today he said about his Rocky side ! The Beast wala side! .. What would have happened to him, his story!!! Am so eager to know about his life... His past.. what made Ryan Rocky..Lots to unfold! ..I believe something terrible has happened to him.. But what is that..(questions..questions..questions..my brain is on work)😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">He is genuinely concerned for El and somewhere deep in heart has even thought her to be his!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Bdw.. i love him calling her Kitty!😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And now about My El!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I feel so sad for her..😭Her pain...her fears..in finding Ev! It aches!😭</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">But she is way too strong to get crushed down!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I admire her determination!😎</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">She too somewhere likes Ryan.. she is not much bothered about the way he talks to her, his flirting, his kissing.. yeah once kiss breaks, she gets angry.. yet deep inside she likes him!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">And Ryan..needs to control on his hormones😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">I love El and Ryan together a lot!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Ryan's fear when Kyle spotted El! His concern! He is awesomeee❤️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Can I give him a hug? 🤗</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">Am so smitten by him.. that am only talking about him in this reply!☺️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">super uber super update...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">update sooon!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#666666">PS: I guess twice instead of El you used taani and once instead of following you used falling..😊</font>

Awww thanks a lot dear
Haw 😲 u cant fall for ryan ella ka kya hoga?? O.o
Lol dont worry next update mein he will b villain pakka 😛
Lol definitely off topic here n mine too though ;)
Lets see if they both r connected somehow or not 😛
Lol too many questions 😆
Will hv to wait for a while for ryans story to unfold
Lol yeah she is strong
N maybe she does like him too n maybe not
Definitely he needs to get them in check silly hormones 🤣
Lol yup i can see the obsession here 😛
Ask ella she will let u hug her eyan 😉
PS : u r third person saying about taani SIGH 😳 sowwy will try to review better next time :)
Thank u so much for the lovely comment ❤️

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