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Posted: 11 years ago
please update the next part...
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Its long...me waiting. when will you update...??
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Hello guys.. First of all sorry for this late update but I was really busy. N m really thankful to u guys for waiting patiently for my next update.. I dint reply individually coz of time limit but I read every comment nad each of u r precious to me. A big hug to all of u 🤗

Now my usual rant.. M back in Delhi.. n hating this summer. Everyone warned me about Delhi ki sardi but what about it's garmi.. No one mentioned that. Ooo.. Too hot!!

Neways back to the update.. Giving u part 25th. Again written very quickly so sorry for all the mistakes.. This part is very simple as i just wanted to give base for next part.. Promise to give u some dhamakedar revelations in next part..Sorry for same precap.😉 Will try to give double update today. Not promising though.

Midnight @Oberoi Mansion

Kalpi opens her eyes.. She doesn't know when she felt asleep while thinking about Raghav.. She sees around and realizes that she is sleeping in Roshni's lap. Roshni is sleeping while sitting. Kalpi looks at her lovingly..

Kalpi(to herself) : Finally I got what I was missing in my life.. A mother. So many nights I have spent in hostel carving for my ayi's lap. So many times I have felt ill but no one was around me to take my care.. Only a warden who was doing her duty. This small injury has made me realize that I am not alone now.. Someone feels my pain too.. Someone is there to understand my silence. I wish I too could do something for this maa.

She looks around and sees Payal sleeping on the other side of the bed.She gets up from Roshni's lap.. Roshni feels the movement and she too gets up.. Kalpi tells her to go and sleep in her room.

Roshni : R u sure?? If u want I can stay here.

Kalpi : No maa.. I am fine now. I have decided not to look back. Raghav or Pakhi doesn't affect me anymore. You don't worry. You just sleep.

Roshni : fine.. But if u need something than remember that m just a call away.

Kalpi : I know that. Now go.. else uncle will feel that m snatching u from him.

Roshni smiles and goes to her room.. Kalpi feels thirsty n looks at empty jug.. She somehow manages to pull her wheel chair and goes to the kitchen. Roy who was still awake sees her and follows her to the kitchen..

Roy : May I help u??

Kalpi : U dint sleep yet?? What r u doing in kitchen??

Roy : M feeling hungry. Saw u coming towards thr kitchen so thought to have something with u. Would u like to have something??

Kalpi : sure.. but what u have to offer??

Roy : Pasta.. From chef Roy's kitchen.

Kalpi : Sure.. but chef here u do not have any assistant.. U have to chop veggies alone.

Roy : Who needs assistant when u have such a pretty companion.

Kalpi blushes on hearing this.. This small small flirting is a part of their routine now.. She loves being with Roy. He makes her feel special without giving much efforts... with Roy she has started living more freely..Roy starts preparing pasta when Kalpi looks a cup on the shelf.. It is orange cup with cartoons on it.. She gets amused on seeing it.. Roy tells her that it is his cup.. His real mom gifted it on his 4th birthday.. It is his mom's memory so he doesn't want to remove it from the kitchen... Kalpi picks the cup and looks at sweetly... suddenly it starts raining and thundering.. Kalpi gets scared and drops the cup on the floor.. It gets broken into pieces.. Roy looks at it and rushes towards Kalpi..

Roy : R u fine??

Kalpi : Yep I am.. M so sorry.. ur cup!!

Roy : it's ok... not important than u. Hope u r not hurt. U just move aside.. Maid will clean it.

Kalpi : But that was precious for u.. M sorry. I am extremely sorry.

Roy : It's fine Kalpi.. It's a cup only.. It was just a gift.. My mom's memories are in my heart.. I don't really need any cup to remember her.

Kalpi remembers the day when she went to Raghav's place for party preparation and he scolded her for breaking a glass.. She looks at Roy who was hiding his pain so that Kalpi doesn't feel bad.

Kalpi(to herself) : how selfless someone can be.. I broke something very precious to him which he won't get again.. still he is worrying about me.. How can he love me so much..

Roy goes out to bring something when Kalpi picks all the pieces and puts them in a container... While picking them, she gets hurt but she doesn't care about it.. All that matters to her is Roy's happiness.. She sees Roy coming back and hides her finger.. Roy serves Pasta in two bowls.. Kalpi starts eating it with left hand when Roy asks her what's wrong.. Kalpi tries to hide her wound properly but Roy notices it and scolds Kalpi.. He takes out first aid box and start cleaning her wound.. Kalpi screams in pain.. Roy blows the wound to soothe the pain.. Kalpi stares at him and gets lost in his thoughts.. She forgets her pain and keep looking at him lovingly.. Payal who has came to the kitchen notices this and gives a knowing smile.

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Morning @chawl Mumbai..

Kamla is packing her bag...Vitthal is helping her. She is restless from the time Pakhi has told her

about Kalpi's injury. Vitthal has given her permission to go. Kalpi has tried to refuse her but vitthal gave her his oath and hence she has booked flight tickets for Kamla.. Kamla looks at ticket proudly..

Kamla : See Vitthal.. Our Kalpi has become memsaab.. She has sent this flight ticket for me.. I will fly now.. My daughter has fulfilled my dreams.. M so proud of her..

Vitthal(sarcastically) : U must be.. After all we all have paid a big price for ur dreams.

Vitthal leaves from there.. Kamla feels unhappy. She knows that Vitthal is worried about Kalpi and hence he is behaving in this way but she knows that he isn't wrong either.. It's only her mistake due to which Kalpi is away from them

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@singhania Office

Raghav(on call) :I am sure Kamla maa is going to meet Kalpi... Follow her and make sure that u do not fail this time.. I do not want to hear any excuse.. Tell her address else u r fired.. This my last warning. N tell me about Kamla maa's flight details as well.

Raghav hangs the call and sees Sammy standing at the door. Sammy has heard his conversation and is worried for Raghav.

Sammy : What's this Raghav.. Now what do u want??

Raghav : I want to know about Kalpi's whereabouts.. She is in Delhi.. I am sure she is in Delhi as my detective told me that Pakhi has gone to Delhi yesterday and today Kamla maa is going to Delhi by flight. I will go there as well. I cant sit here idle.. I want to meet Kalpi.. I want her back in my life.. I can't live without her

Sammy(in his mind) : No.. Rags can't go there. What if he will come to know about Roy and Kalpi.. I dnt know what he will do in anger.. Roy is from a powerful family and I can't let Raghav mess with Oberoi's. I have to stop him anyway.

Raghav : What r u thinking??

Sammy : U can't go.. Tomorrow we have an important meeting and Gauri aunty's appointment with doc. U have to be here. N what if Kamla aunty sees u following her.. U will be in trouble.

Raghav : U are right.. Than u go to Delhi.. u can tell her that u r going for some business meeting.. She won't suspect u. Plz Sammy.. Do this for me.

Sammy : Ok I will go. Give me the details of the flight.. I will book the same flight.

Sammy apologizes to Raghav in his heart. He feels he is betraying his friend by hiding about Kalpi but he doesn't want to give more pain to his friend. He decides to go Delhi and meet Kalpi once and let her know about Ra..Khi divorce.. This time he will tell Kalpi to tell Raghav clearly that she has moved on and won't come back to his life.

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Precap : Kamla see Kalpi calling Roshni maa.

P.S. : Please hit like and comment.Sorry for all mistakes

Regards

Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
great part...
i'm greedy...so waiting for the next update eagerly
update soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely yaa...hope Kamla realises her mistakes and tastes her own medicine! Raghav is an all together different story...won't judge him...but seriously yaa...lovedd the update...supa awesome...please please please update soon...wanna see Kamla repent, beg, grovel, cry, etc etc...after all the pain she gave to Kalpi's this is the least punishment a mother can get...and about Paakhi. well I still hate her from the core of my heart...especially after seeing recent changes in her...so please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great part...

i'm greedy...so waiting for the next update eagerly
update soon plz


Thank u.. will try to update next part today itself.. Next update is already in progress.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oooh Im so sad, no RagNa, I was hoping Rags will get back his Kalpi. Anyways this story also is nice, but I feel a lump in my heart. Rags scolded Kalpi on breaking a glass bcoz he lived without any family and was not use to many things/manners etc but later he apologised to her. Whatever, each writer has his own scripts and views life differently. Still I keep some dream that maybe when RagNa get to meet the luv flame between them will rekindle. Plz update soon wanna know the outcome. U r a superb writer, God Bless!
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Originally posted by: love.piyali

Lovely yaa...hope Kamla realises her mistakes and tastes her own medicine! Raghav is an all together different story...won't judge him...but seriously yaa...lovedd the update...supa awesome...please please please update soon...wanna see Kamla repent, beg, grovel, cry, etc etc...after all the pain she gave to Kalpi's this is the least punishment a mother can get...and about Paakhi. well I still hate her from the core of my heart...especially after seeing recent changes in her...so please update soon...


Thank u😊

Kamla will suffer for all her mistakes..Roshni is there to make her realize all her mistakes. M not watching the show anymore.. Sometimes peep in LU and hating Pakhi for whatever she is doing.. but while writing this part I was expecting Pakhi to be mature so giving a mature and lovely Pakhi in this story.

Neways will try to update asap.😊
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Originally posted by: singhania

Oooh Im so sad, no RagNa, I was hoping Rags will get back his Kalpi. Anyways this story also is nice, but I feel a lump in my heart. Rags scolded Kalpi on breaking a glass bcoz he lived without any family and was not use to many things/manners etc but later he apologised to her. Whatever, each writer has his own scripts and views life differently. Still I keep some dream that maybe when RagNa get to meet the luv flame between them will rekindle. Plz update soon wanna know the outcome. U r a superb writer, God Bless!


Thank u dear.. right now Rags is not in the loop but soon he will come in Kalpi's life to help her in taking some decision..I am sorry to make u feel that way. I kinda think Kalpi too has suffered a lot like Rags. He was alone coz he had no one but Kalpi was alone despite having her family around. I feel she deserves all the happiness just like Rags...I want to end this story in a way that everyone gets there due of happiness except Kamla. Hope u will like it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful n amaznggg dear.. I guess nw kamla ll suffer frm d same pain which she caused to kalpi.. n I hope Sammy gets to know d truth n I want ragna be togethr..
waiting fr d next update..

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