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Ramya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Part 38:

Bangalore :

Karthik and family reach his father's place. In an hour they are back after refreshing...

They have breakfast together.. variety of dishes has been prepared specially by their mother who is overwhelmed to see her both children together...

K Dad : apparam... ennadaa... enna plan.. ? engayum velila polayaa ?

K Mom : ivar orutharu... family yoda time spend panna vara sonnaa... neenga ooru sutha plan panreengalaa...

Karthi : ungalukku idhu thevaiyaa paa..

Jo : appaa enna thappaa kettuttaaru.. ? velila ponaalum... family oda time spend pannalaam la...

Karthi : vandhuttaadaa... appaa support ku...

Jo : aamaam daa... nee mattum... ammaa side dhaane pesura...

Simi and Preethi have fun watching their cute fight..

Jaya : ennadaa... innum kulandhainga maadhiri sandai podureenga..?

K Mom : eppavum kulandhaiga dhaan...

Aachi : vittu kudukka maatteengale madhani...

Karthi, Jaya and Simi in their room...

Jaya : Karthik... confirmed ah Vetri innaikku varraan dhaane ?

Karthi : aamaa... 7 o clock inga irukken nu sonnaan..

Simi : ok.. whats the plan maa...

Jaya : iru solren...

She explains the plan to both of them..

Karthi : eppadi Jaya ippadi ellaam... chance eh illa po...

Simi : unga wife ah apparamaa paaraattikonga... sari... Preethi enga iruppaa...?

Jaya : aamaa la... adha naan yosikkalaye...

Karthi : apparam... what about ammaa, appaa and athai.. ?

Jaya : hmmm... avangala engayaavadhu kelappi vidanum... yosikkalaam...

Simi : ok maa... door ah open panren.. yedhaavadhu nenachikka poraanga... avanga kooda stay panna vandhuttu... thaniyaa room la irukkom nu...

Jaya : ya correct... ok... Karthik... Simi.. idhaan plan... idhula timing dhaan mukkiyam...

Simi : sure... maa..

Jaya : un mela endha doubt um illa...

Karthi : appo... ?

Jaya : nee dhaan sodhappiduviyo nu thonudhu...

Karthi : aanaalum enna romba kurachu edai podura nee...

Jaya : paakka dhaane poren... apparamaa pesikkuren...

Simi : ok.. lets disperse...

Evening : 5 PM

Aachi : madhani... naan kadhaa kaalaatchebam kekkanum nu sollittu irundhen... innaikku kovil la irukku nu unga marumaga sonnaa... vaanga poittu vandhidalaam...

K Mom : (mind voice) engayo idikkudhe... idhunga ellaam serndhu engala velila anuppittu edho plan pannudhunga...

Aachi : enna onnum solla maattendreenga... ?? vera edhum mukkiyamaana vela irukkaa ?

K Mom : adhilla... ellaarum vandhirukkaangale nu dhaan yosikkuren...

Aachi : saayangaalamaa dhaane porom... sila mani nerathula vandhidalaam...

K Mom : sari... nee.. naan.. avaru... moonu perum poittu vandhidalaam...

Aachi : pasanga yaaraavadhu varraangalaa nu kettukkonga...

K Mom : appadiye vandhuttaalum...

They were getting ready to leave for the temple...

K Mom : naanga poittu vandhidurom... sari... enga Jo vum Preethi yum.. ?

Jaya : avanga room la thoongittu irukkaanga...

K Mom : idha neram enna thookkam... ?

K Dad : rendu naalaa velila orey alachal... nethu night um late ah dhaan return aanaanga... again innaikku shopping um poittu vandhaachu... tired ah iruppaamaa... thoongattum...

K Mom : ennavo ponga...

While leaving, K Mom whispers in Jays's ears...

K Mom : edho thiruttu thanam panna poreenga... correct ah ?

Jaya : eppadi athai kandupidicheenga... ?

K Mom : ungala pathi enakku theriyaadhaa... ?

Jaya : kovilukku poittu vaanga... you have a surprise... sweet surprise..

Once they leave...

Jaya : nalla vela... thoongittu irukkaanga... konja neram kazhichu Jo va mattum ezhuppalaam... Preethi appadiye thoongittaanaa nallaa irukkum...

Simi : thonnguradhu kku avalukku solli kudukka vendaam...

Jaya : irudi.. avakitta solren apparamaa..

Simi : unmaiya dhaane sonnen...

Karthi : whatever... adhu ippo namma plan ku supportive ah irundhaa podhum...

6: 30 PM :

Simi takes her Aunt Jo to the terrace... After having some casual talk, she shows the magazine in which the article is published...

Simi : athai... idha konjam padichu paarungalen...

Jo : ippa enakku padikkura mood illa..

Simi : idha first neenga padinga... apparam unga mood eppadi change aagudhu nu paarunga...

Jo : over build up ah irukke... appadi enna adhu.. ?

Simi : en chella athai la.. ? enakkaaga padingalen please...

Jo : sari... kudu... hmmm... title nallaa dhaan irukku... 'Mounam Pesiyadhey'

Simi : ok ok... content ah padinga...

Jo : ennadi idhu.. ? 4 pages irukku...

Simi : romba dhaan somberiyaa irukkeenga...

Jo : unakku kozhuppu yeripochu...

Simi : adhellaam apparam paathukkalaam... neenga modhalla oru page ah padinga... apparam automatically neengale muzhusaa padichiduveenga...

Hall :

Karthik opens the door as the bell rings... and its none other than Vetri... They both hug each other...

Jaya : vaa Vetri... punctuality naa needhaan ... eppadi sharp ah vandhu nikkuraan paaru... neeyum irukkiye Karthik.. un friend ah paathu kathukko...

Vetri : ennadaa maappla... semma mariyaadha unakku...

Karthi : ellaam vidhi machaan...

Jaya : enna idhu... murai ya maathi kooppittukireenga...

Vetri : enna solra Jaya.. ?

Jaya : (bites her tongue) oh... adhu onnum illa... vera ennamo nenachittu irundhen...

Karthi : sari sari... vaadaa... utkaarndhu pesalaam...

While talking, Karthi texts Simi..

Terrace :

As Jothika reads the magazine, she goes back to her college days... inbetween she gives a look at Simi who was beside her..

When Jo is about to finish reading, Simi signals her father that its right time to act as planned by giving a missed call to his mobile...

Hall :

Vetri : apparam.. .engadaa... ammaa appaa ellaam.. ?

Karthi : kovilukku poiyirukkaanga... innum konja nerathula vandhiduvaanga..

Vetri : oh... what about you daughter.. ? aalaye kaanom... ?

Karthi : aamaala... naan marandhe poiyitten..

Vetri : solludaa enga ?

Karthi : maadi la irukkaadaa... irudaa naa kooppiduren..

As Jaya felt that Karthi might sodhappify.. she gives him a call...

Karthi : oru nimisham irudaa... (goes on pretending talking on phone)

Vetri doesn't know what to do.. comes back to sit..

Jaya : (talks from the kitchen) sorry daa Vetri.. innum konja neramdhaan... cooking mudinjidum... if you don't mind, nee maadi ku poi Simi kitta pesittu iren... maadithottam um oonjal um irukku...

Vetri : hmmm... ok...

Terrace :

Jo couldn't control her emotions and burst out crying after reading it..

As Vetri nears the terrace, he hears some wheep.. She notices Simi with some lady who was standing facing the other side... He could hear what they talk..

Simi : ippo purinjidhaa athai.. naan yen ungala compell panni padikka sonnen nu..

Jo : enna solra nee ?

Simi : ellaam engalukku theriyum.. indha unknown celebrity Vetri uncle dhaane.. ?

Jo : appadiyaa enna ? yedho sila incidents pottirukku... adha vachi eppadi solla mudiyum...?

Simi : chumma nadikkaadheenga... apparam yen azhudheengalaam.. ?

Jo : adhu vandhu... andha story and narration romba touching ah irundhadhu...

Simi : stop acting my dear athai... idhellaam engaloda plan dhaan...

Jo : what ?

Simi : neenga enkitta sonna vishayatha vachi.. move pannappa kidacha outcome dhaan idhu... the other side of your story...

Jo : ennaala nee solradha nambalaamaa illayaa ne theriyala...

Simi : you don't worry about anything... now its time for you to start a new life with Vetri Uncle...

Jo : enna pesura nee...? indha age la new life ah ?

Simi : nothing wrong... you can travel with a companion for the rest of your life.. you know what... ? Daddy... adhaan unga brother ungala nenachu eppadi feel pannuvaar nu theriyuma... namma thangachi... ku oru kalyaanam panni paakka mudiyala nu...

At this point, Vetri is confused...

Jo : Preethi ke innum few years la marriage pannanum... indha nerathula... ?

Simi : in fact naanga idha senjadhe avalukkaaga dhaan... ava enna solraa theriyumaa ? avalum ungala maadhiri ye marriage pannikka maattaalaam... child venumnaa adopt pannippen nu sonnaa...

Jo : idhu enna pudhu kadhai ?

Simi : kadhai laam illa... its real... ippa sollunga... avaloda mudivu ungalukku ok vaa ?

Jo : (silent)

Simi : neenga yen matha prechanaiya pathi worry pannikkureenga... both have love for each other... then why hiding it... ?

Again Jo starts crying badly... Simi let her pour her emotions, noticing Vetri at the stairs.. she moves from there silently...

Vetri comes near Jo and touches her shoulder from the back.. Jo thinking it to be Simi, leans on his shoulder for comfort and cries.. only after few minutes she realizes its someone else and moves back.. knowing it is Vetri... she looks down and gets a smile..

Hall :

Simi comes down and goes straight to Preethi who is still asleep to complete their mission. While going she shows thumbs up sign to her parents...

Simi : hey... ezhundhiri Preethi... yevlo neram thoonguva... ?

Preethi : ippa edhukku disturb pannura ?

Simi : night saappida vendaamaa ? ellaarum unakkaaga dhaan waiting...

Preethi : ennadhu...? night aayiduchaa... ?

Simi : unakku dhaan thoongunaa... raathiri pagal theriyaadhe...

Preethi : sari sari... varren...

They both come to the hall and seeing only Karthik and Jaya there...

Preethi : hey.. ellaarum waiting nu sollittu... athai maamaa mattum dhaan irukkaanga...

Jaya : un ammaa ivlo neram unakkaaga dhaan wait pannaa... maadi ku poiyirukkaa... poi koottittu vaa...

Preethi goes upstairs half heartedly as her sleep was disturbed... and this time she sees her Mom standing close to someone... As she watches keenly, she realizes it is Mr.Vetri whom she was asked to interview sometime back by her Aunt...

Now she recollects the happennings and what he shared..

Preethi : (thinks) so... andha lucky girl is my ammaa dhaanaa ? ippo puriyudhu athai yoda plan...

She listens to their convo..

Vetri : neeyaavadhu sollirukkalaam la.. ?

Jo : nee mattum sonniyaa ?

Vetri : enna appadi paakkura ?

Jo : vayasaanaalum... un style um azhagum innum unna vittu pogala...

Vetri : paarraa... padayappaa dialogue laam solra...

Jo : unmaidhaane... ?

Vetri : nee mattum ennavaam... ? ippavum adhe bublimaas dhaan...

She tries to beat him... they both notice Preethi standing there... Jo calls her..

Vetri is surprised to see her here...

Vetri : Preethi nee ?

Preethi : hmmm naane dhaan...

Vetri : appo... neeyum drama artist ah.. ?

Preethi : no no... enakku ippodhaan theriyum...

Jo : hello hello... enna... yerkanave theriyumaa ?

Vetri : enna interview panna vandha... journalist...

Jo : Jounrnalist ? she is my daugher Preethi...

Preethi : (gives a naughty smile) yes Uncle..

Vetri : uncle ah ? call me Dad... or appaa... or nainaa... whatever...

All three laughs and comes down together...

Downstairs, the other three (Karthi family) welcomes them.. with party poppers... congratulate them with happy faces...

Karthi : vaazhthukkal maappla...

Vetri : thanks machaan...

Jaya : ippadhaan correct ah sonneenga.. ippo puriyudhaa Vetri... appo enna sonnen nu...

Calling bell rings, Simi goes to open the door... and its the elders Kartni Mom, Dad and Aunt...

As they enter the house, they see their children having fun... and notices Vetri in the gang...

Jaya : athai... idho unga surprise... (pointing Vetri)

K Mom : (confused)

Jaya : hmmm... idhaiyum naanga plan pannanumaa ? kaalla vizhunga...

Jo and Vetri bends down to get the blessings from the elders...

Though they don't have any clue as what's happening... seeing their daughter happy with someone... feels relieved ... bless them whole-heartedly...

--- to be continued...

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Ramya...piniteenga ponga...avalavu alaga iruku.👏...

jaya appa appa karthicka tease pannadhu sema.😆.

k mom correcta kandupidichutanga etho plan panranganu😉..

simi...hmm...maturedathan pesuara...good...

jo ku alugai vanthurucha antha articlea padicha udana,adha vida anantham ennana ava pesinatha vetri ketathuthan😳...

appada oruvaliya rendu perum sernthachu...am very happy.😃..

jayavuku than thanks sollanum ithuku...

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Ramy, chanceless update. A very well executed plan, with clear focus on details. Nicely delivered by different generations working as a team. One thing is rather sounding funny, that is, Jaya not trusting Karthik with these responsibilities :-( Why do you do this to our hero?

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Jo-Vetri kadhai shubham :)

Full-filling update:) .. so nice!!!! No words.. since it was a very heart-filling update...

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: muthucheenu
One thing is rather sounding funny, that is, Jaya not trusting Karthik with these responsibilities :-( Why do you do this to our hero?

Jaya is more cautious that everything shud go fine... and as u said it's just to add fun element to the conversation.. moreover they like teasing each other like this... 😉

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Priya

@JPriyaK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Very nice conclusion for an untold love track...

Everything was fine... Only disappointment for me is you are not giving any track to Raji...

please consider them too...

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: JPriyaK
Only disappointment for me is you are not giving any track to Raji...

please consider them too...

Thanks for ur comment Priya...

& ya... I expected this question from someone... I thought of giving a note upfront...

Anyways... next Simi-Hari ongoing track will be touched... after which will focus on Raji & family matters... (reason being many characters in this story and I don't want to leave anything abruptly or break the flow... or confuse u ppl by bringing in all characters in each update.. nothing else)

do keep reading and give ur feedbacks..

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago

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Priya

@JPriyaK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

Thanks for ur comment Priya...

& ya... I expected this question from someone... I thought of giving a note upfront...

Anyways... next Simi-Hari ongoing track will be touched... after which will focus on Raji & family matters... (reason being many characters in this story and I don't want to leave anything abruptly or break the flow... or confuse u ppl by bringing in all characters in each update.. nothing else)

do keep reading and give ur feedbacks..

I guess u are a great fan of K5...

But please do consider office fans too 😆😆😆

Already I am sad in this story that KR is separated (Nee Naan Aval too)..

Atleast give some importance to her character..

Don't mistake me, just a suggestion/request

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

@JPriyaK sure maa..

Raji's track (with her son) is already framed and having it handy... just that have to place it at right time...

also their story is linked with Preethi... now that she is happy that her mother got companion... she might think of her life as well..

ofcourse office fans kum serthu dhaan I'm framing it... earlier Vishnu-Lakshmi's family was given importance...

and have not mistaken... I've taken ur feedback in right sense.. thanks...