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Posted: 11 years ago
I have tried writing a long update this time so that you all can forgive me for late update. Thanks everyone for likes and comments.

Chapter 8
Sultan(on phone): Can you meet me at coffee shop at 5 p.m... great then meet you at coffee shop (himself) now i can find the truth
IN THE COFFEE SHOP
Sultan: sorry karan mene tumhe aise bulaya... but mujhe tum se kch puchna tha
karan: its ok bhaiya... bataiye kya puchna tha aapko
sultan: mujhe madhubala ke baare me puchna tha
karan(shocked after hearing madhu's name): madhubala...kaun madubala
sultan: look karan mujhe sab pata hai ki tumne aur rishu ne kch kia tha madhu ke sath... coz mene kl tumhari aur rishu ki baat sun li thi.
karan: mujhe nhi pata bhaiya aap kis baare mein baat kr rhe hai
sultan: karan mera ye pata krna bhoth jaruri hai ki rishu ne madhu ke sath kya kia tha aur usme sirf tum meri help kr skte ho... plz karan
karan: aap kyu sab kch pata krna chathe bhaiya
sultan: kyunki mujhe rishu aur madhu ke bich sab kuch theek krna hai
karan(shocked):aap jante hai madhu ko?
sultan:haa wo humare sath kaam krti hai aur rishu bhi usse mil chuka hai... plz kya tum ab mujhe sab kuch bataoge
karan: theek hai bhaiya but aapko promise krna hoga ki aap Rk ko kuch nhi batayege. kyunki usse ye bilkul acha nhi lagega ki mene aapko sab kch bataya hai
sultan: theek hai mein rishu ko kuch nhi batauga
karan(taking a deep breath):
FLASHBACK
RK, Karan and Abhimanyu are the best frnds. Late night parties, drinking, rash driving, flirting, was all the part of there school life. That night also they were in the birthday party of Ria, there schoolmate when Rk and Madhu met each other for the first time. They were checking out girls when Karan spot a girl on the dance floor.
Karan: hey guys see that girl
Rk eyes move in the direction where Karan was pointing. Rk looks at girl with curly hairs in white top and black jeans on the dance floor. Then Ria said something in her ears and she smile. Rk notice her smile and feels like he has never a smile so beautiful. Then Abhimanyu patted on Rk shoulders and bring him back from his thoughts.
Abhimanyu: see karan, Rk have already fallen for that girl
Rk: have you lost your mind abhi? ladkiya Rk ke charm se impress hoti hai Rk nhi
karan: but mujhe nhi lagta ki ye tumhare charm se impress hogi.
rk: iss duniya mein koi bhi aisi ladki nhi hai jo rk se impress nhi hogi
abhimanyu: ohh really rk to theek hai dekhte hai ki tum is ladki ko kaise impress krte ho
Rk, abhimanyu and karan headed towards Madhu. Madhu and Ria were dancing. while dancing, Madhu was about to fall but Rk reached on time and hold her. Madhu has closed her eyes in fear of falling but feeling someone holding her she open her eyes. Both Rk and Madhu look into each other eyes. But madhu was the first one to break the contact and straighten herself.
Ria: are you ok madhu and thanks Rk for saving her from falling.
Madhu: ya Ria i am fine. (to Rk) thanks
Rk: no need for thanks afterall how can i see such a beautiful girl falling .Rk looks at madhu with his famous smirk but madhu just look away.
ria: don't mind madhu, rk aisa hi, flirt uski aadad hai
karan: by the way ria tumne apni friend se intoduce nhi karwaya
ria: oh sorry friends ye hai madhubala malik, meri cousin and madhu ye hai karan, abhimanyu and RK
rk: nice to meet you madhubala and moves his hand forward and madhu shakes hands with him. When there hands touch each other hands, both felt a current ran through there body. Madhu move her hands backward.
karan: come guys lets drink something
All agreed and headed towards the counter for drinks.
rk: five vodka
madhu: no four vodka and one coke
karan: coke kisliye madhu
ria: well madhu alcohol nhi peeti
rk: well in that case 3 vodka and 2 coke. i will give you company madhubala.
abhimanyu: so madhubala tum london me kab se ho?
madhu: mein last week hi aayi hu, actually my mom want me to complete my studies from london
ria: you know what guys madhu is in our school
rk: wow, now i can see you daily madhubala
They continue to chat and then suddenly dj change the song.
madhu: hey thats my favourite song. come lets go on the dance floor.
rk: you and ria go we will come after finishing our drink.
madhu: ok
Madhu and ria left from there. Madhu was dancing like a small kid making different expressions. Seeinh her cute expressions a smile came on Rk face.
karan: kaha tha na ki wo impress nhi hogi tumse
abhi: haa rk, karan is right.
rk: dekhte hai kab tak ye madhubala apne aap ko mujhse door rkhti hai, come lets go on the dance floor
Rk, Karan and Abhimanyu joined Madhu and Ria on the dance floor.
Dj: so guys its time for a couple dance.
Rk( forward his hand towards madhu): may i have the pleasure of dancing with this beautiful girl.
Madhu kept her hand on Rk hand and karan and ria dance together. and abhimanyu and deepali dance with each other. Rk and Madhu joined there left hand and rk kept his right hand on madhu waist and madhu kept her right hand on his shoulder and soon they started dancing slowly. Soon rk pulls madhu mor etowards him.Both look into each other eyes. They were so close to each other that they can feel each other breathe. Madhu was feeling uncomfortable with this closeness and she tried to free herself from his hold but he tighten his hold on her. Rk lean his face towards and was about to kiss her but madhu free herself from his hold and then everyone in the party heard the sound of slap.Everyone look in the direction of madhu and rk. rk had his hand on his face and madhu was fuming. Ria, deepali, abhimanyu and karan come towards them.
ria: what happened madhu?
Madhu looks at Rk fuming and left the party. Rk also left party. Later in his room, Rk was drinking and continuously thinking about the party. Thinking about slap he throw the bottle on the floor.
rk: how dare you madhubala? tumhari itni himmat ki tumne Rk ko thappad mara. ye tumne acha nhi kia. tumhe iski saza jaroor milegi. aaj ke baad tum sochogi ki kash tum mujhse na mili hoti. tum bhoth badi galti ki hai Rk ko thappad maar kr madhubala.
AFTER FEW DAYS
Ria:jaldi ready ho aaj school ka first day hai tumhara.
madhu:haa ria bas ho gyi
ria: vaise school me rk bhi hoga.
madhu(hearing rk name she became angry): mujhe koi fark nhi padta agr wo hoga to. mujhe uske baare me koi baat nhi krni. chalo late ho rhe hai
In school
abhimanyu: kehna padega abki baar school me bhoth ache admission huye hai specially girls ke. Lo aa gyi miss madhubala malik.
Hearing madhu name, Rk look towards her. Madhu also see Rk but gave him an angry glare and move towards her seat. madhu was seating wid ria on the second desk and rk was sitting with karan on third desk in side row. soon the teacher came and lecture started. but throughout the whole lecture Rk was glaring at Madhu. suddenly madhu drop her and bent to pick it, then she saw rk looking at her but she ignore it. soon the lecture was over.
teacher: madhu these are the keys of your locker.
madhu take the keys and kept in her bag.
In recess madhu went in the locker room and open her locker. But she was shocked. she found a rose flower and a note with sorry from Rk. She became more angry and throw flower and note in the dustbin. she was going towards her next class but suddenly someone hold her hand and drag her towards the corridor. she was about to shout but the person kept his hand on her mouth. Madhu was shocked to see the person who drag her. He remove his hand from her mouth.
madhu: rk tum
rk: madhbala mujhe tumse kuch kehna, plz meri baat sun lo
madhu: mujhe tumhari koi baat nhi sun ni
she was about to leave but Rk hold her.
rk: jab tak tum meri baat nhi sunogi me tumhe nhi jane duga. madhu uss raat party me jo kuch bhi hua uske liye i am sorry. mera aisa koi intention nhi tha but pata nhi uss waqt kya hua ki me apne aap ko rok nhi paya. madhu i am sorry.
madhu turns and look towarsd him. looking into his eyes she feel that he was really feeling guilty.
madhu(thought): shayad rk ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gya hai. aur vaise bhi mein yaha ladai krne nhi aayi hai. mujhe rk ko maaf kr dena chaiye.(to rk) its ok Rk. mene tumhe maaf kia and me bhi uss thappad ke liye sorry bolti hu. I am sorry.
rk: nhi madhubala tum sorry mat bolo. tumhari koi galti nhi, galti meri thi. and thank you ki tumne mujhe maaf kr dia. so friends? he forward his hand
madhu: ok frnds
rk(thinking): game is on madhubala
Flashback end
karan: uss din ke baad madhu aur rk ache dost ban gye. wo school me jyada time ek dure saath hi hote the. Infact jab bhi hum bahar hangout krne jate tab bhi wo jyada time ek dusre ke sath spend krte the. mujhe aur abhi ko kuch ajeeb laga aur humne rk se pucha
Flashback
abhi: rk tumne uss ladki ko itni kaise maaf kr dia
karan: bhul gya rk ki kaise usne sabke samne thappad mara tha
rk: me kuch nhi bhula. aur ussi ki saza usse de rha hu mein
abhi: hum kuch amjhe nhi
rk: madhubala ne sab ke samne mujhe thappad maar kar meri insult ki thi. ab mein uski sab ke samne insult kruga
karan: but kaise
rk: mein madhubala ko majboor kr duga mujhse pyar krne ke liye aur jab wo kahegi ki wo mujhse pyar krti hai to me usse reject kr duga sabke samne.
Flashback ends
karan: aur rk ke plan ke according madhu ko rk se pyar ho gya aur farewell party mein madhu ne sab ke samne rk ko i love you bola but rk ne uski insult kr di. Uss din ke baad madhu kaha gyi kisi ko kuch pata nhi chala.
sultan: mujhe vishwas nhi hota ki rishu kisi ki aisa kr skta hai. usne ek baar bhi nhi socha ki uski vjh se madhu kitna hurt hui hogi. Tum aur abhi to uske frnds ho , tumne bhi nhi roka usse ye karne se.
karan: i am sorry bhaiya. but plz aap rk par gussa mt krna. jo kuch bhi hua wo humne bachpane me kar dia
sultan: theek hai me rk ko kuch nhi kahuga.(thinking) vaise bhi rk ko kehne ka koi fayda nhi hai. mujhe kuch karna hi hoga. rishu ko uski galti ka ehsaas karwana hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update.
You brought the past in a singel update, very good.

Is there something left out in the past, waiting eagerly to see heartbreak of RK knowing about deepali, and deepali was there from their school a?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first one to comment, hurray...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

Very nice update.

You brought the past in a singel update, very good.

Is there something left out in the past, waiting eagerly to see heartbreak of RK knowing about deepali, and deepali was there from their school a?


Thanks😊
Nothing left in the past and I am soon going to write about rk heartbreak
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
so its like show slap n prem game
but i really he fell in love with her like show but just his revenge didnt let him go on to accept it
ufff heartbreak the thing i hate for him
just cant bear it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update now time to take action
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow update . Really enjoyed waiting for next part poor madhu heat broken !thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally past is out, now i m waiting for rk's heartbreak
btw superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Finally past is out... poor madhu ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE
I want to write a dance sequence for madhu and rk but i am confused regarding song so plz frnds help. give me your suggestion for the song
thanks in advance

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