MJHT Season 2..Mayur SS 2/4... last chapter.. - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fiza :-)
nice updt. par house warming mtlb sirf choole par rakh kar garam karna nhi hota, kabhi kabhi sweetar, comfortar or shawl bhi odana hota hai, or microwave me dala to kya baat hai :-P
nupur changed so much, bubly girl to a crport woman, a long trnsfrmtn with a long tym span. Ladkiyon ko mature hone tym nhi lagta, ye to 3sal hai ! Sigh! Bt still every prsn has thr bubly side, most of tym hiding frm world n adjst acordng to world n mayur r nt xcptnl. I hope thr ll cmin bck 2 old form :-)
lovely writn sweetheart ;-)
jaldi cntinu kar :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fiza loved the update. Plz update nd conrinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic Update Fiza
Loved it so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Fantastic Update Fiza
Loved it so much

ap ai bahaar ai... faria how r u..eid ka chand ho gyi tum to.. kaha hti ajkal..
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks all for the lovely comments on this SS... updating in phew mins
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Posted: 11 years ago

oky lets wish Rimsha a very Happy Birthday... may lord bless u with evry happiness... here is ur gift.. acha lagy k bora rekho...😆



thanks evryone for amzing comments on last update...



Chapter:8

Mayank: so maa kasa laga tumko ghar...

Shilpa was beyond happy and a bit emotional too... she always wanted her son to be successful n more happy yet he will build so much out of his life she never imagined... she knew wht she has given him..and wht he has learn from life...she knew one day he will make her so proud and he has already always done it... yet this was much an overwhelming feeling... it was as if her whole life struggle her prayers were just rewarded... she can say n see her son is a successful man in his life... both emotionally n practically ... jst she wished tht today his father was there to see his naughty mayu so strong established and happy in his life... jst if today he can see his wish of seeing his son bigger than dream fulfilled rite infront of him.. yet wherever he is she knows he is smiling and feeling so proud... yet she can help to feel tears in his eyes... sum dreams whn fulfilled make u feel beyond words...

Shilpa: im so proud of u Mayank... She opend her arms and he hugged her tightly... knowing wht she is feeling wht he is feeling...

He was closely watching her expressions as she was quietly touching and looking at the house... her quietness was an indication tht she can see wht he wants her to see in all this...his afford to fulfill his parents' wishes their dreams being his dreams... But then whn standing on the frst floor and looking down to the whole house ... he saw in her eyes the tears and the smile was too much to take... so he have to ask her to let it go..

They have seen all the phases together... the phases of happy secure family, him having a total carefree childhood, having all the naughtiness a kid will have... changing into a nightmare with his father passed away.. he has seen how his mother being so young yet so strong hold herself so brilliant not only herself but him too...

He knew he has seen the struggle his mother has had to make him wht he is today... and just hearing the fact tht she is proud of him... more than tht seeing her teary was rare.. once on his dad funeral and today ... but the difference was too big... tht day her eyes lost smile... today even with tears her eyes were smiling

They were sitting on the stairs of their new home, putting his head in her mother's lap she was caressing it..

Shilpa: tujhy yaad tha...

He raised his head his eyes were misty too... u cant help yet to wsih..just if.. he was there

Mayank: hmm.. papa always wanted to have a penthouse haina..

Shilpa: han

Mayank: pata hai maa Nupur bulik papa jasi hai

Shilpa: chuckled janti hon... jab us se phli bar mili thi tabhi lag tha yeh...

Mayank: apko pata hai jis din us ny apna dream house define kiya tha mjhy asa laga k is ko mjhy yeh khny ki zaroorat hi nhi paray gi k mein papa ki tarha apna ghar bana chahta hoon... kyun sab kuch tu wasy hi tha.

She smiled...

Shilpa: teray papa aj bht khush hongy.. un k bigra hua beta itna zayda seedha hogya k aj tujhy dekhty tu shayd pehcanty bhi nhi

Mayank: asa kuch nhi hai.. woh bachpan tha.. wasy ziddi tu mein hon thora abhi bhi

Shilpa: hay kash meri bahu yaha hoti tu batati thora sa...

They both laughed..

Shilpa: wasy agar teray papa aj hoty tu tera kya hota

Mayank: mein bichara akela hota aur ap teeno ek team mein hotay hain...

Shilpa: nhi shyd tu pehly ki tarah sharatee hota

Mayank: asa kuch nhi hai maa... Waqt k sath bacha thori rehta hai koi...

Shilpa: han per itna bara hogaya tu... tu janta hai at 27 itna sab kuch kerly na kitni bari achievement hai

Mayank: janta ho maa... N im thankful to u ... Aj yaha is ghar ko ...apny asa pass ki chesso ko dekhta hoon tu bht acha lagta hai... I feel life mein mein loser nhi bana...

Shilpa: oye meri bahu k credit kaha gaya

Mayank: shayd woh bhi nhi hoti meray sath agar ap ny us din yeah nhi kaha hota k larki aur success dono hi nhi rehy gi ...agar mein apna pyar nhi samjho ga... such mein agar yeh ghar bana bhi layta tu Nupur k bina is k koi matlab nhi rehta... Maza hi nhi ata..life k sara spice kahtam hojata... Apko pata hai jab mein ny usko yaqeen dilaya k I can afford this home... tht moment she was so proud of tht one moment in her life... The moment she was sure to hold my hand whn her family was against it... I felt really good...

Shilpa: per yeh khushi uski family ki bina adhori hai

Mayank: janta hoon n I hope this new beginning will make even bauji realized tht we didn't meant to harm anything... I just hope he accept us...

Shilpa: ab dekhna sab acha hi hoga...

Mayank: maa ap se ek baat pocho

Shilpa: mjhy se pochty way ijzat mang raha hai ya khud se

Mayank: sigh... maa Nupur k office mein sab thik hai .. usko koi pershani tu nhi hai

Shilpa: bulkil nhi aur yeh baat tu mjhy se 50k bar poch chukka hai... Phir aj kyun kya baat hai..

Mayank: maa pata nhi per mjhy asa laga aj Nupur ko dekh ker k mein ny us se us k aap lay liya

Shilpa: MAyuuu..

Mayank: maa asi zindagi us ny khabi nhi sochi thi... woh tu sirf srk ki movies 48 inch per dekh ker mazay kerna chahti thi.. job, hectic routines.. waha k masaly itni studies yeh sab... Nupur nhi thi .. mjhy asa lag raha hai k usko jin halat mein humari shadi hoi aur kyun k mein us ko kuch dy nhi skata usko khud

Shilpa: Mayank... Yeh baat zaara Nupur se ker k dekhna bht acha jawab mily ga

Mayank: maa pls .. per such batao kya yeh Nupur thi

Shilpa: han Nupur ek creative larki hai yeh tu aur mein dono janty thy... kuch kerny per aay tu tujhy bhi hara diya tha us ny... Han thik hai woh college the young thi zindgi ko dekha nhi tha islyn asa bolti thi... bolti tu woh yeh bhi thi k srk k sath bhagy gi.. both of them laughed bhag tu teray sath gai.. phir..

Zindagi mein bht daafa asa hota hai jasa hum ny nhi socha tha woh hota hai per jab hum woh kerty hain tu bht acha lagta hai... agar Nupur ko yeh nhi kerna hai tu woh aj chor sakti hai... Ab tu koi pershani nhi hai nah...

Mayank: us ny kaha hai k loan mein help kery gi

Shilpa: aur agar tu baat kery tu mana sakta hai k agar woh nhi chahti tu yeh sab na kery... as khud hi khud sochy se kuch nhi hoga us se baat ker...

Mayank: hmm...

Shilpa: acha zayd hmm han kerny ki zaroort nhi hai.. chl mjht ghar chor aur Nupur k layny ja... zara date wat per lay ker ja...

Mayank: kya papa ap do ajeeb namno mein mjhy akela chor ker chaly gay ho...

Shilpa: acha... aur sun tujhy apny sasural walo se nhi milna...

Mayank: milo ga na.. ghar garam kery ga tu sab aay ga

Shilpa: KYA...

Mayank: he laughed house warming party.. bauji ko bhi tu bolay ga khud jao ga mein...

Shilpa: izzat se lay ker ana

Mayank: apka beta hoon apko shaq hai..

,...

Dropping maa at home, and meeting a lawyer to finalize the deal of home and getting approve for the loan... he was really relived... things were moving fast obviously its 8th chapter donot belve im gonna write 20 chapters...lol..its an SS so bhago...

It was a big building in wch he enter feeling proud was underestimation... he was feeling hell proud he nevr in his life through a day will cum whn he will enter in nupurs, s office.. waoo.. yet this thought do make him restless...

He went to reception and knock..

Mayank: hi... may I

A beautiful hot receptionist chked him frm up n down...and thn didn't let him complete his sentence

R: u sure can help me...

Mayank: excuse me.. I need u to help me...

R: she placed her hands on the desk n leaned more... I will love to help u by all means,..

Mayank living three yrs abroad was quite use to this flirting and women throwing themselves on him... bt this was too much.. he was about to rpl her sternly whn sumthing could his attention... in the painting behind receptionist he can clearly see his wife frown n boiling to... why not... she was cuming closer and now he knows she can hear him

Placing his hands on desk to he said with a smile...

Mayank: wao im really impressed... how sweet n kind of u...

R: my naughty n hot too..wanna try me out...

Nupur: MS patel... she almost shouted making Ms patel move back almost making her fall and he has to control his laughter... I told u clearly few mins back sumthing

R: ma'am im gonna send ur husband straight to ur cabin...

Mayank: Ms patel... I was actually asking for help in directions to my wife's cabin...

Nupur: WIFE u hear him.. wife... Nupur Mayank Sharma... n he is Mayank Sharma...

R: OMG im soory ma'am I though he is the new model tht has been hired he is so hot tht I thought im sorry

Nupur: keep ur thoughts to urself u got it.. aur tum late nhi horaha dear..

Sarcasm was too loud to ignore in her voice.. and he cant help to turn around an chukle..

Mayank: bye the way... thanks for complimenting me.. as hot... he smile and Nupur was fuming taking him with her... dragging him inside the elevator...

Nupur: mayankkk... yeh kya horaha tha... tumhain zara se bhi sharam nhi ati tum flirt ker rahy thy.. she was saying this cuming closer n closer pointing her finger to him.. finally making him corner to one wall...

Mayank: ab mein kya ker sakta hoon agar woh mjhy HOT kahay tu... ap koi kya samjhta hai I cant help na

Nupur: dekho zayda massom bany ki zaroorat nhi hai ...achy se janti hon kya horaha tha... by god yaha mein intezar ker rahi hon aur waha tum mazy lay rahy ho

Mayank: aray mein ny kya kiya

Nupur: Kya KIya... ab kuch kerny k irada bhi tha .. han han mein tu gaalt time per agai ...date per lay jatay usko aur bhi kuch kerlay thy...

Mayank: Nupur...he tried to dragge it yet couldn't help to be in aww of his old wify... he dipped his head n pecked her lips ...

Nupur: zayda romantic banay ki zaroorat nhi hai..

Mayank: a ray baba I was just joking... masti ker raha tha... he said enclosing her in his arms...

Nupur: llarkiyon k sath masti kerty ho

Mayank: meri majal .. mein tu bwi k sath masti ker raha tha... hiting his head with her... and the floor arrived...

Nupur: ab hato tum chalo... 10 min wait kero mjhy kuch papers sign kerny hain

Mayank: jo huq... phr hum apni romance cont kersakty hain... wasy woh tu tum paper sign kerty hoay bhi ker sakty hain ...whts say.. he leaned and she pushed hin

Nupur: office hai Mayank and im still croos with u..

NUPUR JI..suniya ga...

Mayank: CHIRONJEEE>>... He shouted at his top of volume making everyone look at him... And making everything in chiro ji s hand n chironjee fell down... NUPUR...Yeh yaha kya ker raha hai...
Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
jaldi kar de update
am waiting up for the update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

jaldi kar de update

am waiting up for the update :)



kerdi dekh lay uper
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww
i loved it.
mayu n shilpa aunty talking on mayu dad was sweet.
i always wonderd where z mayank's
dad.
by d way just saw in ur prev update u took my name.i totally misd that yar.so due thx comes here.

n where z the another ff!that z my most fav after GMYH n u are ignoring that!
not fair.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

aww
i loved it.
mayu n shilpa aunty talking on mayu dad was sweet.
i always wonderd where z mayank's
dad.
by d way just saw in ur prev update u took my name.i totally misd that yar.so due thx comes here.

n where z the another ff!that z my most fav after GMYH n u are ignoring that!
not fair.




thanks for liking
yaar im not ignoring it... yet tht ff takes time n loads of conc... though next chapter is almost ready im not getting time n momentum to complete it... plus now ramzan... so i will try to update asap

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