Success:Story on Kalpi[Rachana] last part on Pg 140 [30th july]

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Chin2_n

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

What was that? Seriously this update is amazing👏👍🏼 and on top of that u took so much pain in explaining Bangalore city's details and it's charm cuisine etc,.

And reading abt Roshini made me feel there will be those kind of people still existing and felt happy for Roy 😛

Lastly I totally fell in love Roka😉

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: souhasini
Ragna forever. .

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very interesting..continue soon..👍🏼

Thank you 😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
What was that? Seriously this update is amazing👏👍🏼 and on top of that u took so much pain in explaining Bangalore city's details and it's charm cuisine etc,.
And reading abt Roshini made me feel there will be those kind of people still existing and felt happy for Roy 😛

Lastly I totally fell in love Roka😉

👍🏼

Thank you dear😊

Actually I studied in bangalore so I knew few places.. 😉. B'lore is really an amazing city!!

Roshni is my favorite character which I want to see in the show.. I wanted some depth in Roy-Roshni relation which can emotionally attach Roy with Kalpi..😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Hello guys.. as promise m giving u double update today.. This portion is unedited so expect lots of mistakes in it..btw m sure u r now used to my mistakes and will forgive me.. Hope u will enjoy it!!

RoKa reaches hotel from the hospital..Kalpi on wheel chair and Roy pushing it from behind. Roy tells Kalpi to shift to his room as he can't take risk to let her alone.. Kalpi tells him that she can manage but he doesn't hear anything and takes her to his room.. He picks her in his arms and maket her sit on the bed..

Roy : M going to bring ur luggage and u r not going to argue over this..

Kalpi : No roy.. I won't stay here..

Roy : Why?? Don't u trust me??

Kalpi : Shut up!! u noe I trust u..

Roy : than just rest here.. I will be back in a while.. And u order something to eat..

Roy comes back in few minutes.. Kalpi is waiting for him.. They had their dinner together.. He gives meds to Kalpi.. She dozes off due to heavy dose.. He makes few quick calls and sleeps on the couch after making sure that Kalpi is fine..

In morning Kalpi wakes up late and finds Roy reading newspaper...

Kalpi : good morning

roy : good morning!! How are u feeling now..

Kalpi : Better!! Do I have to spend whole day here??

Roy : No.. we are going to Bannerghata National park.. to meet ur siblings..

Kalpi : Ha ha Very funny... btw how will I go..

Roy : Leave that on me... U just get ready..

Kalpi : but Roy..

Roy : What??

Kalpi : Nothing..

Kalp(in her mind) : How to tell u that I have brought only jeans and churidaars which I can't wear due to this injury.. Well I have to manage somehow..

Roy : What are u thinking??

Kalpi : Nothing..

Roy : Ok!! I have kept few packets there.. It has few skirts and tops... wear one of them them.. It will be lose and won't hurt u.

Kalpi gives him a shocked expesion.. She doesn't know what to say..

Roy : Don't look at me like that.. I have called Payal to tell about ur injury and she told me that u haven't brought any loose dress. And I told my friend to bring it for u.

Kalpi : Aww... Payal is such a sweetheart.

Roy : Awesome!! She is a sweetheart n what about me?? I arranged all this.. that too in one night.

Kalpi : ok u r sweetheart too.. Now go.. I wanna get ready.

Roy : Wait...

Roy calls a lady inside and tells her to help Kalpi in getting ready.. she helps Kalpi in getting ready.. Kalpi takes out a tunic top with colorful cotton skirt.. She likes it very much.. She tells the lady to go as she can mange now.. She also tells her to send Roy in the room. Roy enters and looks at her.. she was looking just like a pretty small doll.

Roy : Someone is looking pretty!!

Kalpi : But someone isn't looking handsome..

Roy : Ohh!! That's why every girl in the lobby was trying to talk to me..

Kalpi : Really?? They must have been considering u as alien!!

Roy : Fine.. So r u ready to go with this alien..

Kalpi : Yes.. just let me wear footwears..

Roy : U sit there.. I will bring it for u..

Kalpi denies him from touching them but Roy is Roy.. He doesn't listen to her. Roy keeps her shoes below her feet.. She bends down to wear them but Roy realizes that it will hurt so he tells her to wait and he helps her in wearing them.. Kalpi protests as she doesn't like him touching her feets but Roy avoids her and make her wear the shoes.. Kalpi looks at him lovingly..

Kalpi(in mind) : How can someone be so down to earth.. Who can say that a millionaire is helping a girl in wearing her shoes.. How can he care about me so much.. How can he love me so much?? The girl who will come in his life will be the luckiest girl in this world.. Anyone can fall for him. I love the way he loves me.

Roy : Madam.. What are u thinking?? It's done.. Let's move now!!

Kalpi and Roy enjoys in Bannerghata Nationa park.. Kalpi was sitting on her wheel chair.. Roy was taking care of her.. Kalpi enjoyed Wild Safari thoroughly.. she takes lots of photographs for the memory.. afte the Safari they pays a visit to the zoo.. Roy was making fun of Kalpi by telling them her brothers.. At Langur's cage.. Kalpi tells Roy to pose with him..

Kalpi : Picture perfect scene!! He is looking like ur twin brother.. but u r smarter than him..

Roy : Smarter.. Wow!!

Kalpi : one minute.. do not disturb!! M talking to that Langur!!

Kalpi starts laughing on her joke.. Roy fakes anger.. She says sorry to him by holding her ears and he burst out laughing.

After zoo they goes to Butterfly section.. There Kalpi sees a small child running after a butterfly.. She gets happy and takes his snap.. In one corner One mother-daughter were talking and laughing.. She looks at them and gets sad.. She remembers her own mother who never had time for her.. Roy notices her sad expression and follows her gaze.. He realizes that she is missing her mother.. He sees a group of college students roaming there.. one has guitar in his hands.. he goes to them.. Kalpi turns around to say something to Roy and finds him missing.. Suddenly Roy comes in from of him with guitar in his hand.. he starts singing "Chak de chak de... Chak de Saare gam".. Group of college students join him and starts dancing around Kalpi.. Kalpi gets happy on seeing this.. She too starts singing with them.. They thank the students.

Kalpi : Thank u Roy.. u r really a true frn!! I wish I too can do something for u..

Roy : U can do something to make me happy.. but will u do that??

Kalpi : Yes definitely!! Tell me what can I do..

Roy : Keep smiling.. Ur smile makes me happy..

Kalpi blushes a bit on listening this.. She wonders why she is feeling strange with Roy around.. She feels happy on seeing him happy..

They returns to the hotel after a tiring day.. While returning they have met doctor for dressing.. doc has given Kalpi permission to travel but has told her not to walk as it may affect her injury..

Next day Kalpi and roy takes the flight to Delhi.. Roshni and Payal has come to receive them.. Roy has already informed them about her injury.. Roshni tells Kalpi to stay at her home but refuses saying she wants to stay with Payal and will call her if she will need anything.. She bids adieu to Roy and Roshni.. RoKa share an eyelock.. Roshni and Payal notices this.

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Night, @Flat

Kalpi and payal are chatting from a long time.. Kalpi was sharing her bangalore experience and everything that happened excluding Roy's proposal..

Payal : So u enjoyed a lot.. But doe to this injury u have to come back in 3 days instead of 7.. sad naa??

Kalpi : Yes.. I was enjoying a lot.. I was hoping the time to freeze..

Payal(astonishingly) : U mean to say u wanted to stay with Roy forever..

Kalpi : No.. I wanted to stay in bangalore..

Payal : do not lie Kalpi.. I have noticed ur expression on airport.. Something has changed between u guys..

Kalpi thinks about the moments they spent together.. Roy's care for her.. She remembers him wrapping coat around her.. picking her in arms, helping her in wearing shoes..

Kalpi : Yes.. something has changed.. He has proposed me!!

Payal : Really?? Finally he spilled the bean.. What was ur reply?

Kalpi : U knew about it??

Payal : Off course.. Do u think he can hide anything from me??

Kalpi : hmm.. I rejected.. U know I can't love him. I can't let him suffer due to my past.

Payal : But Kalpi.. One day u have to marry someone.. than why not Roy.. He loves u from the bottom of his heart.. I can assure u that his feelings are genuine for u.. He is ready to accept u with ur past..

Kalpi : U r telling this.. I always felt that u love Roy

Payal : Yes I do but only as a friend... just the way I love u.. Roy has always loved u only..

Kalpi : No Payal.. I can't accept him..

Payal : Ok.. I won't force u .. but just think about him once!!

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Precap : Roshni tells Kalpi that someone from mumbai has come to meet u and she is waiting in the office.

P.s. Plz hit like and comment. Sorry for all the spelling.grammatical mistakes and typos.

Regards

Vish

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Chin2_n

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Oho! This is awesome surprise 👍🏼totally liked👏 it

but last suspense part from Mumbai made me to freak out but since it is She I can guess it would be Dumbla 4 sure May be wrong also😉

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

Awesome update.. Loving RoKa...

Is it puky who came??Excited to read next chappy..continue soon..

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Oho! This is awesome surprise 👍🏼totally liked👏 it
but last suspense part from Mumbai made me to freak out but since it is She I can guess it would be Dumbla 4 sure May be wrong also😉

Thank u dear.. Wait for the next part to know who she is..😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: appyK
Awesome update.. Loving RoKa...
Is it puky who came??Excited to read next chappy..continue soon..

Thanks Appy.. U guys have guessed Dumbla and dumbli... Maya is the only remaining sane person who can come as Neetu is in jail and Manda doesn't have money to reach Delhi.😆

Neways wait for the next part to know more😉

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renuloves

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Posted: 11 years ago

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