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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

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Sorry Sujatha in a couple of minutes 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 18



Please see the Story So Far Thread for this chapter...


Thanks and sorry for the inconvenience. 🤗

Thank you all for reading. ❤️

Edited by aardhan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Posted! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sujatha's nautanki shuru! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats Sujatha
Keep it up!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Shari, you too reserved! 😲😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan


Congrats Sujatha
Keep it up!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Swati, first of all thank you very much for all your wishes and for being patient.🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Nice update Aarti di, though i wud again say It was really hard to read and must have tormented you a lot.

Yes, Swati, it was very difficult but still the toughest one was the one before this

A tough morning given a nice start by Ashni. The new start of a new dawn with both reading each other's mind after such bad night.
YES, both somehow leaned towards the same thing. Goes to show how compatible they are except they insist on friendship so much that they are not able to see the love 😔

I loved Nidhi's after thoughts and doubts where she want to know more for Ashu still not coming out completely in front of her. And loved her so caring for him.
She is compassionate by nature... her biggest strength and weakness😊

Her gesture is only love and her care is obvious, loved this feeling. 👏
Thank you 😃

The ride to the beach giving a normalcy and Ashu asking for mercy with things getting back to normal. No one wants those phases, yet they come and vanish all the love away.
True, its all those awkward moments, waiting for the other person to make the first move.

I liked them becoming friends, colleagues and roommates once again, though their love still takes time.
It was always easy for them to become friends, and till now any tough situation they crossed using that.

They talked about that night, and things got normal, and then the kitchen scene and once the treacherous mind of Ashu in the bed, but not able to go on with hitches and fears.😳
Yes, he fears his own reactions after that night, and hence when Nidhi reassures him in the kitchen he is more confident

What i cud catch here is that Nidhi knows him very well now, still needs to more so that she can be a help in letting him come out of the past completely. It was good for her to ask if he still loves her and it was best of him telling that she is nowhere and he only loves Nidhi.
He does not tell that he loves Nidhi Only that he does not love Priya any more. And yes, Nidhi has helped him overcome many of his fears ater facing each of them with him so far.

The three weeks they enjoyed, loved to see them back normal. But what was for store, was the worst ever. This is very difficult for me even to write. The talks about the home and career, Uff!
Why that fuss over..?
Fuss is because Priya always accused him of being an enemy to her progress in her career. So he thinks Nidhi will say the same thing now...

Even she tried to make up and pacify with her own means, she is made accused of doing Priya - Ridiculous.
Yes... because that atmosphere reminds him of that last time with Priya... the biggest humiliation of his life! Suddenly that room arrangement sends him back in time

Why and how he cud see Priya in her? Hated what happened later, Hated the slap, hated the accusations, hated the sobs and most hated the all and the shiny gift returned.
Sorry and the shiny thing was her key, not any gift.
She is gone, with only words said, and it's hard very hard time ahead.
Yes, but time for him to realize what he wants and go for it... time for her to do the same as well

He must do something for this mess to be turned into normal " once again " - But will he?
Of course! He is a desperate man now 😳

Thank you so much for this update Di, am so honest with you that i jolted inside after one read.
Please make things better fro them. 😃
❤️
A lovely review Swati... sorry to have troubled you with this.😛
And thank you so much for waiting for my response. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so nice of you to write such an emotional chapter for us even though you were sick...thanks a lot dear..loved Ashni's torment..coz it will lead to a declaration of love from Ashu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Hello Aartiji 😃 How have you been? Hope all is great at your end. Finally I could catch up with the updates. Brilliantly written!! 👏 👏 👏

Hi Tupu... finally, you are back! Hope you had a nice time away! Did you go somewhere?😃
Catching up with all the updates is not an easy one... so thanks a lot for your effort.

Loved loved loved chapter:17!! 👏 👏 👏 Emotions r portrayed amazingly... Truly an emotional roller coaster ride not for the characters but for the readers too.
And for me too 😉 But yes, each frame of that chapter I had to put myself in a separate mood to write.

Finally Nidhi has put her foot down... Feeling so very sorry for her; poor girl is getting nothing after so many sacrifices, so much patience, understanding & unconditional, selfless love... Only & only because her husband is coming with a baggage of an abusive Ex-spouse & still can't lay his demons to rest 😭
Well, she is getting his love and care, only its disguised as friendship. But the set-backs are bigger, I guess. At the same time with each tough situation she has helped put that aspect of his fear to rest... its a slow tackle but she is getting there.

Am upset with Ashutosh but cannot hate him; poor fellow is victim of
circumstances & needs to overcome his fears due to a failed marriage. Ultimately, I feel sympathy only for both the characters.
Thank you for saying that... I feel I have achieved my purpose 😃

This 1 chapter alone has AshNi's friendship to hubby-wifey living happily and then big fight... Must have been tough for U to bring out the desired impact. And U have written all the parts absolutely wonderfully!! Accept a standing ovation from me 🤗
Wow, thanks a lot Tupu. 😃🤗
It was quite an effort to write the last two chapters. These, Sam's death and Priya FB have been the toughest so far.

Thank you for a comprehensive review and for investing your time to read so far. 🤗

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