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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Helooohybye

giving i was out of state with no net aaj hi de dungi

accha koi baat nhi update will wait jaise abhi tak kra🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz

accha koi baat nhi update will wait jaise abhi tak kra🤣

1hr mein deti hun rukh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys just 15 minutes then update for sure
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"Often times I would find myself feeling the strange sensation that she was staring into where my soul should be...if I had one I'm sure it would melt...but if i had one "
5:00pm half way to roorkee:
the journey was on full swing until ur sanyu spoked
Abey gadhe gadi rokh jaldi rokh said sanyu while searching something in her bag
Kya hua kyun gala padh rahi hai said parth being shocked at sanyu behaviour
Gala na padhu toh kya babaji apki aarti utarun saale gadhe kaminey teri jaldi jaldi ke chakkar mein , mein apna id card chod ayi ghar pe ..jaldi ghar chal
Sanyu tu pagal hai ghar kitne piche hai tujhe pata bhi hai and we ahve only 30 mins to reach fite and give our admission forms atleast one has to go ...said parth frantically
Haan yoh mein jati hun tu ghar jake mera id card leke aa said sanyu
Mein kyun jaun questioned parth
Jaldi kar jaldi ka dharna bhi tune hi lagaya tha abb ja mein age se bus le lungi aab jaa said sanyu placing her hands on her waist
Parrr said parth to be cut in between by sanyu
Jada par par mat kar sare kat dungi abb jaa
Tikhe lekin sambhal kar jana aur raste mein jungle ate hein unse todha durr rehna unke bilkul paas mat jana said parth getting hyper while talking about the jungles ...dont know why but whenever parth talks about those hilly dark jungles he always tells sanyu to stay away ...
Acha acha tikhe abb ja said sanyu
Bye
Bye ab jaa jaldi kar ullu kahinka
Saying this sanyu turned towards the bus stand and parth goes towards sanyus house
Sanyu takes a ticket towards roorkee fite ..fite where her dreams were to be achivied ...or may be destiny had some other plans while bringing her to fite ...may be not even fite may be those forests...thathad deep dark secrets about her life ..her PAST
Anyways the bus journey was smooth until the bus engine broked down and all people had to get down of the bus but sanyu was sanyu she insisted on repairing the bus but that bus master didnt agree ..or may be god had some other plans for thejourney till fite for sanyu ..who knows anyways after a heated argument with the adament bus amster sanyus strength was all gone so she thought to have something so she stopped at a tea stall
Bhaiya ek chai dena said sanyu to the young boy inside th store ...
Ji apko pehle kabhi nahi dekha iss jagah ..ap nayi hai kya said the tea boy
Haan woh mein fite roorkee jarahi thi lekin bus kharap ho gayi ...acha bhaiya wk baat bata na koi shortcut ya phir koi raasta jiseh fite jaldi pahuncha ja sake ...said sanyu while munching those biscuits free with tea ...
Ji raaste tohsirf yeh ek hi hai aur agli bus bhi raat ko hi ayegi 9 baje said the tea boy
Kya 9 baje nahi nahi itne der nahi ho sakta bhaiya koi toh shortcut hoga plz kuch toh boliye said sanyu getting tensed
Haan ek raasta hai jiseh app sirf 30 minute mein fite kepaas pahunch jayengi lekin ...said tea boy
Lekin kya kaisa bhi rasta ho mujhe chalega mein bas fite pahuncha chati hun said sanyu determined
Ji toh phir raasta jungle se hote huye sidhe fite pahunch ta hai lekin aaj tak us jungle koi nahi jata hai said the tea boy wipping the glasses
Jun jungle sanyu's breath stopped at listening it and remembering parths word made her tense ..bhaiya koi aur raasta nahi hai
Ji nahi bas yeh ek hi raasta hai ...
Tikhe said sanyu ...
Sanyu in mind kya yaar ab kya karun is raaste ko bhi jungle se jana tha mein toh kher chali bhi jaun lekin parth ko pata chala toh woh mujhe maar dalega waise hi babaji banke dimag khata hai ..ek minute parth ko bataye ga kaun .sanyu tu bhi na useh mat bata aur chalde jungle ke andar ...end of pov
Thinking this sanyu stepped inside the deep creey forest making sure to get out of it before sun sets ...and then the moment she stepped inside the forest a swift wind passed through her making her shiver but not made her creep
Pata nahi log junglelon se darte kyun hein haan thode andera hai lwkin phirbi pata nahi kyun yeh sab bahut apna apna lag raha hai jaise ki mein yahan pehle bhi ayi hun jaise ki ...huh snayu kya soch rahi chal ab nikal yahanse saying this our madam procedded towards the inside jungle
She was passing through a tree just then she heard something rather felt something she turned around to only witness someone passing at the speed of wind ...but her eyes gave up within a fraction of second it vanished
Kaun hai koi hai kya wahan ...lagta hai hawah thi said sanyu and went ahead just then a brach of tree was about to broke when sanyukta herself stopped it
Gawd bach gayi lekin mujhe kaise pata chala ki yeh girne wala hai ...arey chod yaar jaan bachi lakho paye lot ke buddhu o teri buddhu se yaad aya parth toh mujhse age nikal gaya hoga shit yaar i should be quick and when ahead and reached the end of the jungle ...
Finally i am out of here par pata nahi kyun jungle mein aisa laga ki koi tha koi mera apna ...kya yaar phirse yahi sab sanyu beta tujhe sachmein treatment ki jarurat hai ...
SOMEWHERE ON THE OUT SKIRTS OF DEHLI INSIDE A HUGE MANSION FULL OF DARKNESS:
Two persons where having their drinks when a younge lad of 19-20 yrs came to them
Mom dad the boy spoke in a husk voice
Yes son said the man while sipping his drink
Dad woh jinda hai she is alive she has came back but ...said the boy
Kya she is back is she safe hows she did you saw her said the woman
Yes mom i saw her in the jungle but mom she is changed even i think she is not safe said the boy getting frantic ..
What she is not safe harsh we have to do something said the woman to her husband ..
Yes. Renuka u r right we can let her be unsafe son u have to do something said harsh
No dad no i cant i cant face her anymore i cant ...i cant let her hate me again said the boy while hurt was the only emotion present in his voice ..
You have to do it randhir you have to do it atleastfor the sake of ur love said harsh placing a hand on randhirs shoulder ...
Dad she is changed she not whome i love i just cant ...i am not anymore meant for love said rd trying hard to control his heart who was screaming to go and love her
So you will let her die with that monster said renuka coming from back
Monster what do you mean mom even i am a monster said confused and hurt rd
Mein abhi abhi yeh bat client head ko kahi they said sanyu is with him only ...who was the reason for what happened years ago and son you are not a monster but a gem ...said renuka
What no ...i cant leave with him ..that bloody ...he can do anything with her said rd to himself
Mom tomorrow i will go to roorkee fite said rd determined
Why fite son asked harsh ..
Cause she is there only said rd looking outside the window ...
Ok fine son do what you want but make sure she is safe ...said both the parents
Even if i have to give my life for whe i wont mind but i promise she would be safe said rd to himself while looking at the full moon outside and waiting for the next day to arrive when a new rose will bloom a ROSE OF FIRE ...but only he knew that this would change everything in her life and his too
Huh finally i am done this was the longest update i have done ever in my life hope you like it and plz do cmmnt and like they help me to write more an dthanks for reading ...acha guys one thing more ...about parth do you mind if i make him little greyish

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

unres🤣
Kya likhti hai re tu🤣
Moi abhi padi yeh chapter
Supernatural powers wala ff hai na tera?
Ab samajh aaya🤣
Upd soonish.

-machar🤣
Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Ressuuu
Loved it bhoot..!
Kya language daali hai sanyu ki🤣 🤣
Godd parth kaise bache 🤣
Ek cheez clear hui that paran are monsters??
Sanyu insaan hai?
Loved the shekhawat bonding..!
Abhi next mein no deri weri okhiee
Pata nhi mere kitne ress bache hain abhi..?!!
*takes chain ki saas*
Chalo ek kamm hua ..!

Bandar

Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
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Posted: 11 years ago
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iss res ki toh main ab cahl jaldi unres kar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Mera pm kaha hai??
Jaa
Res
Ab yeh mogambo jaldi unres nahi karegi!!
UNRES
hehehe sorry!!
Bahut late ho gayi thi
Okay
Tera SS bada impressive hai re!
hehe Sanyu ki language mast hai!!!
🤣 🤣 🤣
Bechara Parth
yeh banda toh gaya kaam se 🤣 🤣 🤣
Chal update soon!!!

--Mogu--
Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

Mera pm kaha hai??
Jaa
Res
Ab yeh mogambo jaldi unres nahi karegi!!

i have not send pm anyone ..i send wveryone now check ur inbox mein pehle send kia tha lekin sned mssg button dabana bhul gayi thi ab chal mogambo khush hoja aur cmmnt dede matlab unress karde

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