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Posted: 11 years ago
part 82
awesome...
stupid Maan...
poor Geet...
seriously he has lost his mind completely...
and wow Geet tho sherni ban gayi...
well Sasha got a good slap...
now what will she do to Geet?
Maan hurt her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
di thz z so bad stopping at ryt momnt oh wow wow wowwht a slap t was achoo geet kalikita ni sema adi ;) buddhu maan wen r yu gonna stop yur act n understand her waiting di
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsu.m update geet is possesive for maan now cant bear sasha close to him
slapt that chudail hahahahaha i just love it waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
Maan hurting geet..Geet feeling sad with maan behavior
Sasha got nice slap
Precap interesting..Hope maan will accept her confession,Eagerly waiting for maan reaction
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
so she will confess now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So lovely !!!
Finally she lost her control and lashed out at Sasha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me waiting and I had to post last chapter comment too... will do it tonight
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BANNER)








- 83




As it was 9 ,te whole park was almost empty..Maan went near her..Geet sense him but didt look at him..Maan felt bad seeing her sad..he know he is te reason for her sadness, but he is helpless..


Maan: Geet

Geet without looking at him: why u doing tis to me Maan

Maan: wat i did

Geet look at him ,who pretending he didt know: u have change Maan,u have changed ..u r not my Maan who was caring but u

Maan got angry with her words why all thinking he is changing no,he started to shout : no i didt change,do u get it i didt change

As the park was empty,his words echoed..

Geet : but i changed Maan

Maan was shock to hear her words

Geet: i changed..my feelings for u changed..

Maan : wat u saying


Geet : dont act as though u dont know wat im saying..I know u aware abt ur feelings..u cant see wat im going thru..my heart started to beat for u

Even though he know wat she feels but kept quite..both stood silent

Maan broke te silence: Geet lets go its so late..he turn to leave


Geet runs to him & hugs his back : I LOVE U

Maan froozen hearing tis words..he tightened his fist.. tis is te thing he feared till now and try to run away from tis.. but his fate brought it..wat he will say to her.. he stood still..Geet was hugging ,but he didt hug her nor push her..he was standing helplessly.. he dont wat to do anything..one min he want to crush her in his embrace..but he cant..he cant spoil her life.. how she will react after she know abt him.. if she love too after knowing his dark side it will be only pity..no he dot want her pity

He just removed her hands from his waist

Geet wiped her tears: I Love U Maan

Maan got irritated with her words and started to shout : Geet stop all ur non sense..echoing te whole park..


Geet didt hear any of his words, she just chant one word, holding his wrist : i love u

Maan snap her hand : stop it just stop it..enough of ur jokes

Geet holds his collar and started to shout: im not cracking any jokes..my love for u look like a joke for u ahan..

Maan didt say anything,he look at her hold on his collar


Geet : say Maan ..cant u feel my love for u..i love u Maan, tears were flowing from her eyes

Maan : i didt love u

Geet: why

Maan : i cant

Geet got angry ,her hold on his collar tighten: dont lie i know u too have feelings for me..

Maan : u mistook my care for u as love.. i cant do anything for tat

Geet: i know Maan u love me,

Maan shouted: no no just shut up

Geet: dont shout..i know u love me

Maan : no

Geet : u didt feel anything for me

Maan : no

Geet : my presence didt bother u

Maan : no


Geet shook his collar : no no u r lieing , i know u love me..i can see it in ur eyes..wat is stopping u..do u think i wont fit in ur world..i will change myself

Maan was getting annoyed with her antics: u cant change anything..

Geet : my love can change anything

Maan smiled tauntingly : wat u think love is not love

Geet got angry : then wat, wenever u cum close my heart started to beat fast.. im craving to get a look from u..i want to be around u always.

Maan : it is not love, Geet , its mere attraction..u have living in ur dream world so seeing me u got attracted and u naming it love


Geet felt hurt & angry hearing his words: dare u say my love as attraction..u feel my love for u is only attraction

Maan : yes

Geet shook his collar : tis much only u know abt ur friend

Maan got angry: i know abt my friend..but not tis mad girl who fallen in love with other girl's husband


Geet shocked hearing his words..her grip around his collar loosened..her hand fall on te sides..she move back staring at him..she felt like some one snatch te ground underneath her feet..tears were flowing form her eyes..

Geet : no no u r lying

Maan : yes im married

Geet shook her head : no no

Maan : yes and father of a kid

Geet : kid

Maan : Ayesha


Geet head started to spin hearing his words..tears were flowing from her eyes..she felt some one crushing her heart..she look at Maan...Maan cant see her hurtful eyes..but he hurting her with his each words

Geet : then were is she

Maan: she left me.. but any time she can cum back, with stern face

Geet stood numb..Maan heart pained to see her expression..but he have to do atleast for her

Geet: no no

Maan: yes im married..now u understand why i said no


Geet look at him

Maan: so better change urself and move on..dont waste ur time in ur useless feelings which having no meaning

Geet shattered hearing his words and look at him..te nature too crying for her as rain started to pour.



Pirai vandhavudan nilaa vandhavudan
nilaa vandhadhenRu uLLam thuLLum
nizhal kaNdavudan neeyenRu indha
nenjam nenjam minnum

(When the crescent comes out,
the heart will jump in joy
thinking that the Moon has arrived..)

Nizhal kandavudan
Nee endru - indha
Nenjam nenjam vimmum

(By seeing the shadow,

My heart will reach its ecstasy
Thinking that it's you!!)


Maan can see her tears even in te rain..both drenching in te rain..

Maan: im sory,i should have said u before itself , but pls try to change urself

Geet stood still..Maan know she need time

Maan: lets go

Geet didt respond, Maan try to hold her hand, but Geet showed her hand to stop him


Geet: pls u go Maan i will cum later

Maan: Geet

Geet: pls Maan leave me alone for some time..looking at him, dont wory i wont die

Maan shouted: Geet


Geet look at him..his eyes shows only care nothing else..Maan look at her and left..before leaving he gesture Raghav to keep eye on her..

Geet collapsed on te ground crying her lungs out


Enge enadhu kavidhai - kanavile
ezhudhi madiththa kavidhai

(Where is my Poetry?
The one that I wrote and folded in my Dream..)

Vizhiyil karaindhu vittadho ammammaa

Vidiyal azhitthu vittadho
(Did it dilute in the eye? Ho...!
Did the Dawn masquerade it?)

Kavidhai thedi thaarungaL illai en
Kanavai meettu thaarungaL

(Search for the Poetry or
Bring back my Dream!!)

Enge enadhu kavidhai - kanavile
Ezhudhi madiththa kavidha
i
(Where is my Poetry?
The one that I wrote and folded in my Dream..)


Geet: my love is meaningless..she thought wat she will do how she will live forgetting him

Geet screamed: no no..looking up.why u doing tis to me..i thought u given me everything, but u made me nothing..im nothing.. she started to cry and screaming


Geet : ahaaa ahaaa

Maalai andhikalil manadin sandhugaLil
Tholaindha mugaththai manam thedudhey

(The mind searches for the lost face in the crevices of Evenings &
the intricate lanes in itself)


Veyyil taar ozhugum nagaara veedhigaLil
Meiyal koNdu maLar vaadudhey

(The flower is losing its freshness by ambulating through
molten Tar filled city roads in Heat)



Maan took his car and started to drive like a mad person..he was angry..her painful eyes haunting him..he hit te steering and raising te acceralator..her painful eyes came in front of his eyes..he never seen her crying tis much, tat too coz of him... yes he wanted good for her but not like tis.. he didt imagined things will go like tis..

Megam sindhum iru thuliyin idaiveliyil
Thurivi thurivi unnai thedudhey

(The mind filters & searches for you even
in the gap between two rain drops)


Udaiyum nuraigaLilum tholaindha kaadhalanai
Urugi urugi manam thedudhey

(The mind searches for its lost Lover with great
sorrow..even in broken bubbles)
Azihagiya thirumugam oru muram paarthaal
Amaidhiyul niRaindhuiruppen

(If I see your beautiful Face just once, I will be
contempt with silence)

Nuniviral koNdu orumurai theendu
NooRu muRai piRandhiruppen

(Touch me with your Finger tip..
I will be born a Hundred times!!)


Maan was imaging her smiling face and how she brought light In his life but wat he gave her, nothing other than tears..yes he can only give tat.. but her, HER words.. U CAN GIVE NOTHING TO A GIRL RATHER THAN PAIN..



Geet thinking his words : he said my love is meaningless, useless..i have fallen in love without knowing that love has no meaning..he is not mine, he is not mine

Geet: before my love blossom,it was crushed

PiRai vandhavudan

Nilaa vandhavudan
Nilaa vandhadendru
ULLam thuLLum

(When the crescent comes out,
the heart will jump in joy
thinking that the Moon has arrived..)


Nizhal kandavudan
Nee endru - indha
Nenjam nenjam vimmum

(By seeing the shadow,

My heart will reach its ecstasy
Thinking that it's you!!)



Geet stood up and thought to leave..she was walking, were her legs taking and Maan driving one side..both thinking abt each other


Ore parvai ada ore varthai ada

Ore thodudhal manam yengudhey
(The mind longs for just one Look or
Just one Touch..)

Muththam podum andha moochchin veppam adhu

Niththam vendumendru vendudhey
(It wants & wishes for that warmth given by your
breath while kissing..Everyday!!)


Maan stop his car in restaurant and went inside te bar to calm his burning soul..

RAGHAV..


Geet walking hugging herself..Raghav asked her to get into car but she denied..he cant see his baby sister like tis..who was very lively and bring smile in everyone's face,today she lost her smile..he felt sad for her..


Geet walking aimlessly in te road.. her thought went to te day wen she meet him for first time in te mall , and in te road and how he shouted at her.. then how he became his friend. Friend , she never imagine he will fall for her friend, her friend who taught her abt love , but te same person shattered it ..

Vervai pooththa undhan sattai vaasam
Endru ottum endru manam yengudhey

(My mind is yearning for a day when your
sweat-filled shirt would embrace me!)

Mugam poothhirukkum mudiyil ondrirandu
Kuththum inbam kannam ketkudhey

(The cheek longs for the pleasurable pricking of
your 'stubbled' face..!)


Ketkudhey...
(It longs..)


Geet didt think she will fall In love, but now she cant think a sec without him..wat she will do..how she will mend her broke heart

PaaRayil seidhadhu en manam endru
Thozhikku solliyirundhen

(I had told my friend that my heart is a Rock)

PaaRayin idukkil ver vitta kodiyaai
Nee nenjil muLaiththu vittai

(But You have emerged in my heart like a plant that roots
itself in the cracks of a Rock)..


Geet reached km, holding te gate, she stood.. security felt sad to Geet baby crying..whole security and servants was shocked to see Geet..

Enge enadhu kavidhai - kanavile

ezhudhi madiththa kavidhai

(Where is my Poetry?
The one that I wrote and folded in my Dream..)

Vizhiyil karaindhu vittadho ammammaa
Vidiyal azhitthu vittadho

(Did it dilute in the eye? Ho...!
Did the Dawn masquerade it?)


Kavidhai thedi thaarungaL illai en
Kanavai meettu thaarungaL

(Search for the Poetry or

Bring back my Dream!!)


Enge enadhu kavidhai - kanavile
Ezhudhi madiththa kavidhai

(Where is my Poetry?
The one that I wrote and folded in my
Dream..)


Geet was walking fully drenched in rain..Nakul saw Geet and got worried..he called Dadi..

Dadi: Wat happen Nakul

Nakul: Geet baby

Dadi saw Geet who look all worn out. she rush to Geet screaming her name..hearing her shout Anni too came and got shock to see Geet

Dadi hold Geet: Geet beta wat happen


Geet look at her..Geet pulled herself and loosened Dadi's hand on her shoulder..Dadi was shiver to see her cold blank face

Dadi: Geet.

Geet try to move..Dadi hold her wrist

Geet pulled her hand : he crushed my love u all broke me into pieces..u all broke me

Dadi: who broke Geet ,wat happen

Geet: my love is meaningless im nothing ,she started to crying holding her head


Dadi got shock and worry: who said tat Geet

Geet: Maan said he is married..u hide tis from me dadi..u made me to feel low for loving another girl's husband. chi i hate myself. i hate myself

Dadi: no Geet u mistook

Geet: Maan said he is married and father of ayesha..he said my love is meaningless..he crushed my love before it blossom..u all crushed it..u all made me feel low..im nothing nothing.. she started to cry..

Dadi was shock and sad to hear wat maan said to Geet..she wipe her tears and pulled Geet..Geet look at her

Dadi : Geet u trust me..

Geet stare at her

Dadi : cum with me.

Dadi took her upstairs to te other side of km...Trio stood in front of a room

Dadi: Geet one day u asked why tis room was locked..coz it have all have good and bad memories which we trying forget..

Dadi open te door..it was dark..She switch te lights..Geet stood shock seeing te room..it was big with classy..There was a big protrait of a girl hanging on te wall..she was smiling..











PRECAP : PAST...

NEXT PART: 84, PG 74


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