Taarey ff ~||STUCK!||~ {on hold. Note pg 23} - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

awsm updt
its all some black magic nic
finally 4 meet together
updt sn



thanks so much.
sure.


Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

wow lovely stry, hv read d whole 3 chap in one go , mystry, magic, advengour etc make dis stry mr intresting, plz pm me too when u update d next part


haha. thanks.
well, fast eh?
and, your comments make me happy.
sure. buddy me for that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FEELINGS

~*~*~

Things can get so weird at time. Right? This is one of those situation. We four are here, together. Sharon, I know, shows that she hates Swayam. But, I know what the real feelings are. She cant even stand one day without having an argument with the poor soul.

Rey's P.O.V

Well, you really can't trust time. I have learnt this. I cannot even think about this situation in my best dream. Yes, dream. Anyway, looks like swayam is going to have a good time. Mr. majnu has got his laila here, after all. He is such a love sick puppy.

Sharon's P.O.V

Life is not certain. Not even single person sitting here must have thought we will end up this way. I hate Swayam. Why don't he talk to me? God! Anyway, taani has got what she wants. Rey! He is here. Taani baby, you are going to have fun. I hope the same for me.

Swayam's P.O.V

God! Why? One way she gives arrogance to me, on other hand, her eyes say something else. I just don't know what to do next? Never mind, rey! Iski toh lag gayi. Taani and him, together. Well, many things will change. I hope.

End of everyone's P.O.V

"So, how you guys landed up here?" asked Sharon, breaking the deadly silence that had settled itself between all of them. Taani thanked Sharon mentally.

Swayam and Rey looked at each other, as if thinking to tell them. At the end, they started with their story. After they ended it, the same question was asked to us. Taani started the story, which was continued by miss diva.

"so, our stories are somewhat same. Right?" ended Rey. His gaze moved towards taani, who was blushing badly. He made a mental note to ask her later.

"umm, I think, we should get some more logs Rey. Now that the girls are also there, we need more things. And, also some more food." Swayam said pointing towards the two females sitting in front of them. Sharon smiled sheepishly at swayam's care. This was noticed my three other people.

"yeah. I agree. Girls, you wait here. Its getting da.." before our hunk, Rey could complete. Miss innocent interrupted him.

"why? We will come along. We are not one of those chicks that you hang around with." Said, Taani. A pinch of jealousy was easily audible in her tone. Rey was having a hard time controlling himself from squeezing the blonde in front of him, in his arms.

"Easy girl. Come along. Okay?" said Rey, suppressing his laughter. Taani cutely nodded with an extra large smile on her face. They all looked at Sharon.

"I am in!" she exclaimed joyfully.

Suddenly, an idea popped in Swayam's mind from nowhere.

"okay. So, Taani, you are accompanying Rey." Said swayam with a gentle smile. He has always been a great friend on her. But, not as great as Sharon was.

Taani was about to say no, when she noticed the look on his face. She could feel something fishy. Suddenly, it striked her.

"Yes-yes. Why not?" she replied with an evil grin. She patted swayams's back mentally.

*~*~*

"so, where do we go?" asked taani, after seeing two ways in front of them.

"well, we better go to left." Replied rey. He, himself wasn't sure of where to go, but, inside he felt to go to left.

"No! we will go towards right." Said taani, in a stern voice.

"and, what make you feel I will listen to you? We are going to left. Okay?" replied rey. He was enjoying her angry face. She looked cute.

"haven't you heard? Girls are always right. So, we go right. Okay?" said taani, in a determined tone.

"what? That is illogical!" exclaimed rey.

"it isn't." scoffed taani. She knew she was talking insane. But, how can she lose against him?

"whatever girl! You go right, I go left. And if, someone eats you, don't you dare blame me." Completed rey in a huff.

"I wont." With that, she moved towards right unknown to the fact what awaits her.

"crazy chick. But, what do I do? Follow her? No! I wont. She is such an arrogant bitch. I am so not going there." With that, he paced towards left.

"He is such a dick. I hate him. Doesn't he knows how to behave with a girl? Swayam is much better than him. He is "the" Reyaansh. How will he even.. AAAHHH!" before she could complete, a loud shriek escaped her luscious lips.

"CRAP! It's her voice. Taani! I told her. Why can't she listen to me? Always up with her tactics." As he finished he heard his name.

"REEYYY!"

"Come on Rey. She is a girl. Don't you know girls? Leave. Go find her." His inner soul consoled and, demanded him to find her.

"she is your love. Find her." These words. They were enough to generate the unseen energy which he had enclosed within him for, god knows, how many years?

"taaani! Taani!" rey shouted. His voice was roaring in the dark night. The serene beauty, his love, was nowhere to be seen. His heart was pumping hard inside him. It could leave his body any moment.

He again called her, with all the inner strength left within him. There was a hope in his voice this time.

"REYYY!"

He heard her voice. Yes, he was right. She was somewhere near. Without wasting a minute, he followed the voice.

*~*~*

No I don't know how I am going to continue this, too. Well, you guys don't worry. I will take out some way, promise. So, here you all go with the next update of my first ever story, STUCK. I love this name.

Ohkay. Cool. The part is updated. Its not that good, but, it was necessary to show what they felt for each other. This part has nothing much good. Anyway, if you liked it, please click the like button. If not, than cool.

ENJOY!

Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Heyaa m the first
awesome update
wohhaa swaron n taarey has a feelings for eachother
Thats great
wow rey already admitted that he loves taani
Amazing
Ohh taani is in danger
eagerly waiting for another chapter
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
oh my my
wt a prt
thnk gd
dy r 2gathr
& ofcorse
girls r always r8
litl scrd abut ending prt
hp all s wl
thnks 4 pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Wow I luv everyone point of view
Taarey nok Jok was cute but y
So small update thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
wow!! Love their Povs...
swayam is really a true friend...
love taarey's cute argument...
bt what's happened to taani???where is she???
plzz updt ASAP...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
awesome update
love all povs
taarey fight part was cute
omg now taani in trouble
how rey going to save her
eagerly waiting to know
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Wow wat a update dear
Loved it!
Rey loves her n taarey cute nok -jhok aww
"We are nt dat chicks u hang around "-she is jealous
Taani in problem bt our hero will save her 😎
Update asap n dis tym big wala k warna 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Loved it! ❤️
I loved feisty Taani 😛
Continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice evry1 pov
love taarey nok jok
wt happen to tani

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