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Posted: 11 years ago
Cant wait till the next update!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written...👏👏👏👏. please PM me... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really love your ff... it's very beautifully written and I liked Roshni also and the manner in which she convinces Kalpi... we'll thought off and extremely effective... it's really nice to see Kalpi has friends who could do anything for her.

Please update soon...
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Awesome update, eager to read more, do update soon please...
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Hello guys.. First of all sorry for not replying from a long time.. I was really busy in something and was using mobile for IF. And sorry for late updt.. I will try to give double update today.

@all : Thank you for liking the story. I am really grateful to u guys for encouraging me. I know I made lot of mistakes so thank u for tolerating them.

@those who want RagNa : I am sorry but I am disappoint u in the end.. Though I have not decided the end yet but I feel Kalpi should move on fully and what raghav did is not pardonable.. But than True love is above all so I may unite RagNa but right now I do not want Kalpi to forgive him.

@Dee n Sejal : Kamla gonna pay for her deeds and Roshni is here to make her realize her faults. Kamla will be jealous of Roshni just like Kalpi was of Poo.

One more thing I just want to clarify is that Paya has already said that roy is her family.. His mother father brother everything but he is not her brother in real.. But Payal doesn't love him.


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Posted: 11 years ago
This update can be bit boring as I feel I had gone to too much depth.. I wanted to end the story soon but I guess it will take more time.. If u r hating so much detailing than plz tell me.. I will try to rectify in next part.


@Udaan classes


Kalpi is sitting at reception.. From last 1 week she was working continuously for this one day.. Finally her class will start tomorrow.. She is hoping at least 10 students will register today.. She looks at only classroom of her classes..It has 15 wooden chairs with writing pad.. One big white board.. A table and a chair for the faculty on which Payal and Roy are sitting and arguing over something... She remembers the day when she went to purchase furniture with Roy..


Flash Back


Roy takes her to one big furniture showroom to purchase chairs.. Kalpi looks at them carefully and likes one of them... She goes to check it's price and realizes that it's too costly for her to purchase.. Roy notices her but doesn't say anything.. he calls Kalpi..


Roy : Kalpi.. I am not liking anything her.. Let's go..


Kalpi : Where?


Roy : U just come..


Roy takes Kalpi to a small furniture market.. It was looking like some middle class market.. He takes her to the last shop of the street.. Kalpi looks amused on seeing him in such a small place..


Roy : This is my frn Raju's shop.. U will get all 2nd hand furniture over here!! U can give him the specification and he will prepare it.. And I can assure u that it won't look 2nd hand.


Kalpi : Ur frn's shop?? How come??


Roy : That's a long story..


Kalpi : Than tell me in short


Roy : When I was young.. Raju's father came to our place for some work.. He worked at our place for 15 days.. He too use to come with his father and we became frns.. So in short I know him very well...


Kalpi : Thank u..


Roy : For what?


Kalpi : For understanding me so well... That shop was out of my budget that's why u bought me here..


Roy : Hmm.. That's what frshp is.. Now let's order..


In present


Kalpi comes out of her thoughts due to Payal's screaming.. She was shouting on Roy for something.. Kalpi hears them from far.. She smiles on hearing the reason of their fight.. Payal was angry on Roy coz he kept red color on Kalpi's table while she has decided black one.. Roy tries to pacify her..


Kalpi(in her mind) : I would have sure done something good in my life that's why I have such nice frns.. They have done so much for me.. I don't know how I will repay them.. And see how childish they are.. They are teaching me the way to live life fully.. They too have lot of tension in their life but still they doesn't let it affect them.. I too won't let anything affect my dreams.. And now I have two angels to support me..

She remembers the day when furniture was delivered..

Flash back

Among all other chairs there is one Table-chair pair which she dint order.. On having a closer she realizes that it's the same chair which she liked in the showroom.. She calls Roy who is busy in arranging stuffs..

Kalpi : Roy.. U ordered this?

Roy : Ssshhh.. This is a gift from me and Payal and this is not for u.. but for the faculty of the class.. N u r not going to argue for this.. Else I won't ever talk to u..

Kalpi : So Payal supported u??

Roy : How do u know??

Kalpi : The word u said just now is not urs and Payal's.. by now I know u guys very well... Neways Thanks for the gift but I will pay for it.. N it's for my own self respect and u won't argue..

Roy : Ok!! I understand! I won't argue on this but plz do not pay it.. It will hurt Payal.. Is money above her feelings??

Kalpi : Ok I won't but u too promise that from now onwayrds u won't do any such thing. I am happy with this gestures of urs but plz...

In present

Kalpi is smiling when someone interrupts her.. A lady has come for her son's admission.. She introduces herself and tells her that she came her coz she wants someone who can pay full attention to her son... it's a new start up and hence she wants to give her a chance.. Kalpi assures her that she won't disappoint her and promises that she will see improvement in her son.. She tells the lady to send her son from tomorrow.. Payal and Roy congratulates her for her 1st student.

Few more students came in the day.. She checks the data and decides to take 3 batches for this 11 students.


1 month later

Payal has gone out for some assignment.. Roy is also busy with his father in some important deal... Kalpi is working hard.. She has so many things to look after now.. he previous teaching job, cafe,dancing classes, her own coaching center and NGO. She has came quite close to Roshni due to this NGO work.. Roshni has supported her a lot by giving her flexibility of working hours.. Roy too has reduced her working hours and appointed a new girl to assist her and manage cafe in her absence. Payal is truly Kalpi's support system...No matter how late Kalpi arrives from her work.. they always have dinner together.

Today she is missing Payal a lot.. She plans dinner at cafe only as Payal is not in the city.. She doesn't want to eat but she is feeling dizzy from morning...She takes out a sandwich to eat but keeps it back as she can't eat alone. She looks at her watch.. It's 11 pm. She leaves the cafe alone..

It's dark outside and no one is around.. 3boys are smoking and drinking at the corner of the street.. She tries to avoid them but one of them comes to her and stops her.. She tells him to move away but he doesn't.. He tries to snatch her bag but she pushes him aside.. Other guy come to help him when she takes out pepper spray from her bag and sprays it in their eyes and runs away from there... While running she bumps into a car and falls down.. Roshni comes out of the car.. She sees Kalpi and goes to her.. Kalpi is unconscious..She sprinkles some water on Kalpi's face.. Kalpi gains consciousness.

Roshni : Kalpi.. What are u doing here??

Kalpi : I was going to my hostel when some guys tried to misbehave with me...

Roshni : R u fine?

Kalpi : Yes Roshniji.. Thank u.. I will go now.

Roshni : Where r u going?? U have high fever.. We are going to hospital.

Kalpi : No.. I am fine.. I will take some medicine..

Roshni : U stupid girl.. I dnt want any argument.. U r coming with me.

Roshni takes her to the hospital where doctor examines her.. Doctor calls Roshni in her cabin and tells her that It's viral and It will get cured in 3 days but she needs to take proper rest. Roshni takes Kalpi with her to her home..



@Oberoi Mansion

Kalpi enters the house with Roshni.. She tried to deny first but Roshni tells her to come as her hubby and son are not in the city and she will be happy to have her company. Roshni calls her servants and tells one to arrange guest room as Kalpi will stay there for night and orders other to serve the food.

Roshni : Hope u likes the food.. I don't know anything about ur taste..

Kalpi : It's delicious. And thank u.. I dint had dinner tonight as I don't like eating alone..

Roshni : Really? Well I am habitual of eating alone due to my husband's business meetings and all. But I have made a rule that everyone will have breakfast together only.

Kalpi : U love ur family a lot.

Roshni : Yes.. They are my world. Where is ur family?

Kalpi : In mumbai

Roshni : Don't u miss them??

Kalpi : Yes I do. I miss my ayi a lot but I am here to fulfill their dreams only. I wan them to feel proud of me. Ia m here to do something on my own

Roshni : U r such a nice girl.. u must be their pride. I wish I too had a daughter like u. A daughter is mother's best frn.. I miss that best frn in my life.

Kalpi : I am like ur daughter only. If u want u can share ur secrets with me.. I promise I won't reveal it.

Roshni(smiles) : Really?? That's great.. Ok from now onwards whenever I will fell lonely I will call u and u too can call me anytime..


P.S. : Plz comment and hit like!!

Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update..please do continue soon..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc! Like the frndshp between Roshni and Kalpi! So sweet to see them bonding! But does she not know that Roshni is Roy's mother?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update..please do continue soon..👍🏼


Thank you!! Will try to update next part soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: loveragna

loved it
plz continue soon


Thank u. will continue soon.😊

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