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I was so sleepy and tired last night that's why I'm reviewing it now🥱Thanks for the PM😊There's some issue😛either the songs you iclude don't work for me or I'm reading these chappys form phone. This time my speakers and headphones aren't working😆Khair mai ne ese he kaam chala liya😛
the update was wonderfull!👏why do you expect jootis?😆mai tou hugs dungi is chapter pe🤗Firstly I'd like to rpaise Rizwan's character. The way he understand Zain-Aaliya's situations and feelings. He is supporting both of them. And wants them to be together😳This update was making me confused if Aaliya will tell Zain about the baby or not😛I loved the way you penned down the inner struggle which Aaliya was going through. So realistic and beautifully written👍🏼
The terrace part was so brilliant! amazing😳Aaliya and Rizwan's convo was really heart touching😭but finally he convinced and that's what i wanted😛<font size="2">"Karta hai! Bahoot pyaar karta hai! Bas apne jazbaaton me andha ho gaya hai. Jis tarah tum yaha tadap rahi ho, waha wo bhi tadap raha hai. He misses you Aaliya, he loves u. He really does. " "</font><font size="2">Bas akela rehta hai, tumhari tarah. Apne khalipan ko apni zid ke neeche chupane ki koshish karta rehta hai." these two dialogues were so tear jerkingg😭aww! Bechara Zain! He's my sweet heart! Though i feel sad for Aaliya too and Zain did all this but i do have sympathies for him😛</font>
<font size="2">Urghhh! he was about to pick up the phone but that chudail😡Why don't you go ahead and kill her on my behalf?😛i can't bear her presence anywhere🤢i felt like kicking her out of Zain's room when she was acting like a little 2 year old kid😡</font>Was Zain Abdullah so weak that he let a women rule his life? Would he let a woman dictate his life? The Zain Abdullah who lived life on his terms had become so weak in love that he no longer resembled himself? These thought were amazing!!👏loved it! *dacing* when Zain finally sent her a message😛wohoo!!
<font size="2">The last part was confusing!Anywaysi know the confusion would be cleared int he next update😃waitingfor you to update. Pm me this time too😳I'm happy that they are united. Though i love sad endings more but still i dint want these two separate in your story😛WOW ! WOW👏Aash, as usual this update was really amazing.😃Forgot to mention one thing ! Shab e Baraat Mubarak to you too :) Remember me in your prayers :D </font>
<font size="2">P.S. This time i gave a read to your OS 'Bleeding blue'😛Mann that was so brilliantly written! Amazing! I fall short of words to describe how wonderful that OS was. But why did you end it on happy note? you know i'd have preferred sad ending😛Separation is what i like moree😉anyways it was amazingg👍🏼👏</font>
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 11 years ago
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