Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi ) 12th chaptr updated links given - Page 16

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asifiqbalsh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Asya on honeymoon
Both has different intentions
Let's see who will win
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jil i m very very late na
koi ni i know u'll 4giv me
Asys fight 4 bathroom
Asad locks Zoya in Naj room
than coms 2 complain 2 momma
totally chidish
PKD coming wid sanwich 4 Asad
chipkali ki tarh chipak gayi hai
Asya going 4 1 month HM
voh bhi crise pe maja ayega
kunki 1 dusre ko chod ke bhaag nahi payenge
aur vahn toh 1 hi bathroom hoga so double ladayi
good Job jil😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!
fantastic update!!!

amazing yaar!!!!

haha!!!
zoya and her antics!!!!

oh!!come on Afreen!!!! now they r married!!!! pls go away now atleast!!!
i dont have anything against you...but its not right to break a married couple and that too definitely not asya!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dono like maarke chalegaye

Akheli kya machar maroon ????
potternerd thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jil kidar hai tu
Update na
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Posted: 11 years ago
chaptr 8 aak nd zoya both enter the cruise...nd aak's frnds come running
hey
azaan ayob zara afreen...all smile ...yaar tune bola 30 days trip hogi hum sab enjoy karege
thts y we came yaar thanks for informing
zoya : gets irritated wht ??? nd pulls asad tumne in sab ko kyon bulaya hav u lost it...hume to ek duje ko jaana tha samajna tha...nd tume ithna hi shok tha bulane ki tho main bhi apne frnds ko bulathi...
aak : idk..i dont care abt us..or we knowing each other..
zoya ; thn I dont care abt ur frnds...nd moves frm ther..
.azaan: arrey bhabi rukiye..wait iam azaan it's pleasure to meet u...
zoya : sorry not in a mood to meet anyone... nd moves towards their cabin
yeh saddu ne tho sara mood bigad diya...wht the hell...apne frnds ko koi kudh ke honeymoon main bulatha hai..huh... arz kiya hai...Punam ki rat me chand badal jata hai,
Waqt k sath insan badal jata hai,
Sochte hai ki tume tang na kare,
Magar sochte sochte plan badal jata hai..
Aak : arrey frnds chodo usse...chalo sab iss ship ki sher karthe hai..lets explore it everyher..
All see so beautiful
Afreen : accha plan banaliya...hum sab frnds ko bhi bhulakar accha kiya.. otherwise 30 days without u would be so difficult
Asad : lets go near the cruise canteen nd hav somethg..come on guys...
Zoya : feels hungry uff bhuki bhi hoon...
Zoya ; comes out nd goes near cruise canteen..nd sees aak nd frnds ordering somethg..
Aak : hot coffe plz...zoya goes nd tells 1 of the waitor to put salt to the coffee...
Zoya : mere bina sab arram hai bacchu...ab dekti hoon..Sits near one of the bench nd the waitor goes nd gives hot dark coffe to asad
Asad drinks nd suddenly spits everythg...yuck...its salty coffee...Aak shouts at the waitor cant u giv a good coffee..this kind of service u giv...
Zoya laughs laudly...hahaha
Aak understands its none other than zoya...
Afreen sees zoya:...ufff ab iss ladki ko tumara zara sa bhi kayal nahi hai...she doesn't evn bother for u..
Hey hey rockstar in the cruise...we want u to sing plzzz some of aak's fans in the cruise...plzz plzz
Aak gets irritated but seeing zoya starts singing in rage
Ek lauta mera dil tha

Bhola bhala simple tha

Tujhse main takraya

Sar phira ho gaya
Banke museebat

Peeche padi hai

Yeh comedy hai

Ya tragedy hai

NA hona tha kyun ho gaya..

Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya

Tere aane se pehle theek tha
Ab murjhaya sa jaise koi phool hoon
Pehle tha banda kitna kaam ka
Khaali refill jaisa ab fizool hoon
Raaton ko.. (main jaagun, main jaagun saari neende)
Woh le gayi.. (chura ke, chura ke)
Soun toh.. (khwabon ki khwabon ki khidkiyon se)
Aake tu.. (phir jhaanke chal tu hi batlaa de na)

Banke museebat
Peeche padi hai
Yeh comedy hai
Ya tragedy hai
Na hona tha kyun ho gaya..
Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya
Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya

Zoya is surprised nd her mouth o shaped bapre she thinks yeh song tho iss akdu ne mereliye hi dedicate kiya hoga...aakir isski life ki sabse badi musibat jo hoon...

But akdu asad yeh nahi samja...ki I feel left out...aur mere saath koi nahi issliye tho tume tang karthi hoon...mitwaaa nd zoya moves frm ther...

Aak comes to his room aftr 1 hour..to freshen up..

Zoya already in the bathroom taking shower

Aak : zoya open up...ab aur kitni der hogi...

Zoya : don't shout yeh tumara gharwala bathroom nahi nd waise bhi main pehle se hi hoon yaha par...

Zoya suddenly slips oouch...ahhh

Aak hears frm outside arrey kya huva tum gir gayi...shayed kudha keliye bhi tum bhoj ho...hahaha

But aak hears no sound nd starts banging the door aak pushes the door hardly nd zoya opens the door nd aak lands on zoya...zoya falls backwards aahhh nd aak holds her waist...nd shower gets on again...thy hav shower bath both see other eyelocks

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere

My Lord, my God...

aankhein teri - kitni haseen

Your eyes, so beautiful,

ke inka aashiq, mein ban gaya hoon

that I have become their lover

mujhko basa le, inme tu

Give me place in these eyes.


ishq hai

love is


rakh loon chhupa ke main kahin tujhko

let me hide you somewhere


saaya bhi tera na main doon

I will not share even your shadow


julfen teri, itni ghani

Your tresses, so dense


dekh ke inako, yeh sochata hoon

I see them and think


saaye me, inake main jiyoon

I have to live under their shade

ishq hai

love is

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere ...My Lord, my God...

both r lost in each other..nd completely wet...zoya trembles aak unserstanding their closeness makes her stand properly nd says u need to freshen up...

aak comes out nd thinks whts wrong wth me..i need to stay away frm this gal nd changes his clothes...nd moves frm ther

its evening nd all r enjoying dancing...

Couple dancing aak does close dancing wth afreen...both dance...

Zoya too comes out bored nd sees aak nd afreen dancing..gets annoyed nd lonely...nd takes a glass of juice nd straight moves towards thm nd pours on afreen's dress..

Har jagah kyon chipakti hoon asad tumara dost hai tho dost ki tarah behave karo na...

Afreen runs frm ther cryingly..

Aak gets raged...nd grabs zoya frm ther to their cabin nd pushes her to bed...

Aak ; u mean nothg to me just nothg...nd the gal u spoke is my frnd...how dare u spoil her dress

Zoya : well why cant we be frnds...

Aak : laughs u r so insecure abt urself...u r so messy..nd u evn sleep walk nd sing...allah hi jantha hai ki kaise bardash kar raha hoon tume..nd we can never be frnds...

Zoya ;tho fir nikaah kyon kiya

Aak : ammi ne apni kasam liya tha nd abu ko mild heart attack aaya tha...issliye haan karna pada...its all twisted fate...

Its night time

Zoya just sleeps in couch disturbed nd tears flow frm her eyes...

Aak : aaj zaroor hungama karegi raat ko but I don't care anymore he takes cotton makes it round nd stuffs it inside his ears...

Zoya :nd she as usual gets up at 2:10 nd sings sun raha hai na tu.ro rahi hoon main na na...

Kabhi jo baadal barse ..Main dekhu tujhe aankhein bharke.. Tu lage mujhe, pehli baarish ki dua
Tere pehloo mein, rehloon Main khud ko pagal, keh lun ..Tu gum de ya khushiyaan, sehloon saathiyaa nd moves opens the cabin door...moves upstairs to cruise terrace..nd is abt to fall...

but stong hands holds her tightly...nd pulls her towards him...nd she is in his arms..asad's arms...music follows...Use hasna bhi hoga, Use rona bhi hoga
Use pana bhi hoga, Use khona bhi hoga
Suba,shaam tanayee mai aahay bharega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega, Har dil jo pyaar karega
..aak makes zoya sleep kiska hai yeh tumko intezaar main hoon na dek lo idhar ek bhar main hoon na...

zoya sleeps holding aak tightly...aak too sleeps...nd next morning aak comes out of the cabin his frnds say waise lagtha hai zoya bhabi aur tumari bilkul nahi banti

azaan: says zoya bhabhi tho tume I lov u kabhi nahi bholegi...haha

aak : the gals r crazy for me...evn zoya cant resist me..

zara : oh really thn make zoya to say u I lov wthin 10 days..

aak : sorry I am not in for this it will be lik playing wth emotions

azaan:oh tho humara dude haar maan gaya ek ladki se...I evn heard tht she once slapped u..

aak : gets super annoyed aak ki dictionary main haar manna nahi hai...she will say me abt her feelings ur challenge accepted...

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ji Ye kya kardiya

Honeymoon pe sab ko bhej diya 😕

Now how will asad-zoya bond???

Zoya is such a prankster...salt mila diya 😆

Bathroom scene 😳

Dekhte hai challenge mien kya hota hai 😉

Lovely

Continue soon :)
Edited by potternerd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update...
Asad called his friends...
Poor zoya got so annoyed 😆
Zoya mixed salt in asad coffee 😆
Their eyelock in the bathroom. . 😳
Kuch kuch hone laga hai dono ke dil mein 😳
Omg zoya going to fall from terrace 😲 bt akk saved her...
They slept in each other arms...
Asad is now gonna hurt zoya really bad...
He will make her fall in love with him just for a challange..
Update soon...
Thanks for pm
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
but felt bad for zoya.
plz update soon

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