rishbala ff - destiny brings them together NOTE on page 40 (ON HOLD) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Please do not let Madhu fall for Sultan! But even if Madhu only considers Sultan as a friend, she will still be hurt to learn about the bet.

I am not impressed with Sultan. He is a married man and he is playing such a disgusting game. Does he not think what would happen if his wife finds out?? I hope you consider adding that angle into the story. It should not just be RK that has to learn a lesson!


its just the starting and you will soon see sultan in positive way
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
hey superb story...i read all parts together...
plz plz pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks fir keeping up ur word dear, hope uhad done ur exams well, continue soon, the story is going on the right track now, so update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Lovely update! These two idiots and their betting games!! Please continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6

Next day when madhu enter in her cabin she found a bouquet of red roses on her table with a note.

Red roses for the most beautiful women in the world.

Rk.

After reading the note, angrily she marches towards RK cabin. She pushes the door with the force and saw RK seating on his chair with a smirk.

Rk: ahaaan ... so madhubala what bring you in my cabin? Do you want anything.

Madhu (angrily): yes i want answers. Why are you doing this? What do you want to proof? Why did you kept red roses in my cabin?

Rk: ohh those roses... well i thought i did not welcome you properly so i thought to give you roses.

Madhu: really rk do you keep those roses just to welcome or to remind me something.

Rk: did you remember something after seeing those roses?

Madhu: rk don't act so smart with me. I am warning you stop doing all this otherwise you are going to be in trouble. I am not same madhubala anymore whom you know, so stay away from me and stop doing all these things.

Rk: what if i don't stop doing all this?

Madhu: well rk you have only two options. First to stop this and second to stop this. Choice is yours. Saying this she left from his cabin.

Rk: madhubala turns into jungle bill.

Here madhu was sitting in the garden and thinking about the day when rk gives her red roses for the first time.

Flashback

Madhu enters into her class and find red roses with a note on her desk.

Red roses for the most beautiful girl in the class

Rk

After reading the note she rush to the playground with the roses. There she saw playing basketball with his friends. When he saw madhu he comes towards her with smirk and she was blushing seeing RK.

Rk: if you keep blushing like this then you will soon turn into red tomatao

Madhu: rk why did you keep these roses on my desk?

Rk: because you like red roses

Madhu: thank you so much for this

Rk: only thank you is not enough i want something else

Madhu: what?

Rk: well i want a kiss?

Madhu with her eyes wide opens "what?". Rk coming towards her " i say i want a kiss". "But rk..." "on my cheeks". Listening this madhu took a sigh of relief.

rk: did you think i want kiss on my lips? Well i don't mind if you want to give kiss on my lips.

Madhu: nooo

Rk(laughing): ok but i want a kiss on my cheeks for these roses.

Madhu(blushing and looking down): ok but for that you have to close your eyes.

Rk closes his eyes and madhu raise on her toes and kiss him on his cheeks and was about run but rk holds her hand. He come close to her ears and seductively " next time when you see red roses on your desk just remember this" and he kiss on her cheeks and move backwards and leaves from there. Madhu turn and saw him playing basketball and starts blushing.

Flashback ends

Madhu(in her mind): rk why are you doing this. I have promise myself that i will not let yoy affect me but still you affected me. I don't want to remember those days when your single smile made my day. I don't know for how long i will be able to bear this.

She was continuously crying then she feel someone hand on her shoulder. She look upwards and saw sultan looking at her questioningly. She immediately wipes her tears.

Sultan: what happened madhu? Why are you crying?

Madhu: nothing sultan. Just some personal reasons.

Sultan: ok madhu if you don't want to tell you its okay. But just remember you are the only one in this world who can make yourself cry. No one has the power except you.

Madhu: i think you are right sultan. I will not let anyone make me cry.

Sultan: good and when you want to share something then remember i am always there.

Madhu: thanks sultan. You are a nice guy. Atleast you care about others feelings. The girl whom you marry will be the luckiest girl.

Suddenly sultan phone rings and seeing the caller id he become worried.when phone keep on ringing then madhu asked him to pick up the call.

Sultan: hello

Trishna: hi, what took you so long to pick my call.

Sultan: hello.. hello.. i think there is network problem. Wait a minute.

And sultan goes away from madhu.

Sultan: yes trishna now i can listen you.

Trishna: well ananya wants to talk to you.

Ananya: helo daddy

Sultan: helo baby.. so my baby is having fun there.

Ananya: no daddy i am missing you. i can't have fun without you. plz come here daddy.

Sult an: my baby is missing me. Don't worry i will come soon. Now give phone to mummy.

Trishna: sultan is missing you badly.

Sultan: i know but you know na that i can't come there. I am very busy.

Trishna: i know thats why i have decided that me and ananya will come to India next week.

Sultan: what!

Trishna: actually my work is almost completed here. So i call you to inform that i am going to come next week. So plz send the car on the airport on time. I will msg you details

Sultan: ok i will send the car. Now i have to go. Take care. Bye.

Trishna: ok bye

Sultan: i have only one week. I have to do something.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
This Sultan! 😕 Hope Madhu learns his reality soon. Lovely update, btw.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Nyc update Hate Sultan How could he cheat Trishna 4 some stupid Bet?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: bald


its just the starting and you will soon see sultan in positive way


BIG sigh of relief!!!! off to read new chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Nice Update
Thank You for updating this FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no ...sultan is cheating trishna for this stupid bet...
continue soon dear...
thanks for pm

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