FF ~*~ Hum Saath-Saath Hain ~~ THE END (Pg 150) - Page 24

So nice...So, ivanga serura scene romantic or emotionalpa?

Good update,ramya...

hmm...athu vetrithana...rendu perume itha open pannave illaiya...romba pavam...
simi...super smart..😊

Originally posted by: Ramya05

So nice...So, ivanga serura scene romantic or emotionalpa?

innum naan adha pathi yosikkave illa pa...

before that Vetri side enna nu theriyanum... if he too has same feelings towards Jo va nu..

Good ramya...

Part 29:


Next Day morning :

Jaya : apparam Karthik... Vetri ku call panni paaru...

Karthi : innaikke vaa ?

Jaya : pinna ?

Karthi : illa... nethu dhaane discuss pannom... adhaan...

Jaya : already its too late we think about Jo's life...

Karthi : ok ok... idho.. ippove dial panren...

Vetri picks it up when calls for the third time...

Vetri : solludaa maapla

Karthi : ennadaa busy yaa ? engadaa irukka ?

Vetri : Hydrebad Airport la da... inga show ku vandhen...

Karthi : mudinjadhaa... ?

Vetri : inga mudinjadhu... innum rendu moonu cities irukkudaa... all over India show da...

Karthi : eppadaa free aava ?

Vetri : yendaa ? edhaavadhu urgent ah ?

Karthi : hmm... urgent illa... but important... Chennai ku eppa varuva ?

Vetri : Chennai ku ippodhaikku plan illa... nee sonnaa unnapaakka venaa varren...

Karthi : saridaa machaan... free aayittu call pannu..

Vetri : ok da maapla... take care... Jaya va kettadhaa sollu...

He cuts the call and turn towards Jaya...

Jaya : ennadaa solraan ?

Karthi : adhaan kettiruppiye ?

Jaya : nee pesunadha vachi.. avan busy yaa irukkaan nu theriyudhu... but enna sonnaan ?

Karthi elaborates what they spoke..

Karthi : Jaya... naan venumnaa avan irukkura edathukku poi pesattumaa ?

Jaya : yendaa ivlo avasara padura.. ? avandhaan kooppiduren nu sonnaan la..

Karthi : needhaane konja neram munnaadi... idhuve late nu sonna... ippa maathi solra

Jaya : avana contact panna late pannaadha nu sonnen... avan availability therinjiduchu... paathukkalaam... sari... naandhaan nee pesunaa sari varaadhu nu sonnen la...

Karthi : enakkennamo... avan unkitta kooda openup pannuvaan nu doubt ah irukku..

ennadhaan avaonda friend naalum... neeyum Jo ku related dhaane... ?

Jaya : sari... ippodhaan time irukkula... eppadi pannalaam nu yosikkalaam..

Karthi : utharavu madam...



At Office : Simi's workplace...

Rahul : apparam Simi... work eppadi pogudhu... ?

Simi : indha project la ye irundhuttu... ennamo theriyaadha maadhiri ketkkura.. ? status report laam paakkuradhillayaa ?

Rahul : hello madam... innaikku work eppadi irukkunu ketten..

Simi : innaikku konjam ok dhaan... relaxed ah pannalaam...

Rahul : unkitta oru vishayam sollanum...

Simi : (gives a look)

Rahul : hello hello... adhilla... idhu Krish matter...

Simi : Krish ??

Rahul : yes... his avanoda aalu is joining next week...

Simi : dei... avankitta sollidaadha... ava avan aalu nu... vaangi kattikka pora...

Rahul : enna irundhaalum... illanu aayidumaa ?

Simi : sari... onnu naama join pannappa pannirukkanum... naan sari... she is not interested in joining here nu nenachen... ippo eppadi ?

Rahul : joining date ku extension kettirundhaa pola...

Simi : ok.. how do u know ? contact la irukkiyaa enna ?

Rahul : cha cha... but indha maadhiri information solla aal irukku...

Simi : nambave mudiyala Rahul...

Rahul : enna ?

Simi : idhu needhaanaa nu... un velai ya mattum paathuttu.. .eppavum soft ah pesuva...

Rahul : maaravendiya avasiyam vandhaa maaridhaan aaganum...

Simi : straight ah sollu... Is it because of me...?

Rahul : (silent)

Simi : open ah sollu...

Rahul : appadiyum vachikkalaam...

Simi : really sorry daa... enakku unna pidikkum... but nee athana dhadava solliyum... enakku unmela andha love feeling varave illa... naan enna pannattum sollu...

Rahul : but naan ennadhaan try pannaalum... I'm not able to accept that I can be without u... naan enna pannattum...

Simi : lets see... time will make everything ok... but please don't change your character for others...

Rahul : (silent) (mindvoice) nee sonnaa naan kekkanumaa ? kaaraname illaama enna reject pannuva... naan summa irukkanumaa... wait and see...



After 2 weeks :

Raji complains to Thamizh that their Son is not speaking properly and worried about it... Thamizh calls Prem when his wife is not around...

Thamizh : hello my boy... how are u ?

Prem : fine Dad... neenga... ammaa.. .ellaam ok dhaane ?

Thamizh : not ok...

Prem : what ? ennaachu... ?

Thamizh : unna pathina kavala dhaan...

Prem : enakkenna... ? ammaa romba miss panraangalaa ?

Thamizh : adhuvum dhaan... atleast nee phone la yaavadhu olungaa pesunaa... she will feel good...

Prem : yen... naan nethu kooda pesunene... ?

Thamizh : just pesunaa podhumaa ? ammaa pasangaloda kural ah vachiye kandupidichiduvaanga... yedho sari illanu...

Prem : (silent)

Thamizh : nee innamum Preethi sonnadha nenchittu irukkiyaa ?

Prem : adhu vandhu Dad...

Thamizh : why are you worried now ? ava unna vendaam nu sollala la...

Prem : but...

Thamizh : be confident... concentrate on your course... naan irukken la... take care...

Prem : ok bye Dad...



Thamizh thinks for a while and decides to call Karthik to discuss about it...

Thamizh : Hi Karthik... eppadi irukkeenga ?

Karthi : fine... neenga ?

Thamizh : hmmm... good...

Karthi : apparam...?

Thamizh : actually... ungakitta oru vishayatha pathi discuss pannanum...

Karthi : hmmm sollunga...

Thamizh : illa phone la vendaam... nerla solren...

Karthi : ok... enga vara nu sollunga... i'll come...

Thamizh meets Karthik in a restrarant and he informs Karthik about Prem's liking and what Preethi said...

Karthi : Preethi oda indha decision engalukku theriyum... but indha love matter theriyaadhu... oh.. ippadi oru kadhai irukkaa ?

Thamizh : idhula ungalukku yedhum...

Karthi : (before he completes) enna boss... naamellaam love marriage pannavanga... idhukku yosippomaa.. ?

Thamizh : naan idha pesalaamaa nu theriyala...

Karthi : sollunga...

Thamizh : its your family matter... unga sister yoda life... (drags)

Karthi : hmmm... adhukku seekkirame oru solution kedachidum... apparam... Preethi side la problem irukkaadhu...

Thamizh : ok great... actually... Preethi kum Prem naa ishttam dhaan nu nenaikkuren... but she is concerned more about her mother...

Karthi : sari... naan seekkiram nalla seidhi solren... dont worry...

Thamizh : thanks a lot Karthik...

Karthi : edhukku thanks laam... ofcourse its my duty as well...

Coming home, Karthik tells Jaya about their meet and the convo... and they now plan for who is going to talk to Vetri...



Night time : Hari at the terrace...

He just relaxes and thinks of Simi... as how long they'll be like this and how and when they are going to express their feelings...

He then writes that comes to his mind at that moment...



Kangal yengudhu unakkaaga...

Idhayam thudikkudhu unakkaaga...

Uyirum karaiyidhu unakkaaga...

Idhazhgal thavikkudhu unakkaaga...

Ilamai kaathiruppadhu unakkaaga...




ellaa iravugalum enakke...

ellaa pookkalum enakke...

ellaa kavidhaigalum enakke...

ellaa kanavugalum enakke...

un ellaa thedalum naanaaga vendum...

un ellaa punnagaiyum naanaaga vendum...

un ellaa yekkangalum naanaaga vendum...




(used the kavidhai read somewhere which was nice... not mine)


--- to be continued --

Nice job Ramyvijay! The way you balance out the number of characters in your story is remarkable. I enjoyed the conclusion quoting two nice kavithais. Well done. 👏

Thnks for the update ramya😊,very nice update. so,jo issue ku climax neruginduchunu ninaikiren. waiting to see krish pair pa😛😉. superb kavidhai ramya, kavidhaiku sondhakaaranga neenga illanalum.engaluku sonnadhu neengadhane.so,this is 4 u🤗. waiting 4 next part.

wow.. whatte poem!!... Nice story moving well...

Ramya...wow...enna alagana kavithais...it touched my heart...very lovely😳...

n the story is moving in a proper manner...kudos to u for making that...keep it up...