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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updates Vish!!!! Loved them!
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all thanks for the pm vish.
Secondly, I'm so sorry for I could not comment on many of the previous chapters. I'm so so so sorry for that. I hope I will be forgiven.
It was an awesome update. I really didn't knew that the story would turn outto be so interesting. I liked it really a lot. And the part where kalpi hugs Roy and sammy sees it ws a nice one.
Please please please udate soon. Will be waiting for your update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

As much as I like Raghav n Kalpi but I prefer she moves on without him, lovely update


Thank u so much!! Kalpi will move on with her frnz support... Raghav is her past.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Awesome update..a bit sad but still happy that kalpi moved on atleast a bit...continue soon ...


Thank u... Dnt worry... U will love Kalpi and will be happy to see her success in upcoming parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Thanks for this quick update. liked it, but sad as Kalpi didn't got to know about Ragha-Pakhi divorce. I guess it'll be at the right time. n Sammy misunderstood Roy-Kalp relation.😊 loving the progress of d story though.😊😃

n yes I do want to see Ragna together in the end!😆


Thank u so much but I may disappoint u in the end 😳

Right now I do not want Kalpi to know about RaKhi divorce... it will again drag her to the past.. So Samy has to misunderstand Roy-Kalpi!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shyamlu

Fantastic double updates Vish! Awww so happy Kalpi moved on.. Lol Sammy is the star of MUS...Great job!!!

Hope you get a positive response for the interview!!!!Good luck!

Rgds, Shyama


Thanx Shyama.. Sammy is the only sane person who can solve RagNa differences so let him misunderstand things for now.

Me too hoping to get +ve response.. I was bad in interview so at least pray for others to be worse!!😆
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Originally posted by: priya_remix

Nice updates Vish!!!! Loved them!



Thank u so much guys!!
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Originally posted by: Celana

First of all thanks for the pm vish.
Secondly, I'm so sorry for I could not comment on many of the previous chapters. I'm so so so sorry for that. I hope I will be forgiven.
It was an awesome update. I really didn't knew that the story would turn outto be so interesting. I liked it really a lot. And the part where kalpi hugs Roy and sammy sees it ws a nice one.
Please please please udate soon. Will be waiting for your update.


Aww.. No need to say sorry!! Sometimes I too can't reply on time.. It's perfectly alright.. M glad that u read all the parts.

N thank u so much...M happy that u r liking my story.. Everyone here is liking Roy-Kalpi pairing... wish to see a new guy in show as well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello sweethearts!! M uploading 12th part.. M total velli today so thought o write this part.. As always it's unedited as m too lazy to edit it..So sorry for all typos and mistakes!! Again hoping that u will like it and comment.

Morning, NGO

Kalpi is sitting with kids surrounding her.. this kids are also a part of her life.. This orphanage is associated with the NGO where she works as volunteer.. But today she has come here to celebrate her win with them. She has bought lot of chocolates and balloons with her.. Payal is watching Kalpi happy with those kids... Roy enters with a newspaper...

Roy : Girls.. have u read today's Delhi times??

Payal : No.. Why??

Roy : Read it..

Payal looks at the newspaper and excitedly reads it... "New Dancing Diva : Kalpana"..

Payal : Ohh Goshh Kalpi!! Full coverage of yesterday's event and Ur photo with the title dedicate to you... U r the star now..

Kalpi snatches newspaper from Payal's hand.. She can't believe her eyes.. She have never thought of her identity as dancer... The kids who were listening to their convo becomes happy on this and tells Kalpi to dance with them also... Kalpi agrees as she doesn't want to break their heart... Payal plays the music on her cellphone and everyone starts dancing... Kids were enjoying with Kalpi and Kalpi was laughing whole heartedly with them... Roy admires her.. Payal notices this but doesn't say anything as she doesn't want any of them to get hurt. Roy gets a call and he leaves the place... Kalpi too stops the kids and tells them to play now.. She will join them later..

Kalpi(to Payal) : Where is Roy??

Payal : He has some imp meeting so he left..

Kalpi : Hmm.. Ok!! I am thinking to call baba!! I think I should tell them about dance..

Payal : Yep.. Go ahead...I will be back in a while.

Kalpi calls her father..

Vitthal : Hello

Kalpi : Baba..

Vitthal : Kalpi.. How r u?? Don't u miss us??

Kalpi : M fine... I miss u a lot baba..

Vitthal : Then come back na..

Kalpi I will come for sure... but do not force me now...Right now I have called u to share something... Baba I have joined dancing classes in Delhi and yesterday there was a national level competition... I too participated in it and u know what.. I won it!! A newspaper has published my photo as new Dancing diva..I am very happy today.. I have achieved something on my own..

Vitthal(happily) : Congrats!! I am proud of u my princess!! I just want u to stay happy.. If ur happiness is away from me than I won't force u to come... btw tell this to ur ayi.. She will be very happy..Talk to her.. she is here only

Kamla snatches the phone from his hands and about to speak when she hears Kalpi

Kalpi : I am busy baba... Will call u later..

Kalpi hangs the call which hurts Kamla.. She wan't expecting Kalpi to avoid her like this..

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@Jadhav's place

Vitthal : What happen Kamla.. Speak!!

Kamla : she said that she is busy and disconnected the call..

Vitthal : She must be busy... u don't worry..

Kamla : What she said??

Vitthal : Arey she won some dancing competition yesterday and u know... Our Kalpi's photo is in newspaper... I am very proud of her

Kamla : Dancing?? She has become dancer there?? But that is not what we want... I want her to be some memsaab and not some dancer.. Vitthal how can she??

Vitthal : Stop it Kamla.. Let her live her own life.. She is already away from us coz of u.. Now plz stop ur nonsense..

Kamla : Nonsense?? Vitthal I am her ayi.. N I have all rights on her life..

Vitthal : Yes Kamla... U have all the rights as her mother but what about her rights as daughter?? And all rights comes with responsibilities.. Did u ever fulfilled ur responsibilities as mother?? U were always biased towards Pakhi.. U gave all ur love to ur other daughter... Never thought about ur own.. Have u ever thought about her feelings?? U will understand her pain only when Kalpi will give ur place to some other lady..


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Same time @NGO

Roshni Oberoi enters NGO and sees Kalpi there with her phone.. Kalpi looks lost in her cellphone and dint notice her. She pings Kalpi..

Roshni : Kalpana..

Kalpana : Roshni ji.. U here??

Roshni : This is my NGO.. I come here very often..but what are u doing here..

Kalpi : Well.. I work here as volunteer!!

Roshni : Ohh that's great.. it had made my work easier.. I was asking about u from Payal.. I wanted u to work for me.. N u r here.. I guess we have some strong connection..

Kalpi : May be.. Btw that day I forgot to thank u.. Thank u for helping me in taking decision that day.. Coz of u only I understood Payal's POV and danced that day..

Roshni : Well in that case u should give ur win's credit to me..

Kalpi : Yes sure..

Roshni : well m joking.. But still if u want to thank me than help me in raising funds for this NGO.. Actually I want few rich people to take responsibilities of educating at least one child.. And I think u can be a good representative for this purpose.. So will u help me??

Kalpi : Sure mam!!

Roshni : Mam sounds so formal.. Rohniji was much better... Neways I have some imp work so see u tomorrow for further details.. This is my card.. call me!!

Kalpi : Thank u!! See u.

Kalpi(to herself) : She is such a nice lady.. down to earth.. She own this Ngo so much be a rich personality.. I am her employee and she still dint ordered me but requested to help me.. She is so genuine and caring.. I wish I can be like her some day..


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Evening, Cafe

Kalpi is sitting with a sheet on table and pen in her hand.. She making plan for her coaching classes.. Roy is also sitting at adjacent chair.. She is staring at her.. Payal is helping her in her plan.. She as always notices Roy..

Payal : Kalpi.. Someone is planning to make u partner..

Kalpi(confused) : What??

Payal : Roy.. Roy wants to have a relationship with u..

Roy : Shut up Payal!! What are u saying??

Payal : Kalpi m serious.. he is afraid of u but he wants to have business relationship with u..he is really interested in ur business plan and want to have partnership with u..

Kalpi sighs relief!! Roy too feels relieved and pinches Payal..

Roy : Yes Kalpi.. I too need to expand my cafe business.. So I can be ur partner!! Only if u r interested!!

Kalpi : Guys.. I have already told u that I dnt need any economical help.. So stop making plans for that and concentrate here... And help me in setting my classes..

Roy and Payal together : Yes Ma'm!! Just order!!

Kalpi : So this is my plan... Roy look at it once and see whether it's correct or not... And yes.. U have to help me in finding a room for classes and purchasing furniture as well... And Payal.. U have to help me in advertising my coaching classes... Prepare templates.. Advertisements and start working on social media and I will start preparing notes..

Payal : Fine madam.. But have u thought about name of ur classes??

Kalpi : Shit!! I forgot!! U guys suggest!!

Payal : Kalpana Coaching center??

Kalpi : No!!

Roy : How about Shiksha..

Kalpi : Better.. but..

Payal : Let me churn my creative wheels...

Kalpi : "Udaan".. How is it?? After all I want to give wings to the students and want them to fly high!!

Roy : Perfect!!

Payal : So it's final... Udaan: A institute with a difference!!


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Precap : Some guys misbehaves with Kalpi on the road.


Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago
well written update...👍🏼

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