Case SS :- A Dream come true...Last Chapter/Pg 45 07-11-14 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
awesome update dear
loved it
nyc going on
wat a mystery sherlock se zyada tere wali mein maza aa rha hai
aur fictions tere hai toh tu hi post kr
kisi dusre se request maat kiya kr
btw nyc update
thax for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
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I m glad the everyone liked small Raesha scene...
@Black_angel:- U still have not read Chapter 2...😲
@Ishitarocks015:- Thank u...😃...Rounak is right...Aisha vll be in trouble or not let see...😉
@Shamsad1607:- Thank u...😃..u in thinking mode...😲...LOL...meri sehat par koi khatra nahi aaya...😆
@NatkhattFatti:- When vll u unres...😡
@Gold.A:- Thank u di...😃...yes Rounak was not in Mumbai...😃
@Arakshiya_58:- Thank u...😃...Yes...Aisha is getting more confused..😃
@EashYousufzai:- Thank u...😃...Glad that u like small Arakshi...😃
@Halima_zaka:- Thanks...😃
@Armagadon:- Thank u...😃...No no don't go mad...😆
@sonycs001:- Thank u...😃...Super Natural story...😆...No it is not like that...😃
@unishaz:- Thanks...😃
@pihu_angad:- Thanks ...😃
@chulbuliannu:- Thank u...😃...Aisha confused hai bcoz meine usko confused kiya hai...😆
@skrafty:- Thanks...😃...Mystery vll be revealed soon...😉
@kunchu:- Thank u di...😃...sab pata chal jayega...😆...waise bhi I know some of u know vll very soon what had actually happened even before I write...
@aditiarakshi: - Thank u...😃...yes Rounak was in Pune...😃
@sisodia_shefali:- Thank u...😃...Yes Aisha is confused...😃
@greensakti:- Thank u...😃...When vll tell everyone I also don't know...😛
@_Nikita_:- Thank u...😃
@KReyAs:- Thank u...😃...but what is ri???😕
@Godly_Affection:- Thank u...😃...Who is the killer???...mein kyu batau...😆😛
@||_megha_||:- Thank u di...😃
@NATURESHIVANI:- Thank u...😃...Glad u liked it...😃
@Rimi di:- Thank u...😃...Thanks a lot for helping me...🤗🤗🤗
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scroll down for update...😃
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Replied above...😃😃😃
Chapter 4
Soon they reached at Aisha's place before getting out she said "Good Night Sir".

Rathod replied with a smile "Good Night & Take care" after a little pause "Call me in case u need something"

Aisha nodded & gave him an assuring smile. She starts running to reach the compound of building to avoid getting wet by rain.

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Inside lift, she see herself & started rubbing her clothes so as to dry her clothes which get drenched when she was coming inside the building's compound from the car but she was not much wet but her shoes has become all muddy bcoz of the sand that was placed in compound for building's construction but due to rain it has all become muddy.

Soon lift reached at her floor & opened & she come out from lift & soon entered her flat, after switching on the lights she put off her shoes & go to dining table & pour a glass with water & drink it one breathe.

Putting down the glass she also set on the chair with her head resting in between her hands & start thinking the recent case & her dream but try as much she, she was not able to connect the link between her dream with reality.

That's when something click her mind PREMONITION, yes Premonition.

Aisha's MV, "it is really possible to predict something about future in present & but how is it possible moreover there is no scientific proof of Premonition, also how can she predict someone's death that's when she don't know them???"

But she soon realised that she is thinking on wrong track bcoz this can't be premonition bcoz she had seen the dream after their murder but HOW???

Questions were many but there was no answer to any question.

Aisha after taking deep breathe murmurs, "Aaj thodi neend le leti hu warna mein pagal ho jaungi ... aur kal bhi agar kuch clear nahi hua toh sabko sapne ke bare mein bata dungi, uske baad jo hoga woh dekha jayega".

Confessing herself with this she stands up & went to her room, pulled out towel from wardrobe & went to bathroom, While taking shower also she was trying to memorize Pallavi & Mayank thinking Had she saw them somewhere in a case or in market or even in her colony??? Had she ever went to their house??? Had she ever went in that area before??? After lot of thinking & pressuring her mind she said "Yes, yes", she had went there in that area around 3 months back while chasing a criminal when she & Shree went to arrest that criminal but they lost him & taking the car he(criminal) started running & while chasing him they went inside that area where Pallavi used to live & may be or may be not they had crossed that road where their house is located but soon they were able to get him(criminal), after arresting him & handling to local police they went ETF office.

But again the question is that she is sure that at that time also while chasing that criminal she had not seen Pallavi or Mayank.

And moreover she had not went in that locality after that & she is dam sure about this.

Aisha MV "Aaarrrggghhh...again no conclusion..."

She was so lost in her thought process that she forgets she was still standing under shower.

But soon the voice of mobile ringing bring her out of her thinking, realising herself she close the tab & come out of bathroom after drying herself & wearing night dress.

She picked up her phone to check who had called her at this odd time, mobile shows that the call was from her friend Niharikha, Aisha wonder why she had called at this time & why she called when they live at the same floor in same building.

Aisha called back her, Niharikha picked up the call at fouth ring saying cheerfully, "Hi"

Aisha replied putting the towel on dressing table, "Hi Niharikha"

Niharikha, "Tune khana khaya"

Aisha asked strangely, "Nahi...Kyu???"

Niharikha told cheerfully, "Acha kiya"

Aisha surpringly, "Kya???"

Niharikha, "Arey...mera matlab tha ki meine aaj meine Paneer Tikha banaya hai"

Aisha, "Toh"

Niharikha, "Toh kya...mere ghar aaja meine bhi nahi khaya hai dono saath mein dinner kar lenge"

Aisha replied with a small smile, "Nahi...mujhe hospital puchne ka shok nahi hai"

Niharikha with pouted, "Oh hello...mein itna bura bhi nahi banati"

Aisha mockingly, "Really"

Niharikha, "Kya really???...Haan kabhi kabhi jal jata hai"

Aisha sarcastically, "Kabhi kabhi...ya mahine mein 25 days"

Niharikha dramatically, "Haan toh kya hua...par aaj nahi jala hai.."

Aisha, "Are u sure???"

Niharikha, "haan...pakka nahi jala hai"

Aisha, "Chal mann li teri baat, par aaj mujhe bhook nahi hai"

Niharikha strangely, "Bhook nahi hai matlab tune hi toh abhi kaha ki tune dinner nahi kiya, phir bhook kyu nahi hai"

Aisha, "Bus aise hi...thak gayi hu isliye"

Niharikha requestingly, "Par khana toh kha le"

Aisha, "Nahi yaar sach mein bhook nahi hai, teri Paneer Tikha next time taste karungi"

Niharikha, "Please yaar aa na"

Aisha with little bit guilty, "Nahi...mein bohat thak gayi, aaj bas thoda sona chahti hu"

Niharikha with pouted, "Ok...chal thik hai, Good Night"

Aisha cut the call after saying, "Good Night"

She went to bed & laid on it & started thinking about the experiments she had tasted of Niharikha, it was clear that she was not a good cook but always try to make a good food, she has witnessed the worst condition of Niharikha's kitchen bcoz of her experiments.

Her experiments mostly results in disaster but sometime she gets success in making good food. Aisha started smiling remembering all these but soon the smiled was replaced again by the thought of current things that are going on in her life.

Her mind had started replaying all the things slowly & slowly but soon tiredness of both physical & mental took over her mind & she slept.

At midnight, Aisha again saw the same dream & woke up sacredly, she was panting & sweating very badly.

After composing herself & realising that she is in her room, she relaxed a bit but again same questions with no answers coming in her mind.

While thinking she forwarded her hands towards the side table for water but the glass was empty.

She wanted water not that she was thirsty but for cooling her senses, she removed the blanket, putting on her slippers, she walked out of her room, reaching in hall she switched on hall's lights & went for kitchen.

Switching on the lights of kitchen she went towards fridge, took bottle out of it & drank water & put the bottle back into fridge.

Standing in the kitchen near the fridge, she was thinking about the dream again.

Aisha MV, "Baar baar yeh sapna kyu aa raha hai aur yeh sach kaise ho gaya"

All of this was taking toll on her.

She closed her eyes shut & had finally decided that she will tell others about all this tomorrow by any way.

Deciding this she came out of the kitchen & went to switched off the lights of hall but suddenly her eyes caught something, she stopped & turned towards main door & was staring at that thing blankly but she want a confirmation that whatever she is seeing is not incorrect.

She was standing at that place rooted, after gathering all her courage she started walking towards that direction & stopped just before it.

She stared that thing for a minute & bends down near that thing & slightly touched as if to feel that.

Aisha MV, "Yeh...yeh toh bilkul waise hi hai jaise uss ghar mein the, par how is this possible?? And how they reached here?? What does that mean???"

She was startled on what she saw.

Confused & sacredly she took out her phone from pocket & took pics of that thing & start thinking what it was, she was staring at her phone like it contains the most horrific thing, she was looking at screen without blinking her eyes.

Without thinking anything she picked up her purse from table & got out of her house in night dress & took a cab towards ETF office.

Whole way she was looking at screen blankly.

Soon she reached ETF office after paying to cab driver she went inside the office runningly, even watchman was surprised on seeing her at office at this late hour moreover not in her official dress but in night dress when no one is present at office but before he can ask her anything she went inside without looking at him & this was strange bcoz whenever she go inside she always greet him inspite of how many times she go inside in a day, she always greet him in morning & rest of the time always passed a smile to him.

Inside the office Aisha directly went to forensic lab & start searching for the file which has all the details they have collected from the house i.e. crime scene.

Than took out her phone from pocket & opened the pic she clicked at her house & started trying to match it with the pic in the file.

And on seeing it, it sighted similar, she kept moving her eyes from mobile screen to file.

But she needed more confirmation so she moved to her desk & start on the computer while computer was booting her heart beat was increasing with every second & she was scared very badly.

Finally computer was booted, she also click the pic from the file and then transferred both the pics from mobile to computer & opened the software for matching them and while it was matching nothing was happening in her mind, she was looking at computer screen blankly.

And result displayed as "Correct match".

Aisha's mind has stopped working, she doesn't know how to react or how to believe this, so she again started the match but unfortunately it again displayed the same.

Now Aisha head started spinning, she was murmuring, "No this can't be true, this can't be happened, it is wrong, computer is displaying wrong results, no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true..."

Aisha MV, "Mein Pallavi aur Mayank ko janti bhi nahi, na hi uss ghar mein kabhi gayi hu toh...toh ...toh yeh kaise ????"

**************** Reviews plzz...😳😳😳
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Res / unres
Yaah me first *****

Coming to update
Sneha awesome dear loved it
AIsha is horrified seeing something in her house
It even matched the contents of the case
wow this is really intruding
but wo tha kya ? & how aisha is related to ll this ?
& this niharika sounds like funny 😆😆
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
reswa
unreswa...
great going gabbar...
u have such a talent...pehle q ni likha?
well...about d update...
this was d best update yet!
full of suspense!
Aisha's growing worry n confusion at 1st...
then the little mood lightner ...the convo with niharika... jiska 90% tym khana jal jata hai..hehe...
n then the sudden shock... she saw her own footprints if i m not wrong!
n recognising thm she rushed to d ETF office to match..
n sadly it matches!
Ab to usko bol hi dena chaite sbko
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86


eeyyy. ...ap shadi se wapas a gyi ..n phle res v kr dia?? :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015



eeyyy. ...ap shadi se wapas a gyi ..n phle res v kr dia?? :'(

Haan shadi to kal thi aur lucknow main thi bahar thod jaana tha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
res ishi or goldie di ne pehle kia hai but comment pehle me de rhi ho 😛
yayy me firsttt 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
it was really horrific fulll of suspense 🤢🤢
and the suspense is killing me
ab kia mil gaya usko??
or hume bataya bhi nhi 😲😲
kiu?? 🤢🤢
anyways good work 👏👏
Edited by NatkhattFati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Arrey by God!
Suspense se hi maarne ka full on tareeka hai!
Gotto rush... will give a detailed comment later :)

Ya so I am back :D
Hmm Ayesha shd confine wid Sam
as soon as possible
Mujhe kuch lagta hai...😉
par main yaha nahi bataoongi!
Kisiko koi idea milgaya toh?
Aap meri zaroor pitayi karegi😆
Aur waise the thing that she got...
And it got confirmed in the lab as well😕
She should immediately call Sam!
Ek toh maybe he will be able to help her..
Aur 2 usse ghar ke kapde main dekh ke Sam impress ho jaaye😉
Well main toh hamesha logo ko milana chahti hoon!!!

Apart from this... awesome amazing mind boggling update!
Thanks for the PM...
really looking forward to reading the next part!
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Unresed on page 12 😊😊

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