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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Wonderful update

Aarya moment lovely

Loved maansi teasing

Precap interesting

Eagerly waiting for next part

Thanks for pm

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: nirmalac99
Wat a sweet character Mansi s full of life...
The teasing bw Aarthi nd mansi,then Aarthi acknowledges her love 4 Yash s cute...
Yash gets lost in d beauty of his wife(u should ve closed ur doors yash), Mansi's sudden arrival s hilarious lol ...
Yash nd mansi bro -sis bonding,jus admired it....

thank you so much Nirmala dear!🤗

It seems you have thoroughly enjoyed the update.

I really love these monkeys of yours dear😳😳

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Fate season 2 I was so excite kate but my laapy played another game still not regular but try to catch up all updates dear

Thx for pms

The love make all feel so wonderful n your loved ones also blossoms with you that's exactly happened with AARYA N THEIR FAMILY

Mansi is so adorable, cute, naughty n witty hmm aarti sis so yash is brother to B-I-L wat really sweet ne n beautiful romantic pics make it more mesmerizing Kate thanks for everything sweety

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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

lovely update

quite light and fun filled update

think it is the silence before the storm as from the next part itself you are planning to bring ishita

looking forward for the next update

please update soon

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Kate - Wonderful expression of bonding between Yash-Mansi...loved it and equally I loved the teasing part too.
Thank you so much Chithra!

As a reader - I love the way you bring in all the characters and not focus simply on ARYA - which makes altogether... more interesting.
Thanks a lot Dear! as for me each character is important chithra and these chracters helps to build the main characters so much.
Coming to you - I do feel the need to express my sincere thanks for the tremendous effort you put and it is but obvious for you to expect some comment -- for you to grow as a writer and confidence/interest to give future updates. Having said - I may be late in reading or I may take up some other story and comment before yours ---- do not get the feeling that yours is less interesting -- remember -- I can't do HALF of what U are doing. Love you -- my cute simple darling Kate.
Oh my dear Chithra I never felt disheartened with your late comments and I never keep an account who is commenting wh's story first dear. Only sad thing is now most of the readers have moved out or silent. It really feels discouraged sometimes as we spare lot of time and we have to work on it hard. After so much of work when we see less readers we would feel discourage automatically na? I really appreciate each and every reader who encourages me as if for not them I would have stopped writing long ago. thank you so much Chithra for encouraging me always. I really appreciate it and value it.

answers in blue Chithra!

Answers in blue Chithra!

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
Wonderful update
Aarya moment lovely
Loved maansi teasing
Precap interesting
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much my radha dear and you are most welcome dear! hope you are fine dear!

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: RA17
Fate season 2 I was so excite kate but my laapy played another game still not regular but try to catch up all updates dear

Thx for pms

The love make all feel so wonderful n your loved ones also blossoms with you that's exactly happened with AARYA N THEIR FAMILY

Mansi is so adorable, cute, naughty n witty hmm aarti sis so yash is brother to B-I-L wat really sweet ne n beautiful romantic pics make it more mesmerizing Kate thanks for everything sweety

Oh ria I knew about your lappy. I 'm so happy that you came to comment and I really miss you here.

About your comment. What can I say more than this...

THANK YOU

Yes Mansi is naughty and cute.😳

Thank you so much dear for loving the pictures.

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: prachidalmia
lovely update
quite light and fun filled update

think it is the silence before the storm as from the next part itself you are planning to bring ishita

looking forward for the next update

please update soon

Thanks a lot Prachi.

hmmm.may be this is the silence before the storm. Ishitha will come soon in the picture.😕

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

Season 2 chapter 2

It was the first day at the office of Aarya after their honeymoon. They entered Scindia industries with so much happiness. It's the place where they met, fell in love.. So many memories attached to here.When they entered the office they heard.

"WELCOME BACK"

They stared at the office staff who had done so much to welcome them.

"Welcome back sir !" Said Pratheik coming forward and all came forward and welcomed them including Ishitha.

Aarthi and Yash both gave a cold shoulder to them which didn't go unnoticed by Ishitha.

She came forward and hugged Aarthi tightly.

"I'm sorry Aarthi for what I have done. Please forgive me."

Aarthi and Yash were shocked with her gesture.

Yash was scared thinking that what she's up to?

Then she turned to Yash.

"Sir I'm really sorry about my behavior. I repent. I promise to change my behavior. I cannot undo anything I did to Aarthi but I promise I will not hurt her anymore."

Yash folded her hands in front of his chest.

"How could I believe you?"

"Give me a chance sir..I'll prove it."

"Sorry .. I can't..."

"Ishitha ok I'll give you a chance. Prove it. "

Aarthi jumped in.

Yash gave her questioning look.

"Yash, everyone needs a second chance in life like you gave me. Give her this chance." Aarthi said to him softly.

"Ok Ishitha, change your self then we'll give you another chance. Hope you will use it properly."

Ishitha went away happily.

Yash dragged Aarthi in to the cabin.

"Aarthhi are you out of mind?"

"Yash, in everyone's life there should be a second chance. See you gave me another chance in my life.."

"Aarthi... shut up.. I loved you and married you.. It's not like that. And Ishitha .. Have you forgotten what she did?? Are you crazy to believe her?"

"Yash may be she has changed. Who knows? We'll give her another chance."

"Then who knows whether she has not changed."

"Yash please for me."

"Aarthi this blind trust of you make your life in danger someday."

"Don't worry Yash. Nothing will happen to me when you are with me."

"Aarthi don't blackmail me emotionally. I'm a businessman and I know those. Ok for you I'll give her a chance. But if she do something... again.. No forgiveness from me."

"That's my Yash."Saying this she gave a kiss on his cheeks and went away.

"You fell in her trap Aarthi. I know she can never change but you are so innocent to believe it. I won't let anyone hurt you again. Not even Ishitha. "

Thought Yash.

Yash called Ishitha to his cabin.

"Ishitha, What is your new game? What are you up to?"

"Sir...What... are you... talking... about?"

"Ishitha I know you hate Aarthi. Now what is this drama?"

"There is no drama sir.. I repent for what I did. Give me a chance."

"I know it's hard to get what's in your mind Ishitha. Ok I'll keep an eye on you."

Thought Yash.

"Sir please trust me.."

"Hmm Ishitha go and do your work."

"Is that mean you trust me."

"I didn't say anything like that. Go and do your work and remember if you do anything to Aarthi you will see me worst."

Said Yash in warning tone.

"Yes,, sir..."

Saying this she left the cabin.

Just then Prathiek came in.

"Sir... "

"Oh Prathiek good you came. I need a favour from you. Keep an eye on Ishitha. I don't trust her. She will never change. she's up to something."

"Ok sir..I will keep an eye on her."

"Pratheik tell me why did you come?"

"I want your signature on these documents sir."

"keep those I'll read and sign."

Whole morning Yash was thinking what is Ishitha up to? He never trust Ishitha's words. He feared that Ishitha will do something bad to Aarthi. Aarthi blindingly trusted Ishitha's words and forgave her,it made Yash's fear grow.

Just then Aarthi entered with their lunch.

"It seems my hubby is lost somewhere and had forgotten that it's lunch time."

Yash smiled at her.

"I wish you would stay same like me whole through my life and no evil eye will fall upon us and our love." Thought Yash.

"Yash??? Yash?? Where are you?"

Her shout brought him back.

"Nothing aarthi."

"Ok let's have lunch. I'm hungry."

They sat to have lunch.

"hmm you have made all my favourite food. Thank you so much Aarthi."

"Just a thank you???"winked Aarthi.

"What else do you want my wife? Do you want to on another honey moon?"

"YASH?? You are so naughty."

"So ?? It is you who make me naughty. I feel like to taste your lips rather than these food."

"YASH Shut up and eat your food." Said Aarthi. she blushed saying those words.

"It seems my wife also wants same. See how she's blushing.."

"It seems my husband is out of mind so I better leave this place before his one track mind starts to work. " Saying this she stood up to leave when Yash pulled her back to his lap.

Aarthi felt that she's losing and Yash too felt he's loosing. Aarthi saw the food on the plate it gave her an idea. She got closed to Yash and was about to kiss Yash's lips she put the food she grabbed in her hand inside Yash's mouth leaving Yash shocked.

"Oh Mr. Scindia. I'm smarter than you." Both smiled that reached their eyes.

"Mrs Scindia did you challenge me? Ok wait till we go home and we'll see who win? My one track mind or your naughtiness" saying this he winked.

"Yash when will your mind start to work? Our honeymoon is over.."

"Not for me.. For me it has started ... " He winked..

Sorry guys for the late. Truly I lost interest in writing this. I don't whether this update is ok. I don't feel it's same. The story is going to have twists.For that I had to build this background and worse this is I have lost interest in this story.

Forgive me for this boring update.

Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago