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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Amazing!!!!!!!!👏 The best part was - the Baby was adopted and Uday never got intimate with Dabyanti. I'm glad that Uday committed suicide when he got to know the truth, he punished himself for not believing in Manyata!

So - the test is on ... very eager to see a positive (and happy) outcome 😉.
Oh God , 8 days more for the next update😲 ... I hope this week flies by FAST!



thank you so much jiji
yes he had been partly very loyal to her
he could not accept the fact
that he killed his love
smrik
jii haa
and what will I get for a faster update????

here a deal I will update faster
and you have to write an os
I really miss your os a lot

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Asyalover

i love ur signature gif pic of millionaire's first love...i love that movie so much that i cried in the end :'(


Even I cried, it was so emotional and I just loved him in Secret Garden cho cute, I cried a lot while watching Stairway to Heaven, it was so heart touching.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

beautiful updates...I just loved it...😃


thank you so much
I am glad that you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much appi
such a cute dp

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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She stared at him for sometime, trying to annalize his confushed face, his troubling eyes and the pain that was evident in his voice, without even knowing her eyes was filled up as she asked him helplessly

MANYATA: Do you fear lossing me so much?

He held her by her shoulder softly, looked down without meeting her eyes, as he looked down and his tears continued to roll off his eyes and he said in a voice broken by sobs

UDAY; you cannot even imagine how much you mean to me? Every time I watched you died, and I could not do anything then to just watch you GO...I could not do anything to save my love... I could not die either, I was cursed to live and those days were worse then being in hell. Princess, even a second without you always had been bothersome and scary to me, each birth after we met each minute was like a nightmare I tried so hard to protect you even a second without you always got me feared, and then when you would really be hurt and go away from me I cursed myself, beat myself tortured myself hoping the Almighty would have mercy and return you back to me but nothing as such happened and I had to die each day. Even today Princess, I am not sure whether I can win it or not, I am not even sure whether I will be able to watch you or not, but today all I will do is to TRUST you, no matter what I will trust on you Princess...

She hugged him with all might, her face scooped in his chest as she looked up at him wipping his tears and said with a new confident build in her

MANYATA: we will fight our till our last drop of blood for our love, we will fight till our hands gets separated, and we will win, our love will win, Just trust in me, you keep walking ahead and I will be fine, just don't turn back trust me for this time, we will win.

He looked at her, with a smile, his confident was also built after knowing that his Princess, his Manyata have forgiven him as he kissed her forehead and said

UDAY; I LOVE YOU

She looked at him and said

MANYATA: I LOVE YOU TOO

The journey started one end of the knot was in Uday s hand and the other tightly cluntched to Manyata hands, they both had tied it round their wrist as they started walking in the silence of the night. The roads were completely empty, not a single soul there just frequent howls of the wolves could be heard, but that did not shake their confidence, finally they reached the mountain route to the temple. The roads was clear with the dried away tree it was easy to find their way, but the trouble had started, slowly as they were moving up Uday started to hear his Queen voice, calling out his name in love, saying something to him, and then he almost froze his steps as he heard it

"Maharaja sa you can stop as this I am not soft hearted and this kind of fake sentiments are not going to melt my heart down I hate you and will continue to hate you"

He recalled the time that this was said and tears began to fill in his eyes, flashes of their engagement came rushing down his memory, their first meet and then their marriage and ultimately the beast that he had been, he wanted to stop, he wanted to kneel down and cry out his heart but suddenly he recalled the main purpose of being here and started to walk wipping his tears off. Such hurdle began to increase there was many voice of many people that he once knew but he did not stop he kept on walking finally he started seeing images realted to his past life. The way Manyata passed away in each and every life was in front of him and a moment just before she was getting killed was infront and a voice ordered him

"Go Uday save your Princess! This is your chance"

But he did not pay any attention finally he reached the peack and entered the temple, as he kept his feet inside all the bells started to ring their was a fierce wind blowing, after entering and then only he turned back and there Manyata was standing with the knot tied around her wrist looking fine as they rushed towards each other and hugged with their might, they happiness was out of bounds, one moment they were hugging each other, the other they were crying and the next they were kissing. Suddenly he held her in his hands, as her eyes began to close and she finally collapsed in the ground, he knelt down with her head on his lap, as he started to cry out his heart and screamed for her to wake up but finally the image of his first birth [here reffering them as King and Queen to avoid confusion], came along with the Queen as the Queen said

QUEEN; do not worry she is perfectly fine it is just that she have fainted, I am proud of you, finally you have trust in your love, and you won the battle, and do not worry Manyata will not get any of this memory, she will recall all the good moments she spent with you but this past incident will not be recalled by her, though she will remember it in some other way as I cannot completely erase it from her mind. She will recall it in some other way, as for you Uday she is all yours forever, you proved your love, you porved yourself

KING: yes You finally gained trust and returned my love too, for years I had been locked here in this palace and when today I saw Manyata fainting away, I ran to pick her up only that time I realized that it was just an assumtion that my soul could not move, even I trusted myself and see now I got my love too only for you my soul got reunited with my Princess, thanks a lot

Uday gave a smile as he watche both the images vanishing into thin air, then he took Manyata into his arms and quitely walked back to the hostel. The next morning everything was back to normal, it was true Manyata did not even recall a single event, she decided on giving up on her fashion show and secretly Uday came to know off it, just before a day Uday s partner Natasha factured her legs and their was no replacement, so he walked up to Manyata for help as he said

UDAY: Please it is such an intense song so I cannot dance with anyone else, I danced with Natasha as she considered me her elder brother, please baby only you can help me.

MANYATA: But only one day is left and how am I supposed to learn the steps

UDAY: trust me everything will be arranged just trust in me

MANYATA: fine love lets do it

They practised the whole day and even late till night, and the dance came out to be pretty good. The next day was too busy every one was rushing to get things done, and even they practised and finally the competition began their performance was 17th on the list so they got lot of time to practise yet with eveyr step Manyata seemed very nervous. It was their time as they headed to the stage in their position waiting for the curtain to open, suddenly Uday squeezed her hands gently and then he whsipered in her ears "I love you" three words and she had a new confidence in her.


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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsssmmm update baby sister love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Awesome update anni... loved it...
Finally this story reached its culmination point.. N uday n manyata got their love n the king n queen's souls were freed...
Thanks for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG that was sooo damn awesome!!!!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update dear...😊...

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