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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UB2500

Lovely update...

I'm already impatient for the nxt update, so post really soon! šŸ˜›


Thank you so much... Will update next part in a while.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

Beautifully written, loved it


Aww... Thank u!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Lovely, I am glad Sammy saw her. 😊 In a way Sammy-Raghav were with her again in her success, for her performance. i am loving Roy & Payal as Kalpi's friends. 😊 already impatient for the next update. 😃


Thank you... Yaa Sammy and Raghav are inseparable part of her life and will help her in geeting success indirectly!!

Next update coming in a while..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update, Kalpi is lucky to have such great friends.
Also glad that Sammy saw her, wonder what will happen now.

Here too that stupid Pakhi has to become the haddi, Kalpi should now forget all about selfish Kamala
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Posted: 11 years ago
As promised I am updating part 11 today only!! Hope u will like this part as well.. Again sorry for all the typos and mistake.. u can point them out if u want so that I can correct it!! Well I will edit all 2 parts tomorrow..

All three friends are in Kalpi's green room. Kalpi is looking upset.. Roy and Payal are confused about this sudden outburst.


Payal : What happened Kalpi? Why r u so tensed?


Roy : Whom u saw Kalpi while dancing?? U dint forgt step but got disturbed.. M I right? Tell us.. what happened?? Ur silence is killing us..


Kalpi : What should I say Roy.. My past is haunting me.. I am trying my best to move on and too some extent I am happy with whatever I have in my life but people in my past are keep bugging me!! I never wanted to meet him or anyone associated with him but now his best friend is here.. He will tell him about me.. Where will I go now?? I am fed up...


Roy : Stop running Kalpi.. face it. To solve ur problem and to move on u have to face the problem.. U have to prove that it doesn't affect u anymore.. U have to stop loving him.. If u can't than go back.. but do not punish urself by remembering him again and again..


Kalpi : No Roy.. I don't love him anymore.. It just the good memories which affects me..


Roy : Ohh plz.. U can't lie to me at least so stop lying to urself also!! U too know that u still love him.. If not than go and meet his best frn!! Rub it off in his face that u do not care about him and his frn.


Payal gestures him to stop talking and go out for sometime. Roy complies... Payal gives some water to Kalpi and start talking with her..


Payal : Kalpi today is a big day for u and us.. Do u want to spoil it?? N for whom.. the man who cheated u.. He is the same man who chose revenge over ur love.. Than why r u choosing him over ur happiness..


Kalpi : I noe everything Payal.. I really don't love him anymore.. He will always hold a special place in my life as he is my first love but now I don't even want him back in my life.. He has lost all the respect I had for him..


Payal : Than Kalpi.. stand up and forget all other things.. Remember ur aim..


Payal looks at Roy who is standing outside worried about Kalpi.. She looks at him..


Payal : N someday someone will come who will love u unconditionally.. Who won't take u for granted and will do everything to see a smile on ur face.. He will be the one who won't let anyone hurt u..


Kalpi : No Payal... Now I don't want to believe in all this.. I just want achieve my dream... I want to start my own coaching classes and now he won't affect me much.. U r ryt.. This is a big day for me.. I won't ruin it coz of him..


Payal : That's like my buddy!! Now Let's go... They are about to announce result.. I want to see u guys with trophy!!


All three of them goes to the event hall... Announcer is announcing result for the day.. Kalpi and Roy has won the trophy.. They call them to speak something on stage..


Roy : From last 3 years I am winning this trophy.. but I still feel the same.. The nervousness and excitement is the same!! The only thing which have changes is my partner.. Miss Kalpana!! I am really thankful to her for supporting me and I would like to dedicate this trophy to her only as her solo was the best part of our dance.. Thank u Kalpi for being my partner..


Kalpana : Roy is just a fabulous dancer and a gr8 person that's y he is praising me.. but reality is that it was my frn's love due to which I reached here!! I really wants to thank Payal for giving me this opportunity.. And thank u so much people for liking my dance and encouraging me..


Sammy listens all this carefully.. The Kalpana he is seeing now isn't the same now.. He wants to meet her as soon as possible but doesn't want anyone to know about it as it may cause trouble to Kalpi..


Sammy(to himself) : I don't know whether Kalpi has told anyone about her past or not.. I shouldn't meet her here... I will meet her in her green room.. I will tell her about Raghav-Pakhi's divorce.. She has all the rights to know about him... I will call Raghav here as well... I wish they sort out all the differences..


Green Room


Kalpi and Roy are in green room.. Payal is busy with Roshni as Roshni wants to know more about Kalpi.. Kalpi is lost in her thoughts when Roy gives her his mobile.. Kalpi gives him a shocking look..


Roy : Call her!!


Kalpi : Whom??


Roy : Ur mom.. U r thinking about her only naa..


Kalpi : Hmm!! But I dnt know whether she will like it or not..


Roy : Don't think much.. Call her..


Kalpi calls Kamla from Roy's cell... Kamla receives it..


Kamla : Hello


Kalpi gets emotional on hearing her ayi's voice after such a long time.. A tear drops from her eyes. Kalpi was about to speak when she hears Pakhi's voice in background..


Pakhi : Kamla maa what are u doing.. U noe I am so happy today!!


Kalpi disconnects the call.. Kamla wonders whose call it was.. As a mother she too felt strange and thinks to call back as it can be Kalpi. Kamla misses Kalpi too much but she knows that she was wrong..


After disconnecting the call Kalpi becomes silent.. Roy watches this and understood what conspired right now..


Roy : So it was Pakhi again??


Kalpi : Yes.. she is still Pakhi.. m sure she must be having fun time with her daughter and son-in-law. I shouldn't have called her..


Roy : Kalpi.. stop it!! U should have talk to her.. She must be missing u..


Kalpi gets too sentimental on hearing this.. This is not the first time when she is away from Kamla.. In her hostel days also Kamla did same with her..,. But Kamla still affects her.. She hugs Roy.. Roy doesn't know how to respond.. They had group hug many times but Kalpi is hugging him for the first time.. He feels he sadness in her touch,,He wants to support her but confuse about hugging back or not.. Finally he gives in and hugs her tightly.. Sammy who has just arrived sees them and misunderstands Kalpi.. He bangs on the door... They breaks their hug on hearing it..


Sammy : Kalpi... I am sorry... I guess I came at wrong time..


Kalpi : Hello Sir, no it's fine.. u just come in!! This is Roy.. And Roy.. this is Sammy sir. We used to work together..


Sammy : I want to talk o u alone..


Kalpi : It's ok sir.. U can speak in front of him.. He knows everything..


Roy : Kalpi u talk... I will come in a while..


Roy leaves them alone..


Kalpi : Yes sir.. tell me what do u want to talk about..


Sammy : About Raghav.. but I guess you have moved on..


Sammy (in his mind) : I have seen u hugging Roy.. I wasn't expecting u to move on so easily.. I knew Raghav has hurted u but u were not the one to forget him so easily.. I wanted to tell u about Raghav's divorce but I guess that is not required anymore.


Kalpi : What were u expecting... After what ur friend did to me.. u r deffo not expecting me to wait for him.. I have moved on and living a happy life..


Kalpi(in he mind) : How to tell u sir that only taking part in a dance competition is not moving on.. he still affects me but I am sure that someday I won't care about him


Sammy : So.. What should I say now?? Have a happy life.. N don't worry I won't tell Raghav about u.


Kalpi : Thank you sir..but I don't really care about him..U can tell him if u want.. I won't change my mind. He was my past and m not going to look back..


Payal come in the room and sees Kalpi talking with Sammy.. She realizes that he is the same guy about whom Kalpi was talking.. Sammy too sees her and bids bye to them.. Payal do not want Kalpi to think about him and hence tries to lighten the atmosphere..


Payal : Oh madam..Congrats!! Now what's tonight's plan??


Kalpi : u say..


Payal : Let's go for a movie.. Let's enjoy tonight.. No one will sleep and from tomorrow we will start working on ur coaching classes!!


Kalpi : Ok but movie??


Payal : Why u don't like movies??


Kalpi : It's nothing like that... I haven't seen any movie in multiplex till now!!


Payal : OMG!! How u spent ur college days thn??


Kalpi : By studying..


Payal : No issues!! We will go tonight!! U will have fun baby!! Let's call Roy as well!!



Precap : Kalpi suggests coaching class's name as "Udaan"..


P.S. : So again hit like and comment.

Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drdee142

Very nice update, Kalpi is lucky to have such great friends.

Also glad that Sammy saw her, wonder what will happen now.

Here too that stupid Pakhi has to become the haddi, Kalpi should now forget all about selfish Kamala


Thank you DrDee!!

Kalpi is too attached to her Mom and she won't forget her.. But I will try to make Kamla realize her fault in this story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
As much as I like Raghav n Kalpi but I prefer she moves on without him, lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..a bit sad but still happy that kalpi moved on atleast a bit...continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for this quick update. liked it, but sad as Kalpi didn't got to know about Ragha-Pakhi divorce. I guess it'll be at the right time. n Sammy misunderstood Roy-Kalp relation.😊 loving the progress of d story though.😊😃
n yes I do want to see Ragna together in the end!šŸ˜†
Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic double updates Vish! Awww so happy Kalpi moved on.. Lol Sammy is the star of MUS...Great job!!!

Hope you get a positive response for the interview!!!!Good luck!

Rgds, Shyama

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