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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update..update whenever u r free..
All the best for your interview.. U'll rock..
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All the best dear nd u r amazing writer...
When ever get time plzz try 2 write next part...
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All the best dear! Will surely pray for ya!
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All the best for ur interview!
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Great update and good luck on ur interview
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Thank you so much dearies..You all are sweethearts!! Thanks a lot for ur wishes.. but do not ask about my interview.. That was a disaster.. Still hopeful!!

Thank u so much for liking previous part.. Today's part I have wrote while travelling so expect many typos and mistakes.. Sorry in advance!! N I know dance part is bit messy but how can any1 explain dancing in words.. Still I tried my best.. M trying to write next part now.. will try to update it toninght or tomorrow morning.. Once again I hope u will like this part!!

Event Day


Roy and Kalpi are getting ready in their respective green room..Kalpi is wearing a white frock with black borders.. She has curled her hair and tied a pony which is giving her hair frilly touch.. Her pearl earring are giving her royal look.. She wears black stilettos which matches her attire completely.. It took her whole one day to learn dancing in those heels... She looks herself in the mirror..


Kalpi(to herself) : Perfect!! According to me I am ready for my performance but I should ask Payal once.. I don't want to disappoint Roy today in any way.. After all he has done so much for me. And it's a big day for him. I will try my best to support him today. But where is Payal.. Doctor has told her to rest but this girl can't sit at her place.. She must be with Roy.. Now I have to go there..


Kalpi goes towards Roy's room... She sees Roy and Payal arguing over something and decides to leave as she doesn't want to invade their privacy.. Kalpi turns to go back when she hears Kalpi.. She stops to hear their talk..


Roy : Yes, I do.. I want Kalpi to fulfill her dreams but not on ur cost.. U were so excited for this event and now u faked injury so that Kalpi can dance with me... N u also planned to hid it from me.. It was that doctor who revealed it.. Why u did this Payal??


Payal : For Kalpi.. I knw she won't take our help but she needs money for her coaching classes. And I do not want her to loose this opportunity.. M sure u guys will win and this money will help her in her fulfilling her dreams..


Roy : But what about ur dreams??


Payal : Dancing is not my dream.. It's just a hobby. I want to be a writer and u know that... I won't loose anything by sacrificing but if Kalpi will loose this opportunity than she will have to wait and we don't know till when.. On audition day itself I have decided that Kalpi will dance with u..And hence I planned that trip and let Kalpi practice with u.. I just want to see her happy.. Till today she has sacrificed everything for others.. Now I want her to have her share of happiness which she truly deserves.


Roy : Hmm.. Everybody should have a friend like u! Kalpi is indeed lucky!!


Kalpi who was listening them is really very angry.. She is a girl of self respect and she doesn't want anyone to help her.. She decides to confront Payal.. Before she open a door she sees a lady approaching her..


Lady : So u have decided to confront her and quit this competition??


Kalpi : Yes..


Lady : Sorry but I heard everything.. I know I shouldn't interfere in u guys but still... So u have decided to confront her??


Kalpi : Yes, What she did is wrong.. I do not want anyone to pity me. I want success but not coz of anyone else.. She hurt my self-respect.. I know she is my best friend but she doesn't have any right to interfere in my personal life..


Lady : Yes u r right.. She doesn't have any right to interfere.. She doesn't have any right to see her friend happy and help her in achieving her dreams. But this is ur point of view.. Try to keep urself in her position.. Wouldn't u have done the same thing?? Won't u sacrifice ur happiness for her sake?? U will naa.. This is what she did, U r thinking that she is sacrificing her happiness for u but look at her face.. she is feeling proud in doing so. Very few people in life can get such friends.. Do not loose them for just a small mistake.. The life is urs and decision too.. M just telling u to think before u act..


Kalpi : What should I do now?? M confuse..


Lady : If u ask me than go and perform.. Do not let her know that u are aware of her secret. Let her feel proud by sacrificing for ur happiness.. Go and prove that she wasn't wrong in letting u participate in this competition..


Kalpi : Thank u mam..


Lady : Roshni..My name!!


Kalpi : I am Kalpana..


Lady : Nice meeting u.. See u than!! Go and rock the floor!!


Kalpi goes back to her room.. Smiling and happy to have a friend like Payal and Roy. All her anger is vanished now.. She is thanking Roshni to let her see things from another prospective.. She promises herself that it will be the best dance of her and life and Payal will feel proud of her. Payal comes to her room.. Kalpi hugs her..


Payal : What happened??


Kalpi : Thanx.


Payal : For what?? Breaking tmy leg??


Kalpi : No.. For ur fshp..


Payal : Ohh!! Madam is senti today.. We can have this emotional drama later.. U have to perform in next 5 mins.. Let's go.. Roy is standing outside..



Competition place


Anchor is appreciating the previous performance.. Sammy is sitting in first row.. She is chatting with Roshni.. Roshni tells her to watch the next performance as it's his son..


Roshni : I am very happy that Mr. Singhania sent u for this event.. I would like u to see the girl going to perform with my son.. I met her today and I feel she has the attitude that u want.. She looks simple and down to earth.. I think she will be best choice for our NGO representative.. She can raise the funds for us.


Sammy : I am sure she must be special as it's hard to please u Mrs. Oberoi.


Roy and Kalpi comes on stage.. Their dance is being divided into 3 sections.. It's a fusion!! 1st one is Roy's solo where Roy sees Kalpi and fells in love.. Roy does lyrical hip hop on "Kyun aajkal nind kam".. He dances really well... Everyone seems impressed.. Sammy notices Kalpi.. but her appearance was so short that he dint recognize her.. In end of this part of dance Roy proposes Kalpi and she accepts it


2nd part

They dance on "Falak tak".. Sammy sees Kalpi on the stage.. He gets dumbstruck!! He wasn't expecting her here.. Kalpi dances very well.. There comes a section where Kalpi has to pause for few seconds.. While pausing she notices Sammy.. She freezes there.. Roy notices this and thinks she forgot the step.. He somehow manages the situation and starts dancing again.. In end of this part Roy and Kalpi are about to get married but Roy dies in some accident and vanishes in dark!!


3rd Part

This part of story is about the girl i.e. Kalpi who lost her love and crying for him. Kalpi does contemporary on "Saiyaan..".


While dancing she remembers all her moments with Raghav and the way he deceived her.. Sammy's presence has affected her badly... For her this isn't a dance anymore.. She is crying while dancing.. All others are touched by her pain.. Everyone has tears in their eyes.. They are crying with her.. She finishes her performance and collapses on the floor..


Everyone present there gives her standing ovation except Payal and Sammy.. They both knew that it wasn't an act but her pain.. Roy approaches her and she realizes that the place where she is.. she controls herself and they leave the stage together...



Precap : Kalpi calls Kamla... hears Pakhi's voice!!

P.S. : Plz hit like and comment... Ur encouragement is really important for all new writers like me.


Regards

Vish.

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update:)
glad sammy saw her and aww my kalpi 😭
and wenever she tries to talk to kamla..pakhi always becomes kabab me haddi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
I'm already impatient for the nxt update, so post really soon! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely, I am glad Sammy saw her. 😊 In a way Sammy-Raghav were with her again in her success, for her performance. i am loving Roy & Payal as Kalpi's friends. 😊 already impatient for the next update. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

nice update:)
glad sammy saw her and aww my kalpi 😭
and wenever she tries to talk to kamla..pakhi always becomes kabab me haddi


Thank you foram.. U gonna love that haddi for sure.. After all she is not delusional here and taking divorce from Raghav..

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