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Posted: 11 years ago
Good Morning everyone!!

Thank you guys for liking the story and commenting... Sorry I cant reply to everyone individually coz of the time limit... I hope all of u will understand this.. I am here with Part 9.. Hope u will like it and comment.. I will appreciate all positive and negative feedbacks!! Thank you!!

5 days later, Dance class

Kalpi is practicing with Roy.. Payal is out of town from last 3 days hence she has to help Roy for competition. Kalpi was not convinced with Payal's reason for going out at such crucial time but she kept mum and agreed to help Roy.. Roy watches Kalpi dancing.. Her clean dance postures amuses him..

Roy : Kalpi.. R u sure u haven't learened dance before?? U r such a good dancer!!

Kalpi : Thank u for the compliment but it's coz of u... U r such a fabulous dancer that anyone can learn by watching u...

Roy : Witty haa?? I have seen so many beautiful girls but u r the one beauty with brain.

Kalpi : enough of this compliments... Let's practice... Payal will come today and than I won't get opportunity to dance with u..

Roy : A bit tired, want some rest.. till then u practice ur act.. In case u need to perform.. U have to be perfect.

Kalpi starts dancing and Roy sits at corner watching her... He looks at smile on her face and gets lost!!

Roy(to himself, bit loudly) : I can die to see this smile on ur face.. I wish I can wash away all the bitter memories of ur past and fill ur life with happiness.. I hate seeing tears in ur big eyes.. Those expressive eyes are enough to pull anyone towards u.. U don't share ur pain but I can feel ur sadness in ur tone... U doesn't take his name but I know u still loves him.. U miss ur family and city.. I wish I can do something for u!!


Payal is standing behind Roy with a crap bandage on her leg.. She has listened everything.. She sees Roy moving towards Kalpi... He holds her hand and they starts dancing together.. Payal sees them dancing.. Roy and Kalpi are looking sweet together... She sees Roy lost in Kalpi and Kalpi enjoying her dance... She gets angry!!

Payal : Will somebody pay attention to me or should I leave??

Kalpi : Payal.. Sorry I dint notice u.. When have u come?? And what happened to ur leg??

Payal : I fell from stairs..

Roy : are u fine??

Payal(angrily) : Yes.. U need not to worry about me.. Enjoy ur dance..

Roy : Dance?? Oh Godd!! How will u dance now??

Payal : I won't.. N u don't worry.. U have a new partner now.. Kalpi... I saw u guys dancing and u have perfect chemistry..

Kalpi : Y r u angry Payal?? And I won't take ur place.. U will be fine by tomorrow and u will dance with him.

Payal(hides her anger) : M not angry Kalpi and u have to dance for me.. I have consulted doctor and he said that my leg will be fine in 2-3 days but I can't dance for next 1 month. I do not want Roy to get eliminated coz of me... Plz Kalpi help us..

Kalpi : No Payal.. How could I.. U were so excited for this competition.. I can't!!

Payal : So now u thin we are different?? I would love to cheer for u.. I will be more than happy to see u dancing.. And u can do that much for me.. right??

Kalpi : Are u sure??

Payal : Definitely darling.. M not a bimbo to get jealous of my best friend.. Ur success means a world to me!!

Roy : So.. u guys have decided?? What about me??

Payal(again angrily) : What about u?? U must me more than happy to have ur favorite partner..

Kalpi : Looks like she is angry on u..U guys chat.. I will take a leave.


Kalpi leaves them alone so that they can talk with each other.. She realizes that Payal is angry on Roy..

Kalpi(in her mind) : Is Payal jealous coz of our dance?? Does she loves Roy?? Ohh God.. What I am thinking.. They are just best friends and I am sure they will sort out their issues soon.. I know them.. They can't stay mad at each other for long..


In class Roy is asking Payal for the reason of her anger but she stays mum.. Roy gets angry on this..

Roy : What the hell.. Why r u not replying damn it?? What I did now??

Payal : So u don't know what u did?

Roy : NO!! How would I know when u r not telling me anything..

Payal : What I mean to u?? M I ur best buddy??

Roy : Off course u r.. U r the one who knows me in and out..

Payal : Really?? So than y u hid such big thing from me?? Don't u trust me?? N how dare u think like that about Kalpi??

Roy(stammers) : Kalpi?? What I hid?? I.. I..

Payal : Oh Plz!! I heard everything u said while she was dancing.. U love her and u hid such big thing from me..

Roy : M sorry!! I myself din't know when it happened.. I dint wanted to love her but there was something that attracted me... It wasn't love at first sight but something happened to me the day u introduced her to me... I thought it was infatuation but with our friendship my feelings increased... I tried not to look at her in this way but I failed miserably!! Whenever I look at her I see a girl longing for love... A girl who is ready to give up anything for their dear ones.. It hurts me see her like this.. Sometimes I just want to hug her and tell that I am always there for her but I know that she won't accept me!! that's why I dint share anything with u.

Payal : Romeo!! I was angry on u coz I thought Kalpi will get hurt again but now I realized u love her truly!! U r the only one who can help her in moving on.. I would tell Kalpi about u..

Roy : No.. U won't.. She loves only tht cheater.. Her love is so deep that she has never taken his name... So plz close this chapter..

Payal : Yes.. u r right!! She needs time.. She has learned to live her life but stills need to be happy for herself... And her real happiness lies in her dream thats y I..

Roy : Why u stopped in mid?? That's y what??

Payal : Nothing..U will never know!! Neways m sorry.. I m ur frn and I should have understand ur feelings!!

Roy : Sorry and Payal doesn't go together.. Stop behaving like a saint.. U r a devil.. Now let's go!!


Precap : Sammy sees Kalpi!!


P.S. : Next update will be bit late as I have an important interview tomorrow.. Plz pray for me as I am staying away from my parents from last 9 years and this job can reduce the distance between my workplace and hometown... Thank you.

Regards

Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
vish amazing update
and all d best mwahhh u will rock our wishes will be wid u always
ROCKKK
ALLL d BEST ...and i will pray for u
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏
No words at all to describe
Just want want to say
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the very best dear, stay positive👍🏼
You will succeed in your interview, I will surely keep praying for u 😊
U write wonderfully...we will wait for the next part of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Caught Up..!!!

Awesome..!!! Awesome..!!!

Kalpi as dancer..!!! and that slap of Kamla..!!! :D :D She is still reluctant..! Thanks Vish.. I sooo wanted to see this happening, but.. DJ's :( :(
this is perfect..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear...
I think payal purposely went put of station and lied that her leg has got hurt and she is unable to dance..so that kalpi can participate in dance...iit jst guess..

I knw ull gv best moments...plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..well written..👍🏼 good luck for your interview...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
good luck and i'll pray you get this job...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Getting interesting day by day! 👍🏼
n All the Best for your interview dear. 😃
Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all All the Very Best for your Interview, God Bless and hope everything works out well for you.
And another amazing update, so Roy is in love with Kalpi 😊 But why do I feel that Payal loves him too.

So Sammy sees Kalpi, I can't wait to see this please update soon

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