Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi )ff 6th CHAPTR UPDATED... - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

hmmm🤣🤣lets see yaar🤣 waise tune like nahi maari


Oops sorry abhi like karti hu...exams going on so dimag not working properly...I posted your fanfic ka comment on some other fanfic thread šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: potternerd


Oops sorry abhi like karti hu...exams going on so dimag not working properly...I posted your fanfic ka comment on some other fanfic thread šŸ˜†

lolzzz all the best teko...🤣🤣🤣 tu funny hai..nd funny stories bhi likthi hai exams ke baad ff likna start kardešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
okie byeeešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

lolzzz all the best teko...🤣🤣🤣 tu funny hai..nd funny stories bhi likthi hai exams ke baad ff likna start kardešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
okie byeeešŸ˜‰


Hahahah thanks...sochti hu Kuch acha storyline...k bye 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice
Oh precap thats very sad
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Asad saw zoya pic & remembered his encounter with zoya
Everyone is ready for wedding
Precep was 😭
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chaptr 4

Some call comes to kabir nd he rushes out in the car

Najma: bhaijaan kaha jaa rahe hain...nikaah ke din akele nahi jaathe bhaijaan

Dillu; arrey kabir...ruko

Rashid ; calling kabir... The number u r trying is busy wth another call hum sab ko saath jaana chayiye tha... aur yeh ladka kaha chala gaya

Aak ; lets go to noor mahal..nikaah ke din hai...nd bhaijaan waha zaroor ayege..

All go to noor mahal...aak najma dillu rashid

Zoya in nikaah costumes...waiting for kabir

Nd kawali people singing songs

kab aaoge kab aaoge kab aaoge
jism se jaan juda hogi.. kya tab aaoge
der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye
der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye
aaja re ke mera man ghabraaye
der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye
ho der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye

kahaan hai raunaqe mahfil yahi sab poochte hai
kahan hai raunaqe mahfil yahi sab poochte hai
kahan hai raunaqe mahfil yahi sab poochte hai
baarha tere na aane kaa sabab poochte hai
der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye
ho der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye

hadd ho chuki hai ...aaja... jaan par bani hai ...aaja
mehfil saji hai ...aaja teri kami hai ...aaja
ke der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye
ho der na ho jaaye kahin der na ho jaaye

aaja ve mahi teraa rasta ho dekhdiya
aaja ve mahi tera rastaa ho dekhdiya
rasta ho dekhdiya
rasta ho dekhdiya
aaja ve mahi teraa rasta ho dekhdiya
aaja ve mahi

der karna teri aadat hi sahi
der se hi sahi magar aaja
der se hi sahi magar aaja
aaja ve mahi
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiya

sagama saga mapa
sagama
nipanipa
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiya
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiya
aaja ve mahi
aaja ve mahi tera rasta ho dekhdiya
rasta ho dekhdiya
rasta ho dekhdiya

quazi enters

zoya in tears razia humi nuzzi holding zoya...gaffur getting frustrated kaha hai kabir

rashid: tu fikar math kar yaar...abhi dektha hoon

gaffur : par ab tho quazi bhi aachuke hai...

aak calling kabir ...the number is switched off...

Cops call rashid:...kalhatty cliff main kabir ka car accident huva hai...

Rashid drops the phone...all look at rashid

Rashid says we hav to immediately rush to kalhatty cliff

All remain shocked...nd rush to the spot in their cars...

The cops say yaha par accident huva hai..

All remain shocked...nd yaha jiska accident hotha hai uski dead body bhi milna muskil hai...🤢🤢🤢

Zoya trembles

Do dil bichre do dil haare, Hum is kinare wo us kinare

Ankiyo se aansoo bahte hai, Ro-Ro ke haare dil kahte hai

Aak shouts at the cops wht the hell r u guys saying mere bhaijaan zinda hai...sunna aapne he is alive I can feel his breath

Najma: bhaijaan...unki dead body tak nahi milegi ka kya matlab sniffing nd sobbing very badly...poor najma...

Aak hugging najma...kuch nahi huva hai.. nothg happened...chup hojaao tamatar...aur inne bhaijaan ki body mili nahi hai...matlab ki voh zinda hai yeh log kuch bhi bholthe hai nd

Dillshad feels dizzy...rashid holds dillu najma shouts nd holds ammi...

Zoya runs frm ther nd suddenly trips aak holds her waist she holding his neck he sees her very close in bridal look very pretty but her eyes moist her eyes looking for answers her hair scattered she sweating nd trembling...duniya main kitni hai nafrathain na na na fir bhi dilo main hai chahatain...maar bhi jayye na na na pyaar wale na na...Mit bhi jaye yaar wale

Zinda rehthi hai unki mohobattain...he makes her stand but she runs...cryingly

Humi follows aapi ruko aapi...

Doom to na de nana de nana, Doom to na de nana de nana

Ye hausala kaise jhuke, ye aarzoo kaise ruke

Manzil mushkil to kya, dundhla sahil to kya

Tanaha ye dil to kya aa aa ho

Doom to na de nana de nana, Doom to na de nana de nana

Razia gets angry : yeh sab meri bacchi ke saath uske nikaah ke din uske nikaah ke jode main hona tha...dilshad aapka beta kabir ko aisa konsa kaam aagaya...

Aak ; aapko dikayi nahi deraha meri ammi...takleef se guzar rahi hai

Gaffur : aur jo humari beti takleef se guzar rahi hai uska kya...

Rashid: bass kabir ka koi news mile fir sab teek hoga

Gaffur : abhi inloge ne kya bola yaha jiska accident hotha hai uski lash tak nahi milthi..

Cops ; niche jungli janwar lash ko khaa jaathe hai

Aak : getting raged nd violent nd holds the collar of the inspector...aap bas apni duty kijiye...tht is searching my bro...

Aak calls the CBI to enqire...

Cbi comes nd searches down the kalhatty cliff...

Gaffur : meri beti ki aanko main aason aagaye...uski kushi cheen gayi

Aak : remembers his wish..uss ladki ki kushi cheen lena humesha keliye...aak thinks voh sab tho maine gusse main bola tha..gusse main kahi huvi cheez sach nahi hothe...

Zoya running to dargah humi going behind zoya...

Zoya shattered yeh sab aapne mere saath teek nahi kiya...nd cries...nd music follows

Doom to na de nana de nana, Doom to na de nana de nana

Hogi hume jo rahamat ada, dhup kategi saaye tale

Apni khuda se hai ye dua, manzil laga le humko gale,

Zoorarat sau baar rahe, uncha ikraar rahe

Zinda her pyaar rahe ho ho

Doom to na de nana de nana, Doom to na de nana de nana

Ye hausala kaise jhuke, ye aarzoo kaise ruke

Ye hausala kaise jhuke, ye aarzoo kaise ruke

Raho pe kante bikhre agar, uspe to phir bhi chalna hi hai,

Shaam chupa le sooraj magar, raat ko ek din dhalana hi hai

Rut ye tal jayegi, himmat rang layegi,

subah phir aayegi ho ho

Doom to na de nana de nana, Doom to na de nana de nana

Its night time gaffur razia nuzzat aak najma Rashid dillu..all near kalhatty cliff

Dillu shouting kabir...muje yakeen hai kudha par...ki tum teek ho

Cbi : nahi uski lash nahi mili we got the phone...whch is damaged...nd we would fix it...nd check the last number

Aak : kon hosakta hai...jisne call kiya ??

Dillu : matlab mera beta...kabir...

Cbi : his body is not to be found so he is declared dead

The media comes nd captures the whole sequence nd say...the business tycoon kabir's accident has taken place near kalhatty cliff nd he is no more...

2 days pass

Rashid calling gaffur : humara chota beta asad aur aapki beti zoya ki nikaah hoga ab

Precap : aak saying Rashid I cannot do this nikaah...coz I lov afreen...rashid ko heart attack...

Nd dillu shouting at aak ab tume nikaah karna hoga thts it...😔😔😔😔

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mine
Unres

That was gud Jill liked it

Feeling so bad for kabir šŸ˜• šŸ˜†
Jas dekhrahi hai na 🤣 🤣

But uska dead nai hui na
Fir aayeg 2nd half mein šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

Cal kaha se aayiii hmph
K suspence na 🤢

Awww asad felt bad see zoya like DAT
Nd thought about his wish

All were crrct at their places

Precap 😳 ha Ab tho karna hi padega šŸ˜‰

Continue soon
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mitta diya🤢🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1


<div></div>mitta diya🤢🤢🤢


Kyon Aak koi nai milaaa šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow I didn't expect you'd update today

Lovely surprise

Loved the "Duniya mein kitni hai nafratein" moment😳

Rashid ko heart attack šŸ˜•

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