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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part..
jogging ..then badminton match ..well written
neha has a past...waiting u to unwind it
contd. soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah awesome update marathi they were talkin👏but honestly i don't know😉 roz roz jogging in morning gud habit 😃
badmitton was superb😆
😆baccho ko nai nai stories⭐️
arni and aryan intoduced to
ETF team😃😃
Neha's past waiting to know😲
wat's the matter
cont soon😛
😉update at the earliest u can😃
😃
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Edited by SweetShreu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dr! happy journey and enjoy the vacation!
the epi. was awesome .the family and the kids and the party were awesome!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thankx for liking it

meera851, greensakthi, misakiscarlet, angelarya, Shamsad1607, sdutta, rinku95, NainaSM,

shreyashi19mld, ariyabestfan, ShanayaShaleen, rimi_invisible, pink1, zubiya92, ...anika...,

_Nikita_, Radhikerani, Snehajain,


Read n replied everyone..

@ ShanayaShaleen - thankx for ur lamba comment di..the secrets won't be unearthed so soon..stay tuned to know when they will be revealed..di baccho ko to raja aur chidiya ki kahaani hi sunani padegi na..ko si-fi ya crime thriller thodi sunayenge..ek daaku tha ya gangster tha..hehe..

@ angelarya - sorry for not putting the translations dear..I just forgot them..but I've added at the end of this part..do read it..thankx dear

@ ...anika... - thankx di..par match tie huyi thi..one set was only won by neha n shy..

@ Snehajain - thankx dear..i've added the translation part..do check it..sorry for not adding it previously

@ Shamsad1607 - thankx di..u'll know soon what Neha told in samjun's ears..n she always saya different things..not same

@ GOLD.A -thankx di

@ rimi_invisible - itna gussa mat karo di..secret kuch nahi he..wo kya kaha ye pata chal jayega..update me..thankx di

@ rinku95 -thankx dear

@ little_angle -don't be sorry dear..its ok..thankx dear..glad u liked all parts

@ shreyashi19mld -thankx dear

@ NainaSM - thankx dear

@ _Nikita_ - thankx dear

@ zubiya92 - thankx dear..glad that u r eagerly waiting for the update😃

@ misakiscarlet -glad u liked it..thankx dear

@ SweetShreu -tumhe marathi nahi aati..koi baat nahi..translation diya he padh lena..thankx dear

@ pink1 - thankx dear

@ greensakthi - thankx dear

@ radhikerani - thankx dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

precap : a party at Rawte mansion..n Raj asks about some past to which Neha refuses to talk to him

Chapter 11

~

Next morning..

~Rawte Mansion~

Rahul n jun were ready to go for jogging

Jun - neha kuthe aahe? [neha kahan he?]

Rahul - aali nahi? Me bolavun yeto.. [aayi nahi? Me bulakar laata hu]

Jun - thik aahe..jaa.. [thik he..jao]

Rahul goes to her room n sees that she's sleeping n he didn't feel like waking her n disturbing her sleep so he went back without waking her

Rahul - bhai..ti jhopli aahe..rahu dyaa tila aapan jau [bhai..wo so rahi he..use rehne do hum jaate he]

Jun - ho..chal [haan..chalo]

~

They return from jogging but don't find neha at home

Jun - bhabhi..neha kahaan gayi?

Shy - wo to aaj jaldi chali gaayi..office jaldi jaana he aisa kehkar gayi he..chinta mat karo..aur jaldi taiyaar hokar aao..

Jun - ji..

~

Etf conference room..

Aisha,riya,liza,shree n chotu r sitting n chatting as they r early n their bosses haven't arrived yet..after few minutes sam,karan n jun come to office..all greeted sam n jun..sam replied n as usual jun just nodded..then he felt someone missing..he asked everyone

Jun - neha nahi aayi?

Shree - nahi sir..abhi tak to nahi aayi..

Jun [to himself but audible to all]- par bhabhi ne to kaha ki wo aaj jaldi nikal gaayi thi..[he calls neha]

After the second ring neha picks the call

Neha - kya hua bhaiya??

Jun - kahan ho tum?

Neha - road par..ek traffic jam me fas gaye he..15 minit me pahoch jayenge [n she cuts the call]

After 15 minutes neha comes to etf conference room

Neha - good morning everyone!

Sam - u r late!

Neha - by 15 minits 20 seconds..i know that..traffic jam me fas gayi thi..

Jun - oh really?? Aise kounse raaste se aa rahi thi jo humare pehle nikali thi aur hamare aane ke baad pahonch rahi ho..

Neha - jaate waqt us raaste se le jayenge..thik he..[n settles on her place]

Sam gets a call n he goes n then tells jun that commisioner has called them for meeting..

Sam - team..tum sab apna paper work khatam karo..

Once sam jun left all sat discussing yesterday's party..

Shree - yaar chotu..rathod sir gaana accha gaa lete he nahi?

Cho - haan..aur hume nahi pata tha ki arjun sir itna accha guitar baja sakte he..

Liza - waise neha tumne aisa kya kaha tha ki rathod sir aur arjun sir turant raazi ho gaye?

Neha - [remembers what she said to kids]

~fb~

Neha - arni! Beta uncle sam se kaho ki agar wo gaana nahi gayenge to hum unki holi ki party waali recording sab ko dikha denge..phir aapki marzi..jao

Aryan..apne papa se kaho ki agar unhe guitar nahi bajana to koi baat nahi..hum in sab ko unke bachpan ki video dikhayenge..jao..bol do

~fb~

Neha doesn't reply so karan asks her again

Krn - oye billi..kya soch rahi he..kuch pucha tumse..jawab to de..

Neha - wo..actually..hum bhul gaye.. [n resumes her paperwork]

Krn - jaane do..ye nahi batayegi..ziddi jungli billi..

But to everyone's surprize..neha didn't react at all..then they all resumed their chat

Ri - kal ke saare tasks kaafi interesting the..bahot maza aaya..yeh tasks kisne soche the ?

Krn - shyna di ne..she's the mastermind behind this!

Ai - i must say..she's very talented !

Krn - haan..wo to he! Haina billi?

Neha - hmm..

Krn - kya hua he..tu aaj silent mode pe kyu he..daant padi he kya?? Aur subah jogging karne kyu nahi aayi?

Neha - hum aapke prashno ke uttar dene ke liye baadhya nahi he..

Krn - oh madam..itni typical hindi..mujhe to waise bhi hindi me kam marks aate he aur upar se tum itni pure hindi bol rahi ho..mujhe pata he ki tumhari hindi bahot acchi he..par mujhe to sab bouncer gaya..thik se normal hindi me bol..

Neha doesn't reply again

Liza - haan..yah baat to sahi he..neha ki hindi to bahot acchi he..kal jo poem sunaayi thi..it was fantastic

~fb~

It was neha's turn..neha read the chit..it was written..whatever shyna says..

neha - at ur service high command! kya hukum meri aka?

molly - lo..drama queen ki nautanki shuru ho gayi..

Shy -tum..[thinks something] ok..neha..jaldi se ek acchi si poem suna do..

Neha - [tries to recall]umm..hmm..thik he..

Zindagi he ek aboojh paheli si

Kitni bhi suljhao iski guthi

Phir bhi rehti yeh anboojhi hi

Kabhi he zindagi dhoop sunheri

Kabhi he kaali amavas andheri

Ek pal he harsh zindagi

Duje pal he gam zindagi

Koi na jaane kyu he yeh

Aboojh paheli zindagi

Jab chha jaate he baadal kaale

Tab baraste he khushiyon ke dhaage

Kabhi he ye phoolo ki phoolwaari

Kabhi he ye kaanto ki kyaari

Zindagi he ek aboojh paheli

Mrityu he jiski priya saheli !

~fb~

Ri - haan..liza u r ryt..the poem was superb!

Ai - zindagi se maut tak poori kaahani ko ek paheli bana diya..very interesting poem

Cho - haan yaar..bahot mast poem thi..neha tu khup chhan kaviyitri hoshil [tum ek bahot acchi kaviyitri banogi]

Neha - thankx..par mujhe itni taarif sunna pasand nahi he..so plz..kuch aur baat kijiye.. [n resumed her work]

Shree -[silently to chotu] yeh neha bhi ajeeb he..kab kounsi baat par gussa aa jaye pata hi nahi chalta

Cho - [murmuring]haan..pakki sys ki behen he..

Just then neha's phone buzzed but she didn't pick it..after the phone buzzed for second time karan asked her

Krn - kya hua jungli billi..apna phone to utha..dekh koun call kar raha he..

Neha - agar itni chinta he to khud utha lo..hume nahi baat karni..

The next time her phone buzzed..karan was going to pick it when neha took the call

Neha -[to caller] phone nathi upadti to tane samjhatu nathi ke maare vaat nathi karwi..hawe mane phone nahi karto..maare koi vaat nahi karwi..

[phone nahi utha rahe to tumhe samajh nahi aata ki mujhe baat nahi karni..ab mujhe phone mat karna..mujhe koi baat nahi karni..]

n she cuts the call without listening to the other end..others didn't understand what she said but could make out that she was upset n angry too..but at what..no one knew..karan probed to ask her but then stopped as he saw samjun coming to the conference room..(guys..the call was fron Raj😉n Neha talked in gujrati)

Sam - team! we have a new case..ek businessman ka katl hua he..lets go

~

At the crime scene..a man lay dead..liza n karan r checking the body n others r investigating the house n the wife of victim

Liza - sir..cause of death kisi sharp object se iski gardan par waar kiya gaya he..baaki ki details lab me test karne ke baad pata chalengi

Sam - thik he..body ko lab le jao..

~

ETF conference room..

All r discussing the case

Liza - sir time of death dopahar baara baje..par kis object se qatl hua he yeh nahi pata chal raha..

Sam - matlab..

Krn - jab bhi kisi weapon se murder hota he to uske micro particles hume wound pe milte he..n in this case no micro particles..n this is not at all possible..

After some more discussion..sam calls the day off..

~

Three days later..

~

ETF does investigation but nothing solid is found..

N a new murder case is reported..an actress is murdered..

Jun suspects that this might be a work of serial killer..

Investigation reveals that there is no connection between the two victims..

Even the suspects with motives were not near the crime scenes..

They r doing further inverstigation when Neha feels someone stalking her..they catch hold of a photographer who was taking her pics..

During interrogation he reveals that he was doing this for a criminal named usman..

As Usman has that much expertise to kill someone without leaving evidence, arjun thinks he has got a killer for at least one case..

~

After investigating for two days they find usman..

On the third day when they were going to catch him but they find him dead..

Again out of leads..all sit to discuss the cases

~

ETF conference room.

Sam is breifing the case details..

Sam - 9 days..3 murders..aur ek bhi case ka killer nahi mila..

Jun - yeh kisi serial killer ka kaam lagta he..

Sam - serial killer..to tumhe lagta he ki ye teeno murders aapas me linked he..koi connection nahi he in teeno me..they have never met each other in their lifetime..toh kya link ho sakti he??

Jun - life me nahi..par teeno ke death me link zaroor he..shree..teeno victims ki files lao..poori details do..

Shree - yes sir..victim 1..ek bahot hi famous businessman tha..

Sam - ho sakta he kisi business rivalry ki wajah se use marwaya ho..

Ri - statistics ke hisab se 95% cases me ye hota he..

Krn - ye killing kisi bahot shaatir killer ne ki he..no clues at all..

Aisha - aur suspects ke bahot strong alibi he..

Jun - victim 2 ki details..

Shree- ek bahot famous actress..

Liza - cause of death..strangling..ek bahot hi sharp copper wire se uska gala kaata gaya he..

Chotu - suspects ke alibi he..n again no clues..

Shree - victim 3..usman..ek contract killer..jiska agla target..

Neha - me thi..par mujhe maarne se pehle wo khud mar gaya..

Krn - maar dala gaya..he was killed..

Ri - no clues again..

Jun - in teeno victims ke time of death..

Liza - victim 1 ka 12 pm..2nd ka 3 pm..3rd ka 6 pm..

Jun - agar iska koi agla target hoga to wo use 9 pm ko maarega..har teesre din ek khoon hua he..to ab hamare paas sirf ek din he kaatil ko pakadne ke liye..teen connections aur he..teeno victims apni-apni fields ke best the..teeno victims ko specs the..-0.25 power ke..aur teeno apne specs ek hi optician se banwate the..

Sam - ok..that's all for today..[he calls the day off]

~

Next morning

Jun,Shree n Chotu investigate the optician

~

ETF conference room..

All sat to discuss the latest information..

Shree - sir ye wo saari details he..[shows on the screen]

Jun finds out from the list of customers that a person named Amod Parekh, also with eye power -0.25, visited the same optical shop on the days when all the three murdered persons visited the shop, and believes him to be the killer.Jun sends chotu to get information about Amod..n he tries to figure out who might be the next target..he finds that a renowned musician, who also has a power of -0.25, is the customer of the shop and is performing the same evening..so he arranges for a tight security..n team ETF is also present there..Sam,Jun,Aisha,Shree,Riya n Karan r also present there..Neha is not with them as she was not feeling well..but the musician is not killed even after the given time..i.e. 9 pm..after the concert ends..Amod reveals himself to Arjun in front of the musician..meanwhile chotu finds Amod's address n searches his house..

Amod - kaafi iccha thi aapse milne ki ACP Arjun! Bahot accha laga aapse milkar..

Jun - mujhse kyu milna chahte the?

Amod - kaafi suna he aapke baare me..to socha mil lu..

Jun - in teeno ke khoon mujhse milne ke liye kiye?

Amod - nahi ACP Arjun..in sab ke khoon apse milne ke liye nahi kiye..mujhe bahut shohrat aur naam kamaana tha..par me aisa nahi kar saka..kyuki meri eyesight ki power - 0.25 he..par ye problem to un teeno ki bhi thi..par wo to kamyaab ho gaye..me unhe maarna nahi chahta tha..par waqt unke saath nahi tha..kyuki koi aur bhi unhe maarna chahta tha..

Jun - toh phir tumne is musician ko kyu nahi maara?

Suddenly Chotu arrives there with a bracelet having blood stains on it..n shows the bracelet to Arjun

Chotu - sir..yeh bracelet mujhe iske ghar se mila..

Arjun looks at the bracelet n is shocked while Amod laughs..

~fb~

Neha - lijiye bhaiya..ho gaya..ab laiye mera gift..

Jun - gift..oh..me to bhul gaya tumhara gift..

Neha - (making a sad face)bhul gaye..aise kaise bhul gaye??

Jun - (checking his pockets..)Oh haan..ek minit..apni aankhe bandh karo..(neha closes her eyes but then opens one eye to see)hey cheater..apni aankhe acche se bandh rakho..nahi to gift nahi milega

Neha - thik he..(closes her eyes properly)

Jun takes out a beautiful bracelet from his pocket n gives it to Neha..

Jun - lo baby..tumhara gift..


Neha - wow bhaiya..its amazing..yeh tohfa aapne hume aankh bandh kar ke diya he..i promise..meri aankhe bandh hone tak yah hamesha mere saath rahega..

Jun - shh..chup..agli baar aisa mat bolna..samjhey ya..

Neha - bas..samajh gayi me..

~fb~

His thoughts were broken by Amod's voice..

Amod - tum haar gaye ACP Arjun..tumne ek Acp hone ki zimmedaari to poori imandaari se nibhaayi..par ek bhai hone ka farz nahi nibha paaye..

Jun - kya kehna chahte ho..saaf-saaf kaho..

Amod - maine tumhari behen ko maar daala..at 9 pm..uski bhi eyesight power -0.25 thi..right??N she too visited the same optical shop..this evening..how did u miss her name in the customer's list??

Jun points his gun towards Amod but Sam stops him

Sam - rawte kya kar rahe ho..ruk jao..ye wahi chahta he ke tum use maaro..ruk jao rawte

But Jun didn't stop..he shot Amod dead..at 12 a.m. Exactly..

all r shocked at the revealation by Amod that Neha is killed by him..

~ ~ ~
that's all for today

Now give lamba wala comments for lamba update

me waiting for them..😊

Silent readers..hit the like button atleast😈

~

sorry dearies..forgot to add translation part in hurry..here is it

~

Jun - mala mulanha roj navin goshta sangavi lagel?

(mujhe roz baccho ko nayi kahaani sunani padegi?)

Neha - ho tar..me pan roj navi goshta sangte..nahi..tich goshta veg-veglya paddhatine sangaychi..aaj chimani mhantala..doon diwasa nantar tyacha thikaani kaawla mhanaycha..ani chalu dyaycha..

[haan bilkool..me bhi roz nayi kahaani sunati hu..nahi..wahi kahaani alag-alag tarike se sunana..aaj chidiya kaha he..ao din baad uski jagah kauwa bolna..aur aise hi chalne dijiye..]

Jun - aasa vhay..mhanjetu piranha tich goshta nahimi sangte..

[aisi baat he..matlab tum baccho ko wahi kahani hamesha sunati ho..]

Neha - nahi..char-paach goshti aahet..tech sangaychya..aata jhopa..ushir jhalay..good night

[nahi..char-paanch kahaniya he..wahi kehte he..ab so jaiye..der ho gayi he]

~


Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Neha didn't went for jogging...😕😕😕
Neha Jun se pehle ghar se nikli aur Jun ke baad office pahunchi...😕😕😕
When that Gujarati line came I thought mujhe Marathi kab se samajh aane lag gayi phir laga nahi yeh
Marathi nahi Gujarati hai & them u cleared it...😆😆😆
Neha blackmailed SamJun very nicely...😆😆😆
Poem was good...😃😃😃
Neha killed...😲😲😲 😭😭😭
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
loved it
Something fishy

Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Neha killed?????
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it dear Neha awesome
Beautiful & intruding update
Neha ki blackmailing kamal ki hai
she is the one jo samjun ko raste pe laa sakti hai
good going dear
N language confusion 😆 that was cute
OMG neha ko kya hua ?😲😲
I hope she is fine aur wo jo bakwaas kar raha hai wo galat ho
Loved the poem really nice
lets see what happens
thanks for the Pm
Continue soon😊😊😊

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