MG FF: Tera Saaya #4 Finally i am back and note pg 57 28th oct - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Dadi played her trick
Made maan agreed
Maan thinks all is happening coz of him awesome superb he's not an actual khurana :|
I guess the third person is maans mother???
Loved all the maaneet talks
Geet always saying beside maan :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...
loved it...hate Dadi she is so cheap...
Maan going to leave everything...
Waiting fr nxt prt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i really dont think i need to update any of my works by seeing the response from readers.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating tonight, so sad with the response for this story 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting waiting waiting for the update meri pyari di 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 31


One for dev, second for rishi and third for ankita, rishi's elder sister who left the house when was 15 years old and living away from everyone because of dadi's deeds. Though dadi never cared about her but maan wants his sister to be happy and he cares about her. When rishi is part of this family then why not ankita. "Tum kaaha bhi ho ankita khush raho" "Maan, sab packing hogaya" told geet keeping the bags aside. "Geet shaam ka flight hai aur jaan hum banglore jaa rahe hai" told maan. "Thik hai maan. Mujhe kuch kehna hai" told geet. Maan looked at geet and kept his laptop aside. "Geet pehle tum baitho, yeh sab tum kyun kar rahi ho mai hu na" scolded maan. Geet sat beside maan and rested her head on his chest. "I want to talk to dadi" told geet. "Why geet?" Asked maan. "Please maan" requested geet. "Ok but dont stress much wait i will come with you" told maan. "But you will not talk anything" warned geet. "Ok Madame"

Both maan and geet walked towards dadi's room, geet remembered her moments with dadi when they were in India. She always taken care of her then how she changed so much at least once she didnt think about her annd how easily she tried to kill her. Geet knocked the door and waited. Dadi opened the door "You both here?" Asked dadi surprised. "Itna bhi naatakk karne ki koi jarurat nahi dadi, aapko tho khush hona chahiye ki hum iss ghar ko chodkar jaa rahe hai aaur yahi tho aap chate hai" asked geet. "Mai jaati thi aap dono correct decision lenge" told dadi sarcastically. "Dadi aaj mai ek baat samaj gayi" told geet for which dadi questioned "And what is that?" Geet smiled and told "you are very weak dadi, you cant fight dadi. From 10 years you were afraid of my maan and didnt dare to face him. You would have died long back if we were not there" "GEET, you are talking too much" shouted dadi. "Dont you dare yo raise your voice savita khurana mai darne walonse nahi hu. Darpok tho aap hai, aap darte ho mere maan se aur aaj mere pati ne jo kuch bhi decision liya usse mai bohot khush hu. Ek baat yaad rakhna dadi shayad aaj aap bohot khush hai but you will never be happy and one day you will be left all alone and that grandson of yours wil kick you out of this house that time you will come to know who is happy sab kuch rehte hue aap ya phir akele rehte hue bhi sab kuch hone wale hum" challenged geet and looked at her with disgust.

Maan held geet's shoulder and took geet to their room. Listening geet's worrds dadi burned with anger. "Calm down jaan, don't stress much. Geet I should go and meet shekar and i dont want you to stay alone. Will you come with me or meet krish?" asked maan. "I want to meet everyone once that too with you so first we will meet lawyer and then go to ramya aunty's house" told geet. "Thik hai ready ho jao" told maan.

Both got ready and left to meet lawyer, by that time shekar too done with all the formalities. Maan once checked them and signed those papers. He asked shekar to give those documents to dev and dadi tomorrow. "Sure sir" "And shekar the way you supported me regarding every legal matter I expect the same for dev too, he is new to all this he needs your support" told maan. "Don't worry about that sir, I will give my best to KC" replied shekar. Maan smiled and thanked him.

"Sir, I am no one to tell you but once think what you are doing. Kisi aur ke liye... " shekar didnt continue knowing about his anger but working with him for more than 5 years he couldnt help to dare a word. "Shekar apnon ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hu" told maan. Shekar smiled slightly. "Shekar yeh ankita ki papers tumare paas hi rakhna aur kisi ko bhi iske baare mein kuch mat kehna" told maan. "Ok sir" replied shekar. They shook hands and maan was about to leave when shekar stopped him. "Sir first time you came to my house one coffee please" requested shekar. Before maan replies shekar got up "Just 2 minutes sir" he went out. "He is good" told geet. "Yes and very loyal employee" told maan.

"Hey I told you have to rest then why you do work" shekar scolded a lady. "Ohoo I told na I am fine. You are over reacting shekar" chided that girl. "Yaar please don't argue with me" warned shekar.

"Maan abi tho mujhe laga he is good dekha tum patiyon ko na patniyon par chillana hi ata hai" taunted geet. Maan rolled his eyes and replied "Yeh is liye patni pati ki baat bilkul nahi sunti" "Hmmm as if you do" Just then that lady entered the room with coffee cups followed by shekar. "Mr. Shekar, you are absolutely right she should not do much work" told geet looking at that lady with huge tummy and geet understood she is pregnant. The tray fell down from her hand and the cups are broken into pieces. "Ankita, what happened are you fine?" asked shekar but there is no reaction from her. "Ma'am I am sorry, please aap baitiye sir please" apologized shekar. Tears poured out of ankita's eyes and asked "Sab ko chodkar jaa rahe ho maan?" Maan is in shock to see ankita after so many years and is feeling very happy. She walked towards maan and told "Mai na bohot khush hu finally tumko uss buddi se chutkara mila. Yeh kaam na tum bohot pehle arna chahiye tha. Now start a new life with your mishty" told ankita and looked at geet. While shekar and geet are looking at ankita with mouth open. Ankita giggled looking at them and told "Don't worry shekar your job is safe, mai maan ki behen hu" Shekar is more shocked, he is relative of the great MSK.

Maan hugged ankita sideways and felt very happy at the same time he is damn angry on her. He don't know that she is married "Tumne mujhe bataya tak nahi tumari shaadi ke baare mei. Apne bhai ko itna paraya kar diya tum" asked maan sadly. She is the other person who understood him very well other than geet. "Sorry maan, sab kuch bohot jaldi hogaya" apologized ankita. Maan introduced ankita to geet and shekar felt little odd but felt very happy seeing ankita happy.

"Hum aaj hi nikal rahe hai ankita aur humne dev ko kuch nahi bataya" told maan. Ankita felt sad but told "Maan, mai hu tumare saath aur dev ko ek din bhi nahi rukega wo tumare paas ajayega" told ankita. "No ankita, dev ko ab nahi ana chahiye. Agar rishi akela KC ko sambhala tho it will soon be shut. Dev hona hi chahiye iss liye shekar ko keh raha tha wo hamesha dev ke paas hi rehne ke liye" told maan. "Aap chinta mat kijiye sir ab aap sab mere family hai aur mein kuch bhi hone nahi dunga" told shekar. Maan smiled at him. Geet felt very happy seeing maan smiling and what else she need other than that.

After sometime geet helped ankita in making coffee, geet is making coffee while ankita sat on the chair talking with her. "Di, from yesterday maan was moody and didn't talk much with anyone but when he saw you he is very happy. Thank you for making him smile di" thanked geet. "I understand geet, all these years he was worried about everyone but now he has to think of himself and I am sure you will change his life" told ankita and smiled at her. Geet sighed and she too hopes the same. Geet looked at maan from the kitchen door and a small smile formed on her lips "I love you maan" thought geet. And the day went well maan bid good bye to ankita and shekar. Geet promised ankita that she will be in contact with her. Later they met ramya, krish and meera. Maan informed ramya about their leaving and asked her to take care of dev as he too don't know how he is gonna react when he comes to know about them. Ramya blessed them, she cupped his cheek and told "Khush raho maan, I miss you my son" ramya became emotional and hugged him. Maan is like her elder son, if he was not there with them then don't know how they would be and vice versa. Both were moral support for each other. "You too take care aunty" told maan and spent some quality time with them and left from there.

Maan asked nakul to bring their luggage to airport and maneet directly went to airport. Maneet were in the car, geet rested her head on his shoulder. "Kabhi nahi socha tha ki mai India iss rarah se waapas jana padh raha hai. I am happy for one thing and that is you are with me" geet looked at maan "I thought I will go to India without you but everything changed. I don't care about anyone maan but I am worried about dev. I just hope he too comes back because I cant trust that lady anymore" "Don't worry geet, nothing is gonna happen to dev or anyone. Dev wont be with dadi I am sure and coming to KC, rishi has only 40% share, dev and ankita has 60% share. When they both become one then rishi cant completely take the decisions and I won't let dev be alone anytime geet" told maan. "Baaton mei airport bhi aagaya" told geet, they both got down and paid to the driver.

Till today they lead a different life and from today they will lead a different life. From now Mr. and Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana will live a normal life, now he is not a business tycoon, he is a normal man. Lets see how their life will be and how they cope up with new people at new place and lets all wish Maneet for their new life and the new phase of their life.

Precap: New start and new people.


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Posted: 11 years ago


Nice update...


Finally maan and geet are in India...hope that budhi aurat will not follow them and dev will be strong like maan and teach the evil duo a very good lesson...


Do continue soon...



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Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! Thanks 4 da amazing update! Well written! Hate dadi! Geet goes with MAan! So Maan has a sister, Ankita! Shekhar asks Maan if he is sure! Maan assures him! Maan wld do anything 4 his family! Shekhar is married to Ankita n she is expecting! Maan happy seeing her! Maaneet leave n arrive in India! Maan made sure tht Rishsi wld nt have majority vote! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
ye rishi hi ek faulty peace hai khurana's me baaki dev & ankita really love maan & respect him a lot
both of them are all ready to start their new life like a normal person
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...liked it...
waiting for new beginning..

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